Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For DECEPTION
Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: November 01, 2010 06:23 AM · On: Chapter 2

buying the lofts, great idea.

oh lindsay coward that you are, oh what a tangled web you weave.



Author's Response:

no kidding

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: November 01, 2010 06:11 AM · On: Chapter 1

let me see if i understand this right.

lindsay got pregnant by sam, but being the coward she is she is letting everyone think the baby is brian's and what that she's carrying it for him and justin to raise?

seems to me that it doesn't involve debbie at all and maybe for once she should mind her own business. i don't see lindsay's pregnancy as something that should take mel and michael's happiness away. it truly doesn't involve michael at all.



Author's Response:

yes, but we all know that Debbie thinks everything is about Michael - and Lindsay isn't planning on letting Brian and Justin raise the baby - she's given Brian parental rights, but that's it. Much like Michael has parental rights for Mel's child

Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2010 05:45 AM · On: Chapter 2

this is a great story i can not wait to read the next chapter



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: November 01, 2010 01:13 AM · On: Chapter 1

i love it



Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: Cheryl (Anonymous) · Date: November 01, 2010 01:06 AM · On: Chapter 1

WOW!  You're off to a great start with my plot "bunny", just as I thought you would.  I like the backstory you included of Brian's past.  Can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

thanks Cheryl

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: October 31, 2010 11:06 PM · On: Chapter 1

OMG... for an intelligent woman..Lindsay sure is a fucking moron.... her "deception" will last for about nine months... because once the baby is born..looking like Sam and probably smoking a cigar... lol...everyone will know it's not Brian's and in the meanwhile.... Mel, Debbie and everyone else will hate Brian for something he didn't do... with friends like her.... Brian doesn't need any enemies....



Author's Response:

thanks for leaving this review - it will be an interesting ride that is for sure

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2010 09:12 AM · On: Chapter 1

Oh, I can see right now this is going to be good.  I've always like the way you do dialog, it sounds so right.  So Brian is going to let everyone think Linds kid is his....interesting concept.  Can't wait to find out the answer to Justin's question.  Are Deb's last remark a threat or a promise?  I'll stay tune for the next chapter to find out.

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Author's Response:

Thank you 

Reviewer: Shadowcat (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2010 08:54 AM · On: Chapter 1

How strange is this. I was wondering, only about two days ago, if you were going to post something new soon, and here this is.

Interesting, can't wait to see how this one's gonna come back to bite Lindsay in the ass.

Looking forward to the next installment ; )



Author's Response:

I just finished Broken Angel - and found this plot bunny in my mail - LOL

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2010 08:24 AM · On: Chapter 1

What a twisted web the munchers weaved and our boys are stuck in the middle of it. This is an outstanding plot idea full of possible intrigue and of course....Deception!



Author's Response:

can you believe I'm starting another B/J fic - wow

Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2010 05:42 AM · On: Chapter 1

I like this story i can not wait to read the next chapter



Author's Response:

thanks

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