Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2019 01:14 PM · On: One Fine Day in Central Park

Super romantic, this made me giddy with excitement. I loved this so much 💗



Author's Response:

I was feeling especially romantic the day I started this story.  So glad that it made you feel good, Vicki.  Love your comments.  Thank you very much.  Hug hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2012 01:26 PM · On: One Fine Day in Central Park

I read this a little while back before I left reviews and I just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed it. I loved the ending; the men sure know how to keep their lives from being dull. LOL I hope to find some time soon to read more of your fics as the ones I have read so far have been very enjoyable. Thank you for sharing them.

Cheers

Author's Response:

It is so good to hear from you, Flossee.  Lori (Bigpaw), my housemate and I talk about your work a lot.  I don't get to read much at all, but I know that she considers you one of her favorite writers.  It is so nice to know that such a talented writer enjoys my work too.  Thank you very much.  I love throwing in a surprise twist once in a while with my stories and this was a lot of fun to create.  I'm very glad you enjoyed it.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Shauna (Anonymous) · Date: August 18, 2012 11:05 PM · On: One Fine Day in Central Park

I didn't expect the ending at all! That was so clever!!!



Author's Response:

What a lovely comment.  Thank you very much, Shauna.  I love to add a twist every once in a while just to keep folks guessing.  Glad it worked for you this time around.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: britinified (Anonymous) · Date: July 17, 2012 07:14 AM · On: One Fine Day in Central Park

Haha, this was amazing. 

I couldn't contain my laughter when Brian opened the door. haha

Great Story.



Author's Response:

You just made my day, Marina.  I was hoping that my readers would be surprised by the twist at the end.  Thank you so much for the great comments.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: July 16, 2012 06:11 PM · On: One Fine Day in Central Park

...that routine always led up to Saturday morning....their 'anything goes' day. 

Beautiful. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, No Sleep.  I can easily picture the couple enjoying a little game play on Saturdays after a hard week working.  I'm glad you enjoyed my story.  Hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2012 09:40 AM · On: One Fine Day in Central Park

I was not expecting this ending, using my super human powers I knew there would be a big surprise at the end but I had no idea it would be this. I was afraid Brian was going to turn into an alien, I got very worried when he was so willing to put on a robe he found behind a stranger's door. My good who knows what sort of creepy crawlies might be all over it, and no mention of a designer label, my god it could be from Target. I was happy to see you really have good cause to make those not fit for children to read warnings pop up. This did get steamy. I think now that you are over 21 your libido has heated up and your writing is getting a little saucier. Perhaps a lock on your door is something to consider... I hope that Brian and Justin are able to keep their Saturday play dates as a way to add a little bit of naughty to their domestic life, but not expand the circle of playmates too far. You never know what kind of friends you might meet. Some kids bite or have lice. I think once you find a friend you like stick with them. Enjoy your evening, lets plan a day of fun sometime. Maybe a day at the spa or a nice meal.
Hugs and a nose poke.

Author's Response:

Now you should have known the secret to the ending by the very fact that Brian was so willing to put on that robe.  LOL!  You know how much I like a little spice added to my romantic dishes, Lori, and apparently our boys do too.  Nothing like a mystery standing date for Saturday's to make the rest of the week more enjoyable.  And considering Brian in now in his forties, I'd say he does a very good job of keeping up his stamina for the weekend and his favorite person in the world, Justin.  Glad you had fun visiting our boys in NYC.  Btw, just give me a time and place for the spa and nice meal.  I'll be there.  Huge warm hugs and a pat for Tadhg, Grammy

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2012 03:34 AM · On: One Fine Day in Central Park

"... with a wicked smirk on his face" ... haha only then I knew they already know each other.

 

* thumbs up * great fic Grammy, thanks for writing.

 

* hugs *



Author's Response:

Thanks for the 'thumbs up', Marny.  It is always a treat when a reader likes the surprises they get from one of my stories.  I'm so glad you had fun with this one.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: July 16, 2012 02:39 AM · On: One Fine Day in Central Park

I had a sneaking suspicion what the outcome would be.  Cute story.:)



Author's Response:

I hope the ending came as a bit of a surprise, but I'm really glad you enjoyed the story, Linda.  Thank you very much for your comments.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: feet526@aol.com (Anonymous) · Date: July 16, 2012 02:39 AM · On: One Fine Day in Central Park

You're some special, "Grammy;" you always come throught with something delicious! THANKS SO MUCH!

Author's Response:

You are most welcome, Feet526.  My two Granddaughters think I'm a little quirky for a Grandmother too, but they put up with me...luckily.  LOL!  Thank you for the lovely comments.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Joanna (Anonymous) · Date: July 16, 2012 01:42 AM · On: One Fine Day in Central Park

One very cute story.



Author's Response:

Our boys are adorable, aren't they?  Nothing I like better than showing their frisky playful side.  Thanks for commenting.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2012 11:11 PM · On: One Fine Day in Central Park

Great story! 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, Lexa.  It was my pleasure and I'm glad you liked it.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: misscrocks (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2012 12:14 PM · On: One Fine Day in Central Park

Ahahahaha!! What a great piece!

You my friend, are born for writing Bri-tin. Love this and hope to read more from you!



Author's Response:

What a wonderfully sweet thing for you to say, MissC.  I truly love writing but it wasn't until QAF that I was inspired enough to pursue it.  It is almost my 5 year Anniversary with these stories and I hope to have many more to put out there for wonderful readers like yourself.  Thank you very much.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2012 12:05 PM · On: One Fine Day in Central Park

Never read one like this before and it turned out great.  Love the role play.  Great job. - Jane.



Author's Response:

Wow!  What a terrifice compliment, Jane.  It isn't easy to come up with something different and if I accomplished that for you, I am so happy.  Thank you very much for your comments.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: BritinGuslover (Anonymous) · Date: July 15, 2012 12:03 PM · On: One Fine Day in Central Park

Wonderful honey! Just superb as always, love! <3

 

~Nim

 



Author's Response:

You are so kind, Nim.  I'm very happy that you had fun with my new story.  Thanks for letting me know.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: kim136@dodo.com.au (Anonymous) · Date: July 15, 2012 11:07 AM · On: One Fine Day in Central Park

i love it great story the near end was a surprise agreat won at that 4 brian to open the door i  lol  thanks kim



Author's Response:

It was very important that I kept the ending a surprise to my readers, so thank you for the terrific comments, Kim.  I really appreciate them.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2012 09:39 AM · On: One Fine Day in Central Park

Cute story.  Nice finish.

- Jackie



Author's Response:

The finish was my favorite part of writing this story, so I'm really glad you liked it, Jackie.  Thank you very much.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2012 09:23 AM · On: One Fine Day in Central Park

Very cute. Hot as usual. :)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much, Lorie.  Nothing like a little heat on a bright Spring day, I always say.  LOL!  Huge hugs, Grammy

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