Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Betrayal
Reviewer: tgrayfic (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2023 01:22 AM · On: Chapter 1

Just finished the entire story. Loved this so much! I loved everything Brian did for Justin, and in return, Justin helping Brian achieve his goal of buying Ryder out. True partners! And Michael was an idiot! I knew they should have trusted Justin's gut instinct when it came to Rage. Glad it all came out in the end!

Reviewer: tgrayfic (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2023 11:04 PM · On: Chapter 1

I love the premise for this fic and I'm enjoying this version of Brian and Justin already. Justin's stubbornness and Brian's need to help is so spot on! 

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2018 04:04 AM · On: Chapter 11

A great story, loved it

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2017 08:27 PM · On: Chapter 11

I do hope all the copies of that issue were distroyed.  I am so disappointed in Ted.  But now everyone knows about Michael's betrayal and Justin and Brian's commitment to each other and that's not a bad way to end a story.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2017 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 10

Why am I worried about the comic?  I'm so glad that Mel and Lindsay are letting Gus come to meet Justin's grandmother!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2017 07:28 PM · On: Chapter 9

Let's hope Mikey takes Justin's advise.  Justin's paintings were the talk of the show.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2017 01:12 AM · On: Chapter 8

Financally things seem to be looking up for Brian and Justin.  Maybe Michael isn't up to something, but I doubt it.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2017 12:51 AM · On: Chapter 7

The whole dinner party went over well except for Mikey.  Love the look at what was done.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2017 01:05 AM · On: Chapter 11

I love banner too...thank u soo much.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2017 01:03 AM · On: Chapter 11

Omg..mikey is a bastard...that whiney brat...i hate him.

Super story...will wait for more...thank u soo much.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2017 04:47 PM · On: Chapter 10

Wow...mikey is going to be in soo much trouble soon.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2017 04:34 PM · On: Chapter 9

Brian will be brian..lols.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2017 04:09 PM · On: Chapter 8

What the heck is he planning?? Good going..b25;

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2017 03:50 PM · On: Chapter 7

Awesome chapter...bj is really are couple now.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2017 02:29 PM · On: Chapter 6

Jealous brian is cute.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2017 01:17 PM · On: Chapter 5

Soo sweet chapter.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2017 12:46 PM · On: Chapter 4

Mikey is ssooooo pathetic...i hate that character.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2017 12:32 PM · On: Chapter 3

Great 

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2017 04:01 PM · On: Chapter 2

That is soo romantic..love it.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2017 01:00 PM · On: Chapter 1

Absoloutly love this story...reading again after a long time...great work...thank u for posting.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2017 05:44 AM · On: Chapter 6

Ted and Emmett took the news well.  If only Michael could.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2017 05:15 AM · On: Chapter 5

Poor Brian.  In spite of everything he's really happy.  

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2017 04:38 AM · On: Chapter 4

I've always like Emmett.  Michael kept talking bad about Justin, no wonder Brian got angry.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2017 03:50 AM · On: Chapter 3

They did it, they tied the knot.  I'm not sure of the time frame.  Is this after the Rage party?  I can see Michael as the Betrayer.

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2017 03:24 AM · On: Chapter 11

I really enjoyed revisiting this story.  So happy it is our featured story of the month.  Bill

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2017 12:24 AM · On: Chapter 2

This is wonderful.  Not only did Brian make partner, but Justin was able to get the money he needed for school.  Take that, Craig.  This trip to London should be fantastic.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2017 08:47 PM · On: Chapter 1

Love how Brian is changing and planning a trip to London with Justin.  Justin not wanting to be a kept boy is the right thing for him.

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2017 02:20 AM · On: Chapter 1

Revisiting your stories since they are featured this month.  This is one of my favorite series here on Midnight Whispers!!!!  This was one of my inspirations to write my own story.  Bill

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2017 01:45 AM · On: Chapter 11

Love this series and have read it many times.  Great choice for feature story of the month.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2017 12:31 PM · On: Chapter 11

I've read this tons of times and loved it everytime. I loved everything about it. It has it all, love, drama, sweetness and hotness and cuteness. Please write more of it, such an amazing story xx

Reviewer: MAFITA (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2012 01:26 PM · On: Chapter 11

Loved the story! Can't believe I haven't read it sooner! I love happy endings! Andd I'll obviously will be reading the rest of the series next! :D Congratulations on a great story!

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2011 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 11

Just  read the whole story and all I have to say is "WOW".  You sure know how to write a plot with all kinds of things going on.  I would like to think this is how the show should have gone.

Great work.  Off to read the sequels.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I do love this little world I created.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2011 08:04 AM · On: Chapter 11

I have loved this series you are a wonderful writer I am looking forward to the new story



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2011 11:59 PM · On: Chapter 11

Thank you for this story.  I guess it almost goes without saying that any good writing about B and J is always good, but this was nice because of the way you used Mikey as a wonderful bad boy to hate.  The back stabbing plot he came up with was so brillant, really way beyond his usual tricks.  I really loved this story.  Thanks so much for sharing this story.  You have real writing talent.

Lori



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I like using Michael as the antagonist simply because he annoys me. Lol!

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2011 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 9

Great chapter, but I have fears that Michael is up to no good.  

The last line of the chapter will stick in my memory for a long time.  It is the ultimate Brian Kinney phrase.

Thanks for another perfect chapter.

Lori



Author's Response:

Michael is certainly up to no good! Thanks for the great review!

Jules

Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: December 15, 2011 01:17 AM · On: Chapter 9

love it



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: December 15, 2011 01:08 AM · On: Chapter 8

love it



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: ColorLet23 (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2011 11:15 PM · On: Chapter 8

I am in love with this story! Wow. I wanted to wait till you had more chapters up before reading and now I am just soo excited. It's well written and I’m loving the storyline as well. I am glad Brian stepped up to the plate and took his "relationship" with Justin to the next level. I like your Brian because you managed to portray how he's changed without forcing it on the readers. It reads genuine and not fake. The other thing I noticed that was very helpful in making this come full circle is Justin's fund. Because he now has access to his own money, he has become Brian's equal and can now feel solid in their marriage because he is financially independent from Brian. Also, I think it's smart on their part for keeping it quite from the rest of the family. Michael Michael Michael… I hope he doesn’t cause too much trouble for Brian and Justin as well as the family. I could go on, but I won’t … lol. I did enjoy reading the last eight chapters and can't wait for more. Keep up the great work!



Author's Response:

Thanks! This series really is one of my favorites. As the story moves on, I like seeing how BRian and Justin develop. I hope you'll stick around for the other stories int he series!

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2011 09:33 PM · On: Chapter 8

Oh NO, this can't be good.  Mikey is bound to cause more trouble.  Each chapter makes me love this story more.  Thanks so much for all the talent you have for arranging the abc's in such wonderful patterns!  Can't wait for the next chapter.

Lori



Author's Response:

Lol! Thanks!

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2011 09:07 PM · On: Chapter 7

I love this story.  I especially enjoy the nasty side of Mikey, it's fun to have such a good reason to dislike him, if that makes any sense.  Your descriptions are top notch!

Lori



Author's Response:

Thanks! Everyone thinks I must hate Michael, but I really don't. I think he's pretty whiny and annoying, but not an altogether awful person. But... but stories need an antagonist and he's pretty perfect for that. Lol! I can actually see him doing some of the things I suggest, all in the name of protecting BRian, of course.

Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: December 12, 2011 10:26 PM · On: Chapter 7

love it



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: December 12, 2011 09:41 PM · On: Chapter 6

love it



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2011 12:48 PM · On: Chapter 3

wonderful story



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Mariana (Anonymous) · Date: December 09, 2011 03:07 AM · On: Chapter 3

I've read the whole thing twice now. I absolutely love this story.

Did you ever wrote a sequel to it?

Please write some more.

 



Author's Response:

I've actually written an entire series. This is the first of five stories.

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2011 11:17 PM · On: Chapter 3

Very nice story.  You have a way with telling a story :)

Lori



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Ghost Writer (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2011 02:48 AM · On: Chapter 2

Oh, I read this story a while ago on FF and loved it. Reading this again and made me not want to wait so I've gone back to your FF to read the whole thing, lol. It's an amazing story. <3



Author's Response:

Cheater! Lol!

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2011 08:04 PM · On: Chapter 1

I think I have read this but it will be good to read again lol



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: December 07, 2011 10:42 AM · On: Chapter 1

love it



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: amythesw (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2011 08:09 AM · On: Chapter 1

I am sooooooo excited that you are posting here!  I have you on a feed from fan-fic.net so I can keep track of your new stuff.  All of your stories are so entertaining and great reads!  I know you will find a great following here.  Midnight Whispers is the best website! 



Author's Response:

Thanks! There are really some great authors on this site, and I got caught up in reading so many stories that I've never seen anywhere else. So I had to join in the fun!

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: December 07, 2011 07:42 AM · On: Chapter 1

just a little side note.  your rainbow inn series is very good--but i think goodbye hello would also be a good one to put over here.  i really loved that one.



Author's Response:

I had to add the Rainbow Inn series because, let's face it, I worked my ass off on that one. But I do think I'll eventually get around to moving all my stories over here. I'll keep Goodbye Hello at the top of the list!

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2011 06:35 AM · On: Chapter 1

welcome to MW - it will be fun to revisit some of your stories - and to be able to read the new ones as well - you have long been on my favorite authors list on FF, but I don't get there nearly as often as I am here - so - again - welcome

While I have enjoyed so many of your stories already, I am very excited about the new holiday story you hinted at - will  definitely wach for that

in the mean time - this story is still a great read - whether its the first time - or not - so I look forward to reading more as you post

loving life,

Charle



Author's Response:

Thanks for the welcome! And the holiday story is being beta read as we speak, so hopefully it will be finished soon.

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2011 05:10 AM · On: Chapter 1

Hi, dear - glad to see you posting your stories over here....there goes my audience - LOL!  Seriously,  the readers will be in for a real treat.:P)  And I always like to read your happy endings.:)

BTW - Glad to hear you'll be posting a new holiday story.  I'll be looking forward to reading it.  I'm going to try that myself in my spare time (if I can figure out what that is - ha!).

Welcome to the site!

~Kimberly

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the warm welcome! I seriously doubt I'll steal any readers from you. It's like when a new baby is born into a family; the love isn't divided, it multiplies! Lol! Look forward to reading anything you put up! Since I've been in a bit of a slump lately, I've been reading voraciously, so I welcome anything new (and good)!

Reviewer: kayitt (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2011 03:16 AM · On: Chapter 1

I love the relationship they have, poor justin with all the problem he has with the attack.

=)



Author's Response:

Thanks! Justin certainly did go through a lot.

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: December 07, 2011 01:25 AM · On: Chapter 1

this story is the bomb.  i have read it on that other site.  you have so many stories there-i hope you put them all over here.  your writing is amazing.  can't wait!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks! Lol! I plan on eventually posting pretty much everything, at least for QaF. I'm not sure about other fandoms, but I will post the Rainbow Inn series here soon. Also, I've got a new Christmas story for QaF that I'll be posting on both sites soon.

Reviewer: nosleep (Anonymous) · Date: December 07, 2011 01:23 AM · On: Chapter 1

I just copied" this story in my e-reader as one of my favorites. I had just finished the Sound of Silence" the other day. These are wonderful stories I will enjoy again and again. I wished you had posted here earlier. I would have made it easiler to copy. LOL



Author's Response:

Lol... I've really only been introduced to this site ercently, but I like the dedicated QaF fans, so I plan on moving everything over eventually. (I'll be posting a QaF CHristmas story soon, too-- one that hasn't been posted anywhere yet--so keep an eye out!) I've got a few faves on my iphone and on my ereader, so I know what you mean about it being easier. FF.net doesn't make copying anything easy!

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: December 07, 2011 12:00 AM · On: Chapter 1

hello i really like the way this story is going so far

it sounds great

please write some more soon



Author's Response:

It's all written, but I'll post the next chapter tomorrow! Thanks for your review!

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