Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Finding Myself
Reviewer: Crookedhalo1 (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2022 04:02 PM · On: Chapter 20

I like this story it's not completed but it's a great story

Reviewer: Sandroulette (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2015 06:11 AM · On: Chapter 20

I wondred if you could put your two fics on Ao3 or put finding myself on ff.net on your account i already found Life altering on ff.net or do a complete pdf of each fanfic so i can put them on My ebooks reader????? Thanks in advance!!!!!!!

Reviewer: kellydeer (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2013 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 1

I am currently reading 'Life Altering' and enjoying it enough to look for your other QAF stories. I came across this one & was wondering if you plan on completing it (I never begin reading a WIP).

Hope you continue, as I like your style of writing!

Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2013 03:24 PM · On: Chapter 20

I failed to mention in the past chapters, despite my griping on Brian's friends, it's wonderful to behold Brian's love and dediction to his partner... Hope you'll continue with this.

Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2013 03:16 PM · On: Chapter 19

Who was the donor of the transplant? I feel for Justin. After being battered the past few months, it's no wonder he will feel disheartened and scared about the procedure.

Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2013 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 18

How can these people be so dense? Who do they think has been taking care of Justin since he started getting sick? Are they really Brian's friends? Again, what does Ben see in Mikey? 

Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2013 03:03 PM · On: Chapter 17

I know the effect that you like, but I just think the messages are quite vicious and without a clue. How can Brian maintain them as friends, considering he does not let anybody in so easily? Wasnt it obvious that Justin was sick when Brian started looking for a thermometer?

Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2013 02:42 PM · On: Chapter 16

Where's Jennifer?! My heart bleeds for Justin when he was looking for his mother.

Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2013 12:40 PM · On: Chapter 15

I just feel like embracing Justin. Where the hell is Jennifer?

Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2013 12:27 PM · On: Chapter 14

But what's so surprising about Brian calling Justin 'partner'? He declared Justin as his boyfriend during Thanksgiving (or was it Christmas?) months ago.  I like Justin's resilience and stubborness to make it on his own. Shows that he is not with Brian for the money.  It's upto Brian to push his way in to help Justin, without undermining the efforts and determination of Justin.

What I dont understand is how Ben can be in a relationship with Michael when his boyfriend is so obviously a mean person. I was hoping he changed.

Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2013 08:02 AM · On: Chapter 12

Nice Christmas. I hope Michael's smile on learning Brian's feelings for Justin is his gift for the couple.  Is he going to be nice after this? Is he going to meet Ben? 

Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2013 07:28 AM · On: Chapter 10

Very heavy chapter and I still love Ben for making Justin show his point. I wonder though, after this long talk, when Brian gets teased overJustin, would he still act the same way?... Nasty set of friends. Aside from Emmett, I cant see why Justin has to put up with this set.

Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2013 07:08 AM · On: Chapter 9

I understand why Justin insisted on this difficult living arrangement, but why didn't Brian insist on paying temporarily for Justin's rent? It was just for two weeks and they lost their privacy, let alone have to put up with Mikey's whine.

Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2013 06:50 AM · On: Chapter 8

I love this chapter. :D

Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2013 06:35 AM · On: Chapter 7

I know this is not part of the issue, but I cant stop myself from thinking, 'who will pay for the hospitalization of Justin?'. I dont think Justin has enough money for insurance. 

Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2013 06:30 AM · On: Chapter 6

I am not liking your Jennifer Taylor.  But definitely welcome the scene. I can foresee that Brian will learn about Justin's situation soon.

Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2013 06:28 AM · On: Chapter 5

'Then I can grieve and move on...' As a mother, I'd love my kids and Justin to say this on unequal partnerships.

As QAF fans, I definitely was glad that Justin was persistent.

As a reader of your fanfic, I'm glad that your Brian is out of character and did his own style of hanging on to Justin. 

;D

Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2013 06:20 AM · On: Chapter 4

Justin might think that he is not going after Brian, but his stealing the Twink is surely shouting " Briannnn!!!".  

And I cant believe Brian, he will insist on Justin to hang out with him, then when he gets him over at his corner, he'll leave the Blonde/faux Brunette at the side to trick! That's really rude. Your Justin is learning to hold his fort. Well done!

Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2013 06:16 AM · On: Chapter 3

I like that Justin is doing something about his situation. Shows how strong his character is.... I love Ben, but Justin and Ben? It weirded me out! Hehe. Good thing you made them friends after the bed scene and no more than that. ;D

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: April 22, 2012 03:38 PM · On: Chapter 20

please please finish!!!!!!

Reviewer: kim136@dodo.com.au (Anonymous) · Date: December 02, 2011 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 20

congats on the baby the story is going great thanku   kim

Reviewer: Karleigh-q (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2011 10:07 PM · On: Chapter 20

Congrats on your son! I hope you are both happy and Healthy!! Tell your husband to feel better from the random reader of one of your Fanfictions!

:)

Hugs and cookies,

Karleigh-q

Reviewer: ColorLet23 (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2011 09:43 AM · On: Chapter 20

Welcome Peyton :o) Hope your husband is doing much better. Thank you for taking precious time out of your schedule to write&update. I hope RL is treating you well.

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: October 28, 2011 09:37 AM · On: Chapter 20

and justin is doing well, brian is opening his own agency and doing well too. all good things.

 

didn't know about peyton. happy for you.

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: October 28, 2011 09:25 AM · On: Chapter 19

i love how brian is sticking by him, as partners should.

now comes the waiting.

 

didn't know you were expecting. congratulations.

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: October 28, 2011 09:15 AM · On: Chapter 18

michael is such an idiot. how can ben stand it?

so now they know.

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: October 28, 2011 09:07 AM · On: Chapter 17

brian shouldn't have to put up with all their anger and crap. i think he should let ben tell them what's going on. what better christmas gift than for them to all feel ashamed.

i knew jennifer would have a change of heart. could care less about craig, but he'll probably turn out to be the donor and refuse to do it. i hope brian holds to his promise and plaster the pictures all over the place.

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: October 28, 2011 08:40 AM · On: Chapter 16

poor justin to have to go through chemo and lose his hair. he will pull through this. this is hard on brian too. i'm glad that they'll be living together. as for jennifer, brian better go talk to her. she's still his mother and her child is ill.

what a love brian is taking him for private dance lessons. letting michael father mel's baby shouldn't bother brian. really with all that is going on, that should be the last thing on his mind.

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: October 28, 2011 06:04 AM · On: Chapter 18

Oh poor Justin he went already through a lot. I liked the way you portrayed Justin!!!!

Reviewer: crazykitty (Anonymous) · Date: August 09, 2011 03:03 AM · On: Chapter 19

I hope that Justin will be fine

Reviewer: Karleigh-q (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2011 10:21 AM · On: Chapter 19

Congrats on your Baby! I hope she/he is happy and healthy!

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2011 11:37 AM · On: Chapter 19

Oh my, this update was so good to see.  I hope you can finish it, but it seems you may be a little busy real soon.  Congratulations on the baby and I hope all goes well.

All the best!

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2011 11:37 AM · On: Chapter 19

Oh my, this update was so good to see.  I hope you can finish it, but it seems you may be a little busy real soon.  Congratulations on the baby and I hope all goes well.

All the best!

Reviewer: siren (Anonymous) · Date: July 19, 2011 09:21 AM · On: Chapter 19

I really love this story. So happy you got time to update. Hope everything turns out well.

Reviewer: jlb628 (Anonymous) · Date: July 10, 2011 10:25 AM · On: Chapter 18

I see you've started another story - do you have plans of finishing your first story?



Author's Response:

I do have plans to finish this story :) ! I'm currently have writer block on this story :(, but writing LA bring back the Brian/Justin mojo and I plan on working on Finding Myself next! Life is hectic, writing time is slim but I do try! I make no promises of regular up-dates, I have a very busy real world that demands my time.

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: March 18, 2011 06:29 AM · On: Chapter 18

I just fornd this story and absolutely fellin love with it...please update!!

Reviewer: siren (Anonymous) · Date: March 17, 2011 08:54 AM · On: Chapter 18

Yay. I love this story and am so happy you updated it. Even unbeta-ed, it is great. So keep up the good writing.

Reviewer: Marigold P (Anonymous) · Date: March 06, 2011 10:26 AM · On: Chapter 17

Oh please oh please oh please!

I'm adoring your new WIP, but I just started reading this one after I read the first five chapters of that one, and I can't begin to tell you how excited I am to see some more of this.

You may hate begging reviews, so I'm sorry if I've annoyed you. I know you have a real life, and children (did I remember that correctly?), but I just wanted to tell you how much I was looking forward to some more of this.

I adore fics where Brian is protective... and Justin having cancer is something that I've read before but I like how it's not the main aspect of the story, but something that got brought in at a later time and a part of the bigger picture. And gosh, do I dislike Mikey with a burning passion! Always have, always will. lol.

Good luck, hope you're well.

M

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2011 10:18 AM · On: Chapter 17

Great update!!!! I love Brian in this he is so showing what a good man he is....continue to hate Michael, Mel and Lindsey. Can't wait until they learn why Brian and Justin left.     More soon please?

Reviewer: Debbie (Anonymous) · Date: February 02, 2011 09:54 AM · On: Chapter 17

I love the story and am hoping Justin and Brian will be together for a long time.

Please keep writing, you are a gifted writer.

Thanks again!

Debbie

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: February 01, 2011 10:59 AM · On: Chapter 17

i don't know what would be worse, them knowing or not. so proud of brian for handling the family and justin's.

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: February 01, 2011 10:43 AM · On: Chapter 16

i'm looking forward to michael finding out only so that he can find a hole to crawl into afterwards realizing what a jerk he is. still don't know what ben sees in him.

brian is so supportive, it's wonderful. the dance lessons, how sweet.

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Anonymous) · Date: November 22, 2010 01:33 AM · On: Chapter 16

I'm so glad I found this fic, again.  You've got a lovely job with it.  It's so bittersweet and moving.  I hope you intend to finish it.  What a true pity if you don't.

All the best.

Reviewer: vamplair (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2010 02:30 AM · On: Chapter 16

Love the dancing lessons!  Justin has noting to apologize about when it comes to Michael.  Michael always starts in on Justin without any facts and Ben and Brian need to stop letting him get away with it!  Did they freeze Justin's sperm?  I thought that would be a great X rated scene! LOL  Why can't anybody in this crazy little family do anything different without Debbie being pissed?  She can't control everyone else's lives all the time!

Great chapter! Love that Brian is going out of his way to prove that he wants Justin around all the time. I knew he had it in him! LOL

Ro

Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2010 10:22 PM · On: Chapter 16

i love it

Reviewer: stellakinney (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2010 09:10 PM · On: Chapter 15

I so love this fic, it's hearthbreaking

Patrizia

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2010 08:09 AM · On: Chapter 15

Go Justin! Can life throw anything else at him? He has a great attitude. Look forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: siren (Anonymous) · Date: August 24, 2010 07:04 AM · On: Chapter 15

Nice twist. Justin having cancer and all. You seem really good at coming up with unique plot twists. Good work.

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: August 24, 2010 06:04 AM · On: Chapter 15

whatelse is this poor man going to have to put up with? he will fight with all that is in him and with brian by his side i can't see him not winning.

brian needs to stop listening to michael's whiny slurs against justin or michael will be without a friend.

wonderful yet sad update.

Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: August 24, 2010 05:02 AM · On: Chapter 15

to sad you made me cry. it was a great chapter.

Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2010 01:45 AM · On: Chapter 15

i love it

Reviewer: mary (Anonymous) · Date: August 24, 2010 01:15 AM · On: Chapter 15

I dont know but I thinck myhearth  broke........ This story is very new Ilove it............ countinu please

Reviewer: vamplair (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2010 11:02 PM · On: Chapter 15

Wow! Thank you for Justin's confidence and drive! That will help greatly with the fight against his cancer.  Now if we can keep Michael's hate and animosity out of the mix, Justin will do just fine. Although, Justin telling Michael to fcuk off after he accused him of partying too much when he was really sick could be a wake up call for the weasel.

More please!

Ro

 

 

Reviewer: MeandBJ (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2010 01:20 AM · On: Chapter 14

I really like this. Good work!!

Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 09:36 PM · On: Chapter 14

lol at the end. i love it

Reviewer: Alyse_SaFyre (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 09:11 PM · On: Chapter 14

Lmao! Brian is too funny =)

Justin really needs to just get over it, quit one of his jobs, and move in w/Brian, it would make both their lives so much better, and they would have more time together and I know it wouldn't be at all as bad as Justin is trying to make it out that it would be....

Can't wait for the next update! Happy Writing! =)

<3Alyse

Reviewer: vamplair (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 10:30 AM · On: Chapter 13

Wondered if you were gonna get M&B together. Glad Justin respected Ben enough not to spill his status to Brian. I wonder if Ben told Michael about them having sex.  Knowing Michael he would blame Justin for Ben being positive.  Glad that Brian is finally ready to own up to his relationship with Justin.

Thanks for a great story. Take care of your baby girl. She comes first!

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 10:22 AM · On: Chapter 13

I look forward to the next update...hope your daughter gets better sooon. I love the way you have written this, I really like that Justin took a chance to find out who he is without Brian.

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2010 09:05 AM · On: Chapter 13

glad brian changed his ways or they wouldn't be together for valentine's day. i like that justin knows ben better than mikey does. puts him on an even level with michael and brian.

nice way to make a good memory out of a bad one.

hope the baby gets better soon.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 05:08 AM · On: Chapter 12

liking brian more and more.

great fun chapter.

Reviewer: rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: July 30, 2010 03:04 AM · On: Chapter 12

i love ti

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Anonymous) · Date: July 27, 2010 10:23 AM · On: Chapter 10

I am really enjoying this fic.  Hope it's not the end of it.  Would love to see Brian grow up and put everyone in their place.  Of course, I would love to see Justin humble Brian even more...get him on his knees...you know...

Great job.

Reviewer: vamplair (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2010 05:43 AM · On: Chapter 10

Not too busy, but wonderful! Brian didn't need to hit Ben, but he did have to in order to stake his claim. I'm glad they talked. Long overdue. Can't wait to see the fallout from Michael. He just doesn't get it and never really will. Brian is allowed to have a life that doesn't revolve around him 24/7! Great chapter! Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2010 12:31 AM · On: Chapter 10

i love ti

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2010 11:55 PM · On: Chapter 10

the talk is what was needed. a cleansing. will it help? hope so.

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2010 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 10

Nice ending for the chapter. I'm glad Brian could share something so intimate as his time in Kansas with Justin. Love Ben in this he is great. Look forward to more.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2010 10:23 AM · On: Chapter 9

michael isn't going to win this battle. look at him 30 something and not even living on his own. he acts immature and childish.

brian's relationship with justin is just what they need although i think brian wants more and justin is just playing it cool.

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: July 24, 2010 09:43 AM · On: Chapter 6

Yep, yep....... Another good installment! :)

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: July 24, 2010 08:51 AM · On: Chapter 5

Like! Like! Like! :)

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Anonymous) · Date: July 24, 2010 06:42 AM · On: Chapter 9

Wonderful!!!!  Bravo!!!! You really captured the character's personality.  I love the storyline. 

Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: July 23, 2010 12:39 AM · On: Chapter 9

great chapter.

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 09:59 PM · On: Chapter 9

Michael is so immature! I never liked him when he was whiny-so mostly when ever he was on screeen.  I like the way this story has developed look forward t the next chapter.

Reviewer: siren (Anonymous) · Date: July 22, 2010 08:20 PM · On: Chapter 9

I'm enjoying reading this story, thanks for posting it again. It's fun and I like the concept of Justing not being so Brian-obsessed.

Reviewer: vamplair (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 12:48 PM · On: Chapter 9

Great chapter! I hope Justin sues Hobbs and the school in a civil suit. I never understood why they didn't do that on the show. Justin had all kinds of grounds because of everything that happened during the school year. He would not have had to borrow money from Brian for PIFA and that prick Hobbs would have had to pay through the nose for his homophobic attitude. Cowlip missed out on some really good drama by letting real real life issues go by the wayside and grabbing on to BS issues. Love the growth of the relationship between the boys. Slow and steady wins the race! LOL

Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 9

i love it

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: July 22, 2010 11:03 AM · On: Chapter 4

Really enjoying this story! :)

Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: July 21, 2010 10:50 PM · On: Chapter 8

brian sooo loves justin, great chapter

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 8

Wonderful chapter I love how Brian finally opened up to Justin a little.

Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 10:40 AM · On: Chapter 8

i love it

Reviewer: Alyse_SaFyre (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 09:44 AM · On: Chapter 8

Lovely chapter! =) I like how Justin tried to beat Brian at his own game...but he forgot that Brian invented the game, so it wouldn't work too well when Brian was a little calmer and was thinking a little more clearly...=) lol! Great update! Can't wait for more! Happy Writing dear! =)

<3Alyse

Reviewer: vamplair (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 09:31 AM · On: Chapter 8

Great chapter! Glad Justin came clean. Now maybe they can get on the right track back to each other!

Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 07:01 AM · On: Chapter 7

i love it

Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: July 21, 2010 12:39 AM · On: Chapter 7

good chapter keep up the good work.

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: July 20, 2010 01:53 PM · On: Chapter 3

Well, you surprised me! Blinked and look who showed up, BEN! Wasn't expecting it or he and Justin together. 

Is Ben HIV POS in this story? I hope not since he didn't say anything to Justin about it.

I'll try to read more tomorrow! :)

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: July 20, 2010 01:32 PM · On: Chapter 3

HA! "I stalk Justin...." says Brian! Just read this sentence & had to comment! LOVE it! OK, back to the story! :)

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: July 20, 2010 01:14 PM · On: Chapter 2

Good chapter,  you're doing a great job. This story can go in so many different directions. Looking forward to reading more! Actually, I'm going to sneak in the next chapter before I go to bed!

Thanks for taking the time to share your talent with us! :)

 

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2010 08:21 PM · On: Chapter 6

well it wasn't too bad. daphne taking on jen was perfect. brian actually seeing justin this time even better. going after hobbs for attempted murder is exactly what should have happened in the show.

when brian finds out all that craig and jen put justin through he'll have to be chained to a wall to be kept from going after them.

Reviewer: Alyse_SaFyre (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2010 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 6

Oh...oh wow...this was a very touching chapter....although his right arm is broken, but that will heal a lot better than in the show, he shouldn't have as many problems since there shouldn't be any nerve damage with that..(right?) =) Although Justin's in a coma, I hope it won't last very long and he wont have a lot of problems when he comes out of it...=) Great update! Can't wait for more! Happy Writing! =)

<3Alyse

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: July 19, 2010 02:39 PM · On: Chapter 1

Nice 1st chapter. Sounds like it's going to be interesting. Looking forward to seeing where it's going to go! :)

Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2010 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 6

i love it

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2010 08:00 AM · On: Chapter 5

things are gping good for him. i like that he's not stalking any longer.

the prom? i hope he kicks chris' ass.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2010 07:35 AM · On: Chapter 4

i like this new improved justin. let little mikey start something. just let him try. justin will snap him like a twig.

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2010 04:15 AM · On: Chapter 5

Great story. I like the new independent Justin. Look forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2010 12:34 AM · On: Chapter 4

i love it

Reviewer: Alyse_SaFyre (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2010 01:23 PM · On: Chapter 4

I'm really enjoying this story! I love that Brian was stalking Justin for a change =) I'm glad Justin has more support in Ben, Chase and Daphne this time thought =) Especially like how he stood up to Michael instead of just ignoring him...=) Can't wait for another update! Happy Writing!

<3Alyse

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2010 12:13 PM · On: Chapter 3

chase and ben, good combo. yeah, justin could use an older friend. just hope ben won't stand in the way of brian and justin getting back together. 

friggin' school. chris will get his someday.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2010 05:10 AM · On: Chapter 2

so far he's doing alright for himself. proud of him. now he just has to finish school without his parents interferring.

Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2010 05:09 AM · On: Chapter 2

i love it

Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2010 05:02 AM · On: Chapter 1

i love it

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2010 04:49 AM · On: Chapter 1

he's so brave. and daphne is a doll. she was always there for him.

Reviewer: Sling (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2010 03:52 AM · On: Chapter 2

More please ;) I like it 

Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: July 18, 2010 02:04 AM · On: Chapter 1

nice story waiting to see where it leads

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