Midnight Whispers :: QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2019 01:31 AM · On: Chapter 13

good one

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2019 12:08 AM · On: Chapter 1

Interesting

Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2012 09:24 PM · On: Chapter 13

Great story

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2012 06:06 PM · On: Chapter 13

I love the ending. Brian got Justin help and now Justin has a life depending on him. He has come such a long way. Do you plan on completing your unfinished fic as I like your work?

Cheers

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2012 05:58 PM · On: Chapter 12

Oh Brian is so in love. I really like how he knows Justin well enough to recognize something is bothering him. Thank you for the update. Now I will read the epilogue.

Cheers

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: October 15, 2012 08:17 AM · On: Chapter 13

Happy to see that Justin got professional help, well Brian got him to it which was even better. I especially like this part because Justin seem to need that extra push. Although, he decided to stop, deciding to do something and actually doing is two different things.

I totally enjoyed this fic. Loved it.

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2012 07:07 AM · On: Chapter 13

Good ending. Brian and Justin would make the most beautiful babies together.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: October 15, 2012 06:56 AM · On: Chapter 13

Thanks for writing and making sure to finish the story for us! TAG

Reviewer: britinified (Anonymous) · Date: October 15, 2012 06:11 AM · On: Chapter 13

Awe :3

A baby!!

I enjoyed this story.

Thanks for sharing.

-Marina

Reviewer: britinified (Anonymous) · Date: September 30, 2012 06:10 AM · On: Chapter 11

Great chapter.

Can't wait to read more.

-britinified.

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2012 09:31 AM · On: Chapter 11

Justin confronts his parents I’m so pleased he was able to get through that and I’m glad Brian showed up when he did. Brian had an elephant; I didn’t expect that; priceless.

Cheers

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: September 29, 2012 09:03 AM · On: Chapter 11

so cute that the boys have their own teddies....Its good that Justin is dealing....

Completely enjoying and look forward to more....

Reviewer: jules (Anonymous) · Date: September 29, 2012 08:10 AM · On: Chapter 11

like, will read:)

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2012 08:03 AM · On: Chapter 10

Wow! That was . . . Sudden. Are you sure Justin is ready for this? TAG

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2012 10:06 AM · On: Chapter 10

Great chapter. Justin promised not to hurt himself and to talk to Brian; then the boys got together. That’s always a good way to end a chapter.

Cheers

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2012 08:20 AM · On: Chapter 10

Love your writing.

School needs to come first. Write when you can.

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: September 03, 2012 10:33 PM · On: Chapter 9

Hey - just keep writing because you like it. Don't worry so much about the readers. We're still out here reading so you must be doing something right. This is a very different kind of story and it won't be easy to write but we do appreciate you efforts, TAG

PS. Have fun back at school. I don't go back for two more weeks. Happy homework to you!

Reviewer: britinified (Anonymous) · Date: September 03, 2012 04:35 AM · On: Chapter 9

I'm glad you decided to continue this story. I love it.

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2012 06:55 PM · On: Chapter 9

I like this it gave us a little more insight to what Brian had been thinking from the moment they met and recapped the story along the way. Well Done.

Cheers

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2012 07:11 AM · On: Chapter 9

Hi, Honey! I know you don't seem too happy with this latest chapter, but I don't think you give yourself enough credit. You are doing the best you can and presenting something to us readers that is a very important and contemporary issue. Please update this as you get time; I like this nurturing, concerned and caring Brian that you are writing. And anytime you want to send me a PM, please don't hesitate to do so. I hope school goes well for you. Take care. *Hugs* ~Kimberly

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: September 02, 2012 06:26 AM · On: Chapter 9

This is such an important perspective...a person who cares and wants to help. Real life there are people who are aware of those who hurt themselves but just doesn't know how to help them.

You have done a great job explaining Brian's thoughts. I look forward to more chapters.

Thank you and Great Job!

Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2012 08:19 PM · On: Chapter 8

i like this story i hope ether keep writting this story or write a new one where the story ended here thanks

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: August 22, 2012 07:19 AM · On: Chapter 8

I'm still reading so please don't stop. TAG

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: August 21, 2012 07:20 AM · On: Chapter 8

This is an amazing story dealing with real life issues.

You are dealing with such issues that teenages are facing - cutting and burning.

I have been following your story but unfortunately not giving reviews, my apologies because it is a fantastic story. Especially since you dealing with such important topics.

Excellent writing!!! Please,please continue...

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 20, 2012 08:27 PM · On: Chapter 8

I would love for Brian to get pregnant and be a reason for Justin to get well emotionally because he has a baby on the way but I love what you are doing with this story. Please keep writing.

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2012 12:34 PM · On: Chapter 8

This story is certainly enlightening, I was aware people cut themself but I had no idea they would also burn themself. I would like you to finish the story if possible as this is a subject I know nothing about and I find while it is very sad the story has a possibility of Justin getting help. Brian seems to give him a little more support every chapter and hopefully Justin will accept it.

Cheers

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2012 02:37 PM · On: Chapter 7

I am so pleased Brian realised that Justin had seen him and Andy in the shower, but I am even happier that Justin couldn’t cut himself although he had the knife in his hands. I can certainly see some progress here.

Cheers

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: August 18, 2012 07:29 AM · On: Chapter 7

like:)

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: August 13, 2012 03:05 PM · On: Chapter 6

Nice to see the relationship progressing like this. TAG

Reviewer: Jean (Anonymous) · Date: August 12, 2012 08:15 PM · On: Chapter 6

Depression is a difficult problem to cope with. Maybe you could have Brian talk with Justin to reduce the negative self talk. Having a good support and making new friends should help Justin feel more connected. I'm rooting for him.

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2012 06:42 PM · On: Chapter 6

“So do you think this will turn into a four some later?” Andy asked, jokingly. This is very funny only Brian or one of his close friends would say something like that. Great work. I’m looking forward to the next chapter.

Cheers

Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2012 09:36 AM · On: Chapter 6

Great chapter.

Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2012 02:05 AM · On: Chapter 5

OK this is the third chapter in a row where you keep leaving notes saying that you don't "like" this chapter or you had trouble or whatnot. It seems that you are clinically depressed yourself. Are "Justin's thought processes somewhat like your own?

I want to say again, you are doing a GREAT job! The story is engaging and rivwtting and if an m preg comes into play that would be very interesting.

Also tempered with Justin's depression there is Brian's understanding and counsel. So inside you you must have an inner Brian somewhere. OK, I'm no therapist so I'l shut up now, I'd just like to say, if you get depressed, please keep writing and remember to listen to that inner Brian to make things better.

And remember....no apologies...no regrets!

Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2012 02:21 PM · On: Chapter 2

LOVED IT !!

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2012 04:34 AM · On: Chapter 5

So poignant and sad. I like that Brian is compassionate, it's so moving to read. Look forward to the next update.

All the best.

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2012 07:07 PM · On: Chapter 5

Nice chapter, thank you. Brian seems very understanding of Justin’s insecurities and I hope he is there when he needs him like he was in this chapter. A naked Brian, that must have given Justin pleasant dreams.

Cheers

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: August 02, 2012 06:13 PM · On: Chapter 5

Didn't mind the time jump - sometimes you have to do that to keep the plot moving. I do like that this is progressing with the boys finally admitting their mutual attraction. Go relationship! TAG

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2012 07:43 AM · On: Chapter 4

Sorry you don't like it - but I kinda do...lol. It really sets the tone for Justin coming to trust Brian because he isn't judging him, and isn't being scared off by his issues - and it also begins the delicate awareness that this friendship is a possible launchpad for something more - een though each of them is afraid to push the other - but that's kind of cute, too!

Charle

Reviewer: junebug (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2012 06:57 PM · On: Chapter 4

I think it's nice. Brian being very caring, maybe its OOC, but I like it anyway :) Cheers, June

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: July 22, 2012 11:53 AM · On: Chapter 4

I like the interaction between the boys - how they're getting closer. I'd like see more tho. Next chapter please. TAG

Reviewer: junebug (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2012 08:49 PM · On: Chapter 3

I had a terrible heartache reading this, maybe it's because i could associate with Justin's situation. I was being bullied since grade 5 or 6, and throughout high school, due to my weight. I always say high school left me absolutely no good memories.

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2012 05:16 AM · On: Chapter 3

I really enjoy Brian's kindness and tenderness with Justin. I can feel poor Justin's pain. I hope either he can move through it and start to respect himself and stand up for himself. Bullying is a horrible, horrible thing.

Your touching on such difficult, painful issues, no wonder you're feeling hesitant. The storyline can affect the writer. You'll have to keep that in mind as you write - and I hoope you do. This story is very moving.

I look forward to your next update.

Take care,

Laura

Reviewer: Stellaria (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2012 12:12 AM · On: Chapter 3

ohh, I was really waiting for this story!!

I'm very enjoying your story :D Thanks!

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2012 08:20 AM · On: Chapter 3

I like this a lot. Sweet Brian is always good. When two people just click, things can happen quickly.

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2012 10:04 AM · On: Chapter 2

Very serious moment for Justin. Looking forwar to seeing where this goes.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: July 03, 2012 12:26 PM · On: Chapter 2

I'm very curious where this is going. This could get really good. TAG

Reviewer: marietta (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2012 01:59 AM · On: Chapter 1

I like your start and can't wait where you are taking us with this. I hope that Brian will be able to help Justin and that Justin will trust Brian with his problems. Till next chapter, Metka

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 26, 2012 09:28 AM · On: Chapter 1

I like the premise - the boys in school together. I'll be interested to see where you go with this. TAG

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2012 08:09 AM · On: Chapter 1

Very touching. Looking forward to reading more.

All the best, and the best is yet to come. Believe it, it's real.

Laura

Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2012 04:45 AM · On: Chapter 1

M-pregs are great but you know, this story, seemsd to me about self abuse/cutting and maybe overcoming that problem. This will have to be dealt with b4 any real relationship and or pegnancy can happen. And, i'm no ob-gyn expert or anything but I'm pretty sure aall the constant ( but slight) bleeding and or changes to blood pressure would be bad for the baby.

Don't worry about "making" the story into something, just write it out line by line as it happens in your imagination. Let it flow, let it happen. The story will choose.

PS. I know this sounds nutty but it's really true. Trust yourself, trust the story. You're a very good writer. Just close your eyes watch what happens...and write it down....and don't give it up....you'll be great

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2012 10:31 AM · On: Chapter 1

Sounds like this will be a story with lots of emotional things for Justin to work thru. Will he turn to Brian for help, it sure seems like Brian wants to be a friend and help him. So far no sign of more than friendship, but knowing the way things usually happen I'm sure things will progress.
Lori

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2012 04:17 AM · On: Chapter 1

:)

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