Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For The Crucible
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: May 23, 2014 05:17 AM · On: The First Test

I must have somehow missed this sequel/story when I read the Little Merman before. So sorry. But now that I found it, I'm so happy. What a complex retelling of the Sleeping Beauty tale - although I never thought of Hunter as the sleeping beauty type before. . . Great job, again. TAG



Author's Response:

Haven't checked the site in a bit so I missed this but thanks for saying something. The reviews was stuck on 7 for at least a year so i thought I needed my eyes checked when I saw it was 8. Did you read it all? Did you make it past Ch 3? If not it'll be hard but persevere...This is a dark one.

Reviewer: felonius_monk (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2012 11:17 PM · On: Epilogue/Conclusion

I just discovered your stories in the past week.

I just finished reading The Little Merman and The Crucible. I wish I wish I wish I wish I had been following The Crucible as you were writing so I could have given you glowing reviews. Since I was not, all I can do is tell you now: YOU'RE A FUCKIN' GENIUS. SERIOUSLY.

I love REAL "fairy tales"--the original, gruesome, scary ones, not the Disney versions. I love your fractured fairy tales. There's lots of pain and "good" characters who do horrible cruel things and "bad" characters who do good and kind things. Your images and dialogue remind me of "The Princess Bride" (one of my all-time favorite films)--the humor, utter ridiculousness, and yes those anachronisms!!

You have a fan for life. When you think no one is reading, remember that as long as you write QAF fairy tales, I'll read them.

And now on to Cinderfella........

Monk 



Author's Response:

Well, I hope you see this.

Haven't posted anything in ages, haven't been on site in weeks so I'm just catching up and saw this beautiful review. Thank you so much and sorry for the lateness of my reply.

I wish you had given me glowing reviews too. If you like, give them now. I'm always checking my stories. I'm glad you like the fracturedness. It fits with my warped brain! Thanks again love and thanks for being a fan, esp of this story. I know it's dark.

Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2011 04:37 AM · On: Epilogue/Conclusion

Well, I thought this was the best ending  EVER! So happy and sweet and the magnum opus done at last! Two thumbs way up!

Of course.....I did write it....Anybody else have any thoughts?

Reviewer: Dilia (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2011 02:18 AM · On: The First Test

OMG . you are 100% right ,I really am so lost *blush*, in my mind I meant www.fanfiction.net but because I'm having the same problem with that site as with livejournal, that's why they overlapped together in my mind.

My apology.

Good luck. 

 

Reviewer: Dilia (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2011 04:54 AM · On: The First Test

Ok, if you're asking me my personal opinion *it's an honor for me*... regarding the song fic, you writers always amaze me in terms how you could turn afew lines of words into at least a thousand words all lead to the same subject as the song, it's something beyond my limited comprehension (when it comes to literature), maybe that because of the nature of my profession as an engineer which dictate me to spend most of my times between numbers *lol*.

anyway lets get to the point, I've always liked the song fics because it gives you the gist of the story firsthand and always turns the undercurrents of our boys inside out, but actually I'm not a big fan of oneshots,I would love if you write a long term story,and I'd prefer an AU to cannon or what if, because if you do, you give us some thing to relate to with the regular update, especialy you've got the potential to keep us in suspense untill the very end.

*Later*.



Author's Response:

I have not got around to AU s smyself...at least realistic ones because I constantly live in a dream world myself and wish the boys did too. Sorry. Besides I thought there were so many out there already, whuy add to ther pile and get lost in the shuffle. Did you say you read the Little Merman on Live Journal? How is this possible? I did not post it there.

J

Reviewer: Dilia (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2011 06:55 AM · On: The First Test

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Ok,Ok, I have a lot of things to tell you...lets start ...first of all let me tell you proudly that you are a very talented writer,and I was one of your little merman storie's readers, in fact I love it so much but you have never seen me before reviewing to that story because when I have started to read it that was unfortunately on livejournal, the site which I have a real issue with, I mean It doesn't let my account work properly, maybe that site have a proplem with the country I live in right now in general and that's why I get blocked every time I login *I don't know*, hence, I can only tour and read but not write a word ever.

now let me be honest with you, at first when I saw the sequel of that great story which I have enjoyed very much, I have been so excited, but when I started to read it, the idea got me disappointed,as for me Hunter is one of my 5 hated characters list in that show,I can't bring myself to watch his scenes twice after I watched them the first time (unless he's with Brian or Justin) ,he just annoys me, his voice, his lips, his hair, his body, I can't stand him whatsoever let alone read a long story about him LOL. I think most of the QAF fanfic readers want the kind of story which deals mainly with BrainandJustin's turmoil love life and not any other character share the main attention with them along the plot , my point is, I and maybe most of the fanbase don't prefer reading stories about how can other characters of the show affect Brain's or Justin's behavior or emotions and lead the way of their lives because we saw that along the episodes of the show and got sick of it already.sooooo I'm demanding you as one of your fans to write another lovely story full of longing + angst + tears = happy ending*LOL* ,I mean like your first one *cannon or au* as soon as you can, so I can enjoy my time again with your talent.

 

WOW I'm talking too much despite my lack english, LOL.

 

Later Honey.



Author's Response:

Wow, a review!!! It s a miracle! Thank you so much! Oh, I m so sorry you din't like Hunter! If it makes any difference everyone in this story is very out of character and he acts nothing like he did in show.  Also due to the overwhelming lack of interest, i ll be wrapping this story up soon and moving on to something else. I was also thinking about another song fic one shot to come soon as well. What do you think?

 

Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2011 03:00 PM · On: The Third Test

HELLO! Yes it's me, the author. OK, wasn't that just brutal? Just emotionally shattering? Sadistic? What's that you say? It wasn't so bad? Well, let me know! Love it? Hate it? Please review! I see you guys reading out there!

If you're wondering what made me do a story about Hunter and paternal love instead of our 2 favorite boys getting it on, well one of the reasons is an image that I can't get out of my head. It was oh so quick but oh so lasting that even after a year of re-watching the series it sticks in my head. Of Hunter writing Hunter Novotny in a notebook over and over showing his deep desire to belong to Mike and Ben.

However, since in this universe, Micael was a bastard a nd Ben was a sea monster and both are currently in an undersea lair somewhere, Brian and Justin are picking up the slack.  Suffice it to say without giving specifics (in case yu just finished chapter 3, things get worse then better, then start to heal.

A further message on what the hell I was thinking is on my bio page. PLEASE REVIEW! I'd love to know  what you are thinking!!

Reviewer: Sarah NM (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2011 03:47 AM · On: The First Test

Yeay, Im the first. I love LOVE the way you write. It is always unpredictable. Your choice of words reminds me of a play, a riddle, a pun. It goes up and down. It is dark but it is also whimsy. Cant wait for more! I wish I can write as good as you =p My writing is just a tad wordy.



Author's Response:

Awww thanks hun! And thanks for reviewing, i got very little feedback on this thread except for the fact that it doesn t match  the story that came be4. So thanx

 

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