Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Ranch Vacation
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2019 02:23 PM · On: Chapter 7

good one

Reviewer: BrianNJustin (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2013 02:57 PM · On: Chapter 7

Nice story!

Reviewer: tonton (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2013 02:14 AM · On: Chapter 7

I really like your writing and want to read more.

Reviewer: feet526@aol.com (Anonymous) · Date: September 13, 2013 05:11 AM · On: Chapter 7

just delightful..........great end! would love more of your stories to read...thanks..............

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2013 05:00 AM · On: Chapter 7

This was definitely a switch to find Brian owning the ranch. Great fic.

Reviewer: jane (Anonymous) · Date: September 08, 2013 03:13 PM · On: Chapter 7

This was just wonderful. Never expected but loved the ending. I'm off to find something else you've written.

Reviewer: MAFITA (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2013 01:35 AM · On: Chapter 7

I loved the story!!!! You almost gave me a heart attack at the end, though, when you said that 4 years had passed I thought that they had separated... Anyway, hope to read you soon in another story!! ^-^ Kisses!

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2013 11:46 AM · On: Chapter 7

I'm so happy to see this fic as the feature story of the month, however, I’m even more excited to see you have answered some reviews, as this means you are still connected to the site and there is a chance you will finish St. James for us. I really like your work and I would love to put you in my favourite author’s list, but I am hoping I might be able to black mail you by saying I will put you there if you finish your fic. LOL Will that work???? Fingers crossed the answer is yes. LOL I really do like your writing style and this fic absolutely deserves the blue ribbon and to be the months feature story. Can I just suggest you might want to add the categories, QAF US and Feature story, as people might miss the wonderful entertainment you are providing. I would recommend everyone should read your other fics. They are great.
Cheers

Author's Response:

Even though the show has been off the air since 2005, I still love it.  I think I'm ready to write again.  I actually have a VERY BAD and incomplete chapter for St. James but every time I open the file, I go completely blank on where I should go with it.  I hope that this boost of support will help get it completed.

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2013 04:54 AM · On: Chapter 7

Really enjoyed your story!  Hope you don't mind the banner addition I made.  It always looks better as Featured Story of the Month with a banner on the home page.;)  Congrats!  *Hugs*  ~Kim



Author's Response:

It's absolutely beautiful!!!!  I LOVE IT!!!!!!  Thank you!!!!!  Thank you!!!!!  Thank you!!!!

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: September 04, 2013 12:50 AM · On: Chapter 7

Ahhhh! Cowboys in love! Yeeeee Hawwww! TAG



Author's Response:

OMG!!!  I had no idea my story was chosen as the September fic of the month.  Thank you for reading!!!  It makes me want to write again.

 

Additional Response: Yes! Please write more! More is always better! TAG

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2013 12:12 AM · On: Chapter 7

very sweet story! I love that Brian was so open and willing to give up his life in the Pitts to keep Justin in his life! Very OOC but very satisfying!

loving life,

Charle

 



Author's Response:

Thank you Charle.  I was very surprised to see that my story was chosen as Fic of the month.  Completely unexpected.



Author's Response:

Thank you Charle.  I was very surprised to see that my story was chosen as Fic of the month.  Completely unexpected.



Author's Response:

Thank you Charle.  I was very surprised to see that my story was chosen as Fic of the month.  Completely unexpected.

Reviewer: Diana (Anonymous) · Date: September 01, 2013 11:07 PM · On: Chapter 7

Very very nice !! ;0))

Thanks for that great story

Author's Response:

Thank you!  I actually wrote it after visiting a dude ranch and falling in love with one of the wranglers.  Unfortunately for me, there wasn't a happy ending.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2013 09:51 AM · On: Chapter 7

YES!  I am so glad that you worked it out this way.  I don't think Justin would have been happy in Pittsburgh, but it is so romantic that Brian gave up Pittsburgh for Justin.  Thank you for a wonderful story.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2013 09:47 AM · On: Chapter 6

What would happen if they fell asleep and everyone came back.  I can't beleive it's the last day at the Ranch, where do you take this story from here?

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2013 09:44 AM · On: Chapter 5

Now that was a twist of fate.  The boss asking Justin to flirt.  Nice to see Cynthia around, maybe she can cover for them.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2013 09:40 AM · On: Chapter 4

You know that's a very good question and I hope the answer is no.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2013 09:35 AM · On: Chapter 3

Yes, yes, yes! <happy dance>

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2013 09:32 AM · On: Chapter 2

Let's hope they don't get caught. 

Reviewer: Tash (Anonymous) · Date: July 21, 2013 09:31 PM · On: Chapter 7

I'm crying right now beautiful ending

Reviewer: Tash (Anonymous) · Date: July 21, 2013 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 2

This was hilarious jake is very funny I love his character 

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2013 09:20 AM · On: Chapter 7

What a surprise and a great ending; cowboy Brian and Justin four years on. I love your fics.

Cheers

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2013 09:17 AM · On: Chapter 6

This is just too sad that they will have to part. I have the tissues ready for the next chapter.

Cheers

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2013 09:05 AM · On: Chapter 2

Justin might not get much action being stuck in the mountains but I think that’s all going to change while Brian is there. Fun times ahead, I can’t wait to read on.

Cheers

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 7

Great twist on the ending!

Here, I'll write your epilogue:

And as the sun sets you begin to hear it.  Night music. The croaking of the bullfrogs, the chirping of the crickets, the steady whine of.....Brrrrriiiiaaaan! 

Oh, thats just Mikey's voice echoing in the wind.

LOL.  Thanks for writing the story!

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 6

Brian called him Baby!  little squee!

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 5

During dinner, Brian and Justin were sitting next to each other and Justin made sure to have his knee firmly placed next to Brian's. Brian wanted to throw Justin on the table and fuck him in front of everyone. Every time Brian would gently push Justin's knee away, Justin would return his knee to its place. In order to stop his dick from reacting to the closeness, Brian began a conversation with Cynthia who was sitting on the other side of him. Brian couldn't wait to punish his blond cowboy.

So much fun watching flirty Justin.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 4

Yum

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 06:35 PM · On: Chapter 3

Im liking this story.  :o)

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 06:32 PM · On: Chapter 2

Pretty Justin is talking to his dick, lol.

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