Reviewer: MieMie (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2020 04:00 AM · On: Commencement
I really and truly wish you'd finish this. Both of the couples are my favorite.
Reviewer: MieMie (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2020 02:24 PM · On: Commencement
Omg I just found this! I so ship these two couples. Update soon please.
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2018 06:11 PM · On: Commencement
Great, thank you
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2015 05:17 PM · On: Commencement
Still waiting for the final chapter, lol.
Reviewer: BRIJUSLuvrr (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2015 04:21 PM · On: Commencement
Plz update sssssssssssssoon luved it!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2015 09:40 PM · On: Commencement
Still waiting to know what Justin drew for Morgan and Reid, and hear their reactions. Also, what, if anything, did Garcia get? Brian hinted that he thought Justin was up to something...
Happy New year. I hope that you have a good one. I also hope you have found yourself a good job you enjoy going to. I'm Canadian, no matter how many days/weeks I take off - as long as I have a doctor's note - no boss can EVER fire me. (Unless it was some sort of contractual thing with x amount of hours required that I agreed to before being hired, which I've never faced or been asked to sign).
I can't believe I still love these two. This is the longest romantic relationship I've ever had, lol. I'm (ironically) not feeling well and just going though my favorites so here I am, again, LOL.
Reviewer: ggfgff vBulletin c ggfgff gg (Anonymous) · Date: November 27, 2013 07:19 PM · On: Commencement
Plz update soon
Reviewer: Amber (Anonymous) · Date: November 10, 2013 12:26 PM · On: Commencement
UPDATE?!!??!?!?!??!?!??!?!??!?!?!?
Reviewer: Jessalyn (Anonymous) · Date: June 18, 2013 02:28 AM · On: New Case
Please, Please update. I love this story abd I would love to see how the team reacts to their coming out.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2012 09:05 AM · On: Commencement
so, c'mon. one more chapter... you just have to write about them getting home and opening their pictures... maybe discribe morgan and reid's as being a bit raunchy and as a pair of them instead of individual portraits. one raunch one work related or something.
still rereading and enjoying this story. :)
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2011 02:13 PM · On: Commencement
Heah Edom, we hope all is ok for you and want to say we miss you here. Know you're loved.
Author's Response:
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2011 03:58 PM · On: Commencement
I still LOVE this story. I just read it again...sometimes when Im anxious about things, re-reading favoirite, not too angsty, fanfic (or playing solitaire on the computer - NOT as much fun!) soothes me. This one left me calm, satisfied and smiling. Not bad at all.
One beef, though. What did Justin draw for the two couples, damn it! I wanna know how they react.
I draw portraits. Maybe I'll draw one of Reid and Morgan and you can 'borrow' it to post with your story, lol.
Author's Response: I'm so happy you like it, and that it has a calming affect on you :) I'm sorry I haven't answered sooner, but I never got my mail telling me I had a new review :(
I promise to write the epilogue to this story, just as soon as I can get it to flow again, it has sadly dried up a little for me with this one.
I would love to see a Morgan/Reid portrait, and I might even put it in the story :D
Reviewer: Sissi Parker (Anonymous) · Date: January 17, 2011 01:30 AM · On: Commencement
I love it. I never would have believe that there is a good crossover between QAF and CM. I love boths shows so much. You got it. Will you give us the epilog for this story? I hope you write the reaction of the CM-Team when they find out about Spender and Derek.
Author's Response: I am SO sorry that I haven't answere this before, but I never got a mail telling me there was a new review :(
I will write the epilogue for this story, I promise, but it's just not flowing like I'd like it to, so it might take a little while, sorry.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 10:08 AM · On: Commencement
Very nice Chapter! I think both the boys in black would be hott. Brian dark and imposing, Justin fair and beautiful. Sigh....lol
Reed and Morgan were smokin hott themselves!
I cant wait to find out about the drawings Justin did for them. I've been waiting since the other agents got theirs. Knowing Justin, it will be something special.
If Brian is asking for a place to stay in three months, can we dare hope that you will either carry on this story or have another one to tell about the art show and visit to Washington?
I really really do hope so. This is one of the best crossovers ever!
Author's Response: Thank you so very much :)
Yeah, our boys in all black would be a sight to see, and just getting Reid in something tight fitting would be something of a miracle ;)
I still have an epilogue to write for this, but then I'm afraid it's done, at least for now, I have learned to never say never when it comes to my muse and her strange ides, we might get back to this 'verse at some point ;)
Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 06:42 AM · On: Commencement
i loveit
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Reviewer: Georgia (Anonymous) · Date: August 15, 2010 07:11 PM · On: Vanquishing ghosts
Gah! I finally got round to watching Criminal Minds to understand this fic and I got obsessed! Except now I'm completely convinced of Reid/Hotch and Morgan/Gracia T_T
It's going to hard to read this fic from now on but I shall prevail, cos it's so good :D
Author's Response: It's very addictive, but I have to admit that I've never gotten why people would put Reid with Hotch, he is too old and too serious. Reid needs someone who can loosen him up a little ;)
Morgan and Garica is good friends and they flirt, but I think they'd kill each other if they ever got together.
Thank you so much. At least there's not all that much left for you to endure ;)
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 03:59 PM · On: Of captures and goodbyes
I never liked that guy at all and he makes the perfect villian. Fianlly I got caught up and can read some of my favorite stories.
Author's Response: I never much liked him either, he was a greasy scumbag.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 03:02 PM · On: Vanquishing ghosts
So now I fully understand who Carl Buford is. You wouldn't happen to know what the name of the episode that you discribed in an earlier chapter is, do you? First, second or what season?
I can tell this is almost over and I am genuinely sad to see it end. I LOVE crossovers. There is so much more to pull from when you have TWO show's cannon. A doubly rich back story already in place.
Please write more soon! Im also hoping you will be VERY detailed. To paraphrase Ted: "Type slowly and pontificate!"
Edom, I also want to say I have read and followed all of the stories you have on Midnight Whispers and I just have to compliment you on the improvement to your writing and the ever growing sophistication of your plots! Are you thinking of writing something original and having it published? Have you already been published? I can definately see it as a career for you. Congratulations on your growing skill.
Michelle
Author's Response: Yeah, Carl Buford is an asshole. I wrote in an earlier comment what the episode is called. It's in the second season.
It is almost over, only a couple chapters left, sorry.
I will, I'll give a lot of details and make sure you are with them every step of the way ;)
Thank you so much, I'm so happy that you think so. I've never written an original story, not sure if I'd have the imagination for all that back story, that's the good part about fanfic, you have that ready made for you :)
Mia
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 02:35 PM · On: Practical application
Oh my. Spencer and Derek...
Im sorry to see the rest of the BAU leave, but thanks for keeping my favs!
I hope another trip to Babylon is in the future. Not just for the men to get all hot and sweaty :o) but, also to maybe see Garcia's reaction to all the hot men. We didn't really get her take on what she saw on all those surveillance cameras, lol.
What about Daphne? Shouldn't she be giving Garcia advice now that she graduated from Baby Girl to Fag Hag?
Author's Response: I know, they are so hot and so hot for each other :)
Oh, they are going back to Babylon, fear not.
I can do you one better and let Deb educate Garcia. She is the ultimate fag hag after all ;)
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 02:10 PM · On: Of captures and goodbyes
I'd forgotten about him! Good one!
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 01:00 PM · On: Show time
Michael, the ass - not ment as a complement, lol. If a whole team of profilers were to testifly to him personally the legitamacy of Brian and Justin's relationship, he'd still not believe it.
Maybe if raw sex between monagamous couples were aloud in the backroom?
Spencer sounds like Justin sexed him up for the evening. With everything so tight I hope he doesn't look too too skinny. :o( I know the actor was a runway model for top designers, so I know he has to be hot. I imagine him in a more loose fitting shirt and his hair blown out and loose. He is a sweetie!
Wonder if the Brian and Justin show will risk the whole survellance operation when Garcia sees them on camera, and hopefully sees Spenser and Derek follow their lead!
Author's Response: Michael is an ass, I really don't like him all that much.
Justin did, and I think he only looks to be too skinny because he tries to hide.
Garcia can squeel with the best of them, but she is also a professional and knows when to keep her eye on the ball, so to speak :)
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 12:20 PM · On: A lucky break
Im curious. While I understand the concept that the killer is going after B/J's previous tricks in the order they had 'done' them, how could the killer be sure where to find said trick - and how could anyone be sure that the killer begain his stalking at Babylon. I really need to see how this plays out!
It is hilarious picturing Hotch in the Diner and seeing him "picking up" a trick and taking him into the bathroom! Too funny!
Author's Response: I think it's a matter of being at Babylon because that's where they go to pick up men, both the killer, B/J and their tricks. I think the killer is a little more than lucky and I have to admit that I haven't thougth too much about that *blushes*
I know, that thought cracked me up too :D
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 12:06 PM · On: Justin's advice
Justin is just so sweet.
Author's Response: He is, isn't he? :)
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 11:47 AM · On: One on one advice
I love Brian. He may be monogamous, but he will always be bad ass. Yet, at no tiime in canon does he ever EVER shirk on making sure anyone having gay sex is safe when they play. The safe sex lecture is my fave, especially since the show and the fandom usually play up Justin's public service announcement comments, yet just let Brian be Brian with no comment - except a barely perceptible AWWWWWW when he shows he cares. LOL
Also, the portrait above the sofa sounds amazing. I can so picture it in my mind - and I want a copy.
Author's Response: I love Brian too, he is such a nice guy without anybody knowing it ;)
He want's AIDS and HIV eliminated, and the best way to do that is to make sure it doesn't spread. At least until they find a cure.
I want a copy of that painting too, plus the ones in the den :D
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 11:26 AM · On: Preparations
I like all the banter. The show can only allow a certain amt of personal banter - the stuff that reveals personality and makes us love each character for particular traits they show. Im really loving your take on the characters.
Author's Response: Thank you so much :D
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 09:25 AM · On: Can FBI agents dance?
Brian, giving dance lessons? HA!
Ried and Morgan watching the Brian and Justin show in a private room? This aught to be good~
Author's Response: I know, but he can do the bump and grind of Babylon with Justin better than anybody in the world ;)
I wouldn't mind getting a little of that myself :D
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 02:44 AM · On: The e-mail
Yay. Garcia is coming!
Author's Response: Indeed she is :D
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 05:18 PM · On: Cody and Hobbs
Good last line. I just have to go to bed and get some sleep so I find this a lovely little cliff-hanger.
Wish Hobbs was taken out and had a confession beaten out of him. I dont care what he confesses, I just want him beaten.
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Yeah, Chris Hobbs deserves all the pain in the world, but that's not why they are here, not this time anyway ;)
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 05:07 PM · On: The Sap, Vance and Craig
I love that the BAU are all so protective of Brian and Justin.
Author's Response: They are very protective by nature, that's why they have the jobs that they do, but they have gotten to know our boys a little and like them, which makes the protectiveness more pronounced :)
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 04:56 PM · On: The Kinneys
Ooooh. Interesting take on Peter.
Author's Response: Thank you, I thought it'd be so ironic if one of Claire's kids turned out to be gay, and since I realy don't like John, Peter it was :)
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 04:27 PM · On: Discoveries and Revalations
“You, Brian Kinney, are going to play matchmaker for two closeted FBI agents? What has the world come to?”
Indeed. But who else could, by example, do it better?
Author's Response: I know, right? He is perfect for the job :D
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 03:50 PM · On: Enemy list completed
Well now, that was intense. I wonder what the fall out will be when Brian and Justin have some private time together.
Author's Response: Thanks. Oh, the fallout won't be too bad ;)
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 03:35 PM · On: Enemy list part 2
I love how Brian is learning all the secrets Justin hid from him - I'd never be able to be so unselfishly altrusic as Justin and keep my efforts to protect Brian secret. One of the amazing facets of Sunshine that make him who he is.
Author's Response: Yeah, they are both like that actually, both trying so hard to protect each other and keeping it secret.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 03:06 PM · On: Brian comes home
A lot revealed in that chapter. (Well done, all that information and it doesn't feel at all narrative). Everytime the a plot mentions Justin's time away in new york my heart aches. I have separation anxiety for them!
Author's Response: Thank you so much :)
I know, I do too, I hate that CowLip thought it was necessary to send him to New York so I always try to get him home in my stories; or get Brian there :)
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 02:50 PM · On: Introducing Garcia
LOL, okay I love Vivian already. I cant wait to see how she and Brian interact. I like how you have included Garcia via webcam. She is da bomb!
Author's Response: I had fun creating her, she is the comic relief at the moment. Garcia is the best!
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 02:34 PM · On: Carl needs help
Vivien? Master Justin? Mean streak? Hmmmm...
Author's Response: Yeah, she knows how he hates to be called that ;)
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 02:28 PM · On: New Case
Ooooh, this is good so far. Im a realatively new fan of Criminal Minds the tv show. Due to a medical leave of absence from work I've been watching reruns of the show for the last month and must have seen twenty or so episodes. I love Reid best, closly followed by Garcia. Im not really sure how to rank the rest, but I have to say I sorely miss Mandy Patinkin's character - he's a great actor, singer, all 'round performer.
Im looking forward to how you will pair up Morgan and Ried as lovers. I cant see it, but then again, that is why I am the reader and you the writier, lol.
Author's Response: Thank you so much.
I love Criminal Minds and have seen all the episodes at least 4 times :)
Oh, Morgan and Reid are my OTP in that show, they are so very good together; they compliment each other wonderfully :)
Reviewer: Jessikaa (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 10:10 PM · On: Vanquishing ghosts
I soooooooooooo want to know the thing in your wicked brain that will be in your next chapter!! I loooooooooooooooove your story very much.... Derek/Reid is not something that I had think about before but I find it truly cute! =D
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I know that my brain is a little twisted, and I'm sooooo not appologizing for it ;)
I'm glad you can see it; I think they are so very sweet together.
Reviewer: vamplair (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2010 10:40 AM · On: Vanquishing ghosts
Great chapter! Thanks for letting Spencer and Derek discover each other slowly. That is much more realistic considering Derek's past with Buford. He needs to know that he is truly attracted to men without any residual effects from that pervert. I love this story!
Ro
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Yeah, with Morgan's history, slowly is the only way to go :)
Reviewer: rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: July 31, 2010 04:23 AM · On: Vanquishing ghosts
i love it
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Reviewer: dzmom (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2010 05:00 AM · On: Practical application
I've been putting off reading this one, and I'm so happy that I finally read it. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it then :)
Next chapter very soon.
Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2010 10:19 PM · On: Practical application
lol i love it
Author's Response: Thank you :D
Reviewer: Alyse_SaFyre (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2010 08:07 PM · On: Practical application
Lol! I loved this chapter! It had some serious parts mixed in with the funny (and sometimes hilarious) parts! Awesome! I can't wait for the next update! Hope it's soon! =) Happy Writing!
<3Alyse
Author's Response: I'm so very glad you liked this :)
That's life for you, some serious and some funny parts ;)
Thanks, next chapter soon.
Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2010 04:52 AM · On: Of captures and goodbyes
i loveit
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2010 10:50 PM · On: Show time
i love it
Author's Response: I'm glad :)
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2010 07:18 PM · On: Show time
Morgan und Brian hatte sich Garcia auf ihrem Weg zurück zur Britin Freitag abgeholt, und als sie kamen beide Morgan und Garcia wollte wissen, was Justin und Reid gekauft hatte, aber Justin weigerte, ihnen zu sagen, sagte, es sollte eine Überraschung werden und Reid folgte seinem Beispiel.
That is your first sentence in the chapter in German.
I had two years of Deutsch in college. The grammar isn't right but it's readable.
:)
Do you see the new tool bar at the bottom of the page with Instant Message, Chat Room, Comments, Translate, and Poll? Do you like it, hate it? Let me know.
Thank you edom for not taking it personal I messed up with the names too.
Author's Response:
I see it, and I'm not sure what to think, for now it's a little distracting, maybe when I get used to it?
That's ok, these things happen ;)
Click on the >> symbol at the far right of the bar to make it go away. You can click to bring it back too.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2010 06:52 PM · On: Show time
Great chapter edom (not Grammy!); thank you for posting it so quickly. I love how you showed Michael this time.
The chapter looks good in German too.
Author's Response:
I'm quite sure you posted this comment to the wrong story ;)
I'm reading two stories at once and called you Grammy. I'm soooo sorry!
I've been up all night and I'm a mess right now.~bob
Reviewer: Alyse_SaFyre (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2010 06:35 PM · On: Show time
Michael just can't seem to help being a little shit can he?
Yay for Updates! I've been seeing them one right after another! Fabulous! Thanks so much for updating this great story so quickly the last few days! =) Can't wait for more! Happy Writing!
<3Alyse
Author's Response: He really just can't help himself, it's in his genes ;)
I've been on two weeks vacation to Italy; I had a lot of time to write in the car to and from there :D
Thank you!
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2010 06:21 PM · On: Show time
Oh interesting times for Michael he is learning some home truths and they are chipping away at the clay pedestal he has Brian on. About time I say lol.
I think Brian and Justin are going to learn as much from Morgan and Spencer as they will from them lol great fic thank you
Author's Response: Michael is indeed learning something, and it might even stick ;)
Brian and Justin just might learn a thing or two, who knows :D
Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: July 15, 2010 11:41 PM · On: A lucky break
Am so happy to see this story back! Still loving it, and can't wait to see what happens Saturday night!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Next chapter tomorrow :D
Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2010 09:49 PM · On: A lucky break
i love it
Author's Response: I'm glad :D
Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2010 03:30 AM · On: Justin's advice
i love it
Author's Response: I'm glad :D
Reviewer: cherub68 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2010 09:15 PM · On: Justin's advice
Thrilled to see a new chapter, and hear there is more coming. Lets hope Reids' nerves don't get the better of him.
Author's Response: Thank yoo so much.
Don't worry, Morgan and Reid is going to take it slow enough for both of them to get used to the idea ;)
More tomorrow.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2010 05:01 PM · On: Justin's advice
I do believe you are rising to the encounter of Morgan and Reed.
Author's Response: I do believe you might be right ;)
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2010 04:51 PM · On: One on one advice
I've been so busy I missed your posting of this chapter. Will Morgan and Spencer get together? Should I create a Morgan/Spencer category? It would be nice if others published those stories here too.
Author's Response:
Wow, I posted that a while back ;)
Yeah, they'll get together, and I have more Morgan/Reid stories I could post here :)
The Morgan/Reed category will now be born~!
I'll do a Criminal Minds too.
Reviewer: Snowblow (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2010 12:37 AM · On: New Case
Please don't keep us in suspense any longer!!!
:-)
Author's Response: Heh, I just got home from two weeks in Italy and brought home 6 chapters. They are with my beta at the moment ;)
Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2010 09:37 AM · On: One on one advice
i love it
Author's Response: I'm glad :)
Reviewer: jessalyn_crutcher (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2010 09:21 PM · On: One on one advice
OMFG!!!
i freaking love this story. morgan and reid are both very attractive people and make a great couple. please hurry adn write mmore.
Author's Response: LOL, thank you so much :)
I'll try to write a little faster.
Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 07:34 AM · On: New Case
i love it
Author's Response: I'm glad :D
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 05:20 AM · On: Preparations
reid in club clothes, hard to picture lol.
reid and morgan, partners. shouldn't be too hard to remember.
shame they didn't want to conserve water. i'm glad the ice has been broken.
Author's Response: Oh, I don't know, I think he'd look hot in club clothes ;)
Exactly, that should be something they'd both be able to remember, and thus not put their feet in their mouths :)
I know, but they'll get there, sooner or later, don't worry :D
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 04:16 AM · On: Preparations
I see this is winding up to something. You know chapters can have over 5,000 words
:)
Author's Response: I know, but there was a natural place to make a stop, and I didn't want to keep you all waiting any longer :)
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2010 09:35 AM · On: Dance lessons can lead to so much more
Loved this chapter. You may have started a new gay fandom for Morgan and Reid. Love to see how this plays OUT!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked this, but the M/R fandom is alive and kicking both on LJ and fanfic.net ;)
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2010 12:13 AM · On: Dance lessons can lead to so much more
hot chapter with no sex. never thought it possible.
do they really think they can wait till the case is solved before being together? ha, they haven't been to babylon yet.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you thought so :D
I know, but something might help them keep that promise ;)
Reviewer: cherub68 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 02:21 AM · On: Dance lessons can lead to so much more
Yah, go boys! What a huge leap can't wait to see them in action at Babylon.
Author's Response: Thank you so much.
I hope it wasn't too huge a leap.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: April 26, 2010 03:09 AM · On: Can FBI agents dance?
Ok please tell me when the go shopping they meet or bump int Em. I so want to hear about Reid's blushes around em. lol not that im dictating ur story .. so addicted to this story its on my favorite list and i come on everyday to see if you wrote a new chapter
Author's Response: Heh, not letting anybody dictate my story ;)
They aren't going to meet any of the guys until Babylon, wouldn't want to spoil the fun.
Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2010 02:09 AM · On: Can FBI agents dance?
Oh this should be FUN!!! :D
Can't wait for the boys to hit Babylon!
Author's Response: I think it's going to be fun too :)
Reviewer: shimayo (Anonymous) · Date: April 25, 2010 08:50 PM · On: Can FBI agents dance?
Well, can't wait for next!
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2010 02:00 PM · On: Can FBI agents dance?
Fun chapter; thank you for posting it.
Author's Response: Thank you and you are welcome :)
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2010 06:06 AM · On: Can FBI agents dance?
well that's one way to get them together. on the dance floor of babylon. if nothing happens there, then nothing ever will.
garcia, bau's resident fag hag. those boys will be so lucky.
Author's Response: I know, Babylon's dance floor is magical like that ;) I think dancing in the media room at Britin might help too :D
Oh, Garcia is the ultimate faghag, she so loves her babies!
Reviewer: Alyse_SaFyre (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2010 03:31 AM · On: Can FBI agents dance?
Lmao, Garcia is such a faghag! haha! Can't wait to see what happens with the dance lessons and the shopping, and later the Babylon stakeout. =)
Sooooo happy you finally updated! lol, been waiting forever! Totally love this story and the crossover plot! =) Happy Writing!
<3Alyse
Author's Response: Yeah, I can totally see Garcia as the ultimate faghag :)
THe next chapter will probably be at least the dance lessons, I have no idea what more will get in there, I'm thinking about putting in some porn too ;)
I'm so glad you liked this chapter and I'll try not to take so long with the next one.
Reviewer: rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: April 25, 2010 01:13 AM · On: Can FBI agents dance?
i love it
Author's Response: I'm glad :)
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 09:19 AM · On: The e-mail
what about a servailence tape from the cafe? i have a feeling, but will keep it to myself.
brian and justin just got threatened and the agents let them go out on their own?
Author's Response: Sorry, the café is only under survailance during closing hours ;)
He did say he had to be done with his list first, so there isn't any emidiate danger to them.
Reviewer: snow (Anonymous) · Date: April 06, 2010 08:23 AM · On: The e-mail
hmm... could it have been the kid working at the internet cafe?
Author's Response: I'm so not telling you anything :D
Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 06:15 AM · On: The e-mail
uh oh... hope nothing happens to Justin on his way to get Garcia :
VERY curios to see who the unsub is... since the usual suspects have been ruled out...
Vivian's observation about Reid & Morgan was hilarious :)
Author's Response: He does have Brian with him, he's not going alone, and we know how protective Brian is :)
I'm glad it's still a mystery, otherwise it would be a little dull ;)
I'm so glad you thought so, thank you!
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 03:38 AM · On: The e-mail
Interesting turn in the plot. Will someone be with Brian and Justin now for protection?
Author's Response: Not at the moment, they are going to the airport alone, but it might get to that ;)
Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: April 06, 2010 03:14 AM · On: The e-mail
I was so excited to see an update! Looking forward anxiously to the next one already!
Author's Response: Thank you so much :)
Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: April 05, 2010 11:27 PM · On: The e-mail
i love it
Author's Response: I'm glad :) Thank you!
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 11:09 PM · On: Cody and Hobbs
oh man i loved how they treated hobbs. let his co-workers wonder. he's a big man who could stand any teasing they may offer.
emails from the killer. should be able to trace the address from where they came from. they did forget to check out michael and ben. think it's time to start looking into the family. just about everyone has a reason to dislike either brian, justin or both.
Author's Response: They had to leave Hobbs with a little something, even if he's not the killer, he's still an asshole ;)
Yeah, but it's not going to be as easy as all that, you know better ;)
The family has an aliby for one of the killings, they were at Deb and Carl's for dinner, remember?
Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: March 27, 2010 10:28 PM · On: Cody and Hobbs
Oh i love your story. I can't wait to see happen nexts.
Author's Response: I'm so glad, thank you so much.
Reviewer: snow (Anonymous) · Date: March 27, 2010 07:47 PM · On: Cody and Hobbs
You leave us with THAT?!?! No!!! More, more!
Author's Response: I do, I'm so very evil :)
There willl be more, soon I hope.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 04:28 PM · On: Cody and Hobbs
The plot thickens with intense cliffe new information withheld. Evil writer you are to place this suspense before us. You are hereby on fan fiction probation until this damn cliff hanger ends! :) How's the wrist doing? For the record nice chapter.
Can you at least tell us if the guy is a known QAF character doing the murders?
Author's Response: The plot definitely thickens, and I'm not telling you a thing, so there!
The wrist is doing better, thanks.
Like I said, I'm not telling you anything about the killer.
The cliffhanger will be solved in the next chapter, I promise :D
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 04:17 PM · On: Cody and Hobbs
Yippee! I'm your 100th reviewer! That qualifies me for a steak dinner at your expense. :) Now I'll read the chapter after this flimsy excuse to give you a hit.
Author's Response: LOL, really? I didn't know that rule ;)
Go forth and read :D
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2010 02:57 PM · On: The Sap, Vance and Craig
So sorry to hear about your wrist. I take back all gay threats to your female parts. :)
We can wait for you to get well; love you!
Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much. I'm still writing, it's just slow going :)
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 11:09 PM · On: The Sap, Vance and Craig
If you don't give us a chapter within five days Mia, I'll slap your tits girl. :)
Author's Response: Hey, that's not fair. I have tenosynovitis in my right wrist, it's hard to write *pouts*
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 01:33 PM · On: The Sap, Vance and Craig
Loved how they embarrassed Craig in his store! Didn't think he would have anything to do with the murders, he hasn't been interested in any aspect of Justin's life in years.
Is Brian going to find out that his nephew Peter is gay? Serves Clair right! She'd have three cows if she ever found out!
So far all the jerks they've spoken to have alibis. I hope something comes up soon.
Author's Response: I couldn't let the chance to embarras Craig get away; it was way too tempting :)
Yes, he is, don't worry.
Not all of them; Morgan and Reid still has to talk to Cody Bell and Chris Hobbs :)
Reviewer: Yaz (Anonymous) · Date: March 16, 2010 10:15 AM · On: The Sap, Vance and Craig
Wow, i love what you've done so far. Bringing two of my fave tv shows together :). I love the fact that i can read this after busy and tough night at work it brings a smile to my face. :). Can't wait for more x :) x
Author's Response: Thank you so much, they are my favorite shows too, but you could probably guess that ;)
So happy to help :D
Reviewer: scrub13 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 04:23 AM · On: The Sap, Vance and Craig
More great chapters detailing the fates and demons of those with axes to grind against Brian and Justin. Keep writing!
My only complaint is that I really doubt the FBI would volunteer info about the case to potential suspects. Telling anyone outside the investigation that Brian and Justin were the targets would tip off anyone involved, even as just an accessory. Or anyone of the cleared suspects could and would spread the info on Liberty Avenue that Brian and Justin were targets or part of the murders themselves. The FBI publically tied Justin and Brian to the murders, not so smart in my opinion.
Author's Response: Hmm, never thought of that, I just wanted a reason for the FBI to investigate the people they were talking to.
Thanks.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 03:37 AM · On: The Sap, Vance and Craig
oh that was fun. don't know which i liked better, hotch and jj's reaction to kiki or them at taylor electronics. both were great.
Author's Response: The Kiki thing just came to me as I was writing, I can just imagine their faces :D
Thank you so much.
Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: March 16, 2010 02:06 AM · On: The Sap, Vance and Craig
Another good one! I'm looking forward to Michael's introduction to the agents. Surely you have something bad to say about my favorite character to hate! Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Oh, fear not, Michael is not going to take it well, even if he will only meet a few of them at first ;)
Thank you so much!
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 12:27 AM · On: The Sap, Vance and Craig
The plot thickens as the suspect list grows dim....
Author's Response: Indeed it does :)
Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: March 16, 2010 12:10 AM · On: The Sap, Vance and Craig
i love it
Author's Response: I'm glad :)
Reviewer: Alyse_SaFyre (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 11:28 PM · On: The Sap, Vance and Craig
Haha! Loved it. Good on them for shaking up Craig's business a little! =)
Can't wait to see how Brian reacts to his nephew, Peter's, revelation to Prentiss&Rossi...=)
Hopefully Hobb's or Bell's alibi's don't pan out....or maybe they find out it could be Brandon the Bet Guy....hmm...we'll see I suppose..=)
Still completely loving this story, Hope we get more updates soon...Happy Writing! =)
<3Alyse
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked this chapter. I thought Craig deserved to have his little safe world shaken up a little ;)
I'm so not telling you anything about the killer, sorry :D
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2010 11:13 PM · On: The Kinneys
yeah for peter. the only one in brian's family that is willing to stand up for him. if brian only knew.
joan,claire, and john. not worth the time prentiss and rossi spent on them.
another great chapter.
Author's Response: Peter is a good guy, and he really thinks his mother and brother are wrong :)
No, they turned out really not to be.
Thank you so much.
Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: March 14, 2010 12:03 PM · On: The Kinneys
i love it
Author's Response: I'm glad :D
Reviewer: snow (Anonymous) · Date: March 14, 2010 07:30 AM · On: The Kinneys
nice chapter! I love how you really got into all the characters so well. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I really appreciate that :D
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2010 06:53 AM · On: The Kinneys
Michael did it. Can we bash Michael? Pleassse? :)
Author's Response: LOL, sorry, you are not allowed to bach Michael, I need him a little later in the story, and no, I'm not going to tell you for what!
Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: March 14, 2010 06:24 AM · On: The Kinneys
Aww! I always thought Peter had potential... Can't wait for him to reacquaint himself with his uncles. This was good. Keep writing, because it makes me really happy everytime I see an update! And don't let nonconstructive criticism bring you down either. People who think porn and plot can't coexist obviously have never read one of the millions of wildly successful "novels of romantic suspense," sold in every book selling establishment in the world. I'm intrigued that you gave some of the most obvious suspects from canon (Jim Stockwell, Ethan Gold) alibis right off the bat. Anyway, love this story! Can't wait for development of both the murder investigation, Morgan/Reid, and Peter/B,J.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. The Peter story line actually came to me last night when I was trying to get to sleep :)
I'm not letting it get me down, I was more amused than sad or upset really, wondering what someone with those ideas was doing in the QAF fandom in the first place :D
Oh, but I have to keep you all on your toes, can't have you guessing who the killer is too soon ;)
Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: March 08, 2010 05:16 AM · On: Discoveries and Revalations
I love it
Author's Response: I'm glad :D
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2010 11:20 PM · On: Discoveries and Revalations
well if the scene that morgan and reid witnessed didn't plant a seed then our guys must be doing something wrong. we know that would never happen so lets see the other's relationship grow.
that was so hot. always is when brian's on the receiving end.
Author's Response: Oh, there are seeds alright, plenty of them :D
Toppy!Justin is always hot, that's true.
Reviewer: gert (Anonymous) · Date: March 07, 2010 08:18 PM · On: New Case
Great chapter! That is a unique matchmaking technique. Loved the porn. I'm so looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you.
OH, that wasn't entirely in purpose :)
Reviewer: Elli (Anonymous) · Date: March 07, 2010 06:37 PM · On: New Case
I don't know Criminal Minds, but I love this story. Besides the porn I love the reaction of the new group.
Author's Response: So glad you don't have to know one of the shows to enjoy this story, thank you so much :)
Reviewer: cherub68 (Anonymous) · Date: March 07, 2010 06:03 PM · On: Discoveries and Revalations
Wow our paitence was rewarded with beautiful porn. Thank you!
A new take on matchmaking whether planned or not.
Author's Response: Even if you didn't actually have to be patient for very long ;D
Yeah, Morgan and Reid got something to think about here :)
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: March 07, 2010 10:06 AM · On: Thoughts and conversations
Great chapter .. can not wait to see if you write Emmett in.. he would be great help in the matchmaking i think
Author's Response: Everybdoy will be written in, but I'm afraid B/J are alone in their matchmaking scemes ;)
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: March 06, 2010 09:28 PM · On: Thoughts and conversations
Ok so in love with this story .. but now i remember why i only read completed fic's it is way to hard to wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: I'm glad you like the story.
Chapter 10 is with my beta and 11 is open on my desktop, waiting for me to write more than the 569 words I've written on it so far ;)
Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: March 05, 2010 07:42 AM · On: Thoughts and conversations
Yay Porn!!! Consider yourself undisturbed.
Author's Response: Thank you :D
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 04:45 AM · On: Thoughts and conversations
Love it! Brian and Justin planning to play match makers...this should be fun. Can't wait until the interviews start.
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it.
Oh, they are going to have fun :)
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 04:31 AM · On: Thoughts and conversations
now if the profilers were alert thyen they would beem right in on michael after justin told them about the mural. but now i'm thinking zen ben may not be so zenful. there is only so much that he can take of michael's hero worship of brian.
the matchmaking taylor-kinneys are adorable. can't wait to see where the porn will take place. maybe two showers will be getting used instead of one.
Author's Response: See, I'm still not telling who the killer is ;)
The porn will be inspirational, but not right away; the seed has to have time to grow.
Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: March 05, 2010 03:12 AM · On: Thoughts and conversations
I love it
Author's Response: I'm glad, thank you.
Reviewer: Cherub68 (Anonymous) · Date: March 05, 2010 03:11 AM · On: Thoughts and conversations
"I have discovered the joys of relationships; I just want to spread the wealth a little" this did give me a little giggle, you could see the little lip roll and fluttering eyelashes as he says it.
This is brilliant and I shall try and wait patiently for the porn!!!!! Ok that didn't work off to reread M&M.....
Author's Response: Yeah, I could kinda see him way that too :D
Thank you so much. I will try to hurry up the porn a little, but not too much, wouldn't want to do a horrible job of it ;)
Patient, aren't you ;D
Reviewer: gert (Anonymous) · Date: March 05, 2010 02:01 AM · On: Thoughts and conversations
I just found this. I love it!! Great job! Now, go back to writing porn...it's a very important job.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like this,, now that you have found it :D
I agree, porn is very important ;)
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 02:00 AM · On: Thoughts and conversations
I had to laugh at your Chapter End Notes:. Morgan and Reid; I didn't see that pair coming but it's very interesting, Reid's a bottom for sure and will be very bossy at it.
Author's Response: I'm glad you laughed, that was the point ;)
Really? Look at the banner ;)
I'm afraid it's just plain old B/J porn for now, M/R are not ready yet.
Reviewer: scrub13 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 06:24 AM · On: Enemy list completed
I've never watched the show Criminal Minds, but I'm loving this story so far. Always loved cross-overs(One of my favs was a QAF/House crossover). But the idea of someone looking to torture and seek revenge on Brian and Justrin is wonderful. I can't help but wonder if the true villian might not be someone we aren't expecting and a bit closer to home. Knowing who Brian and Justin take home would require very intimate knowledge of their haunts. Especially to get it right down to the order.
Or maybe I'm just overthinking the story because I'm enjoying it so much.
Author's Response: It's an amazing show, and the actors are so wonderful, all of them.
Over thinking things is natural, I think ;)
Thank you so much.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 03:23 PM · On: Enemy list completed
What a list! Bringing up all those bad memories connected with thos ass-holes had to be so difficult for Brian and Justin.
Author's Response: It is quite an impressive list of enemies they have between them.
It was very difficult, they need some time for themselves soon ;)
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 03:08 PM · On: Enemy list part 2
I was always so curious to know if Brian had ever found out why Kip dropped the charges. Seeing his reaction would have been priceless.
Author's Response: Me too, the way he looked when Justin said it was a mystery had me believe that he might know something, but who knows.
Reviewer: Alyse_SaFyre (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 09:56 AM · On: Enemy list completed
Yay! Awesome chapter! Loved that they got through the Chris/Cody incendent with not much drama..=) Absolutely love this story, there aren't many people that can actually pull off a crossover with QAF and actually make it realistic to the canon of both QAF and the show/movie/book that is used for the crossover...=)
Another fabulous job! Can't wait for the next update! Happy Writing! =)
<3Alyse
Author's Response: Thank you so much, that's a wonderful compliment :)
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 07:57 AM · On: Enemy list completed
Just curious about the title of this chapter.
Ememy lins completed ???
Author's Response: Ooops, I'll correct it right away.
Reviewer: Jane (Anonymous) · Date: March 03, 2010 07:22 AM · On: Enemy list part 2
Finally Brian knows about Justin & Kip Thomas - wonderful.
I'm truly enjoying the story - keep them coming... (ha ha)
Author's Response: Yeah, finally :)
Thank you so much.
Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: March 03, 2010 06:42 AM · On: Enemy list completed
I love it
Author's Response: I'm glad :)
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 05:40 AM · On: Enemy list completed
what a list of possible suspects. whew! i guess the fun begins with the questioning. ok, i'm ready.
Author's Response: He, we have a few other things to get through before the questions, like a little porn, I hope that's ok ;)
Reviewer: saroco61 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 03:35 AM · On: Enemy list completed
You know. I'm really loving this story.
Yoli
Author's Response: I'm glad :)
Thank you so much.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 03:23 AM · On: Enemy list completed
Good development chapter; thanks for the update.
Author's Response: Thank you, and you are very welcome :)
Reviewer: Alyse_SaFyre (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 11:08 AM · On: Enemy list part 2
:squee!!: lol! Love this story, wonder how they will take the cody bell/pink posse-gun in hobb's mouth thing...=)
Another Fab chapter! Hope we get another(lot of) update(s) soon! Happy Writing! =)
<3Alyse
Author's Response: I am so happy you liked this.
More later today >)
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 04:08 AM · On: Enemy list part 2
ske;etons galore yet still devoted.
"JJ and Prentiss looked like they were about to coo over the nickname," better get used to hearing it. it really is the only name brian calls him by unless he's mad or introducing him to someone.
Author's Response: Oh, the skeletons are not all out of the closet yet, I'm afraid :)
Yeah, they are going to hear it a lot over the next days, especially if they ever meet Debbie ;D
Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: March 02, 2010 02:58 AM · On: Enemy list part 2
I love updates to this story. This is going well. I'm really curious to know where you're going to take this.
Author's Response: I'm so happy you like this :D
Yeah, you and everybody else ;) but I'm not telling ;D
Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: March 02, 2010 01:37 AM · On: Enemy list part 2
I had to catch up the last 4 chapters... great story. :-)) rose
Author's Response: Thank you so much, glad you caught up :)
Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: March 02, 2010 12:27 AM · On: Enemy list part 2
I love it
Author's Response: I'm glad :)
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