Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Metamorphosis
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2016 11:46 AM · On: Chapter 17 ~ I Do…

Absolutely beautiful and fantastic from start to finish. You really melted my heart. I hope you write more of it and more like it. I love them with kids 



Author's Response: Oh thanks so much, it always excites me when some one enjoys my writing... I'm all about the love between Brian and Justin in all my stories, even if they don't start out together they'll always end up together... Later Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2015 10:02 PM · On: Chapter 17 ~ I Do…

Fantastic story, I'm sad to see it finish but very fitting ending:-)



Author's Response: Thanks so much! I really loved writing this one, it's so full of emotions and Brian finally allows himself to feels his emotions and be loved... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2015 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 17 ~ I Do…

Loved it! The added pics throughout the chapters was terrific! Gus was so cute and I am glad he accepted his new brother Darryl. All they need is love! :)



Author's Response: Thanks so much! I really loved this fic when I was writing it, and you can't help but fall in love with Gus... So glad you liked all the pics, it really does add to the story... Later Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2015 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 17 ~ I Do…

This was...how can I find the words to describe it? I guess I'll just have to settle for saying bravo...well done.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Blushes, so glad you enjoyed it... Hugs Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Anonymous) · Date: October 14, 2014 10:56 AM · On: Chapter 17 ~ I Do…

omg.  Gus.  I just wanna gobble him up!  REally loved it all.



Author's Response: Thanks so much! Gus is totally adorable you can't help but love him... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Michelle Kinney (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2014 05:10 PM · On: Chapter 1 ~ Three Little Words...

Oh are you planning to do more stories like this? I can't wait to read more of Brian and justin stories.



Author's Response: Most of my stories are about the strong and passionate love between Brian and Justin. You might try, Ten, The Offer Still Stands, or Christmas Presents. The last two are wips, but I update about once a month... Happy Reading ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Michelle Kinney (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2014 03:31 PM · On: Chapter 17 ~ I Do…

Such a great story 



Author's Response: Thanks, I'm so glad you enjoyed this... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Murgy31 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2013 09:27 PM · On: Chapter 17 ~ I Do…

Wow~ That was great!



Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm doing my happy dance just knowing that you enjoyed it... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: lili (Anonymous) · Date: May 23, 2013 11:54 PM · On: Chapter 17 ~ I Do…

hi dear

 

it was so good thankyou for this amazing story.

i remember a story you used to writ its name was bret mckinny you did not write in anymore 

ireally like to see this story agin



Author's Response: Thanks Lili for your kind words and comments. I haven't written anymore of Brett Aidan McKinney but I do hope to get back to it this year. I'm making a conscious effort to complete all my open stories... Thanks for being so patient.. ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: May 22, 2013 02:39 AM · On: Chapter 17 ~ I Do…

Great ending. I like the way you gave Gus the last word. Thanks for writing. TAG



Author's Response: Thanks so much for your kind review. Yeah, I really liked Gus's character through out this fic... ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: May 21, 2013 11:10 PM · On: Chapter 17 ~ I Do…

What a wonderful ending.

Author's Response: Thanks so much Darling, you know me I'm a total romantic... ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: kellydeer (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2013 07:54 AM · On: Chapter 1 ~ Three Little Words...

You rock! Thank you!!! *off to read* :)



Author's Response: I hope you enjoy it as much as I did writing it... ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: kellydeer (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2013 04:16 AM · On: Chapter 1 ~ Three Little Words...

Damn! Please, please, please finish this story :)



Author's Response: It's continued in my story Metamorphosis… Hope you enjoy... ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 24, 2012 01:53 PM · On: Chapter 16 ~ Happy Family

Incredibly HOT! I'm just waiting for more! TAG

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 24, 2012 03:27 AM · On: Chapter 6 ~ Hide and Seek…

Just love strong, caring, raw, topsy!Justin - itsone of my fav fantasies! Must be why I'm enjoying this story so much! TAG

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 24, 2012 02:28 AM · On: Chapter 3 ~ Bring Me To Life…

Thanks for all the pics of the 'joes' & 'kens'. TAG

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 24, 2012 02:05 AM · On: Chapter 2~ Broken...

I'm all in favor of not letting facts get in the wat of the porn. F**k the facts - just keep writing more of this! TAG

Reviewer: Jane (Anonymous) · Date: May 21, 2012 09:58 AM · On: Chapter 1 ~ Three Little Words...

WILL YOU BE UPDATING THIS STORY UNTIL IT'S COMPLETED?

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2012 01:01 AM · On: Chapter 16 ~ Happy Family

I know I've read this before, but I wanted to enjoy it a second time. I don't remember the pics being there before, love them!!!  The TBC at the end of chapter 6 is definately a good sign of more to come. 



Author's Response: Thanks Darling I'm so glad you're still loving it... ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: JustBeAQueen (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2012 05:26 PM · On: Chapter 6 ~ Hide and Seek…

I love this story, just had to start with that. I read this when it was first posted and I have followed it since. I'm very happy that's it updated, can't wait to get there.

But I can't help but point out something in this chapter that seems wrong. In a previous chapter you mentioned Brian suggesting they have a child together and Justin loving the idea of having a child, but yet in this chapter you have Brian being the sperm donor. Maybe it's a typo, maybe you changed your mind, but since Brian does have Gus, it would make sense that a child they shared together would be Justin's child. 

Anyway, I'm just saying, change it or not, it works either way, I was just expecting Justin to be the sperm donor. I'm off to read the rest of this story... yeah! :) 

Cheers, Laura :) 



Author's Response: Thanks for your comments Laura I'm glad your enjoying this story. Sorry if I disappointed you with Brian fathering their child, the story just has a way of writing it self... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2012 06:13 AM · On: Chapter 16 ~ Happy Family

fantastic - I've missed this story - and what a way to rekindle it! great writing - loved the roasat and the VIP room scene - and this last secene - well, it was hot! - thanks - looking forward to the wedding

loving life,

Charle



Author's Response: Thanks I'm so glad you like it... ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2012 04:36 AM · On: Chapter 16 ~ Happy Family

Very good to see an update to this story.

~ Bob



Author's Response: Thanks so much... ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: January 18, 2012 12:12 AM · On: Chapter 15 ~ Dr Wilder, I Presume…

Please please please continue this story... I can't wait to find out what happens next.

Get rid of Terry as soon as possible , he is an asshole who should be put down and soon lol. Please don't let Terry fuck it up for the boys.

 

Please update really soon.

Thanks for writing this story.

K

 

 

Reviewer: krystayl067 (Anonymous) · Date: January 06, 2012 06:12 PM · On: Chapter 15 ~ Dr Wilder, I Presume…

THis story is really great to read, would love to see it finished.

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: July 16, 2011 10:51 AM · On: Chapter 1 ~ Three Little Words...

yeah, definatley original, off to the next chapter THANK YOU



Author's Response: I hope you like it, enjoy ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: LILI (Anonymous) · Date: June 27, 2011 02:38 PM · On: Chapter 14 ~ All You Need Is Love…

HI DARLING VERY NICE  ............. BUT IAM AFRAID OF THIS TERRY . I HOPE HE LEAVE THEM ALON ..............

OH DARLING PLEASE UPDATE YOUR ANOTHER STORIE TOO



Author's Response: Yeah Terry is a pain in the ass but I don't think he'll be too much of a problem... More coming soon... Later Sweetheart ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: SunshineGirl (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2011 01:30 AM · On: Chapter 14 ~ All You Need Is Love…

wow just read this fanfiction and totally love it! hope you can update soon :)



Author's Response: Oh thanks so much she says smiling her sunshine smile, that makes me so happy that you like it... My beta's back from vacation so hopefully it won't that long between chapters... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: LILI (Anonymous) · Date: June 18, 2011 01:50 PM · On: Chapter 13 ~ I Love The Way You Make Me Beg And Plead …

VERY GOOD DARLING

I HOPE YOU UPDATE ANOTHER STOREI



Author's Response: Thanks Hon, I'm trying to get back to my other stories... I need more hands to type with... he, he, he... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: feet526 (Anonymous) · Date: June 18, 2011 07:58 AM · On: Chapter 13 ~ I Love The Way You Make Me Beg And Plead …

OMG>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>so love this !  thank you so much.  PLEASE more soon!



Author's Response: More coming I promise... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2011 12:36 AM · On: Chapter 13 ~ I Love The Way You Make Me Beg And Plead …

this chapter is sweet, and passionate, and I love the way they are together - so much in love - its addicting - so keep it coming - you write it so well

I have to tell you I was more than a little sad that we didn't get the vows or the feelings for both of them as Brian walked down the aisle/ It is so much different hearing about it aafter the fact than it is being part of it as we read and are made to feel we are right there with them

I have a feeling that some of the dynamics might be changing with the baby coming soon - and I sure hope these nightmares are discomforts of Justin's don't do anything to affect the closeness these two have worked so hard and long for

looking forward as this story continues - thanks for writing

loving life,

Charle



Author's Response: Thanks so much for all you kind words, I'm all about the love I often say that my stories write them selves... They still have vows to come in front of the family at home... or you could read chapter four of "Believe in Life" another fic of mine where they get married (I hope to finish that one soon...) Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2011 11:43 PM · On: Chapter 13 ~ I Love The Way You Make Me Beg And Plead …

Well.....ahem....let me go get my ice water and I'll be right with you - LOL!  That was a combination of sweet, funny, and a whole lot of sexy!  Just the right mixture.:)  Thanks for the udpate - he's baaaaack!!  I'll be looking forward to the next installment, my friend.:)  BTW - quite a coincidence - I just uploaded the same photo you used at the top of the story - I hated the episode that it came from, but I LOVE the photo's tenderness just the same...



Author's Response: Now that you've cooled off... ha, ha, ha... So glad you liked this chapter Brian healing nicely and building confidence in his abilities soon he'll be as good as new. Great minds think alike on that pic... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Shauna (Anonymous) · Date: June 15, 2011 04:54 AM · On: Chapter 12 ~ Blue Hawaii…

I am enthralled by your story! I don't know when the last time you updated is, but i sure hope the next time is soon! I need to read what happens next!



Author's Response: Oh thanks so much :) I hope to be updating soon, my beta should be back this weekend and I have chapters stacking up... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

 

You can always tell when a story started and when was the last update in the story discription. For example this story to date:

UPDATED: June 11, 2011

-Admin

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2011 12:19 AM · On: Chapter 12 ~ Blue Hawaii…

* giggles * you're a bit late with these two chapters. I already read them at LJ * sticks tongue out *. And I love both chapters. Hope you're not upset with that nasty message. Gggrr.

 

But * claps hands like Emmett * wow you have a blue ribbon, congrats. You really deserves it.

 

* hugs *



Author's Response: Yes, Blushes, Caught... I went to post chapter twelve and noticed that I forgot to post chapter eleven... he, he, he... Thanks as always Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2011 12:17 AM · On: Chapter 12 ~ Blue Hawaii…

Very sweet chapter and indicates how the boys have adapted and changed over the years and circumstances.  I would like to think in a real relationship this is how it would be - one partner helping the other.  I'm sure once Brian has recovered more and regained his strength, he will no doubt start making up for lost time - ha!  But I don't think he's exactly complaining at the moment, either, because I think Justin could not only be a very passionate lover and his equal, but also a very tender one as well.  Thanks for having the courage to write them from a different angle - and congrats on the blue ribbon!:)



Author's Response: Yes they've come so far in their relationship and there really more equals in some ways, Brian is very soon to hit a growth spurt and his recovery will come along nicely. Of course its hard when I'm writing chapter seventeen and I have to remember your all still back on twelve... he, he, he... My beta's very behind but soon hopefully... I can't believe I was awarded a Blue Ribbon Blushes... Thanks for all your support always ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2011 10:34 PM · On: Chapter 12 ~ Blue Hawaii…

awww - this is such a great chapter - I love the way you brought everything together - and I can't wait for the wedding! Married, in Hawaii, at night - how riducloulsy romantic - and awesome!



Author's Response: Thanks so much I'm so glad you're enjoying it, I couldn't resist having them marry in the moonlight... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2011 03:24 AM · On: Chapter 11~ Owners of a Lonely Heart…

Congrats on the well deserved blue ribbon. Keep up the excellent work.



Author's Response: Thanks so much that really means a lot... ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Babble_on (Anonymous) · Date: June 10, 2011 08:21 PM · On: Chapter 11~ Owners of a Lonely Heart…

It was so nice to see another chapter! Not to be a nag but I wouldn't mind more frequent updates...



Author's Response: Sorry about that my beta is overwhelmed right now, although I just got chapter twelve back and I will post it soon... ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: tina (Anonymous) · Date: June 10, 2011 06:28 PM · On: Chapter 11~ Owners of a Lonely Heart…

Is this story really supposed tobe a Queer as folk story,Oh man this stort=y is so bad it's not even funny and Your sex scenes are so boring,Oh I'm Brian I'm sick so now I'm a disgusting whiny pussy bottom.

 

Attacking a story is ok - attacking an author is not. - ADMIN

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2011 02:10 PM · On: Chapter Ten ~ Sugar Plum Fairies Dancing in my Head…

Still loving this story.

 

* hugs *



Author's Response: Thanks Darling ~ Kathleen :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2011 06:41 AM · On: Chapter Ten ~ Sugar Plum Fairies Dancing in my Head…

I've been reading reviews on this and I have to say that AU or not I'm enjoying this story.  I'm looking forward to a Brian that loves Justin and hopefully will be walking down the aisle soon.



Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and your kind review, it shouldn't be much longer before there married... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: LILI (Anonymous) · Date: May 19, 2011 12:37 AM · On: Chapter Ten ~ Sugar Plum Fairies Dancing in my Head…

oK YOU KNOW ILIKE THIS ABOUT BRIAN FAMILY COME TO HIM  COUNTINU PLEASE



Author's Response: Thanks Darling so glad you're still liking this story and how I'm bring his family back into his life... Later Sweetheart ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Alex (Anonymous) · Date: May 18, 2011 12:32 AM · On: Chapter Nine ~ Pushing, Pulling, Twisting and Writhing…

This story is got to be one of the worst Queer as folk stories I read,Your  Brian is not a man he is a disgusting pussy bottom!

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2011 01:33 PM · On: Chapter Nine ~ Pushing, Pulling, Twisting and Writhing…

damn you.   i ned more.   i did not know about this until tonight and now thats it.   how long will i have t wait to know what happens.   i am officially hooked.



Author's Response: Officially hooked YEAH!!! Hopefully just a day or two, still writing chapter thirteen and waiting for the others to be returned from my beta... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2011 01:20 PM · On: Chapter Eight ~ Leo Brown, In the Library, With the Hand Weights…

i was so about to get pissed.  i was wondering where the hell terry came from but u got me.   if he dumps brian now i hope he doesnt forgive him.   also glad joan is going to be mom to him.  shouldnt she know about the accident.   somebody at her church as a tv.   on to the next.



Author's Response: No need to worry or get pissed the subconscious mind has a way of letting you know that things are slightly off... Just know that I'm all about the love, well and the porn... he, he, he... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2011 12:59 PM · On: Chapter 7 ~ Leaving the Pain in the Past….

still loving it.   i knew deb would cry.   mel didnt say much.  love it. on to the next



Author's Response: So glad you're still loving it... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2011 12:45 PM · On: Chapter 6 ~ Hide and Seek…

Now everyone knows except deb.   she will probably cry.  moving on to the next



Author's Response: Yeah, you know Deb pretty well... ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2011 12:23 PM · On: Chapter 4 ~ This Neurotic Man of Mine…

oh man i love brian in this.   cant wait to see brian getting back with the fam.   Whats that pic hard to tell on the kindle looks loik the crack o an ass



Author's Response: Thanks I'm having fun writing Brian in his new role as he struggles to return to his former self with a few improvements... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2011 11:57 AM · On: Chapter 2~ Broken...

i cant believe i just found this.  its fantastic.   is it wrong i love traumatized brian



Author's Response: Thanks I'm so glad you're liking my sad little story, but don't worry it will get happy... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: LILI (Anonymous) · Date: May 15, 2011 12:18 AM · On: Chapter Nine ~ Pushing, Pulling, Twisting and Writhing…

IAM FUCKING KILL JUSTIN IF HE DISTURB BRIAN ............ OH DARLING SO GOOD PLEASE COUNTINU



Author's Response: Don't kill him he's just working through his own issues right now, but all will be right with the world soon enough... Thanks for all the positive feedback I love it!!! Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2011 12:11 AM · On: Chapter Nine ~ Pushing, Pulling, Twisting and Writhing…

Wowww wondeful update, thanks.

 

I love the Bird of Paradise flower. I took pictues of it last week on my mini vacation.

 

 

* hugs *



Author's Response: Thanks Darling, I also love Birds of paradise they grew in my yard when I lived in California... So beautiful... Later Sweetheart ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: May 15, 2011 12:08 AM · On: Chapter Nine ~ Pushing, Pulling, Twisting and Writhing…

  I started reading this story a few days ago and I liked the first five chapters, but then I got to capter six and I was really disappointed .

.This story is a Disgrace to Queer as folk fanfiction,What the hell did you do to Brian' and  Justin'  characters,This story don't make sense at all and why your Brian is such a sissy ,Did you even watched the series???Brian is a strong alpha male

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: May 15, 2011 12:04 AM · On: Chapter Nine ~ Pushing, Pulling, Twisting and Writhing…

This story is a Disgrace to Queer as folk fanfiction,What the hell did you do to Brian' and  Justin'  characters,This story don't make sense at all and why your Brian is such a sissy ,Did you even watched the series???Brian is a strong alpha male

 
I started reading this story a few days ago and I liked the first five chapters, but then I got to capter six and I was really disappointed .

Reviewer: Babble_on (Anonymous) · Date: May 14, 2011 11:49 PM · On: Chapter Nine ~ Pushing, Pulling, Twisting and Writhing…

Well, what a little gem this story is! I just found it and read it through. On my way to read it again but not before I beg you for an immediate update....



Author's Response: That makes me feel so great to know that you're enjoying this... Multiple chapter are out for beta so as soon as I get them back I'll be posting. It running about every other day right now... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: May 14, 2011 10:50 PM · On: Chapter Nine ~ Pushing, Pulling, Twisting and Writhing…

ohhhh  good chapter.  get with the program justin and marry this man.  why wait.



Author's Response: Thanks so much Linda, why wait indeed they'll be married sooner they you or they think... he, he, he... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2011 07:09 AM · On: Chapter Eight ~ Leo Brown, In the Library, With the Hand Weights…

Gus was just too cute.  Don't tell me Justin is going to run off again. If he does, he should run over by a vehicle this time.



Author's Response: Thanks I loved Gus in this chapter as well, and don't worry about Justin he's just overwhelmed with life... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2011 07:46 PM · On: Chapter 7 ~ Leaving the Pain in the Past….

yes it's my birthday, thanks



Author's Response: Okay running off to livejournal to make you a post!!! Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2011 06:03 PM · On: Chapter 7 ~ Leaving the Pain in the Past….

I read all the chapter this morning and it's a wonderful story, thanks.

 

* hugs *



Author's Response: That is so sweet thank you very much, I'm so glad you like it... Did I see on livejournal that it's your birthday today??? If so Happy Birthday!!! Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: LILI (Anonymous) · Date: May 11, 2011 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 1 ~ Three Little Words...

OH PEOPLE WHAT IS THE MATTER WHIT YOU?

TOP OR BOTTOM ........ IT IS NOT  A BIG DEAL ........I LOVE IT WHEN BRIAN IS BOTTOM EVEN IN SHOW WHEN BRIAN GIVE UP HIS POWER IT WAS NICE JUSTIN MAKE A GOOD TOP

IN REAL LIFE I SEE  SOMTIMES PEOPLE WHEN SEE A GAY COUPLE THEY WANT TO KNOW ABOUT THEIR POSITION ........... LOVE IS ONLY MATTER NOT TOP OR BOTTOM



Author's Response: Thank You SOOOO Much for all your support, it really means a lot to me. It seems that if you understand the concept of the story, it is that Brian has to do a complete 360 degree turn around and come out a better person. One who can show his emotions and love; isn't this what we wanted when the show ended?? Hopefully with the disclaimer I put in the summary people will get it, I can't go back and change it; you guys are on chapter 7, but I'm on chapter thirteen... He, he, he... Again thank you so much for everything ~ Later Kathleen

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2011 08:44 AM · On: Chapter 7 ~ Leaving the Pain in the Past….

Justin makes a good top.

I never thought about Brian feeling that he must have been missing something for justin to have left him for Ethan.



Author's Response: It was just a thought that came to me that when reflecting on how wrong things went for him and Justin that maybe Justin was drawn to Ethan because of something he needed that Brian didn't give him. I agree Justin is a great top and bottom just like Brian... He, he, he... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2011 08:32 AM · On: Chapter 6 ~ Hide and Seek…

Nice chapter. I must have missed why Brian is having another child instead of Justin having his first.



Author's Response: Brian was the one that wanted another child and Cynthia agreed to have two children for them; so I just started with Brian and Justin can father the second one. ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: May 11, 2011 07:38 AM · On: Chapter 7 ~ Leaving the Pain in the Past….

another great chapter.  why does it matter who makes who happy sexually.  i don't get why people can't move on.  so stupid of them.  i remember in qaf justin wasn't always the bossy bottom.  just saying.  i sort of like brian being the bottom for a change.



Author's Response: Thanks Darling you made my day, I don't understand it, I don't understand why they read this fic if they don't like it... But you win some, you lose some... ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: XENA (Anonymous) · Date: May 11, 2011 02:31 AM · On: Chapter 7 ~ Leaving the Pain in the Past….

Bullshit! Metamorphosis or no Metamorphosis AU or not AU What you did to Brian's character is wrong ,You took a great character and turned into a something that his not, a complete pussy.

Anyway I took some time to read some of your other stories in which Brian is the dominanttop one and they are really good,It's a shame that you don't write more stories like that :/.

Reviewer: XENA (Anonymous) · Date: May 11, 2011 12:08 AM · On: Chapter 7 ~ Leaving the Pain in the Past….

This story is abomination,your Brian is so off character it's ridiculous,he is such a nelly bottom it's disgusting!



Author's Response: Please note the title of this fic... World English Dictionary - metamorphosis 1. a complete change of physical form or substance 2. a complete change of character, appearance, etc 3. a person or thing that has undergone metamorphosis I've never understood readers who are so trapped in the characters that they never let them grow and change, that's why I always and only write in an Alternative Universe. Otherwise why not just watch the DVD's... Sorry you don't care for my writing style, I guess its time to change the channel... Sincerely Kathleen

Reviewer: LILI (Anonymous) · Date: May 09, 2011 03:52 PM · On: Chapter 6 ~ Hide and Seek…

HI

NICE .... THANKS FOR UPDATE I HOPE YOUR ANOTHER STOREI UPDATE SOON



Author's Response: Thanks, I'm working on them I'm trying to finish this one first, I only have a couple more chapters to write, and about a 7 or 8 to post... So more coming soon... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: May 09, 2011 08:59 AM · On: Chapter 6 ~ Hide and Seek…

tell your negative reader to have a little patience.  maybe when he gets the feeling back in his legs he will be top dog again.  until then he seems to be enjoying his sex life.  just saying!!



Author's Response: Hum, I'm writing chapter thirteen right now are you peaking into my mind sweetheart? All Brian can do is get stronger and more aggressive... Thanks so much for the wonderful review :) Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: summer (Anonymous) · Date: May 09, 2011 01:27 AM · On: Chapter 1 ~ Three Little Words...

hi, just wantedto say i love this story. and personaly i dont think that the fact that brain bottoms for justin makes him in any way weak or a pussy. i really like this new brian... that he lets justin care for him that way..very beautiflly written <3..also love the strong and still very loving Justin

again great story ..keep posting new chapters..lots of love and happy mothers day to you, too ;)



Author's Response: Thanks you so much that really means a lot to me after that last review... I sometimes wonder if she was reading the same story I was writing... Brian's disabled, he can't move in certain ways, he's paralyzed... But I refuse to get into it with the readers, I figure they can change the channel if they don't like the show... Happy Mother's Day Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Ela (Anonymous) · Date: May 08, 2011 10:05 PM · On: Chapter 6 ~ Hide and Seek…

I don't like this story I know it's a AU but you've torned Brian into a weakling pussy bottom ana Brian is not a bottom.



Author's Response: Happy Mother's Day to you too!!!

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2011 10:26 AM · On: Chapter 3 ~ Bring Me To Life…

I love the pictures. A couple of the dolls look like the boys.



Author's Response: Oh I know they really do look just like Justin. He, he, he... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2011 09:24 AM · On: Chapter 2~ Broken...

Justin is beautiful in this chapter. That is true love.



Author's Response: Their love for each other is one that will never die, it will only make them stronger as Brian recovers... Later Sweetheart ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2011 09:22 AM · On: Chapter 1 ~ Three Little Words...

I was drawn in from the first paragraph. Good first chapter!



Author's Response: Thanks so much I'm so glad you like it, though it may be a tear jerked... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Lady D (Anonymous) · Date: May 05, 2011 03:30 AM · On: Chapter 4 ~ This Neurotic Man of Mine…

I like this story it's awesome and hot like all of you'r stories but why it's almost always Justin Rimming Brian in you'r stories ?what a about Justin lovely ass ;).



Author's Response: You know I didn't realize I was doing that, this story in particular was because of Brian's disabilities but now that he's getting better (or at least in chapter twelve that I'm currently writing) I'll have to do something about that... Thanks for the feedback, too many stories, not enough rimming... he, he, he... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2011 05:52 PM · On: Chapter 3 ~ Bring Me To Life…

Oh such fun I love the joe's lol I loved the scene of Brian and Gus reunion



Author's Response: Oh thanks so much I really loved the Joe's too... And the reunion is just so sweet!!! Again thanks for all your kind words ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2011 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 2~ Broken...

Oh what an interesting chapter Brian is happy Justin is back but he seems sort of closed emotioanlly I would have thought he would have kicked Justin out because he is scared. I guess we will soon see how they manage c Chris



Author's Response: He's struggles with what's best for Justin and wanting him to stay and love him helping him through his journey ... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Ruby (Anonymous) · Date: April 19, 2011 05:54 AM · On: Chapter 2~ Broken...

I remember reading this before and really liking it then, so I'm thrilled to see it back again. More soon pleeeaase and please make it at least 12 chapters long.



Author's Response: I'm so glad your sticking with me on this one, I took a break but I wanted to finish up what I hoped was a good idea for a fic. I'll see how long it works out to be with my stories they seems to write themselves or not... he he he... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: feet526 (Anonymous) · Date: April 19, 2011 05:35 AM · On: Chapter 2~ Broken...

loving;..........happy, sad............and wonderful.  PLEASE, more soon.  Thank you.



Author's Response: Thanks so much Hon, that makes me happy that I hit so many emotions and left your begging for more... : ) Later ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Cheryl (Anonymous) · Date: April 18, 2011 11:20 PM · On: Chapter 2~ Broken...

What a wonderful start to your story.  I didn't read the original chapters before, so this is a nice surprise.  Your writing is excellent - good descriptions of Brian's medical condition, even if you haven't researched the medical aspects of the injuries.  I look forward to more chapters being posted VERY soon.



Author's Response: Thanks so much, I'm so glad the medical aspects come across as being accurate and believable that means a lot to me. My beta is in Fiji on vacation, but i hope they keep sending my chapters to me... So far so good... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: char (Anonymous) · Date: April 18, 2011 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 2~ Broken...

whew!!  hot chapter.  brian now will have the incentive to move him to walk again.  loving this story.  more soon hopefully???



Author's Response: Thanks so much, yeah he'll be motivated alright... He he he... More coming soon I promise... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: char (Anonymous) · Date: April 17, 2011 10:47 PM · On: Chapter 1 ~ Three Little Words...

this is wonderful.  please update soon.  brian is living in england and wrote this???? i hope justin can find him. i just really love this story and the wonderful beginning.  i never read three little words.  more soon please.



Author's Response: Oh thanks so much that really means a lot to me, things may not be as they seem but I promise a happy ending... Should be updating soon. ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2011 03:45 AM · On: Chapter 1 ~ Three Little Words...

Great first chapter! I can't wait to read the rest.



Author's Response: Thanks so much for commenting chapter should be up in a day or so... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: real bitch (Anonymous) · Date: April 17, 2011 12:05 AM · On: Chapter 1 ~ Three Little Words...

Damm for someone who wrote so many story already when are you going to get it right, the some old shit under a new title. why meeting ethan, justin made the biggest mistake of his entire life?  Don't everyone want to feel/be love in some kind of way.than all human being made the mistake. Stop makeing Justin act like a pussy he's a guy a gay guy but still a guy.



Author's Response: I don't really know how to respond to your comment. "Damm for someone who wrote so many story already when are you going to get it right" Maybe there's nothing wrong, just wrong for you... If you don't like what's on, change the channel... ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2011 11:52 PM · On: Chapter 1 ~ Three Little Words...

I love everything about this, but I feel I read it before.  I remember reading it before and look forward to reading it again!

 

It's great .  Love the writing style, the storyline.



Author's Response: I put in the authors notes that the first two chapters had been posted under "Three Little Words." I pulled it back out for Vonnie's Awakenings Challenge it seemed perfect if you remember that its about Brian being paralyzed and his physical and emotional transformation or metamorphosis... I've written eight chapters so far and it should be about twelve chapters long when I'm done. Later Sweetheart ~ Kathleen PS Totally faltered you like my writing style, blushes, faints...

Reviewer: LILI (Anonymous) · Date: April 16, 2011 11:30 PM · On: Chapter 1 ~ Three Little Words...

OH DARLING IT WAS SO GOOD I LIKE IT VERY MUCH PLEASE COUNTINU THIS AND PLEASE UPDATE YOUR ANOTHER STORIES TOO



Author's Response: Thanks Sweetheart, I've got eight chapters written so far and it will be about ten or twelve chapters long. I'm still working on my other fics as well, this one was for a challenge... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

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