Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Arms Open Wide
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2019 05:54 PM · On: And It's a Grand Slam!!

Love it



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked it!  Thank you for all the support.  I had fun coming up with different ways to torment Justin - ha!  Thank you for reading and especially taking the time to comment!  ~Kim

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2018 04:26 PM · On: And It's a Grand Slam!!

Simply MARVELOUS ...no words to describe...this was soooooooooo ROMANTIC...AMAZING story.

EVERYTHING WAS PERFECT.

THANKS FOR SHARING.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for all your support and the wonderful feedback! That means the world to me. :)  ~Kim

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2018 04:21 PM · On: Play Ball!

OUTSTANDING ...I LOVED IT.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2018 04:10 PM · On: Lovesick

OMG....OMG...I CRIED THERE....THAT WAS JUST...AWWWWWWWW.

RIDICULISLY ROMANTIC....UNBELEVIBLE .

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2018 04:06 PM · On: Riding it Out

Awwwww...now he is disapointed and terribley missing the stud...poor sunshine.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2018 03:08 PM · On: A New Game In Town

Wow...you are Genius.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2018 02:58 PM · On: Larger Than Life

Awwww...now he is getting desperate.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2018 02:54 PM · On: Brian's Favorite Food

My egg roll...soo funny.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2018 02:51 PM · On: The Torment Continues

Justin is getting frustrated and horny ..lols.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2018 02:12 PM · On: Let the Games Begin!

Excellet Plot ....brilliant writting...i love this one already.

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: April 24, 2017 05:04 AM · On: And It's a Grand Slam!!

I'm so glad I found this story it was fun, it was witty, and so Brian can't wait to stary Payback.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!!  I actually saw that Hershey's marquee in person one year, and I had to think of this story. Thank you for reading, and for all the feedback!  ~Kim

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: April 24, 2017 05:00 AM · On: Play Ball!

 The shoe is going to be on the other foot, how will Mr Kinney react?

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: April 24, 2017 04:57 AM · On: Lovesick

 At last Brian's home and with a proposal, what a Valentines Day for Justin. His man is home,  he loves Jus, a rose and candy and a proposal. Justin is loved but a desire for payback is in the works.

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: April 24, 2017 04:50 AM · On: Riding it Out

 Jus on a kiddie ride, wonders never cease, come on Bri your boy misses you.

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: April 24, 2017 04:38 AM · On: Making A Splash

 Doodles and Canoodles? such a sick mind about two rubber duckies

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: April 24, 2017 04:30 AM · On: A New Game In Town

Surprised Justin didn't pass out from all the sugar in his cock and cream pastries! Poor Jus he needs the real thing and pastries and photos just doesn't cut it.

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: April 24, 2017 04:19 AM · On: Larger Than Life

With bobble head (s) and food references Brian will tire out before his Justin, the boy is a walking hard on

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: April 24, 2017 12:45 AM · On: Brian's Favorite Food

Brian is really asking for payback--if Justin's dick gettings any harder he will be able to pound nails with it--with every all the memos Brian must have a smirk on his face 24 hours a day



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend!  It's so sweet of you to say you miss me. :)  The arm is doing much better, but it will take some time to get fully operational again.  But my typing speed is much better, and I think the doctor will let me remove the brace on Wednesday when I go to see him.

I'm so happy that you are enjoying this story!  I had such fun writing it, along with Justin's turn to pay Brian back!  I hope you continue to enjoy it.  Your comment about laughing at the grocery story made me smile. I enjoy writing humor, even though I haven't written one in a while. I AM working on a story that has some humorous elements in it, though, that I hope you will enjoy.  And I hope you will also enjoy "Payback." 

Thanks again for all the support you give the site!  All of us greatly appreciate that. *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: April 24, 2017 12:25 AM · On: The Torment Continues

BAD GIRL!!! After doing a little reading, I decidd to go to the grocery--I wanted to make tacos for supper-sounds simple enough. While checking out I was standing there waiting to get my items bagged and glanced over and saw a Hershey bar and a Butterfinger and proceded to LMAO thank you so much no doubt the clerks think I drink or I'm crazy.At least I just laughed like a loon, poor Justin was sporting a boner. Somehow I think you're the nut, you dreamed this up.

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: April 23, 2017 11:54 PM · On: Let the Games Begin!

I know your still healing, but I missed you. I viewed your work to see if I missed some of your work. In deed I did Arms Open Wide and a follow up Payback. I'm really enjoying your work. Poor Justin, the memory of ice cream kisses, and hot monkey sex keeps Jus with a constant hard on and no doubt Brian with a smirk on his face.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2017 04:23 AM · On: And It's a Grand Slam!!

HOT HOT HOT....THAT WAS SUPERB ENDING TO A NEW START...LOVE IT....THANK U .d84;👍d84;d84;d84;



Author's Response:

That you so much!  I loved tormenting poor Justin - ha!  BTW, there is a sequel to this, where the roles are reversed, called "Payback."  I hope you might enjoy that as well. Thanks again for all the comments, and for your support. I greatly appreciate that.  ~Kim

 

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2017 04:22 AM · On: Play Ball!

Fantastic😍😍😍

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2017 04:22 AM · On: Lovesick

That was sooooo sweet and romantic...i loved it soo much.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2017 05:27 PM · On: Making A Splash

Great going...😁😁😍😍😍

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2017 05:09 PM · On: A New Game In Town

Ohhh...my😀😁😀 ...awesome.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2017 04:48 PM · On: Larger Than Life

Aww ....sunshine missing brian...soo touching.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2017 04:32 PM · On: Brian's Favorite Food

Hot hot hot...i love it.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2017 04:15 PM · On: The Torment Continues

Ohhh....brian is bad soooooo bad. Lols.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2017 01:24 PM · On: Let the Games Begin!

Amazing..😊

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2015 11:55 PM · On: And It's a Grand Slam!!

Loved this chapter.  Looking forward to the sequel. Bill



Author's Response:

Thank you, Bill! I'm happy you liked it. I hope you enjoy "Payback," also, where Justin gets to do the tormenting.;)  Thank you for reading, and for the comments, my friend. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2015 06:02 AM · On: And It's a Grand Slam!!

That was fantastic! Love all the places Brian send Justin.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. :)  Thanks for taking the time to comment, also. It is deeply appreciated.  *Hugs* ~Kim



Reviewer: Blossomlegs (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2015 11:50 PM · On: And It's a Grand Slam!!

Fantastic fic.  WOW!  Thanks for sharing!



Author's Response:

Thank you, JoAnn! I'm so happy you enjoyed it.:)  BTW, if you are interested, there is a sequel where Justin gets to play.;)  It's called "Payback" if you want to check it out. Thanks again for reading and especially taking the time to comment; it is deeply appreciated. *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: soirsagrey (Anonymous) · Date: February 03, 2015 08:41 PM · On: Let the Games Begin!

Read this story in one go!!

Love the way Justin was getting more and more desperate. Reading between the lines I could see Brian smirking and enjoying his games.

The end was romantic without being sickly sweet.

Brilliant! One more story for my list of favourites.

 

XOXO

Soirsa



Author's Response:

Hi, Soirsa! Thank you for reading, and for your feedback, my friend! I had a lot of fun tormenting poor Justin.;)  I'm very honored that you would count this among your favorites.;)  BTW, there is a sequel to this called "Payback," where Justin gets to play with his man; if you haven't checked it out, I hope you will enjoy that one as well.

Thanks again for your support, Soirsa! It is deeply appreciated. *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2015 10:22 AM · On: And It's a Grand Slam!!

Oh what a wonderful story and our boys walked the romantic road eventually

Author's Response:

Thank you, Chris! I'm glad you liked it.;)  Thanks for reading it, and for your support.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2015 12:36 AM · On: And It's a Grand Slam!!

P.S. just found the sequel ;)

Author's Response:

Have fun with Payback! Justin is very creative.;) Thanks again.  ~Kim

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2015 12:06 AM · On: And It's a Grand Slam!!

Another grand slam for you my friend :) Kim you honestly never cease to amaze me with your wonderful talent. Thank you for this and I will definitely be keeping my eye out for the sequel ;)

Author's Response:

Aww...thank you so much for your kind words, Tamara! I appreciate that very much.  I had so much fun writing this one, and I could just picture Brian standing in front of the Hershey store with that rose in his hand.;)  Sigh...just call me a hopeless romantic.  I hope you enjoy the sequel where Justin exacts his revenge on Brian.;) Thanks again for all your support, my friend. *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Elly (Anonymous) · Date: February 02, 2015 03:37 PM · On: And It's a Grand Slam!!

And again a great story, I enjoyed it, thanks Kim. Greeting El. xx



Author's Response:

Hi, Elly! Thanks for reading and for your comments, my friend. I am glad you enjoyed it.  BTW, there's a sequel where Justin is the tormentor if you are interested called "Payback," if you want to check that out.:) Thanks again for the feedback. I truly appreciate that. *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2015 11:46 PM · On: Let the Games Begin!

Yet another chance to read my favorite Valentine stories.



Author's Response:

Thanks, Sweetie!  I hope you enjoy it again as much as I enjoyed writing it.;) Thanks for letting me know. *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: February 01, 2015 03:54 PM · On: And It's a Grand Slam!!

I loved this story as much as I did years ago, what was it 2010? My how time flies. Still made me cry, but then you know me, ms. puddles when it comes to a lot of your stories. How you enjoyed the SAG AWARDS. Lots of celebs there. I have been following Adam on you tube in Europe with Queen. I love him so much--he has come a long way since AI. He is going to be a legend. His new cd comes out this summer, can't wait. He should be played on the radio with this one as he signed with Warners. Thet produce Katy Perry and a slew of other singers. We are all good here. Lee still with me. I think he will stay for a while more as he is doing really well and I don't think he should go it alone. My mother instincts kicing in here, any he is happy and that makes me happy. A great threesome, Lee, me and Mocha. lol

Author's Response:

Hi, lindc! Thank you for your kind words. Yes, I would say probably 2010; that sounds about right.;) I did enjoy tormenting Justin, but, of course, he did get "Payback" later.;)  I'm glad that Lee will be staying with you a bit longer; I think you are good for him, and I'm so happy that he is doing well.  As for the SAG Awards, they were a lot of fun. Pretty expensive for tickets (you have to win them on ebay), but for a one-time thing, it was too good to pass up. Got some good photos; when I get a chance, I will probably post some of them on my LJ, along with some general thoughts about the trip. I got to visit the set of KMKM for one night, but unfortunately I am not at liberty to say much about it, other than it was quite interesting, and way too short. And they DO yell "Action" when they film a scene - ha!

 

Thank you for taking the time to comment on this story. Tell Lee I have another update to MHD coming up; Fin's about to finally get sworn in and make his inauguration speech.;)  Then we can move onto some other, unfinished matters.;)  Give everyone my love, *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Ro (Anonymous) · Date: February 01, 2015 02:04 PM · On: And It's a Grand Slam!!

absoultly loved it. You really need to think about writing a book!! Cannot wait. To read the sequel !!!! 



Author's Response:

Hi, Ro! Thank you for reading, and for your comments, my friend. Would love to try my hand at a book one day; at the rate my job is going, I may have a lot of spare time coming up.:( Bad thing in a way, but maybe it will be the impetus to get me started on a book like Erin.;)  I hope you enjoy "Payback," too.  Thanks for all your support, my friend; it is deeply appreciated. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2013 02:02 AM · On: And It's a Grand Slam!!

Fantabulous story and I can't wait to read the sequel!!!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2013 01:55 AM · On: Play Ball!

Briaaaan, quit with inuendos and tell us where you plan to take Justin!!!!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2013 01:51 AM · On: Lovesick

This is the best chapter ever.  You get to see how Justin got where he is today and to talk to someone with the best advice.  This has got to be the most romantic chapter I've read.



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend!  I have to admit - I think this was my favorite as well.  Just the image of a leather-jacketed Brian standing there with a rose in his hand and Justin finally figuring out that Brian was right there with him was too good to pass up. And when I went to see Randy in "Silence" in August of 2012, I made sure to go visit the Hershey store.;) Thank you for all the comments you made on this story.  It is sincerely appreciated.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2013 08:41 PM · On: Riding it Out

Oh no, surely his having to stay a week is ruse!



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend - I think you may be onto something there - wink, wink.  Brian's about to surprise his partner big time.;) Thanks again for taking the time to comment.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2013 12:50 PM · On: Making A Splash

I'm trying to imagine him opening his basket in a public place.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading this one and for all the comments!  I appreciate that so much.  I had a lot of fun writing this story, but you're correct; it was hard at times thinking all these 'torments' up, but it was fun nonetheless.  As for the ending, you're in store for a very romantic one.;)  I hope you enjoy the rest of this, and maybe the sequel where Justin gets back at his partner ("Payback). Thank you again - and thanks, BTW, for your comment to my new story.  I do appreciate that.  I just posted another chapter to that one.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2013 12:42 PM · On: A New Game In Town

Need I ask what type of mind it takes to come up with these scenerios!   Each one perfect in every way!!!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2013 12:27 PM · On: Larger Than Life

Now I know what Alice felt like when she fell through the looking glass.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2013 12:20 PM · On: Brian's Favorite Food

No fair, this chapter made me hungry for junk food.  How does Brian know that Justin was wanting to send him a naughty message?  Even more importantly, how did he get that particular fortune in the cookie?

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2013 12:12 PM · On: The Torment Continues

How does he do that? And calling at just the right time with suggestive comments.  Justin's not the only one hot.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2013 12:03 PM · On: Let the Games Begin!

This has got to be the most elaborate hunt ever.  Thinking of all the planning that went into this is mind boggling.  I can only guess at what is waiting at the end.

Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: October 23, 2013 02:57 AM · On: And It's a Grand Slam!!

Good story. Good characterization, I can just see Brian torturing Justin with sexual innuendo.

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and for the comments!  I'm happy that you enjoyed it.  I had a lot of fun tormenting Justin.;)  BTW, there is a sequel to this where it's Justin's turn called "Payback" in case you might be interested in checking it out; turns out that Justin's pretty good at tormenting Brian, too.;)  Thanks again for reading.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: nicolle_midnight2013 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2013 11:57 AM · On: And It's a Grand Slam!!

Um Brian romântico, brincalhão e completamente apaixonado por seu loiro.

Todos nós sabíamos que esse Brian se escondia embaixo da sua carapaça de sarcasmo e indiferença e somente o amor de Justin poderia fazê-lo se mostrar.

Obrigada por proporcionar isso através dessa história tão bonita, divertida e cheia de sentimento.

Eu amo a sua história. Ela é uma das minhas favoritas.

Obrigada por esse passeio maravilhoso.



Author's Response:

Oi, Fátima! Obrigado por todos os comentários sobre esta história. Estou tão feliz que você tenha gostado de lê-lo. Este é um dos meus favoritos, também. Obrigado por ler isso. * Abraços *  ~Kim

Reviewer: nicolle_midnight2013 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2013 11:46 AM · On: Play Ball!

Um final perfeito para essa jornada de amor.

Eu só consigo ver o futuro dos dois assim desse modo: juntos, se amando, casados e felizes.

Obrigada por isso!

 

Reviewer: nicolle_midnight2013 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2013 11:28 AM · On: Lovesick

Como alguém que nega não fazer romance pode ser capaz de fazer tudo isso pelo homem que ele ama?

É tão especial esse capítulo! Para quem não se conforma com o final dado ao show, histórias como a sua são a oportunidade de ter a alma lavada(essa é uma expressão brasileira que significa estar em paz com você mesmo) .

Eu não vejo um futuro de Brian e Justin separados. Eu só consigo vê-los juntos e felizes depois de aprenderem a conviver com suas diferenças.

Sua história é linda!

Reviewer: nicolle_midnight2013 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2013 11:19 AM · On: Riding it Out

Muito bem colocada a participação de Cynthia. É claro que Brian não conseguiria tudo isso sem sua fiel escudeira.

Sempre amei a Cynthia. Ela é uma das minhas personagens secundárias favoritas juntamente com a Daphne.

São as duas mulheres que realmente amam os nossos meninos pelo o que eles são. Não há nennhum interesse ou segundas intenções nesse amor. Eu adoro isso nelas!

Reviewer: nicolle_midnight2013 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2013 11:11 AM · On: Making A Splash

Essa história é incrível!

Sua ciatividade é imensa!

Pobre Justin! Pobre baby!

Mas o bom é saber que depois de tudo isso, Brian vai descobrir que não deve aguçar os instintos assassinos e criativos de seu Sunshine. 

 

Reviewer: nicolle_midnight2013 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2013 11:06 AM · On: A New Game In Town

Pobre Justin! Nem sonhando ele para de sofrer.

Como o Brian é mau!

Como eu me divirto com essa história! 

Reviewer: nicolle_midnight2013 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2013 10:14 AM · On: Larger Than Life

Essa definitivamente é uma das mais divertidas histórias QAF que já li.

Adoro seu humor e criatividade! 

Reviewer: nicolle_midnight2013 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2013 10:08 AM · On: Brian's Favorite Food

Pobre baby!

Como está sofrendo!

Eu imagino a cara do Sr. Wong quando recebeu a menagem que deveria colocar no biscoito da sorte.

Adoro esse Brian tão romântico, sádico e pervertido!

Como meu  Sunshine está sofrendo... Mas, no fundo, adorando. 

Reviewer: nicolle_midnight2013 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2013 09:53 AM · On: The Torment Continues

Eu acredito que depois de ter feito uma das miores declarações de amor de  todos  os tempos, o nosso amado Brian iris deixar escoar todo o romantismo que ele tinha trancado por tanto tempo.

Mas para aquele que não fazia romance, o fato dele torturar tanto Sunshine se explica  quando nos lembramos que afinal de contas ele é Brian Kinney e a lógica é que Brian Kinney não faz romance como a maioria dos mortais.

Mas, com certeza, um certo loiro está adorando toda essa situação.

Amo essa história. 

Reviewer: nicolle_midnight2013 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2013 09:31 AM · On: Let the Games Begin!

Estou deixando meus comentários sobre suas histórias.

Como havia escrito no e-mail já conhecia seu trabalho do AO3.

Essa é  das suas  histórias uma das minhas  favoritas. É muito divertida e esse Brian carinhoso, criativo e romântico, mas sem perder o humor Kinney tão peculiar é apaixonante.

Amo o que você escreve e deixarei os meus comentários sobre as suas histórias de acordo com o tempo que tenho.

Nesse capítulo, a referência aos macacos é hilária.

Adorei!

Reviewer: wingnut1974 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2013 08:56 PM · On: And It's a Grand Slam!!

This was one of the cutest stories I've read... Great Job!



Author's Response:

Hi, Lauren!  First of all, if I neglected to say it before, welcome to the site!  I hope you have fun reading the stories you find on here.  Secondly, I wanted to thank you very much for choosing to read this story and to provide it with your first 'official' review; I'm very flattered and honored that you would do that.:)  I had so much fun writing this one and tormenting poor Justin as only Brian could do.  Not to fear, though; Justin gets his turn as well in "Payback."  I hope you'll check that one out and enjoy it as well. 

Thank you again for reading and for especially taking the time to leave me feedback; too often on the older stories readers aren't as apt to do that, so the fact that you did means a lot to me.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Angel-eyes56 (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2013 05:59 AM · On: And It's a Grand Slam!!

That was adorable! For someone who claims not to do romance Brian certainly does it very well.

Poor Justin, Brian really did enjoy making him suffer and the proposal had me smiling like a loon.

Reviewer: Draccone (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2013 10:39 AM · On: Let the Games Begin!

Read it again and had to tell you....don't remembet if I did before....that love it. Brian was driving me insane but it was just so gooood. Nice job.

Author's Response:

Aww..you're very sweet!  Thank you so much!  I had such fun writing this one and tormenting poor Justin.;)  Of course, he got to do a little of that himself in the sequel.;)  Thank you for reading this  and for the comments, my friend; I appreciate that.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: January 30, 2013 12:34 AM · On: And It's a Grand Slam!!

Ridiculously romantic - I loved it. Thanks for writing. TAG



Author's Response:

Hi, Tag!  I'm so sorry that I never responded to your review.:/  I must have overlooked it.  I just wanted you to know that I appreciated you reading and taking the time to comment.  Too often on the older stories readers don't do that, so thank you again, my friend.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Vicki aka Candylady2m (Anonymous) · Date: July 23, 2012 11:28 PM · On: And It's a Grand Slam!!

the story started out a little slow for me, but boy did it finish strong. I love that I'm not the only one who turned Brian into a hopeless romantic. I don't care what other people say, this is how he is supposed to be. Thank you, thank you, thank you!



Author's Response:

Hello again, Vicki!  I agree - I know it may be somewhat OOC for Brian, but I like to think he could have changed into someone more romantic.  After all, he DID buy a mansion 'for his prince.'  That sounds awfully romantic to ME!  Thanks again for reading - hope you continue to enjoy them.  BTW - "Roughing It" is pretty much all humor if you enjoy that type of story - that's one of my all-time favorites, too.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Vicki aka Candylady2m (Anonymous) · Date: July 23, 2012 10:58 PM · On: Lovesick

OMG. you are too good. the way you ended this chapter. Fabulous!



Author's Response:

Hi, Vicki!  So great to see you over here!  This was one of my favorites to write, by the way.  I hope you'll check out "Payback" when you get done - it's the sequel.  Thanks for letting me know you read this - I really appreciate that!:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: buttercup32409 (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2012 08:16 AM · On: And It's a Grand Slam!!

I just love playful Brian.  I think it's my favorite version of him.  We didn't get to see it nearly often enough on the show.

After getting married, raw sex was the thing justin wanted most.  I'm so glad he finally got what he'd always wanted.  Brian would do anything for his Sunshine (and for himself as well).

This was great.  I'll start on Payback probably on Monday.  Can't wait to see Brian on the receiving end of the teasing for a change.  Serves him right!

Great story, Kim!



Author's Response:

So glad you enjoyed this one, Sweetie; I do hope you enjoy the sequel as well; Brian's not the ONLY creative one!  Thanks again for all the wonderful feedback and encouragement you give me!  *Hugs*  Kim

Reviewer: buttercup32409 (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2012 07:20 AM · On: Play Ball!

LOL Justin speechless?  Don't think I've seen that very often.  Good job, Justin! LOL

So glad they're finally back together and getting married.  It's been a long time coming!



Author's Response:

Yes, at least in my world they always stayed together.  And I always love the idea of them getting married.:)  It WOULD be hard to shut Justin up since he's normally a regular chatterbox - ha!  Thanks for the feedback, my friend.:)  *Hugs* 

Reviewer: buttercup32409 (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2012 06:48 AM · On: Lovesick

OMG OMG OMG Squealllllllllllllll   Ok, calming down now...sort of! LOL

Wow! For someone who claims not to do romance (yeah, right Brian.  Tell it to someone who believes you), this was certainly a romantic proposal!  One that lasted 2 weeks.  Just wow!

Diane is a smart woman.  I've always said it was a bunch of BS that Justin was practically forced to go to New York.  He'd already told Bimbo (aka Lindsay) that Brian was his opportunity of a lifetime, but she had to manipulate the situation just like always, knowing what Brian's reaction would be.  It's time they were together permanently!



Author's Response:

I like to think that Brian DID change over the years to where he could demonstrate how he felt to Justin; after all, he DID buy a house 'for his prince.'  BTW - there actually IS a marque for the Hershey store in NYC.  When I saw that I knew I had the perfect way for Brian to propose all over again.:P)  Thanks for the comments and for reading, my friend.  *Hugs*  ~Kimberly

Reviewer: buttercup32409 (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2012 06:21 AM · On: Riding it Out

ROFL This was a good one!  Poor Justin and his dreams!  That was too damned funny!  I can just see him with feathers in his mouth!  You're good!

He should have known Cynthia was in on aeverything.  When did Brian EVER plan anything without his other favorite blond helping him?  

And the boy on the carousel!  I know he thought Justin was crazy!  If he only knew! LOL

This is great.  My favorite so far of your stories.  And when I say it's better than Remember Me, that's saying something!  I love this!

On to the next one.  I have company coming in tonight for the weekend, and I'm trying to finish it before she gets here.  Otherwise I might have to ignore her until I'm done! LOL



Author's Response:

Hey, Sweetie - Yes, I couldn't resist having poor Justin coming up with a mouthful of feathers from the pillow - ha!  At least he didn't do poor Mr. Canoodles and Mr. Doodles in.:)

So relieved to know that you're doing so well!  And I'm delighted you like this story. You'll have to check out Justin's revenge in "Payback" when you get a chance, too.  Hope you get finished in time to pay your company some attention - LOL!  Thanks again, my friend, for all the wonderful feedback.  *Hugs*  Kim

Reviewer: buttercup32409 (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2012 04:43 AM · On: Making A Splash

Too funny!  I can just see "Pee Wee" drooling at the sight of Sunshine!  Good thing Brian wasn't there, or being a nerd would have been the LEAST of the man's problems! LOL

I see Justin is starting to plan his revenge.  I almost feel sorry for Brian.  Almost, but not quite! LOL

Another great chapter.  Love this story so much.  Parts of it have made me laugh harder than I have in a long time!



Author's Response:

Yes, I DO love a jealous Brian as well!:)  Justin will definitely exactly revenge in the sequel ("Payback.")  Brian's not the ONLY one who can play that game!!  I'm so glad you're having a good laugh with this one - I even went back and read parts of it again myself.:)  Thank you for letting me know how much you're enjoying it - you're heading for the big showdown now.:)  *Hugs*  Kim

Reviewer: buttercup32409 (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2012 12:59 AM · On: A New Game In Town

I'm loving how all the people are in on the joke....EXCEPT JUSTIN!  So typically Brian! LOL 

That picture is probably going to end up with a place of honor on Justin's bedroom wall....looking down at him while he attempts to get some sleep.  And I have a feeling Brian just might regret offering to reverse roles.  There may not be anything gentle about it when Justin finally gets his hands (and othr body parts) on him! LOL



Author's Response:

Ha! So happy you're enjoying this story, my friend!  I admit it was getting difficult toward the end, coming up with yet another side trip for our little blonde.  But I had such fun writing about poor Justin's misery.  His man will make it up to him soon, though...thanks again for reading and for the comments!  ~Kimberly

Reviewer: buttercup32409 (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2012 12:37 AM · On: Larger Than Life

LOL yep! It was definitely one of a kind! LOL  Brian Kinney soooo gives a shit!  He loves his Sunshine and always has ;o)

Love this story so much.  Such a breath of fresh air from the seriousness of the other story, but still shows the love between the two men.  Great job!



Author's Response:

Hi, Nita - yes, I'm going to have to seriously think about a more lighthearted story when I get one of my others finished; even I get weighed down occasionally by all the angst at times.:)  I'm thinking of a sequel to this story where their friends send both of them on a scavenger hunt (won't say anything else - don't want to spoil the story for you).  I'm so glad you're enjoying this one - it's one of my own favorites.  Thanks again for all the comments!  *Hugs*  Kim

Reviewer: buttercup32409 (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2012 12:22 AM · On: Brian's Favorite Food

LOL Kim, you are EVIL!!!!  Poor Sunshine is being tortured so badly!  I can just imagine Mr. Wong's expression when he was given the message to put in the fortune cookie, but what a great one to give him!  Even though that started a very bad time for them, it also brought them closer together than ever before.  And it proved to Brian just how much Justin loved him.

On to the next chapter of Justin's torture!

Nita



Author's Response:

Ha!  I know - poor man.  And Brian's not done with him yet!  Not to worry, though - our Mr. Kinney, being the consummate ad exec that he is, will come through for his man yet.  Thanks again for reading and for the wonderful comments, Nita.  *Hugs*  Kim

Reviewer: buttercup32409 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2012 11:55 PM · On: The Torment Continues

LOL Brian, Brian, Brian.  You are soooooo cruel!  And I'm loving every single second of it.  I have a feeling Justin is going to be more than happy to see him when he finally returns!



Author's Response:

Oh, he's going to be a bad boy to Justin before it's all said and done - but it will work out quite well for our not-so-little blonde, don't worry.:)  Thanks for the comments, my dear.  So glad you're enjoying this!  *Hugs*  Kimberly

Reviewer: buttercup32409 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2012 11:39 PM · On: Let the Games Begin!

LOL OMG this is fantastic!  A great change from the seriousness of MHD.

Brian Kinney is a trip.  He knows his Sunshine will do pretty much what he's told, as long as Brian is the one giving the orders.  And I agree with Justin.  Playful Brian is the best!

On to the next chapter.  Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Hi, dear friend!  I'm so happy to see you reading this one. I had such fun writing it (in a cruel, sadistic way - ha!).  I have thought often of doing a sequel to the sequel ("Payback" - I hope you will enjoy that one, too.:)).  Finally back home from Germany, so at last I can start updating my stories again.  But what an experience!  I have a group photo on my author's page if you want to see it.  And LOTS of photos on my Live Journal page, also.

 

Thanks so much for reading, for the comments, and for all your support.  Hope you are doing well, my friend.  *Hugs*  Kimberly

Reviewer: aplb85 (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2012 03:03 PM · On: Lovesick

OMG I LOVE THIS I HAD THE SAME REACTION JUSTIN DID READING IT THANKS FOR THE IDEAS



Author's Response:

Hi, Amanda!  Thanks so much for reading this story and especially for the feedback!  I had a lot of fun writing this one, although by the time I got toward Valentine's Day it was getting harder and harder to come up with ideas - ha!  So glad you enjoyed this story!  Thanks again for letting me know; I really appreciate that!  *Hugs*  ~Kimberly

Reviewer: Lori (Anonymous) · Date: January 29, 2012 04:26 AM · On: And It's a Grand Slam!!

Loved It !!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you, Lori!  I had a lot of fun writing this one.  You might like the sequel where Justin gets to torment Brian, too ("Payback").  Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to comment; I really appreciate that!  I hope you will enjoy some of my other stories as well.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kimberly

Reviewer: chandrika (Anonymous) · Date: October 29, 2011 05:02 PM · On: Let the Games Begin!

thank you for this amazing story



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and for your comments, Chandrika!  I'm so pleased that you liked it.:)  This story - and the sequel, "Payback" - was so much fun to write, although by the time Valentine's Day came I was starting to struggle for new ways to taunt our favorite blond - ha!  Thanks again for letting me know you enjoyed it - that means a lot to me.:)

Reviewer: gambitslove (Anonymous) · Date: March 30, 2011 06:04 AM · On: Lovesick

Brilliant!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for the review and for reading!  This was one of my favorite stories to write - I loved tormenting poor Justin while his love was away.:)  And I really appreciate you leaving me a review on one of my older stories.:)  You might like "Payback" if you liked this one where it's Justin's chance to turn the tables on Brian.  Thanks again for reading.:)

Reviewer: Armandyouidiot (Anonymous) · Date: March 20, 2011 10:13 PM · On: And It's a Grand Slam!!

What a joyous ending to a wonderfully upbeat story!  Reading it was like eating candy.  I adored the inventive clues and prizes!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing this story - I'm so glad you liked it!  Too often readers don't take the time to leave a review for one of my older stories so each time someone does it's special.:)  I really enjoyed writing this one and tormenting poor Justin - I WAS running out of ideas toward the end, though - that was tough - LOL!  If you liked this one and haven't read the sequel, "Payback," you might like seeing what Justin does to torment Brian in return!:)  Hope you give that one a try.  Thanks again for reading and especially taking the extra step to review - I greatly appreciate that!:)

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 06, 2011 07:52 AM · On: And It's a Grand Slam!!

" I love you so, much Justin.".... "I love you,too Brian."..... "Can I have my sundae now?"....... Priceless......  lol.....  off to read  Payback .... Thanks....



Author's Response:

Thanks for readng, my friend!  Hope you enjoy the sequel, too!:)  You know what they say about paybacks....ha!

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 06, 2011 07:34 AM · On: Play Ball!

What a Perfect way to celebrate Valentines Day..... lol....



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review - I'm sure Justin thought so, too, although he is more than capable of giving as good as he gets - LOL!

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 06, 2011 07:26 AM · On: Lovesick

WOW... what a fantastic surprise!!!!   



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Glad you liked it! 

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 06, 2011 06:33 AM · On: Riding it Out

Soooo Cynthia has been helping Brian out...that explains everything.... I love Brian's  "Ditto" at the end of the message.... he must have watched Ghost recently....lol... 



Author's Response:

Yes, I admit it - I shamelessly stole that line from the movie - LOL!  But we already knew he thought Patrick Swayze was hot, though....ha!  I always loved Cynthia and the way she would stand up to Brian.  BTW - If you get a chance after you read this and haven't already done so, there's a sequel to this one ("Payback") where Justin gets in his fun as well (I'm doing some shameful promotion here - LOL!).  Thanks for the review.:)

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 06, 2011 06:24 AM · On: Making A Splash

Leave it to Brian to make "Rubber Duckies" sexy....lol....



Author's Response:

Let's face it - that man could make ANYTHING sexy - LOL! 

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: February 06, 2011 12:15 AM · On: A New Game In Town

OK.... 2 questions... if Brian is in Tokyo on business how does he have the time to set up all this stuff????  and...are you making up most of the names for the street in NY?? because I only recognize a few of them... lol... Thanks...



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing!  Yeah, I admit it - I made up most of the streets for New York - only been there once and it was a quick trip. As for Brian knowing, I guess for the purpose of the story's plot, you probably need to suspend a bit of reality and just go with it.....I admit, he probably wouldn't have known all those things except for how well he knew his Sunshine.  In addition to that, he did have some accomplices involved - that might help explain a litttle of it, I guess.  At any rate, hope you enjoy reading the entire story!:)

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 05, 2011 11:52 PM · On: Larger Than Life

Brian is lucky that he can trust Justin..not to find someone  else to help relieve all the  "tension".... he's getting from all the messages Brian keeps sending him.... lol... off to read the next chapter...



Author's Response:

Glad you're enjoying it!  Believe me - it was hard coming up with a new idea for each day - LOL!  This is a good one for just before Valentine's Day, too, because that is what it's leading up to!:)

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 05, 2011 11:36 PM · On: Brian's Favorite Food

Brian has some nerve......getting Justin all hot, bothered and making him gain weight.....then blocking his text messages....is sooooo rude.... lol... off to read the next chapter...

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 05, 2011 11:17 PM · On: The Torment Continues

Brian is  sooo mean...getting poor Justin all hot and bothered with all his messages...lol... how is he getting any work done in Tokyo if he has sooo much free time???  off to the next chapter...

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 05, 2011 11:06 PM · On: Let the Games Begin!

I must have missed this one..... Very interesting start....off to read the next chapter....



Author's Response:

Thanks for letting me know you're reading this one - it's one of my personal favorites.  I hope you like it!:)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2010 08:15 AM · On: And It's a Grand Slam!!

Excellent story from a new writer with a vivid imagination and solid handle on canon. Love how you wove this tale of love for our boys. Off to read the next one before finishing my next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for all the reviews!  So glad you enjoyed it!  I really like weaving humor into the story.  I have some more coming up that I think you'll enjoy hopefully, too.  Thanks again!

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2010 08:09 AM · On: Play Ball!

I was hoping for just such a surprise from Brian at this point in the story and you didn't let me down either.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2010 07:59 AM · On: Lovesick

Maven? Are you writing in Yiddish there?

That was the perfect V Day for Justin; loved it.

 

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2010 07:45 AM · On: Riding it Out

I hope Brian is teasing Justin at this point before V Day.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2010 07:34 AM · On: Making A Splash

You have a wonderful imagination here.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2010 07:24 AM · On: A New Game In Town

Very funny writing here. Reading on.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2010 07:14 AM · On: Larger Than Life

I like how the chapters flow together very well. Reading on.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2010 07:06 AM · On: Brian's Favorite Food

LOL! I have to read on and see what is next. I love your take on canon here.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2010 06:58 AM · On: The Torment Continues

Very cute story here.



Author's Response:

Thank you again - glad you're enjoying it!  Who better to come up with ideas to torture our little artiste than Pittsburgh's No. 1 Ad Man?  Don't worry, though, you'll find out Justin can give as good as he gets in the sequel!

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2010 06:49 AM · On: Let the Games Begin!

Funny chapter and has my attention. I remember the Empire State Building has a very long waiting line so Justin would have to start very early to get on top by a certain time.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review - I've never had the pleasure of riding up to the Empire State Building so I had to use my imagination.  Guess the longer waiting line would just add more fuel to Justin's fire and make him even MORE frustrated, wouldn't it - LOL!  Thanks again for the review!

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: December 22, 2010 07:22 AM · On: And It's a Grand Slam!!

wonderful story=so cute, brian can be romantic, thoughtful, and funny when he wants to.  really enjoyed it.  read til it was over.  welcome to mw you will be an asset for sure. lol



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the kind words and the welcome!  I adore these boys and I agree - I think Brian can be more romantic (in his own way, of course) than most would imagine.  Thanks again for reading!:)

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: December 22, 2010 07:18 AM · On: Let the Games Begin!

i really enjoyed this story.  it was a nice departure from other stories.  i got a kick out of brian and his comedy.  i couldn't stop reading til i was done. very good.  lol



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for the review!  I am glad you enjoyed it - hope you'll try the sequel to see how Justin pays him back!:)

Reviewer: marietta (Anonymous) · Date: December 22, 2010 04:30 AM · On: And It's a Grand Slam!!

I'm glad to see you join MW, love your stories and I'm going to re-read them as you post them.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I'm going to try and post some new ones in the future as well!  Thanks for the welcome!:)

Reviewer: Miss Miko (Anonymous) · Date: December 21, 2010 09:51 PM · On: Let the Games Begin!

What a great story!  Loved a playful Brian and how well he knew his little twinkie.  Loved the glimpses of NYC and how wonderfully they fit the plot.  Can't wait for the follow-up story.  Good job.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I am so glad you enjoyed it!  I hope to actually get the sequel up shortly - only this time, the tables are turned!  Stay tuned and thanks again!

Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2010 09:18 PM · On: And It's a Grand Slam!!

wonderful story i can not wait to read the next part of this story

i am glad brian asked justin to marry him

i lookforward to reading your new story

wonderful job writting this story



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review - it is greatly appreciated!  I should have the sequel up shortly - hope you enjoy it!:)

Reviewer: seaglass (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2010 12:26 PM · On: Let the Games Begin!

Loved the scene with the monkeys! But I have to tell you,it reminded me of two incidents where peoples' reactions were quite different- in the early '70s I was in the Lion House at Chicago's Lincoln Park Zoo.When a couple of lions got busy,everyone actually brought their kids over to watch! The same thing happened years later,when I would borrow a buck to breed my dairy goats. Every parent in my rural neighborhood showed up with their preschoolers- one of them told me it was way easier/less embarassing than trying to explain it. Thanks for the little trip down memory lane,and welcome to Midnight Whispers!



Author's Response:

Thank you for taking the time to review and for the welcome - it is greatly appreciated!  I got a chuckle out of your "trip down memory lane!"  Brian's going to be torturing poor Justin in lots of ways, so stay tuned!  Hope to have all the chapters up by later today.:)

Reviewer: Armandyouidiot (Anonymous) · Date: December 21, 2010 11:49 AM · On: Let the Games Begin!

This is so cute with Playful Brian, getting all nostalgic and romantic, I love it!  Fucking monkeys!?! – HAHAHAHA  I especially liked the way he demonstrated how he feels “on top of the world.” 



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review!  Can't think of anyone better to torture Justin with creative ideas than our own little advertising genius!  Thanks again for taking the time to read and review - it is greatly appreciated!

Reviewer: TECH SUPPORT (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2010 11:41 AM · On: Let the Games Begin!

Welcome to Midnight Whispers



Author's Response:

Thanks for the welcome - I am delighted by how easy it is to submit and post stories - thanks for giving me the opportunity!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2010 10:15 AM · On: Let the Games Begin!

This looks to be really interest!  I love the chapter title.  Are you sure that Brian doesn't have someone watching Justin?  How does he know where to send Justin to each day?  Does Justin text him back?  Why doesn't Brian answer his cell?  See all these question need answers in future chapters. 

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Author's Response:

Thank you for the kind words!  Some of your questions will be answered in the other chapters, and I suppose on some of it in the spirit of the season you may have to suspend your beliefs just a little and allow me a little creative leeway - wink, wink!  Thanks for reading - hope to have all the chapters up by tonight.:)

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