Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2022 10:20 PM · On: Chapter 13
This was a great story!! I was very happy to see such an about face from Michael after his hospital stay. He actually became a good friend to both Brian and Justin and realized how horrible he had been to them. But it was nice to see Justin and Brian being partners in Kinnetik and life and even having another child.
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2020 01:06 AM · On: Chapter 13
read it again
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2020 11:43 PM · On: Chapter 5
fucking Lindsey
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2018 10:52 AM · On: Chapter 13
great storie
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: February 25, 2012 03:57 AM · On: Chapter 1
Great story! Just read it in one go - and could keep reading even more.... :)
Reviewer: chandrika (Anonymous) · Date: February 11, 2012 09:47 PM · On: Chapter 1
nice story
thank you
Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: February 10, 2012 09:14 AM · On: Chapter 13
Beautiful.....
Reviewer: vlsope2@yahoo.com (Anonymous) · Date: February 08, 2012 09:36 AM · On: Chapter 13
I have read a lot of your stories, and this is my new favorite. I loved the children...the new and approved Justin so mature and the beautiful Brian having a tenderness and being vunerable (sorry spelling) but one of the best things was seeing mel in a new light in how she knew Brian was no longer the man she thought he was, not lindsey's or michael's idea of this man but what a good heart he had. Maybe a sequal?
Reviewer: marietta (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2012 05:53 AM · On: Chapter 13
I've read this story in one shot and I have to say I loved it. It has so many different situations, with all the gang member, I was surprised with Michael situation, when he tried to kill himself. Lindsay was never my favorite character even at the show, but this greedy bitch you portrayed her is actually her real personality. At the show I had always a fealing that all she wanted from Brian was her WASP family, where she could play a matron to her beautiful "husband and their child".
I love your Melanie, and even Emmett, I never could see him get so distant from Justin like he is in your story. I have to mention Debbie, she maybe could find a motherly word for every gay boy, but when it comes to Briand and Michael, well she become a person you gave us, and this is her real personality. A mother whose child can do anything wrong.
I love the ending and in stories like this I wouldn't mind a few more chapters. So at the end, keep writing good ones like this for us, you have real talent. Metka
Reviewer: kim136@dodo.com.au (Anonymous) · Date: February 07, 2012 07:00 PM · On: Chapter 13
i rereaded i say it a inspiring good or bad it all comes out in the was
kim
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: February 07, 2012 10:41 AM · On: Chapter 13
This was an excellent story and I really enjoyed it. I really liked how you portrayed your characters, particularly, Mel.
Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: February 07, 2012 09:19 AM · On: Chapter 13
good story!
Reviewer: luisa (Anonymous) · Date: February 07, 2012 03:04 AM · On: Chapter 13
Iloved the story, and the last part is really interesting, is good when a story tach us something,you are good writer.hugs
Reviewer: RUDE NATHALIE (Anonymous) · Date: February 07, 2012 12:47 AM · On: Chapter 13
MAGNIFIQUE HISTOIRE
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: February 06, 2012 11:36 PM · On: Chapter 13
I really enjoyed this story. The twists and turns of the characters kept me reading. Great job.
Reviewer: Ghost Writer (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2012 10:41 PM · On: Chapter 13
Aw! Brian gave the baby a nickname. Zoe is a really cute name though! I loved this story. Really sad that it's over though. <3
Author's Response: My niece's name is Zoe. She's my favorite, though I won't ever tell the others that! Lol!
Reviewer: kim136@dodo.com.au (Anonymous) · Date: February 06, 2012 09:15 PM · On: Chapter 13
love the ending its a great story kim
Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: February 05, 2012 11:33 PM · On: Chapter 12
I really hate to see this story end- it has been a really good one:)
Reviewer: kim136@dodo.com.au (Anonymous) · Date: February 05, 2012 09:50 PM · On: Chapter 12
im having fun readind this kim
Reviewer: Anno53 (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2012 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 11
I'm so glad Justin convinced Brian to let him do the complete Christmas thing ... Brian acted like a little boy, too!
Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2012 05:50 AM · On: Chapter 11
love it
Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: February 05, 2012 04:55 AM · On: Chapter 11
looking forward to seeing just what it is that they will be facing when they get back.
Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: February 05, 2012 02:02 AM · On: Chapter 11
wonderful happy and relaxing chapter. now what is going to happen to spoil this happiness? I KNOW SOMETHINGS COMING!!
Reviewer: kim136@dodo.com.au (Anonymous) · Date: February 04, 2012 09:36 PM · On: Chapter 11
great chapter loved the xmass part kim
Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2012 11:51 AM · On: Chapter 10
i can not wait to read the next chapter of this story very soon
Reviewer: NATHALIE RUDE (Anonymous) · Date: February 04, 2012 04:24 AM · On: Chapter 10
ELLE EST SUPERBE TON HISTOIRE
Author's Response: Merci!
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2012 01:36 AM · On: Chapter 10
Loving this story : ) ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2012 12:30 AM · On: Chapter 10
love it
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2012 09:07 PM · On: Chapter 10
Thanks for the lovely chapter.
* hugs *
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: Ghost Writer (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2012 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 10
I liked this chapter. Just one question though... if Mel is suppose to be pregnant why does she have a glass of wine at Thanksgiving? Anyway, great chapter! <3
Author's Response: Oops! Lol!
Reviewer: K (Anonymous) · Date: February 03, 2012 10:15 AM · On: Chapter 9
I am loving this story... you put in some interesting twists.
Please continue to write your wonderful stories
K
Author's Response: Thanks! I will!
Reviewer: wordshipper (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2012 06:42 AM · On: Chapter 9
They invited Mikey to dinner??!! Well at least Justin stood his ground and said he wouldn't work on Rage with him any more.
Author's Response: YEah, well, despite his evil deeds, Michael was BRian's friend for a very long time. They are taking the high road. And now that Michael has agreed to pay back the money, they can afford to be forgiving. Right?
Reviewer: Anno53 (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2012 06:14 AM · On: Chapter 9
Well, we now know where Michael's self destructiveness got him. I hope he takes real stock in his life now ... because his rashness hurt a lot of people who will find it hard to ever forget.
Author's Response: As Mikey said, nothing in his life will ever be the same.
Reviewer: Cheryl (Anonymous) · Date: February 03, 2012 03:09 AM · On: Chapter 9
I REALLY love this story. I also like the way you're including Mel into things. Lindsay is throwing so much away, but the boys and Mel will pick up the slack and prevent Linds from swooping back in to pick up where things left off - much to her major disappointment.
Patiently awaiting updates.
Author's Response: Glad you like it!
Reviewer: Stauneauge (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2012 03:04 AM · On: Chapter 9
I really like a Melanie, who isn't such an unreasonable bitch. The changed Michael is not so believable for me, though maybe it will work out for Brian's sake. I'm looking forward where are you taking the plot. Thanks!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: vlsope2@yahoo.com (Anonymous) · Date: February 03, 2012 02:19 AM · On: Chapter 9
I really love this story and I'm totally anti michael an anti lindsay they were always so selfish and hurtful to others and I love mel in this story you have let her grow and show how much she loves gus.
Author's Response: Thanks! I wish that the writes on the show had spent more time letting Mel grow as a person. I also wish that Michael and Lindsay had been forced to face the consequences of their actions and words.One last wish... I wish they hadn't taken back all of the positive changes that BRian had gone through with that awful final episode.
There, I have vented!
Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2012 01:02 AM · On: Chapter 9
love it
Author's Response: thanks
Reviewer: Cherie (Anonymous) · Date: February 02, 2012 10:57 PM · On: Chapter 9
Does it make me a bad person to want revenge on Debbie and Lindsay?
Nah. Please let the revenge roll.
Author's Response: I'm really not a vengeful person. Really.
Reviewer: Daphne (Anonymous) · Date: February 02, 2012 09:51 PM · On: Chapter 9
I must say that, yes, I do look forward everyday to an update on this story. :-)
It's going to be interesting to see how the M/L situation works out, and the custody.
Later!
Author's Response: I think it'll be even more interesting to see how Mel and BRian can stand living together... Lol!
Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: February 02, 2012 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 9
wow!! lots of twists and curves in this chapter. :)
Author's Response: Lol... Yeah, now it's all about trying to negotiate those curves.
Reviewer: kim136@dodo.com.au (Anonymous) · Date: February 02, 2012 07:59 PM · On: Chapter 9
it a great chapter update soon kim
Author's Response: will do!
Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: February 02, 2012 12:40 PM · On: Chapter 8
I didn't see this coming, but in hindsight, in this situation, it's exactly what dumbass Mikey would do. Good call. Is he gonna live? I think they should go to see him in the hospital and tell him that, too bad, he's alive, and he STILL has to pay back the money!
Author's Response: Lol... that would be very mean, wouldn't it?
Reviewer: amythesw (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2012 08:12 AM · On: Chapter 8
I loved the chapter...Michael is such a selfish little shit! Just because things don't go his way like they always do, he tries to take the easy way out. I would love for him to die a slow, painful death (just cuz I can't stand him)...but I know you will take us in a great direction. I look forward to your chapters every morning! Can't wait til tomorrow! Thanks!
Author's Response: Lol... so much love for Mikey on this site!
Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2012 07:40 AM · On: Chapter 8
no but i can not wait to read the next chapter of this story great job writting this story
Author's Response: Thanks! I don't think anyone guessed this outcome.
Reviewer: wordshipper (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2012 06:11 AM · On: Chapter 8
I don't know what to make of this turn of events. Kind of removes any more chances for angst with Michael. I'm annoyed that everyone is still blaming B/J for the situation. Come on, make it right for them!
Author's Response: Hmmm... Would I leave BRian and Justin hanging like that?
Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2012 01:21 AM · On: Chapter 8
love it
Author's Response: thanks
Reviewer: Ghost Writer (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2012 12:18 AM · On: Chapter 8
Huh. I was actually expecting Michael to go after Justin or something, not try and kill himself. Good chapter though! <3
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: February 01, 2012 08:10 PM · On: Chapter 8
actually where else did he have to go. it's just typical when you have your back to the wall and its very cowardly-but-after all we are dealing with michael here. i wasn't too surprised. it maybe still is a pity ploy-we'll see where you take this. he will get what he wants the whole thing to go away after all. he needs some counselling when he recovers-i think everone would agree. good chapter-lots going on. the new place sounds just what the doctor ordered for them.
Author's Response: One of my favorite things about writing Brian/Justin stories is coming up with great places for them to live. Weird. huh?
Reviewer: K (Anonymous) · Date: February 01, 2012 08:04 PM · On: Chapter 8
I can't believe Michael took the wimps way out.... He can never see that he is wrong. If he dies it just makes it all so easy... Both he and Deb need to realise that they are the ones who have a problem not Brian
Author's Response: Well, we'll see how it all plays out in the next few chapters. ;)
Reviewer: wordshipper (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2012 06:40 AM · On: Chapter 7
Nice to see Mel and Brian on the same page for a change. Lindsay and Michael are both just being incredibly obtuse. So much going on in this story, how can it only be 13 chapters? Please, feel free to extend it!
Author's Response: Lol... It's done. I don't really extend my stories. Sorry!
Reviewer: Ghost Writer (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2012 01:14 AM · On: Chapter 7
You know, I'm really glad Melanie is on Brian and Justin's side. I always liked her on the show but sort of hated that she was always so rude to Brian. <3
Author's Response: Yeah, she and Brian are so much alike in many ways, so it's hard not to like her.
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