Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Three's A Crowd
Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2015 07:59 AM · On: Chapter 8

Wow! This is one of the best Brian and Justin stories that I've read. Definitely could be canon and provides for character growth at the same time. Although I'm very new (this past summer) to the QAF series and its associated fanfiction, I've been obsessed and have read a lot of different stories in the past 3 1/2 months.

You provide incredible insights via Brian's POV. There's heat, humor, and the enduring love of Brian and Justin. Brian's love for Gus and his blossoming love for Elise also light up the story.

I found chapter 9 on lj. I do hope that you plan to complete this fic even though (as far as I can tell) it has been over three years since you last posted. I hope real life permits you to continue soon!

Reviewer: NicJ (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2014 02:29 AM · On: Chapter 8

ugh, this is so good!  i hope this two-year hiatus of yours is almost over, because i need another chapter haha

Reviewer: Eve jowi 8 (Anonymous) · Date: August 17, 2013 12:06 AM · On: Chapter 8

High there,i was really liking this story, but because it looked like as you were not updating anymore on MW or FF I went to your Lj.   But it's difficult en confusing to find out if there is a new chapter. Would you please tell if you're planning to update or publish your stories on this site? Really liked them . 

Reviewer: nicolle_midnight2013 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2013 09:14 PM · On: Chapter 8

Hello!
I would like to ask you to finish this wonderful fic.
I love every line you wrote and would love to know how developed the story of boys from this moment
I've read chapter 9 on LJ and it just made me want to read more.
Please consider resuming the story.
A big hug!
Fatima.

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2012 10:22 PM · On: Chapter 8

I just discovered this story and I have to say it's fantastic. I love the dynamic between B/J here.

please update soon JP

Reviewer: Britin4Ever (Anonymous) · Date: May 22, 2012 07:31 AM · On: Chapter 8

OMG, please update and finish this story! I really, really, really need to know how you resolve the issues in this story. You really have an understanding of our favorite characters which makes this enjoyable and believable to read.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you! I have the next chapter ready to post, but I haven't had the time to mess with the formatting on this site to get it up. Check back over the next couple days! 

Reviewer: charlotte taylor (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2012 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 8

The best story yet.Tugs at your heart and is also funny.Especially chapter eight in the drug store.Well done.PLEASE keep on writing these stories.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I have a new chapter of TAC already posted on my LJ, so hopefully I'll get around to posting it here this evening or tomorrow. 

Reviewer: Daphne (Anonymous) · Date: April 13, 2012 12:39 AM · On: Chapter 8

I don't know the hell why I was so reluctant to read this story, but once I started I couldn't stop.  Needless to say, my proofreading is laying on my kitchen table  -- not proofread, by the way!  :-)

I am so into this.  I hope RL is not giving you too much of hard time and that there's an update soon.

Later!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad you decided to give it a shot and that you weren't disappointed! An update usually takes me a couple weeks, but I hope it won't be long. The next chapter is started. 

Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2012 09:54 PM · On: Chapter 8

This chapter blew me away, so to speak. The part when Brian speaks to Gus and all, I so had to laugh and think at the same time! Wonderfull AU story with serious background, totally LIKE it!!!! 



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it! There's plenty more to come. 

Reviewer: Lotus flower (Anonymous) · Date: April 06, 2012 04:10 PM · On: Chapter 8

Love love love this story. Thank you so much for your latest update.

I was madly checking for updates a couple of times everyday.  Totally worth the wait.

 

Thanks again

catherine



Author's Response:

Thanks, Catherine! I'm usually always two-three weeks between updates, but this last chapter was a longer wait than usual due to some issues I had to fix in the fic. I appreciate your patience! 

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2012 06:47 PM · On: Chapter 8

Ooohhh I'm so in love with this story. Thanks for this wonderful and very long update. Can't wait for more.

 

* hugs *



Author's Response:

Thanks! Glad you're liking it!

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2012 11:06 AM · On: Chapter 8

great chapter - love the way Brian is evolving in this story - good job!

Charle



Author's Response:

Thanks, Charle!

Reviewer: Flower lotus (Anonymous) · Date: March 20, 2012 06:19 PM · On: Chapter 7

Hey, any closer to posting the next chapter? I'm really looking forward to it. Xx



Author's Response:

Yes, the chapter is finished in draft form and with my beta! :)  I'll probably post it next week just to give myself a few extra days to try to get myself ahead with Ch9. 

Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: March 19, 2012 10:04 AM · On: Chapter 7

I just read this story. It got lost in the shuffle in my ereader and I just discovered it again. It is an excellent story and very well written. I'm dying to know the story with Justin and his ex and I'm dying to know how this ends.

Please update soon.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I just finished up Ch8, so look for an update within a week or so.

Reviewer: Jean (Anonymous) · Date: March 11, 2012 09:46 PM · On: Chapter 7

I really like this story, hurry with the next chapter.



Author's Response:

I'm working hard on it! Thanks for reading! :) 

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: March 11, 2012 07:59 PM · On: Chapter 7

I don't know how you always do this but you got me crying again with the first few paragraphs. So many emotins! I really love your writing and I'm waiting for a new chapter! :)



Author's Response:

Thanks, Anon! 

Reviewer: hali (Anonymous) · Date: March 10, 2012 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 7

That's a great story, so IC that it's a shame they didn't actually filmed it. Thank you for the text.

And also I love how you use words. It's not very often that I like how English looks (my native anguage is Russian), but this is one those few cases. Loved it. :-)



Author's Response:

Thank you for such kind comments! I'm really flattered. :)  Haha, I'd be very embarrassed if anything I wrote was ever filmed, especially this. Omg, I blush just thinking about it. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Flower lotus123 (Anonymous) · Date: March 07, 2012 12:24 PM · On: Chapter 7

Thanks really enjoyed your latest chapter. Loving the whole story, sigh ..... Just want Justin and Brian to be happy,

 

 



Author's Response:

And thanks for reading! I'm glad you're enjoying this. :)

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2012 09:28 AM · On: Chapter 7

yay - that's the way i like it - our boys going home - together

I love this chapter with Brian coming to terms with how he feels and what he wants - looking forward to more

loving life,

Charle



Author's Response:

Thanks, Charle!  I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: March 07, 2012 08:55 AM · On: Chapter 7

could home be Britin??

Love how Emmett handled Brian.  Enjoying it.



Author's Response:

It may be! :)  Thanks for reading! 

Reviewer: Missn31 (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2012 06:30 AM · On: Chapter 7

Oh I do love this story. So glad the baby was ok. Thanks for the update, I do hope this story is heading for a happy ending!! xxxxxx



Author's Response:

Thanks! We do have quite a bit to go before the end, but I don't think anyone will be disappointed. :)

Reviewer: lotusflower321 (Anonymous) · Date: February 10, 2012 02:41 PM · On: Chapter 6

Hanging out for chapter 7!



Author's Response:

There will be a little delay on ch7, but it is coming! :) 

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2012 04:35 AM · On: Chapter 6

"Then why did he have a baby with him?"

"He didn't."

Now that was a shock!



Author's Response:

The plot thickens! Thanks for reading. :) 

Reviewer: JustBeAQueen (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2012 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 6

Awesome... been reading this story for a while, sorry I've never reviewed. I say awesome, cause finally! I had kind of figured that out, but no one said anything and no one asked... it's about fucking time... and it kind of figures it would be Molly. You had to figure a little sister of Justin would have to have an attitude equivalent, and totally able to get to Brian. And just those two words "he didn't"... absolutely perfect! Can't wait to see what comes next! 

Cheers, Laura :) 



Author's Response:

Thank you, Laura! It's never too late to leave feedback. :)  Yes, there was something very much off about the whole Justin-James-Elise scenario that I was trying to hint at. I'm glad you figured it out! 

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: January 21, 2012 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 6

Loved it! Elise is too precious and I love Brian's feelings towards the little urchin.



Author's Response:

Thanks, hon!

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: January 18, 2012 04:17 AM · On: Chapter 1

i really love this story so far! you got me crying, laughing and holding my breath so many times. I hope to be able to read a new chapter soon! :)



Author's Response:

The new chapter will be posted very soon! :) 

Reviewer: Stauneauge (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2012 04:35 AM · On: Chapter 5

I love your story, the "urgin-twist" left me chuckling some time. And now is "Ian" again in the picture, or isn't he.



Author's Response:

With Ian, we may never know. :)  Thanks for reading! 

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: January 13, 2012 08:37 AM · On: Chapter 5

ha! ha! his urchin! love it



Author's Response:

Thanks! :) 

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: December 19, 2011 08:05 AM · On: Chapter 4

In your B/J world I really dont think that brain and justin should be togather

brain is a nutcase an very imature acting toward justin and the baby what if was justin acting like an ass toward Gus.



Author's Response:

Well, I'm sorry you feel that way, Anon. I've tried to stay as true to canon as possible, and Brian's worrying and jealousy is very much a part of that. And I think a lot of folks who read this have found it to be very close to canon. If you were hoping for a romantic Brian embracing the opportunity to be a full time father, you certainly won't find that here. That's not how he acts in the series. I also don't think it's quite fair to make the comparison towards Justin and Gus. Justin and Brian are two very different people with very different hang ups. And Brian isn't really being mean towards Elise so much as he's not embracing her. It took him five years to want to be involved with his own son, so why would he embrace a child that isn't his own? That doesn't make much sense.

Regardless, you're welcome to your opinions. 

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2011 05:45 AM · On: Chapter 4

I love long chapters. Please more.

 

* hugs *



Author's Response:

Long chapters can be good sometimes, but maybe not all the time. :)  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: flowerlotu321 (Anonymous) · Date: December 19, 2011 05:37 AM · On: Chapter 4

LOVED it.  Thanks, just love Brians jealousy.  Cant wait for the next one. Merry Christmas



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it! And Merry Christmas to you as well!

Reviewer: flowerlotus321 (Anonymous) · Date: December 15, 2011 08:12 PM · On: Chapter 3

Loved it.! Cant wait for the next installment.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm posting the next installment today! 

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2011 05:54 AM · On: Chapter 3

Wow lovely story, thanks for writing. I so love stories with Brian or Justin having little kids. Hope to see an update really soon.

 

* hugs *



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm working on Ch4 now, but it'll probably be a couple weeks before it's posted since I'm working on charity drabbles as well. :) 

Reviewer: BritinForever29 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2011 10:01 AM · On: Chapter 3

I love this story, it's brilliant. I love the jealousy between Brian and Elise. I think it's funny that Brian is jealous of a one year old baby. Can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Brian's jealousy is a bit ridiculous, isn't it? lol!

Reviewer: Megawords19 (Anonymous) · Date: November 18, 2011 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 2

I love this story, keep it up!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you! The draft of Ch3 is with my beta right now. :) 

Reviewer: ColorLet23 (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2011 04:34 AM · On: Chapter 2

I can totally understand Brian's reaction to Justin's new roll as a full time father... Scared, not what Brian signed up for, he have to share Justin now etc. I, of course, am curious to read more about the events that lead them to where they are. Can Brian learn to Love Justin's daughter (which he must do in his own time-no one else‘s)? It looks like Brian has no choice because he is already headed in that direction. I hope Justin is willing to work with Brian and is also smart enough to recognize that he, Justin, can not force/disregard Brian’s feelings; regardless of whether we agree with them or not, Brian's feeling are still valid. Still looking forward to updates.



Author's Response:

Thanks very much for the feedback! :)  Everyone is in a very difficult position at the moment. You'll definitely be getting a little info about Brian and Justin's break-up in Ch3, so stay tuned! 

Reviewer: JustBeAQueen (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2011 03:11 PM · On: Chapter 1

Well, first of all, welcome to the wonderful world of fanfic authors, and welcome to MW. Second... good story to start out with, very interesting. I'll be very interested in seeing where you go with this, and where Elise comes from. Of course, no matter how long Justin stayed in New York, he would always love Brian, and if Brian had broken all ties with Justin, then Justin would want to find someone else... until Brian got his head out of his ass and realized he was being an idiot... or until Justin came back, for whatever reason, and knocked some sense into Brian. Either way, whatever happens, this looks like a fun story to follow, and I can't wait for more. 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the feedback and warm welcome! Things are very complicated between the boys, indeed. Ch2 should be posted in the next few days. :) 

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2011 10:49 AM · On: Chapter 1

Wow, quite a bittersweet start for story.  You've definitely got my attention and interest.  Can't wait to see where this goes.  Brian rejecting Elise, so sad.  I'm sure he'll come around... right?

I'm on for the ride and looking forward to seeing what happens next.



Author's Response:

Well, you'll have to see what happens between Brian and Elise. We're in for a bumpy road ahead. But, I assure you that a baby Sunshine is a very hard thing to resist. :)  Thank you for leaving feedback! 

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2011 10:46 AM · On: Chapter 1

I am a freak for a vulnerable Brian, and this story has him examining his feelings and self analyzing - admitting, to himself at least, all the things that we love to hear - how much he loves Justin and how lost he is without him. He even admits (again to himself - but that's so typical Brian - it's what makes the storyline work) that he can't accept the 'urchin' because she is someone other than him that Justin loves, and he can't deal with sharing Justin's love.

"Justin Taylor will be in his life for as long as he wants to be. And he'll certainly be in Brian's heart-and wildest sexual fantasies-long after that, probably until Brian's dying day." - couldn't this just be a concise explanation of the entire series - and 90% or more of the fan fiction out there! outstanding!!

this story has something for everyone - it's canon - and not canon, it's strong Brian with walls in place - and soft Brian who loves his man - it's still in love Justin - and daddy Justin who will put his child first - it's what we know - and a whole fresh perspectiveon the men we love so well - love it!

great first story - anxious for more

loving life,

Charle

 



Author's Response:

Thanks very much for all the kind comments and taking the time to leave me some feedback, Charle! I really appreciate it and am glad you're enjoying it so far. :)  

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2011 10:03 AM · On: Chapter 1

I know that Brian is going to try,but it is a forgone conclusion that he'sgonna lose,  But it's gonna be a joy to read.

Tell me you write Fast?

 



Author's Response:

Brian trying and failing to resist Sunshine & co is quite a joy to write and read, isn't it? :)  Thanks for the feedback, and I do have chapter 2 coming your way in the next couple days! Generally it'll take me 2-3 weeks between chapters. I'm very much obsessed with revisions and getting things right. 

Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2011 08:48 AM · On: Chapter 1

i love this story i can not wait to read the next chapter your a great writter



Author's Response:

Thank you! The next chapter is coming very soon!

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2011 08:01 AM · On: Chapter 1

With him out of direct eyesight, the gang begins to fawn over the newest member of the family—all coos and baby talk—and the urchin giggles back at them, smiles a very Sunshine-y smile. Attention whore, Brian thinks, pouring himself some insufferably cheap whiskey

 

Omg I laughed so hard when I read this! lol.  I love the concept of this story. One question, they broke up 2 and 1/2 years ago, and never made up a few months later.. Why? I understand why Brian pulled away a year and a half ago, because of Elise, but what happened 2 and 1/2 years ago that was so bad they didn't make up a few months later? Hmmm..... I guess I'll have to wait till the next update to find out!

Loving this so far!  Thanks

Gina Marie



Author's Response:

Hi, Gina, and thank you for the feedback! I promise that the answer to your question is coming, though most likely in Ch3, not Ch2. :) 

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2011 07:16 AM · On: Chapter 1

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Author's Response:

Thanks for the warm welcome, Bob! 

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