Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Define: 'Naughty'
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2012 05:20 PM · On: Define: 'Naughty'

Some of my most favorite parts:

 

“Yeah- do you like my tights?”

“I love your fucking tights.”

“I wore them just for you, even though they’re a little itchy.”

“Where? Here?”

“Uhhh!…God, yeah. Reeeeally itchy right there…Mmm…”

 

and (over the last year or so I'd break out into spontanious giggles as this thought popped into my head... i've since upped my medication, but think fondly back on those days):

 

The result was plastic reindeer carnage. Seeing it made me wonder if Santa carried a shotgun around with him...It would certainly explain what happened to ‘Olive, the other reindeer

 

HA HA HA HAH:

“I care about your fleshy tissue,” Justin reminded me, his fingers playing along the inside seam of my jeans. “Particularly the kind shaped like a Russian trouser pickle that passes longitudinally into my-”

 

No matter how many times I read this, I laugh out loud until there are tears in my eyes:

 

“Poetry!’ Emmett sang giddily, clapping his hands. “I love Christmas poems! Especially the ‘The Night Before Christmas’- that’s how I remember all the reindeers’ names. Let’s see… Dasher and Smasher, Vomit and Cupid, Dancer the Prancer, and Betty and Marylyn.”

 

and the whole part you edited out.  :(

Im part Ukranian and didn't find it offensive at all.  I sorely wish you'd put it back in, or at least under a cut.  



Author's Response:

I'm so glad this story still makes you laugh. I probably had more fun with this story than I did with any of the board game fics - I rememebr giggling madly when I was writing the part about the reindeer tower collasping and Ted trying to put out the rumball fire with brandy. Good times ;-) And I'm SO glad you like the tights quote - that is hands-down my favorite line in here as well *g*

The original version of the story is still posted (and unlocked) on my LiveJournal: http://sapphire-3.livejournal.com/18720.html#cutid1.

I modified it because I really did upset this one reader, who I think knew of someone who had been in or been affected by the Cherynoyl Crisis. I think everyone else realized that I wasn't making fun of the event in the slightest and that it was all meant to be a bit of fun but... well, one has to be culturally sensitive. But yeah - the original version is still on the web. It's just not here because I'm not sure if the person who left that particular comment is still around the site. 

Thanks so much for reading, once again, and for your wonderful comment!

Reviewer: charlotte taylor (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2012 05:04 AM · On: Define: 'Naughty'

Love how funny your stories are.A great read always.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you find them amusing :-D Thank you for your wonderful comments, and for coming to read. It is always most apprecaited :-)

Reviewer: soul1essharpy (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2011 08:26 AM · On: Define: 'Naughty'

Fuckin' A! I laughed so hard at the 'definitions'... especially that last set! Awesome story, I loved it!

(I am also dying to know what was in it before that offended someone...I bet I'd have laughed my considerable ass off at whatever it was!)



Author's Response:

LOL! I'm really glad you enjoyed it ;-) I had some fun with the definitions... I'm thrilled that it gave you a laugh! I edited it because I had tried to imply that Rudolph was a mutant reindeer from Siberia. I suggested he had a glowing red nose after he'd taken a detour through Chernobyl on his annual spring migration. I was maybe a little blasé about the nuclear disaster and someone took offense. So I removed the bit out of respect for cultural sensitivity. 

Reviewer: Netteh (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2011 12:48 AM · On: Define: 'Naughty'

Hehe Brian is so impatient. I love it



Author's Response:

I'm glad it gave you a laugh ;-) I figure Brian's horniness increases exponentially with the number of drinks he's consumed... not that this is really such a bad thing for Justin ;-) Thanks so much for reading, and for your review. I appreciate it very much!

Reviewer: Infatuated_BJreader (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2011 07:40 PM · On: Define: 'Naughty'

Hilarious! I loved it.. :)



Author's Response:

I'm thilled that it gave you a laugh :-D Thanks for reading, and for your review! I appreciate it so much.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Anonymous) · Date: December 20, 2010 06:11 PM · On: Define: 'Naughty'

Thank you very funny



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Thanks so much for reading and for your wonderful review. Happy Holidays `<):-D

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2010 10:31 AM · On: Define: 'Naughty'

Now that was a great game, to quote Peter Pan.  Well done.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you enjoyed it! (And I love the fact that you're quoting Peter Pan ;-) Thanks so much for reading and for your wonderful review! Happy holidays!

Reviewer: Daphne (Anonymous) · Date: December 20, 2010 09:30 AM · On: Define: 'Naughty'

I'm just LOL'ing all over the place.  I would love to know who kept putting the definition "sex toy" into play.  Probably Emmett!  :-)

This is absolute hilarious, my dear!!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad it gave you a laugh :-D In my head, I had it down as Hunter who was calling everything a sex toy, but I guess Emmett could have been a likely candidate as well ;-) Thanks so much for reading - I'm so happy you enjoyed it! Thanks also for your wonderful review! Happy holidays :-)

Reviewer: Lou (Anonymous) · Date: December 20, 2010 09:09 AM · On: Define: 'Naughty'

Oh, what a pity. I love the old version more, it was genius!

Anyway, this is funny too.

Thanks for spreading the holiday spirit :D



Author's Response:

Thanks Lou ;-) The older version is still posted on my LiveJournal site (I couldn't quite abandon it altogether), but after I got that review on the old version here, I felt I needed to be more sensitive on MW. I really don't want to upset readers - where would I be without you guys? In any case, I'm glad you thought this version was funny too ;-) Thanks so much for reading and for your wonderful review! Happy Holidays :-D

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2010 07:54 AM · On: Define: 'Naughty'

This "Naughty" game story is nice.

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Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying them! Thanks so much for reading and for your wonderful review ;-)

Reviewer: GiggleBean (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2010 06:23 AM · On: Define: 'Naughty'

cute story i like your naughty board games series



Author's Response:

I'm glad it keeps you amused! ;-)Thanks so much for reading and for your wonderful review! Happy holidays ;-)

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