Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2011 06:31 AM · On: Chapter 1

This was ver well written.  I like the idea of Brian's defenses being down when he was sick and that he want to say someting to Justin in the form of an apology.  Great fic.

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: September 13, 2011 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 1

i like how you dug into brian's feelings about being like his father. he'll never be jack and with justin around he knows that.

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2011 09:58 AM · On: Chapter 1

Very nice, well written.  Filled with emotions.  Your attention to the eyes was great.  They really did speak volumes that way.  I give this story an A+

Lori

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2011 11:45 PM · On: Chapter 1

I like your version much better!

 

Thanks

 

Author's Response:

Thank you.

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2011 09:56 PM · On: Chapter 1

nice - although I do kind of miss the part where he tells Brian that missing a ball is the least of his imperfections - that line was a hoot

I have to agree, though, that this makes more sense, he would be upset that he had laid a finger on Justin, and I much prefer him admitting that he was scared and that he needed Justin, even if the words were never spoken.

thank

loving life,

Charle

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. I did like the line about missing a ball, but it didn't seem to fit into this story. I'll hope you're read my future stories.