Reviewer: CarolK1943 (Anonymous) · Date: March 04, 2012 03:49 AM · On: Chapter 1

I just re-read this story. It's just as good on the third read as it was on the first. Maybe this time I'll be able to get this comment to post. :::

Author's Response:

thank you so much

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2011 04:15 AM · On: Chapter 7

Awww.  I can so see Brian embraseing his inner maternal side.  He was always a protector, and did a fine job (in intent anyway) on nurturing Justin.  With Justin as his level headed and full of love partner, giving a bit of guidance on HOW to direct his need to look after those he loved, he sure did turn out to be a great dad.

Interesting AU.  I enjoyed it, and the virtual trip to Tahiti.

Author's Response:

Thank you for all your well thought out comments - I appreciate the time you took to review this story.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2011 01:09 AM · On: Chapter 5

I understand Justin's anger, but is it wise to reveal his hand before going to court?

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2011 02:44 PM · On: Chapter 1

I understand Brian's protectiveness, and disgust with Justin's "family" and "friends", but keeping them out of the loop also means even should they want to visit, Justin is all alone thinking they don't love him at all any more.  :(

I think Emmett and even Vic could be trusted to keep the secret... and I honestly don't think Jennifer would ever abandon her son.

Reviewer: nosleep (Anonymous) · Date: August 24, 2011 06:20 AM · On: Chapter 2

This was a heart breaking chapter. I could not believe how Brian's friends treated him.

Reviewer: nosleeo (Anonymous) · Date: August 24, 2011 06:14 AM · On: Chapter 6

This was one of my favorite chapters. I loved the part about Lindsay being manipulative with Gus.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 12, 2011 10:20 PM · On: Chapter 7

love it it's about time brian so call family & friends were put in yheir place

would have like to see a squel were they all ran into brian and his family

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: March 14, 2011 11:08 PM · On: Chapter 1

Wow, that was a fucking fantastic fic. You just made my day (c: Thank you so very much.

Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: December 18, 2010 08:44 PM · On: Chapter 7

Love it. Even if it gets a bit too white and black in the end for me. ;)

Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: David/?R (Anonymous) · Date: November 18, 2010 01:52 AM · On: Chapter 7

Thanks for the story, as  expectedl I enjoyed it as I always enjoy all your stories.

 I liked the way Justin picked out Maizie though you

always do a great job when it comes to including

animals in your stories.  Still – meeting Gabe in Blackie

and Babe is my favorite.  I don’t think you could ever

top that scene. 

 

It was so much fun for me to read how Justin  took over making Brian being the pussycat, and Justin the tiger.  You were much harsher on the gang than usual, but I did stand up and cheer Justin's actions.

 

Thanks again,

DavidR

Author's Response:

thanks bunches David R - love hearing from you - yes I was a tad harsher than usual - it's sooooo not me - sigh - I was having a moment ---

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2010 02:44 AM · On: Chapter 1

I so love this story :)

Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Anonymous) · Date: November 05, 2010 11:18 AM · On: Chapter 7

I lvoe dhte story and enjoyed seeing your version of them together.  I lvoe your portrayl of Cynthia and Daphne and Sam was a great character.  glad to see you writing again.

Reviewer: ColorLet23 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2010 12:38 AM · On: Chapter 7

Thanks for the ride... I enjoyed reading this story :o)

Author's Response:

You are welcome

Reviewer: Curious George (Anonymous) · Date: November 01, 2010 01:08 AM · On: Chapter 1

I always love your Brian and Justin. :-)  It was so great to stop in this morning and find this story completed, just as you promised.  What a treat.  Others have said it, but I'll say it, too -- It's wonderful to have you writing B/J fic, again.  Thank you, and I'm looking forward to the next one!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much.

Reviewer: DEB (Anonymous) · Date: October 31, 2010 12:07 PM · On: Chapter 7

WONDERFUL STORY. I HAVE MISSED YOUR WRITTING. I AM A PET LOVER AND SO ENJOY THAT YOU USUALLY INCLUDE SOME IN YOUR STORIES. I DO HOPE THE MUSES ARE ACTIVE AND I WILL SEE MORE OF YOUR STUFF.  THANKS D.

Author's Response:

Yes I usually have a pet or two - I love them as well

Reviewer: esromjk (Anonymous) · Date: October 31, 2010 10:59 AM · On: Chapter 7

Wonderful story, so glad you have written again, it had been a while

Author's Response:

I'm always writing - but not necessarily B/J fic thanks for stopping by

Reviewer: Jasmine (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2010 11:54 PM · On: Chapter 7

What a beautiful story that ended perfectly! So glad that the 3 stooges Ted (loser banned from gay clubs in the Pitts) Mike (trying to work 2 jobs ) and Debbie (scratching her ugly wig wondering where the extra 100 in tips went) got what they deserved....can't wait to read your next story!

Author's Response:

thanks Jasmine - I'm writing another started today

Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2010 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 7

I very much like this story i can not wait to read the next chapter

great job

Author's Response:

sorry, that's all for this one

Reviewer: patheticgal (Anonymous) · Date: October 30, 2010 05:55 PM · On: Chapter 7

as always, a great and beautiful story of brian and justin!!!!!!!!!!

love it....

thanks

Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2010 04:04 PM · On: Chapter 7

Thanks Elsa I really enjoyed this fic your writing style is as usual beautifully structured and easy to read. I hope you continue to be inspired by the boys :)Chris

Author's Response:

Thanks Chris, I've started another one 

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: October 30, 2010 01:16 PM · On: Chapter 7

Loved reading this story and all your others...I only started reading your stories just over a week ago and I have  been reading them every chance I get.

I hope to see more stories from you soon, I will be looking forward to reading them as the appear.

One of my favourites is Bear Magic, it is so sweetly written.

 

Thank you for sharing your talented writing with us

Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: kinneydu (Anonymous) · Date: October 30, 2010 12:19 PM · On: Chapter 7

Great story.  Nice feel good finish.  I would like to think that even though the boys didn't keep in touch with the old gang, perhaps they did keep in touch somehow with Emmett. 

Author's Response:

no doubt they do

Reviewer: vamplair (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2010 09:29 AM · On: Chapter 7

Welcome back! Thanks for gracing us with your skills once more. I always love it when the purple gang gets their asses handed  to them on a plate! Hope to have more from you in the future. Happy Halloween!

Ro

Author's Response:

working on another one as we speak

Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: October 30, 2010 08:04 AM · On: Chapter 7

i love it

Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: October 29, 2010 11:19 PM · On: Chapter 6

Just one more thing, I love this chapter but I hope that Ted doesn't get off scott free...he was the idiot who suggested that tabloid rag and with Mel told lies about Brian....I also hate his attitude towards Justin and his cruel remarks, so I know Ted being the loser that he is might be enough revenge, but I want his ugly head on a stick for what he did!!

Author's Response:

hmmmmmm - okaaaaay

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: October 29, 2010 06:12 AM · On: Chapter 6

great story. I'll check back soon for more.

 

Reviewer: Jasmine (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 02:31 AM · On: Chapter 6

I LOVE THIS STORY!!! An excited round of applauds and I would do a back flip but I injured my knee and can't do any flips...lol! Can't wait for the update and I meant to comment on Chapter 5 and I just wanted to say that when Justin told that wig wearing, gun chewing, crass, hypocritical turd Debbie off (as well as other members of the dysfunctional posse) I was doing the happy dance! Hurry and update...please!!

Reviewer: Mariana (Anonymous) · Date: October 28, 2010 11:31 PM · On: Chapter 6

Oh Elsa Rose, I love this story.

Can you please elaborate on the  custody agreement? I hope it doesn't say that Gus won't see his father or mother for 6 month strait.

Looking forward to the next chapter

Mariana

Author's Response:

I will do that

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 06:03 PM · On: Chapter 6

This is so good, thanks

* hugs *

Author's Response:

thank You

Reviewer: kinneydu (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 12:11 PM · On: Chapter 6

I am loving this story.  It's nice when Brian is cast as the good guy (which I think he is) and others get their comeuppance. 

Keep up the good work.  Looking forther to more chapters.

Author's Response:

thank you bunches

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 10:36 AM · On: Chapter 6

Go Justin.  I like this strong Justin and I love him kicking butt and taking names!  Loving the story!

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: October 28, 2010 10:03 AM · On: Chapter 6

omg how wonderful. justin is taking everyone on. bravo!

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 09:31 AM · On: Chapter 6

You have to love an ingenius, determined, blond tiger with the bite of a sea turtle that won't let go, the heart of a hammer head shark, and the love of an angel for his man. The jump in the time line was perfect, and the settlements reasonable under the circumstances. Very believable facts in the plot. Seeing the change of major for Justin considering his mental abilities are right on considering art may or may not be available to him anymore.

Bye bye Mel, and perhaps Lindsay has a second chance but just barely with Justin in charge. Love where this is going and each chapter gets more intense and delicious. Congrads on the home run hit of this story Elsa. You knocked this baby right out of the park and re-sparked MW with your gifted talent once again. You know what I'm saying love. I just hope this isn't a short story since it is so amazingly fantastic the more you build it. Now...where did I put my magic wand???

:D

Author's Response:

Ah Bob - big hugs to you - I've been watching Brian and Justin vids on Utube - true inspiration. I'm not sure how long this will last, but it has been an interesting ride.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 08:59 AM · On: Chapter 6

Happy, happy, happy dance.  Three strikes and they're out.  Wooohaa!  Tahiti here they come.  Now hurry so we can find out your plans for Cynthia and how Justin handles Mikey and Deb.

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Author's Response:

will do my best

Reviewer: amy (Anonymous) · Date: October 28, 2010 08:01 AM · On: Chapter 6

another great chapter, looking forward to the next with the court case for Gus, also looking forward to deb, ted, and micheal getting what they deserve.

Is vic going to be featured in any of the chapter and what does he think of the family actions.

waiting nicley for the next chapter

Author's Response:

Sorry Vic isn't in this story - I totally forgot about Vic - maybe he'll be in my next story.

Reviewer: siren (Anonymous) · Date: October 27, 2010 07:21 PM · On: Chapter 5

Yay Justin!!! I hope everything turns out okay. Please let us know what happens soon.

Author's Response:

working on it

Reviewer: Terri (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2010 12:26 PM · On: Chapter 5

This story is very good. I hope you post a new chapter soon. I want to learn how the gang reacts to Justin's information.

Author's Response:

next chapter is coming soon

Reviewer: 087blue (Anonymous) · Date: October 27, 2010 06:49 AM · On: Chapter 5

awesome.go justin.they are so gonna be sorry.

 

Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2010 05:33 AM · On: Chapter 5

Yes, you go Justin.  Kick their ass!  I never was a fan of the family.  I always felt they all were so jealous that they tried to hurt B/J's relationship - except for Emmett and sometimes Ted.  But the rest of them...including Deb...dirt!

I'm really getting into this story, can you tell?  ;)

Well done!  Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

next chapter coming soon

Reviewer: Rickeshay (Anonymous) · Date: October 27, 2010 04:23 AM · On: Chapter 5

Excellent as always and i'm looking forward to where it eventually winds up.(g)

 

I've always thought that Season 2 should've dealt with the medical and legal effects of the bashing but as the later seasons showed us Cowlip couldn't have carried it off nearly as well as you are doing in this fic.(vbg)

Author's Response:

You are too kind

Reviewer: Dioramanya (Anonymous) · Date: October 27, 2010 01:38 AM · On: Chapter 5

Justin ! You're the best.

All of them wanted to take what's belong to Brian (money, job, Gus, Justin...). I can't wait when Justin and Brian will knock on the door of Mel and Lindsay's house and take Gus from them. It seems that they can't provide for the child if they're always asking Brian for money. It can be a good reason to give full right to Brian. Especially when Mel will lost her job.

Melanie deserve her career ruined and be blacklist by her peers. Ted has nothing that would be very interesting to take from him. Maybe Emmet's friendship. Debbie has two things in her life : her family and her Diner.

They haven't slowed down to put shit on Brian. Payback is a bitch. Right ? they don't deserve to be spared. I may be seems cold, cruel or even harsh but I can't not feel protective of Brian and Justin.

Brian and Justin forever.

C'est un réel plaisir de lire cette histoire. J'attends la suite avec impatience.

Sorry for my english. A bientôt.

Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: marietta (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 11:46 PM · On: Chapter 5

WOW, I haven't see this coming. I can't wait what have you prepared for the gang, but I think that they will pay dearly. I just hope that Brian and Justin will be strong enough with the help of their real friend to go through with everything. I can't wait for the next chapter. Love the story, Metka

Author's Response:

thanks = it will all work out

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: October 26, 2010 09:58 PM · On: Chapter 5

i sure hope that jimmy is as much a pitbull in court that justin was in the diner and on the phone with lindsay.

brian thinks he lost everything, doesn't realize he has it all in the form of a blond spitfire.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 5

Oh, Oh, Oh!  No more Broken Angel, but a spitfire instead.  I'm so glad to see Justin confront the Liberty Diner crew and I just know you have more to say on that.  Looking forward to seeing how Jimmy handles the lawsuits and  all the rest of it.  Right now it looks like it's Justin's turn to take care of Brian.

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Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 06:02 PM · On: Chapter 5

Wow just wowww  ... big bow for Justin.
Please I need more, love this so much.

* hugs *

Reviewer: masterglory (Anonymous) · Date: October 26, 2010 04:54 PM · On: Chapter 1

I have to say that usually I don't read wip...I'm always afraid that the author will leave the story incomplete:(, so usually I read only finished story.

But, this is a story from one of my fav authors on the earth, and I KNOW you're not the type to leave it unfinished, so....this is an amazing wonderful story, AND I LOVE IT, BRAVA, BRAVISSIMA!!!!!!!:):):):)

 

Love-ya, Gloria^____^

 

Reviewer: LILI (Anonymous) · Date: October 26, 2010 03:22 PM · On: Chapter 5

WOW WOW JUSTIN I LOVE JUSTIN VERY VERY MUCH WOW MY GOD THIS STORY IS VERY VERY BEAUTIFUL ........... PLEAS COUNTINU VERY SOON

Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: October 26, 2010 12:59 PM · On: Chapter 5

Way to go Justin. I love it.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 12:51 PM · On: Chapter 5

*Jumping up and down and pissing in my pants with joy as Justin rips them a totally new asshole. That was only the first salvo from a blond twink with fire in his eyes.

Time to change my shorts now.

Oh happy days!!!!! :D

Author's Response:

Brat - yes it's the first.

Reviewer: Armandyouidiot (Anonymous) · Date: October 25, 2010 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 3

This story is some of your best work.  Really well done!

Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 09:20 AM · On: Chapter 4

Geez, if these are Brian's friends, then he doesn't need enemies.  No one could forgive them for destroying Justin and his lives.  I hopes he gets even and then loses their names and numbers forever.  If any "friends" of mine did this to me...well...you get the drift.

 

Reviewer: siren (Anonymous) · Date: October 25, 2010 09:11 AM · On: Chapter 4

Wow...that was unexpected. I officially hate all of "the gang". But where was Vic during all of this? I love the story and look forward to whatever it is you have planned. :)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 06:54 AM · On: Chapter 4

You have me steaming at Mel now. Ryder has no just cause to fire Brian. Justin can easily defend him and put this down. The gang needs to be rewarded for their meddling and all. Very interesting turn of events you wrote. Poor Justin if he sees this on the news before Brian can tell him in person.

Ted should be crucified for his actions. Give Michael some attention and he'll tell Brian all he needs to know; Debbie would tell Justin given the chance. I'm very much looking forward to where this goes next. Six months pay and 1.5M is a nice nest egg for a new advertising agency to be born. That doesn't count the wrongful termination suit award Brian has coming to him in time.

However you take this I really hope the gang gets it broken off in them deeply with excessive force :)

Author's Response:

goodness Bob - I'll see what I can do.

Reviewer: gert (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 02:55 AM · On: Chapter 4

I'm still loving this story.  Great job!  I can't wait for the so-called "family" to get theirs.  I was wondering if Brian could sue for wrongful termination.  I mean they fired him because of an article with no proof of his guilt.  He could use that money to open his own agency....and then proceed to crush Ryder in business.  The best type of revenge.

Reviewer: mea (Anonymous) · Date: October 25, 2010 01:42 AM · On: Chapter 4

i really like your  writing.  i have been reading all your stories.  it has taken me a while and not half way through yet,  i started this one as it is new to see what you were up to in this story.  i just love it.  brian never ceases to amaze me.  the man has many hidden talent.  wonderful story.

Author's Response:

Thank  you very much

Reviewer: Dioramanya (Anonymous) · Date: October 25, 2010 12:27 AM · On: Chapter 4

Hi!

Lindsay and Emmet were the only ones who didn't put shit on Brian. I hope they will help Brian and Justin.

Did Brian already give his right on Gus to Melanie? I don't want that Gus is taking away from them. Justin needs him too.

Brian has the support of Jimmy, Vanessa, Chief, Daphne and doctors that will proves that Brian didn't take advantage of Justin. Justin is now considered an competent adult so he has the right to talk. What are Michael & co have?

I love your story and the new characters. I can't wait the next chapter.

Sorry for my english. A bientôt.

Author's Response:

thanks for stopping by - and your English is great

Reviewer: marietta (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2010 10:35 PM · On: Chapter 1

Well, well, well, the true colours of the gang in pointing out. They are really some piece of work. I just hope that in the future chapters they will pay the priece for their stupidity and selfishness. Good job.

Author's Response:

thank you for the review

Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2010 08:57 PM · On: Chapter 4

I love this story i ccan not wait for the next chapter

poor brian getting fired and poor brian and justin and  the

 rag magazine that brian ans justin friends wrote abou them

both very sad

your doing a wonderfu; job writting this get story

Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: amythesw (Anonymous) · Date: October 24, 2010 05:49 PM · On: Chapter 4

I just found this story and I am loving it!!!!

Can't wait til the next update!

Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: SARA (Anonymous) · Date: October 24, 2010 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 4

OH MY GOD ........... I REALY WANT KILL MICHEAL AND MELANI AND ALL OF THEM OH DARLING I CAN NOT WAIT UNTIL THEY ARE DISCOVER REALITY ...... I BET MICHEAL FACE IS VERY SEEABLE

Author's Response:

it will be interesting

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: October 24, 2010 12:15 PM · On: Chapter 4

so glad brian and justin have sam, jimmy who brian better put to work on a slander suit , nessa and daphne because with the others who call themselves his friends aren't worth the paper the story was written on. how dare they!

Author's Response:

Wow - well trust me they will get their just desserts.

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: October 23, 2010 07:21 AM · On: Chapter 3

wow!! You're back with a new story and it's better than ever!! I just love this story and I know this sounds greedy..... but I want more!!

Author's Response:

Thanks Jasmine - I'm working on it.

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: October 23, 2010 12:50 AM · On: Chapter 3

great update. you made me cry and smile. more please :-)) rose

Author's Response:

thank you.

Reviewer: Britin-JantoLover (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2010 02:43 PM · On: Chapter 3

Really enjoying this fic so far, its really nice to see something a little different!

cant wait for more

Thanks xxx

Author's Response:

glad to be of service