Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Eternal Refrain
Reviewer: Anon (Anonymous) · Date: February 24, 2011 02:36 AM · On: Fragments

Amazing Chapter! SOoooooo Happy Brian doesn't see Justin as a Monster. I can't wait for more of this flawless story!



Author's Response:

Thank you from the depths of my pen & my heart for taking the time to let me know your thoughts on my work. I'm happy that you are reading and enjoying. Next update is right around the corner. *hugs & smiles* Mandi

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: February 24, 2011 12:36 AM · On: Fragments

Magnificent plot developement, your writing style is so amazing. I love this story! Brian better invite him inside. :)



Author's Response:

Thank you for the overly kind review. I'm thrilled you enjoy my work. I write to share it so It's always a good thing when you learn people like it. No worries, Mr. Kinney's about to show his softer side...on the other side of the door. *hugs* Mandi

Reviewer: Telly27 (Anonymous) · Date: February 24, 2011 12:04 AM · On: Fragments

Nobody could ever accuse you of not having an amazing imagination! this story is outstanding. I don't think I've ever been more emotionally tangled in words before. I'm addicted to your writing girl.



Author's Response:

Aw thank you so much for such kind words. I'm glad you are so tangled! :)

Reviewer: Kylie (Anonymous) · Date: February 23, 2011 11:49 PM · On: Fragments

Yay! Brian realized he still wants/needs Justin! This story is so beyond amazing! I can easily picture it as if it were a movie in my head. The plot, the ups and downs of their emotions are all so powerful. I am in love with this story. I think I want to marry it. ;)



Author's Response:

I'm excited to hear that you can picture it like a movie, that means I must be doing something right. I always try so hard with writing imagery with my descriptions. Same with the emotions, each tiny action I have them take is thought out like you wouldn't believe...:P I hope I can continue to make you like it. I have 4-5 more chapters left. Next one coming right up.

Reviewer: Carissa (Anonymous) · Date: February 23, 2011 05:32 AM · On: Fragments

Oh wow, this is so beautiful I can hardly stand it. I'm very grateful to you sharing your writing. I'm dying to read their next interaction. 



Author's Response:

You my dear are more than welcome for the words. Why write, if not to share with wonderful readers? I'm thrilled you are enjoying this.*hugs*

Reviewer: Benny (Anonymous) · Date: February 23, 2011 04:14 AM · On: Fragments

The plot is playing out nicely. You're doing a wonderful job with this story. You shold be etremely proud of your craft. This may be my favorite story in the entire fandom. BRAVO! I am very anxious for the next update. -Benny



Author's Response:

It means so much that you are such a devoted reader. I'm happy to hear that this story is one of your favorites, I have the rest of it planned for 4-5 more chapters, I only hope that you continue to like it. next chpater coming soon. :)

Reviewer: Kelly Reginald (Anonymous) · Date: February 22, 2011 08:06 PM · On: Fragments

This story is so freaking incredible. Sorry I've not reviewed before, but this truly deserves praise. You really have taken your time to plan this plot, I can tell how carefully you have added in every detail. So thank you for that extra effort. Your writing style is something you should be proud of for sure. 



Author's Response:

Hello Kelly, it's nice to hear from you.It's always a bit like recieving a little gift  to hear from new readers. So happy you like this story. *hugs & smiles* Mandi

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 22, 2011 08:14 AM · On: Fragments

I am so glad that Brian saw Justin as he really is... not as a monster.... and that Ben and Hunter are on their side..... Brandon may be powerful...but...maybe between the four of them... they can figure out some way to stop him.... Thanks...



Author's Response:

Thanks again for always spending your time on my words. it means a great deal to me. Justin is definitley not a monster...A softer Brian is right around the corner in the next update. Hope you continue to like this story. *hugs*

Reviewer: Kane29 (Anonymous) · Date: February 22, 2011 06:36 AM · On: Fragments

Oooooo! You are bringing this all together so nicely. I'm in awe of your writing , never cease to impress me there. I'm so happy that Brian doesn't see Justin as a monster. Excited to see how it all plays out. This is such an amazingly complicated story, one of my faves.



Author's Response:

It makes me smile to hear this story is one of your faves. Im hoping to finish it soon.Next update  soon. :)

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2011 05:32 AM · On: Crescendo

Very intense story and chapter.  You have done a beautiful job with this story!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing. I'm cetainly thrilled you think I'm doing well with this. With so many intense emotions weaved in this plot, I'm really taking extra care in every action and word. Hope you continue to enjoy this. *hugs*

Reviewer: ColorLet23 (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2011 01:37 AM · On: Crescendo

Thank you so much for the quick updates and sharing this lovely story... I know I am not commenting on every chapter, but I am still reading and enjoying every single line. And no... you didn't squeeze too tight :o)



Author's Response:

You are more than very welcome my friend. It is my pleasure to share this story. I'm super happy that you are enjoying this. I'm almost done the next chapter, so hopefully it won't be too long before it's up. *big smiles from me* ~Mandi

Reviewer: Anon (Anonymous) · Date: February 12, 2011 09:04 PM · On: Crescendo

Your writing is like art. This story is very good. Sexy, romantic, sad, angsty, cute, full of real emotions, it's very good. 



Author's Response:

Awww thank you for such an amazing review. All of those adjectives really warm my heart, I'm glad you are reading and liking this. *hugs*

Reviewer: Dame (Anonymous) · Date: February 11, 2011 08:18 PM · On: Crescendo

Oh my dear God in heaven this story is making my emotions go haywire! Your way with words is truly like no other, I think that like brian I might be in love. I Can't wait to see them back together!



Author's Response:

 Though you may be going haywire, your emotional uproar actually makes me happy. It means i'm doing something right. don't worry, their reconcilliation is right around the corner. :)

Reviewer: Robstatic73 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2011 11:50 AM · On: Crescendo

You are absolutley amazing amazing amazing at depicting emotions in your words. "He felt the warmth of Brian's forehead press harshly against his own." Good grief I think I even shed some tears here. Thank you



Author's Response:

Always great to hear your thoughts, thank you so much for sharing them with me. You are welcome for the tears...I think. Lol :)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2011 08:30 AM · On: Crescendo

You gratitude for reviews is all so real. If you check my status as a reviewer (Top Tens) you'll see I'm pretty big about writing them myself and hope I too get a nod once in a while. Sometimes I have recieved as good as I gave.

This is an amazing story so well written. Love your craft and look forward to more.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm so happy that you're enjoying this story. Yes, my gratitude is truly sincere, I appreciate anyone who gives even a minute of their time to my words. :) *hugs* ~Mandi

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2011 08:19 AM · On: In Dreams

Wicked! You sure know how to raise the drama and end on a cliffie.

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: February 11, 2011 01:36 AM · On: Crescendo

This was so very sad, I loved the line about the violet in his eyes. More please???



Author's Response:

Thank you sara for your continued reading and reviewing, It mean a lot. More coming soon I promise, working on it right now as I type this. :)

Reviewer: luisa (Anonymous) · Date: February 11, 2011 01:19 AM · On: Crescendo

Thanks for updating so soon, this was a very emotional chapter, I cried, very sad.

Great chapter,hugs.



Author's Response:

I'm sorry you cried... yet I am glad however that the emotions I'm trying to convey are actually coming through the words. I do hope you continue to enjoy this. I'm working on the next chapter now. :) *hugs back* ~Mandi

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 11, 2011 12:47 AM · On: Crescendo

WOW....that was intense..... I am glad that Justin told Brian it was Brandon who killed Mikey not him.... I wish there was a way that Justin could get rid of Brandon once and for all....maybe with Ben's help???  



Author's Response:

Thank you again for your contniued reading and reviewing. It elates me to know that you are into this story. We'll hear a bit about Brandon and see Ben in the next chapter. I'm working on it now, so hopefully it will be up soon. *hugs*

Reviewer: Kylie (Anonymous) · Date: February 10, 2011 11:36 PM · On: Crescendo

Such a wonderful story. I got tears in my eyes when Justin told Brian to kill him. :( I love your writing. :)



Author's Response:

Thank you Kylie for taking your time on my story, it makes me smile. I'm very happy to hear that you are enjoying this. *hugs & smiles* Mandi

Reviewer: 087bue (Anonymous) · Date: February 10, 2011 09:03 PM · On: Crescendo

poor brian he is so torn.

hope brandon dies really really soon



Author's Response:

Yes, Brian is definitely at a crossroads. We will learn a little about what Brandon's been up too in the next chapter. The boys need to get back to the same side before Brandon shows up. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. *hugs* ~Mandi

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: February 10, 2011 08:54 PM · On: Crescendo

i just found this story thought i'd read.  i love dark, brooding stories as well as other kinds involving our boys.  this one is wonderfully dramatic and foreboding.  i just love your way with the written word.  wondering what will happen next.  will stay tuned.



Author's Response:

I'm so happy that you've decided to give my story a go.I apppreciate each second you take to read my words. Yes, this plot is definately overflowing a little with 'brood', lol. I can't thank you enough for your kind words. I do hope you will contnue to go on this journey with me and our boys. *hugs & smiles* ~Mandi

Reviewer: Honeybear (Anonymous) · Date: February 10, 2011 07:37 PM · On: Crescendo

I know we dont come out often enough from the woodwork to express our appreciation for the excellent way you keep us entertained.  I for one look forward to reading the next part of your creation and appreciate the effort you put forth



Author's Response:

I thank you from the bottom of my author's heart for peeking out from behind the woodwork just this once. :) I appreciate your appreciation immensely. *hugs & smiles* Mandi

Reviewer: Benny (Anonymous) · Date: February 10, 2011 06:38 PM · On: Crescendo

Always a pleasure to wake up and find you've updated! This was fantastic, the raw emotions of both boys was as always, beautifully done. Please don't get discouraged by lack of reviewers, it in no way diminishes your AMAZING talent! You DO have loyal readers, me included. ;) Take care-Benny



Author's Response:

Thank you Benny, once again for your truly inspiring words. I usually try not to get discouraged, but after awhile I can't help but wonder (and become slightly paranoid) that readers are not liking where I've taken the story. It'sa just extremely relieving sometimes to actually hear from readers. Again I thank you for being one of them! *hugs*

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: February 09, 2011 10:17 PM · On: In Dreams

I am blown away by the art that is your writing. This story is fucking amazing! I can't wait to see what happens next! I feel so bad for both the boys. :/



Author's Response:

Thank you for such kind praise of my writing. It's also always a delightful bonus when 'fucking' is included in the adjectives to describe my stories...it makes me happy. :P thank you so much for continuing to see this story through with me. 

Reviewer: Kylie (Anonymous) · Date: February 09, 2011 06:33 AM · On: In Dreams

Holy Moly that was intense! :P I am in love with the way you write. This story is sooooooo amazing! I sure hope there is a happy ending. There will be right?! RIGHT?! lol Please update soon! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you Kylie sooo much for reading my work and your nice reviews. It gives my time spent on it a sense of purpose to know that you are enjoying it. Trust me, I am a hopless romantic and sucker for happy endings. I only hope that you like where I continue to take the boys. :) *hugs* Mandi 

Reviewer: luisa (Anonymous) · Date: February 09, 2011 02:49 AM · On: In Dreams

No,no,no, you can't  do this, you need to post the  next chapter NOW.This got to be ilegal some how.



Author's Response:

I'm sorry for the cliffhanger! I will update shortly, I promise. Thank you so much for taking the time to review, I appreciate feedback as an author more than you could ever imagine. *Hugs* Mandi :)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2011 08:09 AM · On: Conflicted

Interesting.....I wondered how Brian would handle the shocking news.



Author's Response:

I'm so happy to see that you've found the time to continue my story again. I do hope you continue the boys journey with me, and like where it leads. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review. *Wide smiles & silly hugs* Mandi :)

Reviewer: Benny (Anonymous) · Date: February 08, 2011 08:06 AM · On: In Dreams

Dammmmmmn girl, the cliffhanger is crazy! What is going to happen next? I have to know! The poetry that is your writing always blows my mind.-Benny



Author's Response:

It pleases me to continually blow your mind :P Net chapter coming soon I promise. Thank you for loyality in following my stories and your sweet reviews, it means sooo much. *Sends you super tight hugs* :)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2011 07:59 AM · On: Discord

Very interesting how you build up the plot. Well done.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2011 07:45 AM · On: Absence

Finally I can catch up on your novel. No great lost to see Ethan was vampire food. Brandon is not to be taken lightly.

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 05, 2011 10:03 PM · On: Conflicted

That was beautiful and soooo sad..... how  are they going to get past this??? How is Justin going to protect Brian from Brandon....when he can't even protect himself???.... Please update soon.. I have to know where they go from here... 



Author's Response:

Hi! I'm so excited to see that you have picked back up into reading this story. It makes me smile. I thank you from the bottom of my writer heart for reviewing. There are still several emotional steps ahead for the boys. I'm glad that you are liking this story. I do hope you continue to do so. Update coming soon. :)

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 05, 2011 09:44 PM · On: Discord

WOW..... things are going from bad to worse.... Poor Ethan.... even in death he manages to screw things up between them....lol...I like that you added Hunter into the mix... off to read the next chapter...Thanks

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 05, 2011 09:08 PM · On: Absence

OMG....Brandon made Justin kill Ethan.... not that it's a bad thing...lol... But...if he could make him do that...then Brian is in serious trouble.... hopefully Ben can help figure out what's going on...... great chapter as always...Thanks... 

Reviewer: Robstatic73 (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2011 06:57 AM · On: Conflicted

Oh, this was so sad. I feel so bad for both of them. OUTSTANDING writing as always girl. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Kylie (Anonymous) · Date: February 04, 2011 05:16 AM · On: Conflicted

Outstanding! Best B/J story I've read! The plot is very original and I cannot wait for more!



Author's Response:

Wow, thank you. *Hugs*

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: February 02, 2011 01:29 PM · On: Autumn Rose

My heart is heavy......



Author's Response:

I hope I can make it lighter by the end.;)

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: February 02, 2011 12:33 PM · On: Duet

Speechless! Just Beautiful! :)

Reviewer: Kane29 (Anonymous) · Date: February 01, 2011 11:20 AM · On: Conflicted

AHhhhhh I'm on the EDGE OF MY SEAT here. This is beyond amazing. You've created such a emotional story that I forget it's a vampire fiction. Justin has a HUMAN heart. Gosh, Please keep the updates coming my way!



Author's Response:

I am very excited that I was able to get you so emotionally invested. ;) Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Kyle (Anonymous) · Date: February 01, 2011 10:47 AM · On: Conflicted

This is brilliant. YOU are brilliant. Hoping for an update soon.



Author's Response:

Brilliant? Wow, I'll take it! :P Thank you so much for spending your time on  my words and for going the extra mile to leave me your thoughts. Nothing means more to me than to hear from readers. *hugs*Mandi

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: January 31, 2011 06:54 PM · On: Conflicted

Oh these poor guys! You wrote such a real, believable struggle in both of them. Brian's reaction was so painful, he wants so badly to believe his feelings are real. I can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Thank you for supporting my story with your kind review. *hugs*

Reviewer: Benny (Anonymous) · Date: January 31, 2011 06:49 PM · On: Conflicted

Wow, the emotional turmoil is done so delicately and beautifully. Your writing skills always amaze. I know there is still more angst, because Brandon is still up to something, but I can hardly wait for the happy end. Please keep up with the speedy updates! -Benny 



Author's Response:

I always appreciate your kind words. Thank you.

Reviewer: justbeyourself (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2011 10:28 AM · On: Conflicted

I just reread this from the beginning& I honestly have goosebumps. Seriously, this is one of the most beautifully written stories I have ever read ANYWHERE!! I'm going crazy waiting for more. You should be very proud of this, I would be.



Author's Response:

Wow, thank you for such an amazingly kind review, it means a lot. *Hugs*

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: January 30, 2011 11:18 PM · On: Discord

Goodness me, this isn't going to go well....I hope Brian gives Justin time to talk before completely pushing him away. Your writing is so engaging I find myself hurriedly checking for your update! This fic is amazing.



Author's Response:

I am incredibly pleased to hear that you are liking this. I send my kindest thank you to you for taking the time to review.Yes, everything is about to get messy for the boys. I do hope you continue with me and like where I take them. *hugs* :)

Reviewer: ColorLet23 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2011 06:05 AM · On: Discord

I really hope that Brian and Justin can work this out. At least if Justin is not Michael's killer, then it might be easier for Brian to open up to Justin again... *sigh* I really wish I could get inside your mind and see where you are taking our boys. Love this fic-- it is a fav of mine :o) Two Thumbs Up!



Author's Response:

My sincerest thanks for taking the time to review. It makes my heart happy that this story is one of your favorites. <3 I will give you the warning hint that the angst has only just begun. It will get worse before it gets better, though rest assured the 'Better' WILL come. :) I'm a bleeding heart romantic and our boys belong together, always and forever and ever and ever and ever. *hugs & smiles* Mandi

Reviewer: Benny (Anonymous) · Date: January 29, 2011 11:00 PM · On: Discord

WOW! Brian knows he's a vampire!! How is he going to react when he gets to his door? I'm so anxious to find out.  The emotional struggle you are writing is amazing. It's a shame this story doesn't have 500 reviews, it's amazing, people are missing out! lol I am very excited for your next update.  -Benny



Author's Response:

Thank you so much Benny for your continued support of my writing. I truly appreciate you for always taking the time to review. Your kind words give my stories a sense of purpose to know that someone is enjoying them. I'm trying hard to give these characters real emotions. I hope you continue to follow them on their journey. :) *hugs & smiles* Mandi

Reviewer: Robstatic73 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2011 07:01 AM · On: Absence

Very happy to see you back with this FREAKING INCREDIBLE fic. Seriously girl, it just made my day. Please keep the updates coming. 



Author's Response:

I myself am very happy that you are happy. :) I hope to keep the updates flowing quickly & that you continue to enjoy it. <3

Reviewer: Kane29 (Anonymous) · Date: January 28, 2011 06:59 AM · On: Absence

Yay you've returned,I was getting anxious. WOW the more this tale unfolds the more I bite my nails, my mind is a mess just thinking about all of the different emotions the boys are about to face.



Author's Response:

My sincerest apologies for the anxiety. :P I'm back into the flow of things and hope to get this story out soon. I thank you kindly for you taking the time to read and review. :)

Reviewer: elsieboo (Anonymous) · Date: January 28, 2011 04:12 AM · On: Prologue

OMG This story is back!! I'm moments away from doing a happy dance. You certainly know how to keep me guessing and always coming back for more. Such a wonderful story you are telling here, I can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

I myself may join you in your happy dance. I'm glad to finally be back into writing this story. Thank you for continuing to follow our boys through their emotional journey. *hugs* Mandi

Reviewer: Benny (Anonymous) · Date: January 27, 2011 06:50 PM · On: Absence

I have to say I'm realllllllllllllllly happy that you have updated this story! It's one of the best things I've read in any of my fandoms. You are such a talented and poetic writer, it blows me away.  I hope Justin didn't kill Ethan. Ack! the boys just missed each other...hopefully Brian gets a chance to talk to Justin before he connects the dots, or he's in for a major case of emotions! Please continue as soon as you can. -Benny



Author's Response:

Your incredible compliments of my writing always make me blush. Though I thank you endlessly for them allllll! :)

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: December 20, 2010 02:47 PM · On: Phantoms

I hope this ends well!  Will have to continue reading tomorrow! :)



Author's Response:

I am always a sucker for a happy ending, no worries. ;)

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: December 20, 2010 02:37 PM · On: His Song

Love this,  "The remaining time, Justin had spent listening to him. Not to his words, but to his song. The melody one's heart makes as their blood courses through it. The rushing symphony that plays through their veins. Everyone's song is different."

Very interesting! Really home Brandon/Brendon is GONE! :)



Author's Response:

Glad you're enjoying it, thank you for sharing your thougths.

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: December 20, 2010 02:19 PM · On: Memoriam

Wonderful! You have a way with pulling the reader in. Didn't really want to start this story since it isn't finished but now, I can't stop reading it! :)



Author's Response:

I'm so happy to hear that you like this story. i apologize for the delay in updates, but I'm hoping to remedy that now. I do hope that you'll continue reading it. Thank you so much for your nice reviews. It means the world to me to know what readers think of my work. *smiles & hugs*

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: December 20, 2010 11:35 AM · On: Prologue

Hmm......... Not Sure.........



Author's Response:

I understand, Vampires aren't for everyone. Hopefully you continue, but I do thank you for giving it a try. :)

Reviewer: Ryin (Anonymous) · Date: December 14, 2010 01:47 AM · On: Autumn Rose

WOW!! This story is beyond amazing. It's romantic, sexy, and sad. I am worried for the downfall that is yet to come. Please continue soon. :o)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for you awesome review. I am so happy you like this story. yes, an emotional downfall is on the horizon. I hope you continue with this story as i take you through it, and like where it goes. :)

Reviewer: TrinTiff (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2010 08:22 AM · On: Autumn Rose

I just started reading this story yesterday and got caught up to Chap. 9 this evening.  It's a wonderfully written story; very intense with complicated stories and emotions on both sides.  

I'm so worried now that Brandon is back! How is Justin going to cope with this when he was already on the verge of madness with his feelings about Brian? Poor Brian, so happy and blissfully unaware right now makes my heart hurt!

I hope you update soon; I hate to leave Justin in this limbo.  :-)

Hugs, Cindy



Author's Response:

I'm so sorry to have left Justin in limbo for so long. :( I am back to writing this now and hope to get it out fairly quickly. Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts. it means a lot to me. *hugs* 

Reviewer: justbeyourself (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 07:53 AM · On: Autumn Rose

Holy Suspense! This is one of my favorite stories I've ever read, I'm so anxious and excited to see where it leads. You have such a creative imagination, and beautiful writing techniques. Please hurry to update as soon as you can. 



Author's Response:

Wow, thank you for your amazingly kind words. They truly do mean a great deal to me as an author. I'm thrilled you are enjoying this story and do hope you continue to do so. *hugs* :)

Reviewer: elsieboo (Anonymous) · Date: December 12, 2010 07:51 AM · On: Autumn Rose

Another beautifully flowing chapter. I really do admire your writing style.

This story is so great, so descriptive that I really feel in love right along with them. I fear I will also feel the angst right along with them as well. I trust you to carry this out to the end with grace and wonderful writing. I can't wait!

You're such a wonderful author and this is such a Such a WONDERFUL fic!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and for complementing my writing style, that means so much to me. *Hugs*

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 06:23 AM · On: Autumn Rose

This is one great story, though I certainly hope you know where you


are going with it.  Most likely, Justin murdered Michael.  Now if this


were a different fic. you would get a standing ovation.  (Ok, just


kidding).  Justin did more than possibly kill Michael, he murdered


many other Michaels, peoples husbands, sons, lovers, and more.  I


too have never read a fairy tale with the title “Prince Charming and the


Vampire.” 


 


Good luck as you certainly are one courageous author taking us to a


point that is going to need some very logical explanations. I don’t see any.


 


Ethan?  I am not going to even comment.  I can’t handle anymore at


this point. I am certainly looking forward to the next chapter.


 


Again, thanks for this terrific story.  I don’t have a clue as to where we


go from here and that is good.  I think?


 


DavidR


 



Author's Response:

I am glad that you are reading this story. Thank you for taking the time to tell me your thoughts. No worries, I will NEVER start a story before knowing exactly where I am going with it. I have this outlined until the end and I am a hopeless sucker for happy endings. Even though you do not see plausible outcomes just yet, I do hope you will continue reading and that you will find my plot enjoyable. *hugs* Mandi

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: December 12, 2010 03:58 AM · On: Autumn Rose

OMG.... Brandon is back..... is Daphne involved in any way with him coming back for Justin???  I guess he won't  have another chance of being with Brian again..... this chapter is sooo beautiful and sooo sad... update soon... Thanks..



Author's Response:

Thank you for your continued support in reading and reviewing this fic. I truly do appreciate all of my readers and am grateful that you are enjoying this story. I do hope that you continue to take this journey with me, and like where it leads. *hugs* Mandi

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: December 12, 2010 02:54 AM · On: Autumn Rose

Oh NO! Brandon returns!!! I hope he doesn't hurt Brian to get to Justin! I love this story and the way you write.



Author's Response:

I love that you love this story. Thank you for the kind words regarding my writing. It makes me smile. :) I do hope you continue to enjoy it. 

Reviewer: Benny (Anonymous) · Date: December 11, 2010 10:13 PM · On: Autumn Rose

Again, Nothing short of fantastic! I've never read anyone who writes as poetically as you do. It's always so beautiful. Now, what is Brandon up to?! I guess I'll have to wait and see. Please update soon! =)



Author's Response:

Thank you! *Hugs*

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2010 09:18 AM · On: Autumn Rose

The back and forth play of 'this is our last time' was incredible, especially when you know deep down that they don't want it to be over.  Then you throw in Brandon!!!  Drat, now I have to wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I'm hoping that you will continue to follow our boys though until the end. *smiles & hugs* Mandi

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2010 07:25 AM · On: Autumn Rose

Angst overload; excellent command of prose, and a promise of intrigue to come.

Reviewer: Telly27 (Anonymous) · Date: December 02, 2010 11:09 AM · On: Duet

WOW! What I wouldn't give for just a tiny portion of your writing talent. Really and truly your way with words is awe inspiring. I LOVE this story!



Author's Response:

Wow, I can't thank you enough for your kind words. *hugs*

Reviewer: Jessikaa (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2010 12:49 AM · On: Duet

Incredible... I really loved it. It was beautiful and heart-breaking at the same time. Really really magic!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading ans sharing your thoughts, I appreciate it. *Hugs*

Reviewer: cherub68 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2010 12:34 AM · On: Duet

Wow! The beauty of this chapter simply took my breath away, eventhough it is heartrending.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and sharing your kind words. *Hugs*

Reviewer: feet526@aol.com (Anonymous) · Date: November 30, 2010 05:14 AM · On: Duet

This whole chapter was MAJESTIC!!!!!!!!! Loving this story. Thank you.............



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing it makes me smile. I am happy you are enjoying this story <3

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: November 30, 2010 05:01 AM · On: Duet

WOW .... that was AMAZING....  I hate to sound stupid....but.... lol..... why can't Justin be with Brian again???.. is it because he can't trust himself to not hurt or kill him.... or is he not allowed to fall in love with a human.... please update soon.... I have to know where they go from here.... Thanks...



Author's Response:

I am glad you are liking this story, and no you don't sound stupid at all my lovely. Justin is going to think about and further explain his reasoning in the next chapter but...there are several reasons he wants to distance himself. The main one being that he is fairly convinced that he killed Michael and broke Brian's heart. He cannot bear the thought of him ever finding out and hating him. He is falling for Brian after swearing love did not exist and is terrified to go further emotionally because he can never tell him who he really is and it wouldn't be fair. Anywho, like I said he will be talking more about it next chapter. Thank you for reading ! *hugs*

Reviewer: Kane29 (Anonymous) · Date: November 29, 2010 02:11 PM · On: Duet

WOW! There are really no words great enough to describe my thoughts on this chapter....just incredible. FLAWLESS. This story is shaping up to be one of the best things I've ever read.



Author's Response:

Well,  the words you have used are making me happy! :) I am so glad to hear that you are enjoying my story so thoroughly. THANK YOU! 

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2010 09:47 AM · On: Duet

The foreloding of angst for our new lovers is too sad to imagine. They are so ment for one another. Thank you for the new chapter.



Author's Response:

You are very welcome for the chapters and Thank you for continuing to read and review. YES they are indeed meant for each other. Seriously, what's an unatural un-death and a little blood drinking to stop Brian and Justin from being together?! :P Sadly, yes the angst is inevitably creeping upon them soon. I hope you enjoy where I take the rest of this. :) *hugs~Mandi

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2010 09:22 AM · On: Stars Align

Incredible story line here. I could see the internal conflict for Justin as Brian told all. Reading on for more.

Reviewer: Benny (Anonymous) · Date: November 29, 2010 08:37 AM · On: Duet

Oh My God! I'm speechless. This is the best thing I've ever read. You amaze me with the skills you possess. BRAVO! -Benny



Author's Response:

WOW thank you! Your reviews always make me feel a little unworthy of such praise. Nevertheless, I'll take it. lol :P I am genuinely happy that you like this story. *hugs

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2010 08:31 AM · On: Duet

Wow!  Oh, Wow!!



Author's Response:

Your 'wows' please me. :P I hope you continue to enjoy where the boys go from here. Thank you for taking the time to read and review my words, it means a lot. :)

Reviewer: Dasha (Anonymous) · Date: November 23, 2010 09:25 PM · On: Stars Align

The biggest teaser I've ever known... =)



Author's Response:

;)

Reviewer: Dasha (Anonymous) · Date: November 23, 2010 09:23 PM · On: Stars Align

Beautiful continuation, fascinating exposition of their feelings! Can't wait to know what will happen at the next chapter.

Bet the boys won't be able to implement their 'performance'. You're the biggest I've ever known =)



Author's Response:

Thank you for sharing your thoughts. :)

Reviewer: justbeyourself (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2010 11:28 AM · On: Stars Align

Wow you always write so amazingly. Literally. I just don't know how you manage to always word everything so ridiculously beautiful! This story is awesome, I really hope that Justin didn't kill Michael, poor Brian. Please update soon ! :)



Author's Response:

Aw, such an inspiring review, thank you!

Reviewer: Benny (Anonymous) · Date: November 21, 2010 12:42 AM · On: Stars Align

Once again I'm amazed with your talent. This chapter was wonderful, the star story was very sweet. I sure hope Justin isn't responsible for Mikey. I can't wait to see what stage they are going to "do it" on. Hurry Please? :o)



Author's Response:

Thank you for always being so kind and supportive.

Reviewer: justin (Anonymous) · Date: November 20, 2010 10:21 AM · On: Stars Align

this story is utterly fantastic!!!! your writing style is superb--such details and wonderful paragraphs.  where does this come from.  you should write a book, although, this could be considered one.  i am new to this site and hooked on vampire stories.  combining vampires and b/j is just putting the icing on my cake.  keep up the flow



Author's Response:

Aw, thank you so much for such a nice review. I am happy that you are enjoying my story. I truly appreciate you taking the time to share your thoughts. *smiles & hugs* ~Mandi :)

Reviewer: Kane29 (Anonymous) · Date: November 20, 2010 09:35 AM · On: Stars Align

This story is SO incredible. You have the most beautiful writing style I have ever read. Please continue soon, I can't even imagine what will happen if Justin killed Michael....OOOH I'm on the edge of my seat. SUCH A WONDERFUL STORY!



Author's Response:

I can't thank you enough for your kind review. *Hugs*

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: November 20, 2010 09:11 AM · On: Stars Align

OMG.... it would be horrible if Justin had anything to do with Mikey's death... especially since Brian trusted him enough to open up about what happened that night..... I can't wait to see where they go from here.... Thanks....



Author's Response:

Thank you for giving my story your time and thank you for sharing your thoughts. *Hugs*

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2010 08:27 AM · On: Stars Align

Love, love, love this!!!  So touching, I can't wait to see where you take this.



Author's Response:

Thank you for sharing your kind thoughts. :)

Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2010 08:18 AM · On: Stars Align

great story i look forward to reading the next chapter

i hope brian able to find justin

great job writting this story



Author's Response:

Thank you for taking the time to read my story, and for sharing your thoughts, I appreciate it. *Hugs*

Reviewer: Benny (Anonymous) · Date: November 15, 2010 06:40 AM · On: Symphony

This story is bringing out my inner romantic, you write beautifully. Update soon!



Author's Response:

Give your inner romantic a hug for me :) I'm happy you are still enjoying this story. 

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: November 12, 2010 04:03 AM · On: Symphony

Beautiful...... the song fit perfectly with what Justin was trying to explain to Brian.... reading this chapter is making me want to go so see the play again.... lol....  please update soon...I can't wait to see what's next for them... Thanks......



Author's Response:

Aw thank you for taking the time to read and review. I'm happy you like the story. I listened to the soundtrack while I wrote most of this, perhaps we can go on an imaginary trip to see the play together! *hugs~mandi :)

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: November 12, 2010 03:43 AM · On: Muse

Brian is in bad shape....he can't stay away from Justin....but...he doesn't trust himself to be anywhere alone with him....I am glad that seeing Justin's piano and Mikey's anniversary.... made him decide to start playing again.... off to read next chapter..... 

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: November 12, 2010 03:07 AM · On: Phantoms

It looks like Teddy finally made his dream come true...lol.... Phantom of the Opera is a fantastic play..... I saw it years ago... and Justin is right... Brandon was as fixated on Justin's talent  as Erik was with Christine's voice.... but...Brandon was the worse of the two... because he also was jealous of Justin's talent at the same time..... off to read the next chapter...

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: November 11, 2010 11:24 PM · On: His Song

The connection that they have is amazing...... they seem to know what the other is thinking and feeling...... off to read the next chapter....

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: November 11, 2010 10:31 PM · On: Memoriam

OMG...Poor Brian was with Mikey when he was killed..... I hope it wasn't Justin that attacked him..... BTW...congrats on the Blue Ribbon... you deserve it.... off to read the next chapter......

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: November 11, 2010 10:09 PM · On: Prologue

WOW.... I love a good vampire fic...so far this looks AMAZING.... off to read the next chapter..... Thanks....



Author's Response:

Thank you for sharing your thoughts. *Hugs* :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2010 09:08 PM · On: Symphony

Glad to see you've got a blue ribbon.  Well deserved too.  Poor Brian he's got it bad and Justin isn't even using his powers to entrap him, at least not that I can tell.  Sorry to hear that Michael bit the dust so to speak, it does give Brian reason to be melancholy.  Ted as the director of Phantom of the Opera!  Perfect casting.  Does Emmett show up and what's become of Brandon?

I'm loving this story



Author's Response:

THANK YOU!! I'm loving that you're loving it! Yes I thought Teddy would enjoy that job :) Unfortunately, Brandon is still  lurking around the corner of this story... *hugs* ~Mandi

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2010 12:35 PM · On: Symphony

You may officially declare me hooked to this story. I hope more of the readers find this wonderful tale and take the time to comment, and honor you as a favorite author. You surely deserve it.



Author's Response:

*Officially declared* :P shall I dub your shoulders with my pen now? :D

WOW you have given me such WONDERFUL reviews, I'm all kinds of deliriously giddy. LOL I am thrilled that you are enjoying my work. THANK YOU for taking the time to review. 

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2010 12:19 PM · On: Muse

Bravo! for this fantastic chapter so well woven together. Vampire love angst at its finest!

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2010 11:59 AM · On: Phantoms

I do hope you don't torture us (and them) for too long.  Reading your work takes no effort and is such a joy to follow. Your word choices are perfect.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2010 11:49 AM · On: His Song

The mouse will soon catch the cat perhaps.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2010 11:41 AM · On: Memoriam

Reading your work reminds me of reading Mario Puzo. Amazing fun to do it. Great to see how our boys first see each other. And I'm a huge fan of a good vampire B/J read.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2010 11:25 AM · On: Prologue

Incredible beginning for an epic tale. I truly love your writing.

Reviewer: Teddie (Anonymous) · Date: November 11, 2010 11:00 AM · On: Symphony

So wonderful! This is such a romantic vampire tale, I am in love with your writing! please hurry I'm obsessed and impatient! Lol :)



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for the kind review. *Hugs*

Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2010 07:56 AM · On: Symphony

 great story i can not wait to read the next chapter

brian and justin belong together

wonderful job           



Author's Response:

Thank you soooo much for taking the time to review, I'm glad you are enjoying my writing. *hugs*~Mandi :)

Reviewer: Jessikaa (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2010 06:25 AM · On: Symphony

Wonderful story and wonderful chapter... I really love it! Can't wait to read the following chapters!! =D



Author's Response:

I love that you love this story! I hope you continue to do so. Thank you for taking the time to review. *hugs & smiles* :)

Reviewer: Telly27 (Anonymous) · Date: November 09, 2010 12:11 PM · On: Muse

Damn girl you can write! I just can't get over how good this story is at only chapter five. I cant wait for more. Please keep Writing It's so awesome.! 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. *Hugs*

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: November 09, 2010 06:21 AM · On: Muse

One of the best stories I've ever read and it's only chapter five! I love it, So pretty!



Author's Response:

Thank you I'm so happy you are liking it. *hugs*

Reviewer: justbeyourself (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2010 11:42 PM · On: Muse

This story i so f'in A.M.A.Z.I.N.G! It is completely unique, wonderfully constructed and beautifully written. I'm giving you my imaginary 'blue ribbon award of approval' :)



Author's Response:

Thank you for this amazingly supportive review. *hugs*

Reviewer: Chris (Anonymous) · Date: November 08, 2010 08:20 AM · On: Muse

I'm in awe of your writing. Seriously its so poetic, this story is beautiful. 



Author's Response:

Wow, thank you so much. :)

Reviewer: Analyse (Anonymous) · Date: November 08, 2010 02:13 AM · On: Muse

Simply AMAZING!!!! Everyone should be reading this fic! Lol Beautifully written.



Author's Response:

Thank you Analyse for your kind words. *Hugs*

Reviewer: Dame (Anonymous) · Date: November 08, 2010 02:12 AM · On: Muse

WOw Mind, BLOWN! You are such a poetic writer. This story is incredible!!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I aim to blow your mind. ;P

Reviewer: Jessikaa (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2010 10:02 PM · On: Muse

WOW! OH. MY. GOD. That was simply amazing. Incredible. I loved all chapters and I just can't wait to read the following ones! Update soon, please. **hugs** Jessikaa.



Author's Response:

Thank you Jessikaa for reading and sharing your thoughts. *Hugs*

Reviewer: Benny (Anonymous) · Date: November 07, 2010 10:01 PM · On: Muse

That kiss had been his muse. That kiss had been nothing at all really. That kiss had been everything.---Beautiful! This chapter has practically left me speechless. Please hurry with more!  ;-D -Benny



Author's Response:

Thank you again for sharing your thoughts. *Hugs*

Reviewer: KAT (Anonymous) · Date: November 07, 2010 09:29 PM · On: Muse

Oh My, this story is so lovely. Your writing is like art. Please continue soon, I love this!



Author's Response:

Art? Wow! Thank You!! *Big Hugs & Wide Smiles*

Reviewer: Benny (Anonymous) · Date: November 04, 2010 11:51 PM · On: Phantoms

I loved this chapter. Our boys fumbling like teenagers, so cute. The Phantom parallels are so creative. more Please? -Benny



Author's Response:

I am happy you enjoyed it. :)

Reviewer: Berriesncreme (Anonymous) · Date: November 04, 2010 11:41 PM · On: Phantoms

What a sweet chapter. These two are so ridiculously adorable. I'm in LOVE with this story. PLEASE update soon! 



Author's Response:

I love that you're in love. Thanks for reading. :)

Reviewer: Chris (Anonymous) · Date: November 04, 2010 11:37 PM · On: Prologue

This story is so great! It's so unique and incredibly well written . I love your style. Can't wait for more. 



Author's Response:

Thank you Chris for the lovely complement. *Hugs*

Reviewer: sara (Anonymous) · Date: November 04, 2010 04:34 PM · On: Phantoms

HI.......... this is one of the beautiful story about vampire ........... ithink it is very different too..... ican not wait for first sex between them



Author's Response:

Thank you sara for reading and reviewing. :)

Reviewer: Benny (Anonymous) · Date: November 04, 2010 04:58 AM · On: His Song

This story is amazing! The blood song is a really neat idea. I must say that I myself have had hot sexy daydreams of being in Brian's bed. Please update sooooon! -Benny



Author's Response:

Mmm haven't we all had a sexy Brian daydream?! Expect in mine, he's a little more on the straight and narrow lol. I'm so happy that you are enjoying this story so much. Thank you for your reviews. :D

Reviewer: Robstatic73 (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 04:48 AM · On: His Song

This fic is really neat! I'm always impressed with your way with words. Keep it up! I'm very anxious to read the next chapter! 



Author's Response:

Aw, thanks for the review. Next chapter coming as soon as I can. *hugs.

Reviewer: Carissa (Anonymous) · Date: November 03, 2010 10:40 PM · On: His Song

WOW! This is so well written & extremely creative. Love the idea of a person's feelings making their blood taste different and their hearts's song is so sweet. Please continue this as soon as you can! :D



Author's Response:

Hello Carissam thank you for reading and reviewing, i appreciate it. *Hugs*

Reviewer: Dasha (Anonymous) · Date: November 03, 2010 07:00 PM · On: His Song

Like very much that Justin in this story is gifted in different way and also that he but not Brian is a vampire. That makes them both equal mature and strong persons.

You're really good in vampire themes, the idea of 'blood song' is awesome.

Desperately waiting for update!!!!!!! *_*



Author's Response:

 THANK YOU. You always give the nicest reviews, it makes me all warm and fuzzy.I'm pleased you're enjoying this story. *hugs

Reviewer: sara (Anonymous) · Date: November 03, 2010 04:40 PM · On: His Song

oh beautiful countinu please



Author's Response:

I am happy you like this, I am trying my best to get this story out of my head as fast as possible. *hugs

Reviewer: justbeyourself (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2010 09:36 AM · On: His Song

Lordy I love this story already. You are such an artistic author.Eagerly awaiting more. 



Author's Response:

An artisitc author, wow, thank you so much! *HUgs*

Reviewer: brian (Anonymous) · Date: November 03, 2010 07:32 AM · On: His Song

this story rocks.  love your style of writing-very detailed and special.  will be waiting for more chapters.  interest is piqued to the max.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the kind review. I'm so happy to be interest piquing! :)

Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2010 07:30 AM · On: His Song

Great job writting this story i can not wait to read the next chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks for taking the time to read and review, it makes me do this: :)

Reviewer: Dame (Anonymous) · Date: November 02, 2010 02:25 AM · On: Memoriam

This is awesome! I love your writing style. I can't wait for more. I feel so sorry for the boys, I hope they get happiness soon. 



Author's Response:

Thank you, I am pleased you are enjoying it.

Reviewer: Teddie (Anonymous) · Date: November 01, 2010 08:19 AM · On: Memoriam

Such a wonderfully emotional story! Your writing is so artistic. More please ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you for the compliment, I'm glad you like my writing. More soon I promise. :)

Reviewer: Benny (Anonymous) · Date: November 01, 2010 08:11 AM · On: Memoriam

Woah! That was great! I feel so bad for Justin. Your writing  is amazing. I can't wait for this tale to continue. -Benny



Author's Response:

Aw, thank you for such nice reviews. I'm truly glad that you are enjoying the story. *hugs* ~mandi

Reviewer: 087blue (Anonymous) · Date: November 01, 2010 06:06 AM · On: Prologue

love it



Author's Response:

I love that you love it! Thanks for taking the time to review. :) *hugs

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2010 11:15 PM · On: Prologue

Wow great start of a new fic. Looking forwards for more ... ASAP * blushes *.

* hugs *



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing! It makes me smile. I'll try to get it out quickly. :D *hugs to you*~mandi

Reviewer: Chris (Anonymous) · Date: October 31, 2010 12:48 PM · On: Prologue

Sounds really cool so far. I'm very interested in reading Brian meeting his vampire student Justin. You have a really fantastic writing style. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. I'm happy you like it so far, I only hope you continue to do so. :P

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