Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Fcked Up Situation
Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2020 02:56 AM · On: Chapter 16

I just finished this part and am now on my way to start reading the sequel.   I need to start it now to see what happens after this ending....

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2019 12:00 PM · On: Chapter 16

good one, now looking for sequel

Reviewer: bellawu (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2018 06:27 PM · On: Chapter 1

Poor justin. Im glad he can live with his sister.

Reviewer: Avampiregirl (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2017 01:26 PM · On: Chapter 16

Great story!

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2016 01:17 PM · On: Chapter 7

I love this story and i'm glad that justin is talking.   God michael is an ass but sometimes he's just too much.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: April 07, 2014 07:15 AM · On: Chapter 16

More please:-) 

Reviewer: Saskya (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2013 03:34 AM · On: Chapter 16

nice story. I go to read the continuation. :)

Reviewer: Draccone (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2013 08:49 AM · On: Chapter 16

What the hell happened? Just ended like this? I don't get it. I'm going to read the sequel.

Reviewer: judi (Anonymous) · Date: June 18, 2012 09:25 AM · On: Chapter 16

I don't get it!

Reviewer: Lenore (Anonymous) · Date: March 05, 2012 07:18 PM · On: Chapter 6

I thinks it would have been better if you didn't jump around in Pov...I get lost a lot...But so far it good...

Reviewer: Maiqu (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2011 12:44 PM · On: Chapter 16

Loved it!!

Author's Response:

Thank you! <3

Reviewer: Angela (Anonymous) · Date: November 04, 2011 10:55 PM · On: Chapter 16

Wait... is that the end?! NO!!! This was so hot! ANd super cute too. love it :)



Author's Response:

Thank you. It is the end, but I am working on the sequel now. Thanks for reading and reviewing. <3

Reviewer: FallBackTrick (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2011 06:44 AM · On: Chapter 7

 Trick is in love with this story and has decided to stalk it. Would you like to apply for a restraining order?



Author's Response:

Nope, you're good. Thanks for reading and reviewing. <3

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: September 22, 2011 12:04 PM · On: Chapter 16

how did craig even get in the building?

i'm confused. they're sitting there watching a movie and someone hits them with a bat or they went to prom and chris hit him with the bat?



Author's Response:

The *'s separate the last 4 chapters. I had to make them into 1 chapter because I had writer's block and couldn't get a full chapter for each. The last line of the story, is the last chapter of the story which was going to be the prom. Thanks for reading and reviewing. <3

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2011 06:32 AM · On: Chapter 16

Glad to see an update.  I understand your situation.  Update when you can, it's wonderful to read.



Author's Response:

Why thank you. A sequel is in the making. Thanks for reading and reviewing. <3

Reviewer: Cheryl (Anonymous) · Date: September 22, 2011 06:29 AM · On: Chapter 16

I really enjoyed this story.  I SURE do hope there's a sequel just waiting to be written.



Author's Response:

I have decided, there is going to be a sequel. But I have a few other stories that I wanna work through before I start it. Thanks for reading and reviewing. <3

Reviewer: inabluefunk (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2011 05:07 AM · On: Chapter 16

What's with the last line of this chapter? We are missing something here or aren't we?

That prick craig taylor, I tell you everytime I read something like that I just wish he could die on the spot by a stroke or a rock falling from the sky, you get the idea.

Cant wait for the new update.

Marla



Author's Response:

If you read my ending notes for the chapter, it says that I had writer's block so the last 4 chapters were turned into 1. The *'s separate each chapter. The very last line would have been the very last chapter, which was the prom. As for Craig.... HA! Sequel is coming soon. <3

Reviewer: marietta (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2011 04:08 AM · On: Chapter 16

What do you mean: The last sound heard was the crack of a bat. By whom, and who was attacked? You can't leave us hanging with that. Tell us more. BTW, good stuff. Metka



Author's Response:

You will have to wait for the sequel to find out. Thanks for reading, so glad you liked it! <3

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2011 05:14 AM · On: Chapter 15

mmm that was HOT !! and now I'm going to bed * giggles *

 

* hugs *



Author's Response:

So glad that you liked it. <3

Reviewer: inabluefunk (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2011 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 15

Hot update sweetie, but hey that is to be expected from our hot studs.

Now I really wanna see what happens next in the story, *call me impatient* but I do want to see what lies ahead.

keep them coming sweetie.

Marla



Author's Response:

Oh thank you. No worries, I'm getting on with the next update. Should be here soon. Thank you for reading and reviewing. <3

Reviewer: itzy68 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2011 06:52 PM · On: Chapter 15

Amazing :D



Author's Response:

Thank you. <3

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: September 05, 2011 11:36 AM · On: Chapter 15

hot birthday sex, what more could he ask for? i do hope they make it to babylon.



Author's Response:

Yup and maybe they will, maybe they won't. Just have to wait and see. Thanks for reading. <3

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: September 05, 2011 08:18 AM · On: Chapter 15

Like the story and plot but who's Luke?



Author's Response:

Oh shoot! Sorry, I took the scene from one of my old Luke/Reid stories from another show that I wrote and was switching out the names and fixing up the scene to fit with Brian and Justin, I must have just missed some. Thanks for pointing that out though and thanks so much for reading and reviewing. <3

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2011 08:03 AM · On: Chapter 15

very nice chapter - makes me feel kind of naughty 'cause I feel like I am right there with them - love the tenderness of Brian and the excitement and awe of Justin - now...what will happen next...

can't wait to find out

loving life

Charle



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it. Next chapter should be up tomorrow. Now that I have this chapter out of the way, I should be updating more quickly. <3

Reviewer: inabluefunk (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2011 07:58 AM · On: Chapter 14

WTF? Major cliffhanger here and in such a perilous junction in the story, shame on you sweetie LOL

I came across your story today *blinking shyly here* and have gone through it in a snap, and I am craving for more. I am wondering where you are going with the story and will keep reading till you consider your plot bunny satisfied with this story.

I wonder if you are gonna keep the prom incident in your story or are you gonna grace the boys some respite. One more thing, can someone please kill craig taylor?! I really want more stories with that prick dying. *oops I guess I dont get along with homophobes*

Cant wait for the update sweetie.

Marla

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review. Haha, I know I cut it off like that but I thought the chapter was getting too long, plus I wanted everything they are about to do be in a chapter on its own. Besides, I've actually only ever written male/male sex once before and that was almost a year ago. Anyway, as for the prom, I haven't fully decided yet. I may keep it I may not. I may even keep it without the bashing at the end. Like I said, I haven't decided just yet. I'll know when I get there, lol. As for Craig, hum, that may just happen, you never know, lol. Again, thank you so much for reading and reviewing my story. <3

Reviewer: nosleep (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2011 09:53 PM · On: Chapter 10

I'm surprised Brian is taking slow.

Nice chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing! <3

Reviewer: Ari (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2011 12:26 PM · On: Chapter 14

Cake sex?

*sigh* the best kind :D



Author's Response:

Haha! <3

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2011 06:26 AM · On: Chapter 14

nice they went through with all of that to make sure his birthday was special. babylon will be alot of fun for him.

michael is going to regret the way he treats justin because brian will choose justin and not him, and david will leave him for being so petty.



Author's Response:

Yeah, I almost didn't write all that in there but I'm started to get stuck with the story. I know how I want to end it, but there are a few things I want to throw in before I do so and it's becoming difficult trying to figure it all out to write. Thank you for reading and review, again! <3

Reviewer: Henny71 (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2011 05:55 AM · On: Chapter 14

Thanks for leaving us hanging! :(  Update soon!



Author's Response:

You're welcome! Haha! <3

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: August 26, 2011 07:47 AM · On: Chapter 13

craig is one sick nut case. i'm surprised he didn't realize justin was standing up to him and he was talking. justin is definietly going to have a happy birtday.



Author's Response:

Yup yup. Craig will be coming back. Yes Justin will be having a happy birthday. Thanks for reading. <3

Reviewer: Dioramanya (Anonymous) · Date: August 26, 2011 03:41 AM · On: Chapter 13

"I'm so sorry." "Don't be. It wasn't your fault. He's an asshole." Hello!! He's not a asshole, he's worse than that.

Justin can't or doesn't want to forgive Jennifer because she let Craig do it (she didn't want to see) but Cynthia suspected it and didn't do anything. She knew Justin was in danger and she didn't notify it to authorities, police, social services. It's hard to believe that nobody (parents of Daphne) has really tried to understand the behavior of Justin over the years. Daphne's parents could ask questions and Daphne (she promised not tell anyone) could imply little things without say it.

The beating has begun since childhood and his own mother didn't protect him, his sister wasn't there anymore. Who could Justin turn to ? He was traumatized for 18 years. He has always been afraid of his father and I don't think a few months without seeing Craig allow him to rebel as radically. But it was really great to read it. :)

I'm not adept of (in French) "Tendre l'autre joue." I believe in English it's "To tighten the Other Plays." Don't tell me that Justin is just trying to forget all the abuse he suffered and will try to avoid Craig (until Brian is forced to step in). Craig must be confronted !!

I'm sorry. "Don't be. It wasn't your fault. He's an asshole" frustrated me. What Justin has been dealing with wasn't nothing. This sentence gives me the impression that Justin accepts things as they are. If there's one thing he learned it's that no one will defend him against Craig. It's time he do it himself. Not by attacking Craig but by protecting himself. And then, he won't have to see Craig and Jennifer anymore.

My english isn't very good, so please forgive me if I seem rude. It's not my intention. Despite appearances I enjoy reading your story.



Author's Response:

Wow. Oh, don't worry, Craig will be back in the story. I'm not trying to make it seem that only a few months away from Craig has cured Justin or that he is just going to forget everything that happened to him for eighteen years. I was merely implying he just didn't want to think about it on his birthday of all days. As for Cynthia never saying anything or Daphne or whoever, it's basically saying the same thing for the show about Brian and his father. Debbie and Michael and Vic all knew, and so did Joan and Claire basically and none of them ever did anything either. That's how most abuse happens. People know, but never say anything. I should know. It happened to a friend and I knew about it but never said anything. Anyway, there will be more between Craig and Justin and Brian and Cynthia and well, Michael as well. He's not done being an ass towards Justin either.

Reviewer: Azzurra (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2011 03:33 AM · On: Chapter 13

I love this chapter. :)

well, i really hate that Jennifer tell craig, and craig show up and yell at Justin and hit him!!!! :( 

But i'm glad that justin basically told craig fuck off. 

he looks so strong and confident. :) 

well, he doesn't look weak even when he is not talking. :)

 

and i love the diner scene :D ♥♥♥♥

I can't wait to see more!! want to see Justin's first Babylon experience!! :D :D ♥♥♥♥♥♥



Author's Response:

Haha, yeah I figured it would be good to get one good scene in with Justin telling Craig to basically fuck off. And the diner scene has actually been my favorite to write for this story so far, other then Justin and Brian's first encounter with each other, lol. You'll have to wait another two or three chapters before the Babylon experience though. I've got a little more planned during Justin's birthday before then. But really happy that you are liking this story. <3

Reviewer: itzy68 (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2011 02:03 AM · On: Chapter 13

Great chapter! And I guess I will kick in Craigs direction this time since Mikey did nothing ;)



Author's Response:

Oh, don't stop the kicking Michael's ass train just yet, the day isn't over with. Haha! <3

Reviewer: Ari (Anonymous) · Date: August 26, 2011 02:03 AM · On: Chapter 13

Ahh I love when Brian is so caring .. and Craig is a giant ass .

 



Author's Response:

Haha!

Reviewer: Mdot (Anonymous) · Date: August 26, 2011 02:03 AM · On: Chapter 13

You may have gotten this before, but from a reader's viewpoint the way you end your chapters is very lackluster and unimaginative, (I don't think anyone cares that Lindsey and Mel like that Brian holds Gus while they get the chance to eat). I feel that their should be more to the chapter but there isn't. As well as the lack of dialogue it a bit boring. Instead of saying what they did maybe you should let the characters play that out.  Overall the story has a good plot and is interesting. 

 

P.S. This is just constructive criticism and hopefully your not offended by anything I've said above. 



Author's Response:

Wow. Um, not I'm not offended. You're actually the first person to say something about it. I'm a little bad with dialog, and I'm still working on it. I try to write as much as I possibly can, but sometimes it doesn't work out. Thank you though, I think.

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2011 11:50 PM · On: Chapter 12

Thanks for the story, I like it.


 


But – I am much less forgiving than Justin.  I would


have thrown Jennifer out of the apartment.  She is


sorry, that’s it????   She is getting a divorce.  Big deal!!! 


It will be interesting to see how things progress.


 


It should be even more interesting to see just what


happens when Justin visits Babylon.  Will some guy


“hit” on him?  Will Brian show him the back room?  We


will see – shortly.


 


Thanks again for the story.


 


DavidR


 



Author's Response:

Oh, you're welcome David. You'll just have to wait and find out about the Babylon stuff, lol. <3

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2011 10:30 PM · On: Chapter 12

* waves * still reading and I love the story very much. But it's all happening so fast, hihi except the sex.

 

* hugs *



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're still reading. I know it's happening fast. I was getting stuck after the chapter that Gus was born so I decided to just skip ahead a few months and go from there. It's slowing down a little now though.

Reviewer: Azzurra (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2011 08:27 PM · On: Chapter 12

I justi found this Story and I LOOOOVEEEEE this :D :D ♥♥♥♥

I hate Craig and michael, and jennifer... :"(

I LOOOOOOVE your cynthia!! and of course Brian and Justin!! :D :D ♥♥♥♥



Author's Response:

So glad that you love my story! Yeah, I'm pretty sure everyone hates those three. Haha, that is a lot of hearts too. <3

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: August 25, 2011 08:30 AM · On: Chapter 12

well there's justin's chance to tell jennifer that he's gay. i hope dinner goes well because i don't trust her yet.



Author's Response:

Maybe, maybe not.

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: August 25, 2011 08:23 AM · On: Chapter 11

i really like that brian included cynthia and justin for the holiday dinners. justin has to voice his fears to someone.



Author's Response:

Yup, they are becoming a part of the "family" now! <3

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2011 06:24 AM · On: Chapter 2

Oh i cant wait for them to meet.   Brian can help him through they r so alike.  



Author's Response:

Oh, thank you. <3

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2011 06:08 AM · On: Chapter 1

I have been wondering about this story for quite sometime.   Today I start it.   Sounds good so far on to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

So glad you've started reading and have reviewed. Thank you!

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2011 03:04 AM · On: Chapter 12

So glad to see your update so soon!

Oh boy, I've got a feeling of impending doom - or it could be the hurricane that is barreling its way up the East Coast, in my direction - that sometime thing and bad is a'coming Justin's way.  Mom's visit was kinda creepy, is Dad looming out there ready to hurt him?  Will Justin get laid by Brian? 

Update, update, update!  Please!  So enjoying this fic.

PS: Really liking that Justin is keeping Brian waiting for the big nasty.  :)



Author's Response:

Why, thank you. I'm trying to update faster but I'm also trying to get them longer, but it's not working very well, lol. Yeah, I realized after I posted Jennifer's visit was a little creepy. As for the questions, you'll just have to wait and see. <3

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 24, 2011 11:05 PM · On: Chapter 11

How am I suppose to kick Mikey if he does not appear? Oh well he is still an ass ;)



Author's Response:

Um? Very carefully? Haha! He'll be in chapter thirteen. <3

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2011 10:55 PM · On: Chapter 11

Oops, it felt like the chapter got cut off in the middle.  Poo!  Not fair!  I hope you'll update soon.



Author's Response:

Haha, sorry. Don't worry though, I have the next chapter ready to post in a couple of hours. <3

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2011 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 10

Ooh they are getting close and very comfortable great fic thanks



Author's Response:

Oh, thank you for reading. Yes, they are getting close. <3

Reviewer: Q_A_F_fanfic_addict (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2011 01:19 PM · On: Chapter 10

I want to read more! :) Hope the next chapter comes soon. :)



Author's Response:

Haha, I'm working on it, I'm working on it.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 24, 2011 01:06 PM · On: Chapter 10

So sweet :D

And as always I have to kick the idiot Mikey ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you. Yup, kicking Michael is good.

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2011 05:43 AM · On: Chapter 10

I like Brian being a gentleman towards Justin!  Mikey, ugh... why can't he just slip on a banana and go into a coma - what a piece of poo!

 



Author's Response:

Haha, something may just happen to Michael, you never know...

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: August 24, 2011 03:50 AM · On: Chapter 10

nice. glad deb did something about michael's attitude while justin was there even if it doesn't stick.

no nightmares because justin feels safe. brian doesn't realize that does he? he's going to miss justin being at the loft as much as justin will miss being there.



Author's Response:

Yeah, I figured Deb would say something to Michael, but Michael wouldn't listen. He never does. Of course, they are both going to miss Justin being at the loft with Brian. Thanks for reading. <3

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: August 22, 2011 10:25 AM · On: Chapter 9

nice chapter although i wish cynthia would have gone to the school to have something done about chris before he strikes out at justin and also have a little talk with deb.

daphne does enough talking for the both of them. love her.



Author's Response:

Well, the chapter did say that Cynthia was called after Craig hung up on the school. She could have gone down the school, I just never said if she had or not. Yes, I love Daphne too. <3

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: August 22, 2011 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 8

if i were cynthia i would have slapped michael as soon as i had seen him. glad brian didn't sit with the guys. michael can cry about being snubbed later to his mother. brian is beginning to realize his feelings, good.



Author's Response:

I was thinking about having Cynthia hit Michael or something, but decided against it because well, Justin was with her and Brian and knowing all the abuse he already went through, I don't think that is something Cynthia would do with Justin right there.

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2011 03:58 AM · On: Chapter 9

So good to see Justin is recovering and Brian is falling for him.  So enjoy this fic.



Author's Response:

Thank you. Yes, it is good to see Justin recovering and Brian falling for him!

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2011 02:02 PM · On: Chapter 8

Yes Justin is talking again. I love this story so much. Thanks.

 

* hugs *

 



Author's Response:

Haha, so glad to hear it. <3

Reviewer: Ari (Anonymous) · Date: August 21, 2011 12:56 PM · On: Chapter 8

I am so addicted to this story - and I'll be waiting for the next chapter

 



Author's Response:

Haha, glad that you are addicted to the story. <3

Reviewer: kfan (Anonymous) · Date: August 21, 2011 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 8

I just have to say that i am one fan who is kinda picky about what she reads and who she reads, if you don't capture my attention by the first chapter i'm on to the next. So it's safe to say i am totally hooked on this story and can't wait for more. You've just been added to my list of favorite writers. Great job keep them coming, my two favorite Brians are protective and jealous. 



Author's Response:

Awe, that means a lot to me. I'm pretty much the same way. If a story doesn't catch me in the first chapter, I don't continue to read. And, protective!Brian is really my favorite too. Glad that you like my story. <3

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 21, 2011 11:36 AM · On: Chapter 8

Great chapte!

And Mikey is clueles as always ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you. Of course he is, lol.

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2011 11:26 AM · On: Chapter 8

Very sweet, warm chapter.  So glad Justin is talking and that Brian's attraction is growing.  And wow, Cynthia is a'plotting a love connection for B/J, wonderful!



Author's Response:

Thank you. Yeah, I thought it was about time that I had Justin talking now. It was getting a little hard to work with him not talking at all, lol. Of course Cynthia is plotting for them.

Reviewer: rulisteningbj (Anonymous) · Date: August 21, 2011 02:22 AM · On: Chapter 7

So glad you directed us over here to catch up on this story.  I am going to friend you over on LJ and hopefully you can let us know when you update again.  Very nice to get more than one chapter I am now caught up to chapter 7.  Love this story.  Interesting that Justin spoke to Brian.  Now will he continue?  I have always dislike Mikey and even more so in this story.  Looking forward to more.  Thanks for sharing.

 

Dee Dee



Author's Response:

You're welcome. I will still post on LiveJournal when I update my stories, I just won't be posting my stories on LiveJournal anymore.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 20, 2011 02:39 PM · On: Chapter 7

Great chapter! And Mikey is being a dick as always, never did like him ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you. Yeah, me either.

Reviewer: Dilia (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2011 10:48 AM · On: Chapter 7

It's a well-written, wonderful story, It has a new storyline...you really did a good job, I read all the 7 chapters in one go.


Thank you very much...and please update soon and don't keep us waiting for a long time.


Later.



Author's Response:

Thank you, Dilia for the review. So glad you think it's a wonderful story and that I'm doing a good job. That means a lot to me. As for the updating, I try to update either daily or every other day. <3

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2011 02:49 AM · On: Chapter 7

Just read the last three chapters (I was away for a few days with my girls) and I love them. It's a wonderful story, hope to see an update soon.

 

* hugs *



Author's Response:

Thank you so much Marny.

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2011 10:03 AM · On: Chapter 7

Guess what?  I really like this story.  There is something about the


way you write Justin that makes him so likable.  It has something


to do with the way other characters see him – except the few who


are total jerks anyway.


 


So Justin finally said a few words.  That is good enough for now.



 


Thanks for the story – I do enjoy it.


 


DavidR



Author's Response:

Awe, thank you David. I'm so happy that you enjoy my story. Anyhoo, who wouldn't like Justin? Other then Michael, lol?

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2011 01:26 AM · On: Chapter 7

Way too short a chapter, just getting into it and bam, it's over.  That just tells you how much I'm enjoying it, I want to read more!  But - JUSTIN TALKED, and Mikey was an a-hole.  And Brian's feelings are stirring.  Cool beans!



Author's Response:

Haha, I'm sorry. I tried, I really did to get the chapter longer this time. Yes, Justin talked. He wasn't suppose to say anything more the then "Nooo." part, but I couldn't help myself. And, of course Michael is an a-hole and Brian's feelings are stirring. Thanks for reading, next chapter should be up later tonight or tomorrow morning, hopefully.

Reviewer: itzy68 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2011 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 6

Amazing story I love it!



Author's Response:

Haha, I see you found the rest of the chapters not on my LiveJournal yet.

Really glad that you are liking this story.

Reviewer: siren (Anonymous) · Date: August 17, 2011 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 6

Love the story so far. Good job. Looking forward to whatever happens between the boys.



Author's Response:

Oh, thank you.

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: August 17, 2011 09:27 AM · On: Chapter 6

d d d dah, protective!brian showed up. love him. it's a certainty that justin will have a nightmare and will have to share the bed with brian. brian will calm him.

things are going nicely and then he suggest the diner for lunch the next day? he's already expecting the worse from michael, does he really want to put justin through that? well at least cynthia will tell him where to stuff it if she needs to.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review, sophie's mom.

Yes, Cynthia will get in Michael's face if he does or says anything to Justin, wrong. As for the other stuff, you'll just have to wait to find out what happens.

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2011 03:12 AM · On: Chapter 6

This chapter was way too short, but very good.  Love a protective Brian, yes indeed.  Longer chapters, please! LOL.  Very enjoyable fic!



Author's Response:

i'm sorry that they are too short for you, I try to make them as long as I can. It's also why I try to update quickly. But I am very glad that you are liking this story. Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: August 17, 2011 01:37 AM · On: Chapter 6

love this story.  before the end jus will talk.  have that feeling.  waiting for more.  good story.  angst will ease soon, hopefully.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, glad that you like my story.

Yes, Justin will be talking before the end. With Brian helping him, of course he will be.

Reviewer: nosleep (Anonymous) · Date: August 16, 2011 09:13 PM · On: Chapter 5

I can't believe Cynthis would want Justin to go to a bar with Brian, ro does she want him to get laid?



Author's Response:

Well, Cynthia trusts Brian. She's known him for years. She knows he would never let anything happen to Justin. Plus, she knows that Brian likes Justin and Justin likes Brian so if they were to 'hook up', she wouldn't mind.

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: August 16, 2011 08:35 AM · On: Chapter 5

brian's getting the silent treatment and doesn't mind at all, as a matter of fact i think he's falling rather quickly which i happen to like. cythnia can go out with the girls friday and not worry about justin, he'll be taken care of. i know brian will make sure nothing happens to him but will he be able to keep michael's mouth from crushing justin spirit? we all know what an idiot he can be and say things that are stupid yet hurtful.



Author's Response:

Yeah, the Anti-Michael warning is about to start. Don't worry, everything will turn out good for our little love birds. I mostly always do happy endings.

Reviewer: JustBeAQueen (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2011 07:05 AM · On: Chapter 5

Interesting... very interesting. I like it, though. Intriguing dynamic you have between all the characters. Woody's will be interesting, too. We all know how Brian thinks, and how a panicked, upset Justin can be... but hopefully it won't be too fraught with peril. Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Glad that you like it. Thank you. Yes, Woody's will be interesting. I hoping to have that chapter up by tomorrow morning.

Reviewer: NATHALIE RUDE (Anonymous) · Date: August 16, 2011 04:18 AM · On: Chapter 5

SUPER BIEN A QUAND LA SUITE



Author's Response:

Thanks.

God, I love my free translation site.

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2011 03:45 AM · On: Chapter 5

Too short of a update!  But loved it!  Poor Justin, it just kills me to read about his abuse.  Love the whole concept of this fic.



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it. Yeah, I know it's too short. My mind wasn't working with me today, I'm getting sick.

Reviewer: nosleep (Anonymous) · Date: August 09, 2011 08:43 PM · On: Chapter 2

Good second chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you.

Reviewer: feet526 (Anonymous) · Date: August 09, 2011 06:43 AM · On: Chapter 2

LOVE this premise...more soon, please!!!!!!!  Thank you.........



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 08, 2011 10:41 PM · On: Chapter 2

I'm so into this story already, it's unreal.
Can't wait for more. 



Author's Response:

Oh, thank you for the review.

Reviewer: Dioramanya (Anonymous) · Date: August 08, 2011 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 1

Really good start. I'm very interest to read more. I always love Cynthia and I'm glad that you involve her more in your story.

Working for Brian make her more independant and stronger. It wouldn't be very difficult for her to  confront Craig and make him pay for what he did.

Jennifer is also guilty. She didn't do anything to stop him. She look at elsewhere and pretend that nothing happen. She make me think of Joan. Her behavior is unforgivable.

If Justin has endured this abuse during all this time, he must be tougher. He doesn't cry easily, so please don't make him cry when Michael is mean and cruel to him. It's really sad when author makes Brian and/or Justin cry all the time.

I really can't wait for more. Update soon and I will be there ;)



Author's Response:

Oh, thank you so much.

Wow, this is the longest review I have gotten so far. I've always loved Cynthia too. To tell you the truth, she almost wasn't the star of this story, but Melanie almost was. Then I started thinking what better way to bring Cynthia into the story more then have her be related to Justin instead. As for Justin being tougher, don't worry. I too don't really like when authors make Brian and/or Justin cry all the time. Justin, it's understandable from the show but Brian, the only thing that ever made him cry was Justin and/or his father. Not much else.

I'll be updating soon. Daily or at least every other day.

Reviewer: nosleep (Anonymous) · Date: August 08, 2011 01:32 PM · On: Chapter 1

A very good start. I haven't read s a fic with Cynthia as Justin sibling.

I'll keep an eye out for this one.



Author's Response:

Oh, thank you.

Yeah, I've always liked Cynthia and since I've seen Justin as a sibling or cousin for Emmett and Lindsay and I think at one point, a close friend of Ben's I thought, why not bring Cynthia into the story more. I mean, her last name is never given, so it could be anything and she could be related to any of them.

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: August 08, 2011 11:42 AM · On: Chapter 1

like this. let's see how long it takes brian to get justin to talk and to ruin craig taylor for what he's done to justin. can't wait.



Author's Response:

Oh, thank you.

Not sure how long I'll get the story so depending on that is how long it'll take Brain to get Justin to talk, lol.

Reviewer: NATHALIE RUDE (Anonymous) · Date: August 08, 2011 08:04 AM · On: Chapter 1

j'ai halte de lire la suite



Author's Response:

Glad you like it.

Ha, I had to translate that just to know what it said.

Reviewer: siren (Anonymous) · Date: August 08, 2011 07:33 AM · On: Chapter 1

I like the story plot, so I can;t wait to see some more.



Author's Response:

Oh so glad you like it.

Reviewer: HotforGale (Anonymous) · Date: August 08, 2011 07:23 AM · On: Chapter 1

Oh I love it....can't wait for the new chapter.

Amie



Author's Response:

Oh, thank you.

Working on the next chapter now.

Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: August 08, 2011 05:51 AM · On: Chapter 1

omg i need mooore



Author's Response:

Haha, don't worry, more is on it's way.

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2011 05:23 AM · On: Chapter 1

Mmm love this already. Please update soon.

 

* hugs *



Author's Response:

Oh, thank you.

No worries, I try to update daily or at least every other day.

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