Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: December 11, 2013 01:53 AM · On: Chapter 7
its being over a yr are you planning on finish this its great so far
Reviewer: Satine (Anonymous) · Date: November 05, 2012 07:24 AM · On: Chapter 7
I am so happy you updated your fic!!! It is such a great idea putting those four characters together! I am so excited how the story goes on... I can hardly wait for more :)
Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2012 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 7
finally an update and i loved it. I hope there's more soon.
Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: October 03, 2012 10:12 AM · On: Chapter 7
WOW!! this is a sumptious story. am a little worried about this cocky doctor and his surgery. don't have a good feeling about it at all. maybe i'm reading too much into it, but i don't think so..i guess this darkhaired stranger has a role here also. more soon???
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2012 06:03 PM · On: Chapter 7
I am so happy to see this update and I love the fact Justin may get his memory of the prom back as that will be really intense. I love your writing. This chapter is great, thank you.
Cheers
Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2012 11:13 AM · On: Chapter 7
love it
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2012 06:38 AM · On: Chapter 7
OMG! You updated - I am so excited! Great chapter. Loved the interaction between B/J and LuRe. I love both couples and seeing them in the same story is awesome. I hope that Noah won't start stirring up trouble for Luke and Reid. Those two belong together just like Brian and Justin, IMHO.
Can't wait to read more!
Cheers,
Vin
Reviewer: kim136 (Anonymous) · Date: October 02, 2012 06:12 AM · On: Chapter 7
glad ur back update soon kim
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2012 05:38 AM · On: Chapter 7
Glad to see an update to this! I had actually forgotten about this story (says sheepishly), but I remembered it as soon as I read the synopsis again. I like you paring up B and J with Luke and Reid. Looking forward to your updates and how the surgery goes:) *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2012 09:48 AM · On: Chapter 6
Hi,
I just wanted to find out if you plan to continue the story. It's wonderful and I hope to read more of it.
Cheers,
Vin
Reviewer: Anno53 (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2012 09:40 PM · On: Chapter 6
I like your story a lot. I like that it may give Justin a second chance in a realistic way ... through surgery.
Reviewer: NATHALIE RUDE (Anonymous) · Date: April 02, 2012 11:08 PM · On: Chapter 6
SUPER L HISTOIRE ATTEND LA SUITE A BIENTOT
Reviewer: amythesw (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2012 02:37 PM · On: Chapter 6
I really like this story and am looking forward to the next chapter. Can't wait to hear from Noah and what effect B/J are going to have in Oakdale... :)
Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Anonymous) · Date: April 01, 2012 11:17 AM · On: Chapter 6
love it
Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2012 08:32 AM · On: Chapter 6
fantastic. cant wait for more.
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2012 08:16 AM · On: Chapter 6
I am really enjoying your story! Of course I'm an enormous fan of B and J, but I also used to follow Noah, Luke, and Reid on the soap so this is really great! I think this is my favorite chapter so far; I loved the sweetness that Brian showed in this chapter, as well as his concern for Justin. And I can understand both of their viewpoints regarding the possible surgery.
I'll be looking forward to the rest of your story! Oh, and thanks for changing Kinnetik's name and not getting upset about it.:) It didn't take away from my enjoyment of your story, but it's nice to see it the way it should be spelled regardless.:) *Hugs* ~Kimberly
Author's Response: No worries, the point of reviews is to be able to improve! I appreciate your feedback and I'm glad that you are enjoying the story. I think this is my favorite chapter so far too ; )
- Lauren
PS: I love your Parent Trap story and I can't wait for the next chapter ; )
Reviewer: jacknalecsmom (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2012 04:49 AM · On: Chapter 5
I am not familiar with the soap opera characters but I like the story anyway!
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2012 01:07 AM · On: Chapter 5
thanks for the update, love the chapter.
* hugs *
Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2012 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 5
I need more. Its great although I don't like luke getting distracted by the sunshine
Reviewer: kim136@dodo.com.au (Anonymous) · Date: March 30, 2012 12:00 PM · On: Chapter 5
i cann't wait to see were u r going with the story i love it so update soon kim
Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Anonymous) · Date: March 30, 2012 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 5
loveit
Reviewer: boriqua522 (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2012 09:34 AM · On: Chapter 5
wow, so glad to see this update. loved the use of 'sunshine' in there. it's like brian doesn't even realize he's using the tender nickname and that it is justin's actual name. that was great. can't wait for brunch.
Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2012 07:59 AM · On: Chapter 5
oh - I am thrilled that this story is back (I know how it is to not be able to pull a chapter together just right- so frustrating)- I love being able to read my two favorite couples at the same time, so this is really a favorite. really enjoying this!
Charle
Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2012 05:26 AM · On: Chapter 4
Damn it I'm hooked. Update like now can't wait for oakdale to meet them
Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2012 05:20 AM · On: Chapter 3
Oh dear he's not gonna be able to draw. Its fine though Reid Oliver isgoing to fix him and make new friends. Yay can't wait. On to the next
Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2012 05:13 AM · On: Chapter 2
Oh god oh god don't wipe away ten years. Reid and Luke need to see there love and love as well
Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2012 05:08 AM · On: Chapter 1
Wow I love this. Can't wait for more. Please oh god don't give him amnesia. I also love this is an atwt crossover. I miss reid and noah and everybody. I hope casey is around. On to the next.
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2012 06:12 PM · On: Chapter 4
Lovely chapter. Aggrr Brian was an ass to Luke. Pssstt you made a little mistake it's Kinnetik.
* hugs *
Reviewer: kim136@dodo.com.au (Anonymous) · Date: March 22, 2012 04:12 PM · On: Chapter 4
i enjoy the story ilike it update soon kim
Reviewer: boriqua522 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2012 07:56 AM · On: Chapter 4
wow, another really good chapter. damn! brian can be an ass. it's a good thing that luke is a nice guy, cause president & ceo or not, i would have told him where to stick his card if he'd spoken to me like that. i love that luke is so befuddled by brian's persona that he doesn't know what to make of this domineering man. can't wait to see where you take this.
Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Anonymous) · Date: March 22, 2012 06:18 AM · On: Chapter 4
love it
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2012 06:17 AM · On: Chapter 4
Interesting twist with the possible removal of the scar tissue! I've never quite seen that addressed in this way before, so I'll be looking forward to where you go with that. Could Justin possibly regain some of his prom memories as a result, too? And just who will wind up with Luke's heart - Noah or Reid? Hmmm...I'll just have to wait and see, I guess!
I like the business card, BTW - red is a bold color befitting Brian, so I think that was the perfect choice for him:). Oh, and I hope you don't mind me being anal, but I checked my DVDs and it's actually spelled "Kinnetik" - maybe he can get a refund on his business card printing now - LOL! But no matter - it doesn't take away at all from this wonderful story! Keep writing and I'll be looking forward to reading the rest of this.:) *Hugs* Kimberly
Reviewer: amythesw (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2012 06:08 AM · On: Chapter 4
I'm enjoying your story a lot! I love B/J and Luke/Noah were my favorites on ATWT. I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this! Hope you can update soon!
Amy :)
Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Anonymous) · Date: March 20, 2012 10:29 PM · On: Chapter 3
love it
Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Anonymous) · Date: March 20, 2012 10:11 PM · On: Chapter 1
love it
Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2012 09:19 AM · On: Chapter 3
love it! - and even more - I lvoe the facct that even though this could have been the end - this story is still listed as not complete which means we get more of these two happily married and working out the details - yay - I hate that so often ends as soon as they get back together!!!!!
looking forward to more...
Charle
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2012 07:48 AM · On: Chapter 3
Glad to see that Justin and Brian will be together now and that he will be okay.:) I'll be looking forward to seeing how you involve Luke, Reid, and Noah in the rest of the story.:) Thanks for the quick update! *Hugs* ~Kimberly
Reviewer: LS1966 (Anonymous) · Date: March 19, 2012 09:49 PM · On: Chapter 1
Great start, I am a big B/J fan and was a big ATWT's fan ;-)
Looking forward to the next chapters, don't let us wait to long.
Hugs Linda
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2012 08:12 AM · On: Chapter 1
:) Welcome to Whispers
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2012 03:32 AM · On: Chapter 2
Hi, Lauren! First of all, I wanted to say welcome to the site! I'm enjoying your story - I used to watch Luke, Noah, and Reid on ATWT, although I came pretty late to the party at the time.:) Not sure which team I batted for over there (Luke with Noah or with Reid), but I find this idea of a crossover intriguing. Also, LOVE the idea of B and J married (I'm a sentimental sap, what can I say?), and I always love a worried, protective Brian.:)
I'll be looking forward to more of your story. Oh, and thanks for the 'favorite author' designation, too - I love it when readers/authors think enough of my work to do that! *Hugs* ~Kimberly
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2012 01:47 AM · On: Chapter 2
Think I'm hooked. I love B/J, but I also watched L/N/R on television.
Thanks for writing this story.
* hugs *
Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2012 01:44 AM · On: Chapter 2
I am hooked! BJ fiction is absolutely my favorite thing in the world to read, and the only thing that really comes close is LuRe fiction. So, to me, this plot is beyond intriguing - and I can't wait to read more. Very nice start here with these two chapters. Post again soon- please!
loving life,
Charle
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