Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Collared
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2018 12:14 PM · On: Chapter 12

Loved it

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2017 02:06 PM · On: Chapter 12

I really enjoyed the story. It was refreshing to see Brian not hiding behind masks and walls while he embraced the feeling he had for Justin. I will add this one to my favorites.

Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2015 11:21 PM · On: Chapter 12

Great story, sad to see it end. More great stories to come, I hope:-)

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: March 25, 2014 08:49 AM · On: Chapter 12

Love it:-) 

Reviewer: ColorLet23 (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2012 11:33 AM · On: Chapter 12

It's always bitter sweet to see an end to a great story. I enjoyed this story's concept and the love/trust the B/J had for each other. Well done!

Reviewer: soul1essharpy (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2012 01:17 AM · On: Chapter 12

Yet another of my top 10 favorite stories and still just as captivating as the first time that I read it. I love your work, so please, keep it coming!

Author's Response:

I will.

Reviewer: TrinTiff (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2012 06:50 AM · On: Chapter 12

I enjoyed it immensely! Maybe one day we can revisit them and see how the playroom turned out! :-D

Hugs, Cindy

Author's Response:

Maybe!

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2012 08:22 PM · On: Chapter 12

Thank you for sharing this story.  I learned some new things, spent time thinking about collar options :)  My dog has no idea what he might find in his collar box some day!  

Your way of dealing with Micheal was sooo adult, I know it was a rational way to work thru it but I'm always looking for a good fight with ripped limbs and near death when it comes to Mikey or Ethan.  I hardly get what I want but I have dreams!!

I am very glad to have you as part of the MW family.  

Lori



Author's Response:

I like beating up on Mikey and sometimes Lindsay... I usually try to forget that Ethan ever existed, Lol. And I'm very happy to be here! Thanks! 

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2012 05:57 AM · On: Chapter 12

I am so very sorry to see this story end...maybe you an igve us an update once the play room is built! So hot! Really liked this story alot -  thanks.

loving life,

Charle



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Henny71 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2012 12:26 AM · On: Chapter 12

I love the way Brian took responsibility for how dependent Michael was on him.  He was also able to get Michael to accept that he would never be a sub (for either Brian or anyone).  I was kind of hoping that there would be a scene where Brian and Justin really commit to each other and stop using condoms.  Great ending regardless!  Congrats again!



Author's Response:

Lol... I actually thought about the condoms only this last time I read through the fic. Weird, right? I totally missed that, since they really can't be with anyone else now. Glad you liked it though! Jules

Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2012 07:15 AM · On: Chapter 11

love it

Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: TrinTiff (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2012 03:47 AM · On: Chapter 11

I've loved this story! I hate to see it coming to an end. Justin giving Brian what he needs is perfect! :-)

Hugs, Cindy

Author's Response:

Thank you! I thought after all that kinkiness, there really needed to be a bit of tenderness between the two of them. I'm glad it came across.

Reviewer: Henny71 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2012 02:35 AM · On: Chapter 11

I shuddered at the image I got after reading this.  It's nice that it's not only the alpha taking care of the sub but the sub also knowing what the alpha needs.  Great chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks.  Most people don't realize that the Dom/sub relationship really does go both ways.

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2012 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 11

I'm sure they were celtic knots.  

I have a friend who constantly drinks ginger tea, I'm not going to be able to watch her drink tea without thinking of other uses for ginger.

I can't wait to see how this ends.  I will be sorry to reach the end of this story, but I hope you have more of your amazing work to share with us.

Lori



Author's Response:

Loads more to post after this... And if work ever slows down I might have a couple new stories in the next month or so.

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2012 11:09 PM · On: Chapter 10

No!  Not the pretty collar!  That dang Michael, he's such a pain in the ass.  You know that collar is never going to be good again, even if it could be repaired it's always going to have bad memories.  Sounds like another shopping trip...

What sort of way will Brian take care of Micheal for this horrible crime of hurting his sub?  I assume there will be a price to pay.  

Lori



Author's Response:

Hmmm... we'll see. ;)

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2012 12:42 PM · On: Chapter 9

Now I think Justin needs to be microchiped.  A collar can be lost or slipped out of and that way if he's lost Brian will be able to prove that he is the master.  

I really like this story, the imprinting plot is very intriguing.

Lori

 



Author's Response:

Lol... that's just... wow.

Thanks!

Reviewer: Henny71 (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2012 05:05 AM · On: Chapter 9

I absolutely love this story.  This is so well written and I can tell you took such TLC to create this piece.  Congratulation and keep updating.



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2012 10:20 AM · On: Chapter 8

I'm very interested in learning about the collaring business.  I love buying collars for my dog, so many options to pick from.  Somehow I think there is more to this type of collar.

 



Author's Response:

Yup, there is definitely more to these collars. Lol!

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2012 12:50 PM · On: Chapter 7

Hmmm somehow I don't think Brian will be heading to PetsMart to get a collar for Justin...  

Lori



Author's Response:

Lol... No, I don't think so!

Reviewer: sara (Anonymous) · Date: January 04, 2012 12:43 AM · On: Chapter 6

i love this brian kind and frim



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: January 03, 2012 11:59 PM · On: Chapter 6

love it



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Henny71 (Anonymous) · Date: January 03, 2012 10:15 PM · On: Chapter 6

I love this story!  Please keep updating.



Author's Response:

I will! Lol!

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2012 09:00 PM · On: Chapter 6

What did he buy at the store????  God I love the way you write!  I am also thrilled with the quick update.  I do understand that the store is already written, but it is nice of you to add it so quickly.  I also feel safe reading this knowing that I will get to read the complete story.  It is so heartbreaking to get so deep into a good story and be left hanging with out an ending.

Lori



Author's Response:

I know... That's why I always finish my stories before I post them. I have only ever left one story unfinished and it still haunts me to this day. I have tons of stories half complete in my library of stories, but none of them will ever see the light of day until they are complete.

As for what BRian got at the store... I think I forgot about that. Ice cream probably. Lol!

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2012 09:01 PM · On: Chapter 5

Well that was a quick update!  I'm sure there are going to be lots of training going on now.  I wonder who will learn quicker?

Lori



Author's Response:

Lots of training is right... It's a toss up who will be the faster learner... Lol!

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2012 08:50 PM · On: Chapter 4

somehow I don't think it's going to end as easy as this...

This sure is  interesting spin and I can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

No... not so easy. They both have to learn how to be together.

Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: January 02, 2012 04:38 AM · On: Chapter 4

love it



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Cheryl (Anonymous) · Date: January 02, 2012 02:40 AM · On: Chapter 4

Interesting concept.  Finally got caught up to read this story.  Can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2012 04:32 PM · On: Chapter 3

Great, I love it when things happen to Brian that he can't control!

Lori



Author's Response:

Glad you like it!

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2012 01:07 AM · On: Chapter 1

please post quickly - I could cheat and  go back to FF to read it, but it's well worth the wait - ...so hot!

loving life,

Charle



Author's Response:

Lol... I have been known to reread my own stuff on FF.net.  I'm sticking to one chapter a day, but that's still pretty good, right?

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2011 11:48 PM · On: Chapter 2

I like what you're doing with this.  A little twist on the familiar story.  I can't wait to see where this goes.

Lori



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Henny71 (Anonymous) · Date: December 30, 2011 10:16 PM · On: Chapter 2

What a great story!  Please update soon.



Author's Response:

Tomorrow! One chapter a day... Lol! Glad you like it!

Reviewer: mana (Anonymous) · Date: December 30, 2011 03:58 PM · On: Chapter 1

it is a nice story

go for a lot of chapter a lot chapter please



Author's Response:

12 Chapters total... not sure if you consider that a lot or not, but that's what there is, Lol! Glad you like it!

Reviewer: sara (Anonymous) · Date: December 30, 2011 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 1

oh my god it is sooooooooo good

i like this world full of sub and dom

i hope brian will be a firm dom and althought a kind top

i waitinggggggggggggggggg



Author's Response:

Thank you! The new chapter will be up in just a few minutes!

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2011 06:36 AM · On: Chapter 1

This seems familiar. Have you posted it some place else?  Either way love it. Can't wait for more. I read the 2 stories you used as inspiration. I really like the Gibbs/tony combo. 



Author's Response:

All of my stories have been posted elsewhere (ff.net) before I ever found this site (well I posted A Kinney Christmas Carol on both sites at the same time). I'm glad you like this story. The inspiration stories are really great.

Reviewer: LILI (Anonymous) · Date: December 30, 2011 04:10 AM · On: Chapter 1

please another chapter soonnnnnnnnnnnnn



Author's Response:

Tomorrow morning... I promise!

Reviewer: jacknalecsmom (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2011 12:25 AM · On: Chapter 1

Oooh, I like this world. Great beginning!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2011 10:45 PM · On: Chapter 1

I love this. But it's looks so familiar. Could it be that I've read this story somewhere else?

* hugs *



Author's Response:

Probably. It was posted on FF.net a while ago. Glad you like it though!

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2011 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 1

I love BDSM storiesand this is very different from anything I have seen before. Love the premise. Can't wait for more. Please write fast. All your stories are great.

Author's Response:

IT's all written already, so it's just a matter of posting! I'm glad you are enjoying it so far!

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