Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2019 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 26

Loved it

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2019 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 21

fucking Lindsey only acted because she does not want Justin to remove his paintings.  I hate that women, even in the TV show I never liked her

 

I am glad for Aeden and Gus

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2019 06:27 PM · On: Chapter 19

Fucking Lindsey, never liked her.  Brian should slapped her and Justin move all his paintings out of her gallery

Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2016 01:07 AM · On: Chapter 26

This is a wonderful story. I love the new people and new loves that have enriched Brian and Justin's extended family. I can't wait to begin the next story in this universe:-)

Reviewer: Blossomlegs (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2015 12:55 AM · On: Chapter 26

I'm a late reader on many QAF fics, Love Brain and Justin. Have so loved this Karma series you wrote,what amazing talent you have. Thanks for sharing!



Author's Response:

I was peasantly surprised to find this review in my inbox yesterday. Thank you for letting me know how much you enjoyed the story! I haven't written fanfic in a long time, but it's how I got my start as a published author, and I'm always thrilled to hear back from the QAF fandom.  

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 08:31 PM · On: Chapter 26

Wonderful wedding Michele. I think I saw one more story in this series.



Author's Response:

Thank you, JT.  I'm thrilled that you are enjoying this series.  Forgive me if I'm getting to your comments slowly, but I'm in the middle of editing a new novel, and my time is limited.  I really do appreciate every little note you've sent me.  It's been great reliving this story through your eyes.  

All my best!

Mickie

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 25

Triple wedding?

Brian fooling Yury was priceless!

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 07:56 PM · On: Chapter 24

Those girls are amazing; plotting years in advance.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 07:35 PM · On: Chapter 23

Gotta love that blond boy to death. Great chapter.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 07:18 PM · On: Chapter 22

LMAO! Somebody is going to ballet school in New York.  :)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 21

Damn; a stoning to the death would have been so much fun. :O

I'm very happy for Gus though.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 06:39 PM · On: Chapter 20

I'm very happy for Gus. I'm digging a hole for Lindsay and getting the family to gather the stones; big ones too.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 06:12 PM · On: Chapter 19

I hope Lindsay is destroyed before this is over.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 18

I'm choking the living shit out of Lindsay right now.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 05:30 PM · On: Chapter 17

Damn, I hoped Gus has more courage; he's going to lose his man. I hope a woman doesn't excite him at all.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 05:13 PM · On: Chapter 16

I'm ready to kill Lindsay; and Austin better watch it.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 15

I could slap Daphne right now. I hope B and J slam her good.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 04:26 PM · On: Chapter 14

What the hell is Lindsay up to and will Brian kill her for it?

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 04:13 PM · On: Chapter 13

LMAO! Lindsay is so messed up; Melanie too. JR is more accepting and blunt. I see Gus's virginity near ending.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 03:56 PM · On: Chapter 12

You go Gus baby! Bottoms up  :P

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 03:35 PM · On: Chapter 11

That went well; blond says so little.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 03:16 PM · On: Chapter 10

I've heard that Spain is wild too.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 02:56 PM · On: Chapter 9

The good doctor will cure the patient in due time.  :P

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 8

OMG!!! Will Blake spill the beans?

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 02:04 PM · On: Chapter 7

I see New York will happen; Gus will fall in love and be a bottom; Brian will think the doctor isn't good enough for his son. Sorina will be a ballet star and fall in love with her male partner on stage in the future. Am I close? I'll have to read and find out.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 12:56 PM · On: Chapter 4

I can't wait to find out what Gus is up to.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 12:32 PM · On: Chapter 3

I can almost see the future plot unfolding now.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 12:04 PM · On: Chapter 2

Poor Gus; I figured someone at Babylon would know him and it would get back to Brian and Justin. Holy crap.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 11:00 AM · On: Chapter 1

I like the advance of the timeline. Reading on...

Reviewer: lougenessis (Anonymous) · Date: May 31, 2009 11:23 AM · On: Chapter 26

This is one of the best stories I've ever read in a long long time. I didn't want it to end!  This and practically all your stories leave me with so many emotions.  I love the new characters you've introduced and how you remembered and included the other members of the family we all grew to love. I was happy you had a story line for Ted and Blake too.  We all know Ted is Brian's close confidant and friend, he's someone he can rely on to have his back,even if he doesn't want to admit it.  lol  Thank you for also giving us a lesson about bisexuality and the confusion some may have with it.  There's so much to say, so many ways to praise your work, so I'll stop right now.  lol  I just love your writing.  I can't wait to read the 3rd part of your trilogy.  Like a good book your stories are so good you never want them to end.  Thank you, on to the next.

Author's Response:

Thank you very much.  I'm delighted that you've gone on to read Progeny.  I've enjoyed writing this trilogy and I'm always thrilled to hear from new readers.

All my best,

Mickie 

 

Reviewer: thess (Anonymous) · Date: May 10, 2008 08:14 AM · On: Chapter 26

all i can say is - I LOVE THE STORY!!!!!!!! thanks. do you plan for another sequel??? i think aedan is the new justin and gus of course is brian, right???? 

Author's Response: Thank you so much for letting me know how much you enjoyed this story.  I am writing a third story in the Karma series even as we speak...I plan to start posting it in June.  Thanks again for the feedback!  Michele

Reviewer: thess (Anonymous) · Date: May 09, 2008 06:07 AM · On: Chapter 1

really love the story!!! brian and justin should celebrate their silver anniversary!!!! thanks

Author's Response: You're welcome!  Thank you so much for reviewing this story and sending me feedback!  I really appreciate hearing from my readers...Michele

Reviewer: jacky@mulberry.myzen.co.uk (Anonymous) · Date: April 07, 2008 03:40 PM · On: Chapter 26

I loved Karma and Gene Pool, great stories, very creative but still our own loved Brian and Justin. You're so generous with your time and creativity, you have a great gift and we are so lucky that you are prepared to share it with all of us. Thank you and please keep the story going. love Jacky &

Author's Response: Thanks so much Jacky!  Its always a pleasure to hear back from happy readers. I appreciate every generous word of praise you've sent my way and I hope that we meet again in the future with the third fic in the Karma series.  All my best, Michele 

Reviewer: Sigi (Anonymous) · Date: March 25, 2008 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 26

“It was always there, Brian. I just happened to find the key,”

Perfect... That's the only word I can think of now :) Thanks so much for sharing the story.. I'm so happy for the guys. But I'm even happier to read you'll continue with your Karma series. Can't wait!



Author's Response: Thank you Sigi-I'm so very grateful to all of my readers for continuing to cheer me on each week!  It has been such a pleasure writing this story and the best part was hearing back from each and everyone of you.  Thank you so very much for all your very generous words of praise and well wishes.  It means an awful lot to me.  Big hugs, Michele 

Reviewer: nazdre (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2008 12:27 AM · On: Chapter 26

Once again, a great ending to a fabulous story. And I'm so glad to see you've decided to continue with a third part to this universe. I'd be interested to see the story take place during the time the girls want to go to NY. I think that could be interesting for all the characters involved. However, I trust you, so I know that whatever you do would be "fabulous"!

Author's Response:

Thanks for all the faith you have in me Nazdre.  I hope it will be 'fabulous' and just as much fun as this fic was.  I very much appreciate all your support these last six months.  Hearing back from you each week was a pleasure and made my writing  so much more fun.  Hugs, Michele

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: March 23, 2008 12:27 AM · On: Chapter 26

What a great ending!!! I loved the wedding and Rev. Tom officiating what would Joan have thunk (who cares)... Such a beautiful story!! Than you sad those words that I have dreaded...THE END... but the journey will continue for our boys and soon (6 months)...The countdown therefore, will go on hiatus until you bring new adventures of the Kinney & Taylor family...No matter how old they are they will always be young and beautiful to me! (sob)

Author's Response: Oh Jasmine-I will really miss you for a while-it won't be six months, good Lord, I think I can do better than that!  Hopefully by early summer I'll start posting again.  I will be writing other fics so look for those as they post.  Thank you so much for all your great feedback!  Your comments invariably made me smile or laugh and were wonderful to read.  I hope you'll stay in touch.  All my best, Michele

Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2008 12:26 AM · On: Chapter 26

Great ending. I really do hope you continue on writing this series. I enjoy reading your stories. Take care. *g*

Author's Response: I will lexa-thank you so much for all your great feedback over the last six months.  I hope to start the third fic in the Karma series in a couple of months.  Michele

Reviewer: bkfqueer (Anonymous) · Date: March 22, 2008 10:06 PM · On: Chapter 26

I'm happy that you're going to continue to write about this magnificant universe. Every story so far has left me with great admiration for your writing skills. I'm sorry that I can't translate all my feelings for this story into english. Your Gus is an extraordinary character and I want to read more about him and the others.

Author's Response: Thank you very much!  Your english is very understandable so please don't think it's not!  I'm very happy that you have enjoyed this story.  I do think Gus is a multi-layered character and I very much enjoyed writing about him.  I hope to write more in this universe down the road.  Many thanks again for you very kind words!  Michele

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2008 06:02 PM · On: Chapter 26

This has been a wonderful, romantic, turbulant journey that I am so sorry to see end!  Perfect ending by the way, I hope you continue to give us a glimpse into the lives of these enchanting characters!  Thank you.

Author's Response:

You are so welcome Gina Marie.  I appreciate every single word you've sent my way these last six months.  It has been an incredible journey with the Kinney-Taylors and their extended family.  Hope to see you again in the future.  Big hugs, Michele

Reviewer: Lele14 (Anonymous) · Date: March 22, 2008 04:43 PM · On: Chapter 26

I must confess when I read the last chapter I didn't like the idea of having Gus & Aedan marry at the same time as Brian & Justin - I wanted it to be special and all about them; however, you changed my mind!  You pulled off a beautiful ceremony - one I wished I could have attended!  The love each of the couples had for each other was palpable and I loved it.

I loved this story, I love your characters.  I will be waiting with baited breath for the next installment : ) 



Author's Response: Thanks Lele-I'm glad you weren't disappointed in the double wedding.  It meant so much to Brian to have Gus get married on the same day so I'm glad that you felt I gave them each equal time and that it was special for all four men.  I really appreciated you wonderful words of praise and I'm hoping we'll talk to each other again in the future.  Many, many thanks for your support of this fic!  Michele

Reviewer: KAYLIN (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2008 04:38 PM · On: Chapter 26

Right now I'm speach less because this went beyond words and if I spell something wrong sorry but the mist my eyes I can't see thank you so much and can't wait for more.... Hugs Kaylin

Author's Response:

Aww, thanks so much Kaylin.  I'm so pleased that you enjoyed the wedding chapter and that it brought tears to your eyes.  Mine too!  I very much enjoyed hearing back from you each week.   Thank you for always commenting.  Big hugs back, Michele

 

 

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: March 22, 2008 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 26

That was amazing, it was so sweet and romantic it really was perfect. I am so happy there will be a sequel, There ages arent a problem, 58 and 46 isnt old, they will always be hot, it will be good to see how gus and aedan go and also how brian and justin deal with teenage twins dating and teenage drama in general lol I look forward to the sequel

Author's Response: Thank you Sara-I am so happy that you enjoyed the wedding chapter.  It was important to me that everyone got a chance to express their feelings.  I'm glad you don't have a problem with moving along in time just a little bit.  B/J will be having mad sex until they're in their eighties so this shouldn't hamper them one bit, lol!  Thank you for the many reviews you've sent my way.  Every single one has been appreciated!  Hugs, Michele

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2008 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 26

oh michele. i don't know where to begin. you are amazing. to have  taken us to the height of happiness and to the depth od despair with these two loving men and the family they built around them.

i thought "karma" was fantastic, but you out did yourself this time.

i'll be looking forward to the third part of this story to see if you can still make me laugh, cry, feel anger and joy like you did this time. it is my challange to you. i sure hope you're up for it.



Author's Response: Oh boy!  Now you've thrown down the gauntlet, and of course I love nothing more than a challenge, lol!  THANK YOU so much for every single comment you've sent my way these last six months.  It has meant an awful lot to me and one of the worst things about losing our old MW was the loss of all the wonderful reviews that I enjoyed looking back on from time to time.  I hope to write a third fic that will keep you equally invested.  Many thanks again for your very generous words of praise.  Big hugs, Michele

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Anonymous) · Date: March 22, 2008 02:22 PM · On: Chapter 26

I have loved this universe a lovely mix of angst and love with a great story please, please keep going, cheers Chris

Author's Response: Thanks so much Chris!  I appreciate your comments very much.  I will continue in a few months.  Many thanks again.  Michele

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Anonymous) · Date: March 22, 2008 01:42 PM · On: Chapter 26

Thank you for sharing this wonderful universe with me. The wedding was beautiful and you portrayed the love between the four men very well.

Author's Response: You are so welcome!  Thank you for all your support throughout this fic.  Hearing back from you each week has been wonderful.  Michele

Reviewer: nazdre (Anonymous) · Date: March 16, 2008 06:57 PM · On: Chapter 25

Oh yeah! I went searching for this story and when I saw that there were 2 new chapters I almost wept in joy. This was great! So many fabulous things happened including both engagements and Brian's rejection of Yuri. I was totally not expecting him to go that way, but when I relfected on it I could understand that he was doing it largely to protect Sorina, and that meant so much, because he would never have done something like that in his younger years. Thank you so much for these fabulous chapters. Now that we're back up and running I look forward to seeing more of this story!!!

Author's Response: Thanks Nazdre-I'm so glad that you found GP-it took me almost two hours to re-post the whole story but I was determined to get it back on here for my wonderful friends/aka readers, who were probably wondering what the hell happened next, lol!  I'm truly grateful for all the support that has been shown for this fic and I'm sure you're aware that next weeks chapter will be the end of this particular fic.  I did put out the warning two chapters ago..In any case, there will be a brief intermission and then I will start posting part 3 of the Karma series.  Thanks again for your feedback!  Michele

Reviewer: kaylin (Anonymous) · Date: March 16, 2008 01:47 AM · On: Chapter 25

This was such a wonderful chapter ... only sad because I know the end is near

Author's Response: Thank you Kaylin-we are nearing the end of this fic but I will continue in this universe after a brief intermission.  Thanks so much for commenting tonight!  Michele

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: March 15, 2008 09:41 PM · On: Chapter 25

   I just read both Chapter 24 & 26 and all I can say is that you out did yourself! I love the fact that eveyone saw what Yury aka the selfish sex crazed Prima Donna asshole was really about...I'm sorry that Sorina got caught in the crossfirein this idiotic Russian's plot to bed Brian, but at least Brian got the last laugh with his suppose lack of sexual desires without the aid of Viagra.lol! I also loved the hopeless romantic soon to be wedding of Brian, Justin, Aedan, and Gus...wow that should be some honeymoons!! Also you threw in a wedding maybe in the horizon JR and Austin that was made a sweet ending....All I could think was this story will soon end! My last time to say the countdown begins (sob)...I hope that you will continue the adventures of Brian, Justin and family to their golden years!

Author's Response: Awww Jasmine-don't be sad!  This story will go into intermission for a while but this universe and this family will be back, don't you worry.  For now, enjoy what's left and thank you so much for every comment you've sent my way.  I love the fact that you've enjoyed this story so much!  It means an awful lot to me.  Hugs, Michele

Reviewer: Lele14 (Anonymous) · Date: March 15, 2008 07:19 PM · On: Chapter 24

I'm so glad I found you!  Great chapter as always.  I loved Alex's reaction to Brian and Justin - comfortable until there as TMI - that was fantastic!  I just love your writing and can't wait to read the next chapter!

Author's Response: Hi Lele-I'm glad you found me too!  I appreciate your feedback very much...thanks for taking the time to tell me how much you enjoyed this chapter.

Reviewer: Lauren (Anonymous) · Date: March 15, 2008 01:30 PM · On: Chapter 25

This was a very romantic chapter, I really enjoyed it, I am so happy Brian wants Justin to get a big wedding so he can put a ring on his finger and tell everyone how much he loves him, perfect, and Gus and Aedan are adorable, its horrible there will only be 1 more chapter but if there will be another karma sequel I will be so happy

Author's Response: Thank you Lauren.  I'm thrilled that you enjoyed this chapter.  There will be another fic in this universe...stay tuned.  Michele

Reviewer: Big J (Anonymous) · Date: March 15, 2008 03:45 AM · On: Chapter 25

OMG the idea of Brian being impotent had me laughing and laughing. Genius on your part.  Then his proposal - so "ridiculously romantic"  I loved it.  As soon as I saw Gus and Aedan in the story I knew a double wedding was on the cards.  Then JR and Austin - it's just a fairytale ending.  I'll be soooo sad when this ends even though it's been an amazing journey.

Author's Response: Thanks so much Big J-it will be hard to say goodbye for now but I'm looking at it as a brief intermission until we start the third fic in the Karma series.  I appreciate every single bit of praise you've sent my way...it's made this journey that much more enjoyable.  Michele

Reviewer: Big J (Anonymous) · Date: March 15, 2008 03:29 AM · On: Chapter 24

I'm so happy to see 2 new chapters for me to read.  I so loved B being "beaten into submission" by J and actually loving it - LOL.  Those two girls are so smart.  I wasn't quite sure what they'd come up with but I think this may be a solution.  Although I'm not sure how Yuri will handle it.

Author's Response: Hi Big J-I'm thrilled that we are up and running again on this site!  The thought of all my friends, which is what I consider all my readers, to not be able to read the ending of this fic was really bothering me.  I'm so pleased that you were able to get caught up and enjoyed every minute of it.  Michele

Reviewer: january (Anonymous) · Date: March 15, 2008 02:25 AM · On: Chapter 25

god i will hate for this story to end.. i look forward to every week having an update..i love the natural progression of the characters and their lives.. i cannot wait for the last chapter... but i hope that is not the end for gus and aeden.

Author's Response: No, I don't think this will be the end for them.  I'm already bouncing ideas around in my head for the third fic in the Karma series.  So glad you found this site again and commented tonight.  I'm thrilled to hear back from my readers.  Hope you enjoy the final chapter next week.  Michele

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: March 15, 2008 02:03 AM · On: Chapter 25

wow I really loved this, brian asking justin to have the big wedding was so sweet and then aedan asking gus was great. austin and jr are cute together and yury now that was just brilliant lol, I cant wait until brian gives justin a ring and tells him about what happened with Yury, I am not looking forward to this ending but I am hopeing for a sequel :)

Author's Response: Hi Sara-I'm so thrilled you enjoyed this chapter.  I think Gus and Aedan are so beautiful together, just like B/J.  They will turn heads on their wedding day for sure.  Thanks so much for the feedback tonight!  Michele

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: March 14, 2008 01:29 AM · On: Chapter 1

I missed this story and I'm so gald that you and this site are back...I cried and cried when you were gone! I will anxiously read this and review it... I just though of something, only 2 chapters left ! sob,,,The countdown begins!

Author's Response: I'm so glad that you found me!  I worried about all my faithful readers and I spent over two hours reposting this story so you wouldn't be left hanging.  Thanks so much for your very kind words Jasmine...Michele

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: March 13, 2008 03:15 AM · On: Chapter 24

yury should be nice to sorina if he wants brian, like if brian finds out he was not so nice to her well thats just going to piss brian off lol and justins already pissed off (and very hot) so yury look out, cant wait for more

Author's Response: You're right but I doubt that he will be.  Thanks for the review!

You must login (register) to review.