Reviewer: Bgriggs (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2020 07:25 PM · On: Chapter 10
Who are Elan and Kane...is this a sequel?
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2019 04:46 AM · On: Chapter 18
Great story, thank you. Checked out your book site, will order some
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2019 03:50 AM · On: Chapter 12
Brian is to funny when he gets Nelly. I like this Justin
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2019 03:11 AM · On: Chapter 9
I felt like I was there, checked out hotels and stuff on Google.
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2019 02:32 AM · On: Chapter 5
LOL, that was funny
Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2015 10:34 PM · On: Chapter 18
That was terrific!
Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2015 11:34 PM · On: Chapter 2
"Brian pulled Justin on top of him and held him tightly, feeling his hardness pressing again his groin." It should be against not again.
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2013 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 18
I have never read a BJ honeymoon quite like this one. Thank you for providing this wonderful escape from reality.
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2013 08:58 PM · On: Chapter 17
Loved the sex shop scene.
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2013 08:48 PM · On: Chapter 16
I hope there is a sequel to this with the baby. Brian made a lot of sense.
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2013 08:40 PM · On: Chapter 15
Loved the action scene.
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2013 08:30 PM · On: Chapter 14
I liked the two angels. Did they represent Brian and Justin?
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2013 06:34 PM · On: Chapter 13
Lovely.
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2013 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 12
Brian is a changed man. I love the romantic Brian.
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2013 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 11
Brian thinking he stepped on the lizard... LOL!
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2013 02:57 PM · On: Chapter 10
Paradise. HA! Very imaginative.
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2013 02:43 PM · On: Chapter 9
Liam could probably give Brian a run for his money.
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2013 02:31 PM · On: Chapter 8
Threeway? What about monogamy?
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2013 02:18 PM · On: Chapter 7
Glorious. I didn't expect them to follow through with the bungee jump.
The image of the three nudes together sounds beautiful.
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2013 02:06 PM · On: Chapter 6
Amazing.
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2013 01:43 PM · On: Chapter 5
That cruise sounded perfect. The naked nelly queen Brian was hilarious.
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2013 01:10 PM · On: Chapter 4
I love this drama princess Justin.
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2013 07:33 AM · On: Chapter 2
HAWT!
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2013 07:21 AM · On: Chapter 1
How did I ever miss this story? It's brilliant. No wonder you are a published author.
Author's Response: Hi there-thanks for the lovely reviews you've posted for this fic and Snow Angels. It's always a nice surprise to hear back from someone in the fandom. This was a fun story to write and I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
Mickie
Reviewer: Cheryl (Anonymous) · Date: April 26, 2011 06:28 AM · On: Chapter 18
I loved this story and I look forward to the prequel. I was especially looking forward to more action in Berlin. I lived there from 1975-78. When I arrived, my now ex-hubby told me of a club in downtown West Berlin that had audience participation. I was NOT going to do that even if he wanted to. BUT, I could imagine Brian and Justin partaking. LOL Keep up the excellent work!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm so pleased my fanfic it still garnering new readers. Animal Crackers is one of my favorite stories.
Mickie
Reviewer: vamplair (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2010 08:03 PM · On: Chapter 18
I waited until this story was finished before I read it. I'm glad I did. You are a wonderful writer. You have the boys voices down pat, even if Brian is a bit emotional. LOL Thank you for this story and I can't wait for the prequel that led to the marriage!
Ro
Author's Response: Thanks for that lovely compliment on the characters voices. It's an important part of fanfic and I'm always happy when I achieve the right voice even if, as you say, a bit emotional, but that was my intent. I've always wanted to see a romantic Brian Kinney so since the show wouldn't give it to me I created my own:) I'm glad you enjoyed my story.
Mickie
Reviewer: alyssi (Anonymous) · Date: September 27, 2010 07:59 PM · On: Chapter 18
Thank You!! for such a great story! i'm going to miss it! I'm going to reread it all again this week. i loved reading about their travels and the africa setting was so interesting. You write great sex too!!!
It feels like there needs to be an epilogue tho, any chance there will be one?
Author's Response: I may write an epilogue, but it might be a while, because I'm at the tail end of a new original and I'd like to get that done first. I'm really glad that you enjoyed this story. It was a lot of fun to write.
Mickie
Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: September 26, 2010 04:45 PM · On: Chapter 18
what an ending. enjoyed your story very much :-)) rose
Author's Response: Thanks, Rose. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Mickie
Reviewer: Britin-JantoLover (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2010 02:46 PM · On: Chapter 18
So Bautiful and very hot at the end.
I Love the story definatly in my top 5!
Thank You!
xxx
Author's Response: My pleasure.
Mickie
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2010 01:18 AM · On: Chapter 17
Love this. Do you really have to end it? They need to have a baby and other stuff, please.
Author's Response: I do have to end this but I'm working on the prequel and may post that in a few weeks.
Mickie
Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: September 24, 2010 12:33 AM · On: Chapter 17
great update :-)) rose
Author's Response: Thanks, Rose!
Mickie
Reviewer: Britin-JantoLover (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2010 09:40 PM · On: Chapter 17
Once again a great chapter! and funny at the end!
Can't wait for the final chapter!
Thanks
xxx
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Mickie
Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: September 21, 2010 11:15 PM · On: Chapter 16
this was a great update. poor brian. but I like his baby idea very much. :-)) rose
Author's Response: Thank you, Rose. I'll update again tomorrow.
Mickie
Reviewer: Jenna (Anonymous) · Date: September 21, 2010 06:02 AM · On: Chapter 16
I really love the way you write so I'm going to order one of your books. Would also love to read cutting cords as mentioned by another reviewer but can't find it. I'd be grateful if you would send me a link.
Author's Response: Hi Jenna,
Cutting Cords is an original and you can find it on my author page at Dreamspinner Press (find the link on my author bio here at MW). I' so happy you enjoy my writing. Thanks for your support.
Mickie
Reviewer: mydogjewel (Anonymous) · Date: September 21, 2010 04:12 AM · On: Chapter 16
I just read this story and I'm really enjoying it. I love it when one of them 'queens out', especially picturing Brian standing on the toilet! Can't wait to see what Germany has in store for them. It seems like there is a prequel to this story, even though you never said this was a sequel. Is there, because I would love to read it. Please let me know, when you have the time. Thanks!
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying this story. It is a sequel to "Yesterday" which I have not posted as yet. I may in the future.
Mickie
Reviewer: Vision (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2010 07:15 PM · On: Chapter 16
I hope Liam is okay but this does put tings into perspective but I like Justin's point about waiting a month or two to see if this is what Brian wants and not some gesture because he could have lost Justin.
Excellent chapter
Author's Response: Liam's injury is really a wake up call for Brian. We'll see how things progess.
Thanks for stopping by.
Mickie
Reviewer: shabee (Anonymous) · Date: September 19, 2010 09:20 AM · On: Chapter 15
“I’m not jealous, because I know you love me and it would only be sex, but, I no longer wish to share. I’m becoming increasingly selfish in my old age, and I don’t want anyone playing with my partner ever again.”
Ohmygodohmygodohmygod......
That's so sweet!! Too sweet!! *squeal*
And chapter 14 is totally gave me a nosebleed. You should take responsibility :)
Author's Response: Grins on the nosebleed comment:) If I blew a few blood vessels then I didn my job. Thanks for letting me know how much you're enjoying my story.
Mickie
Reviewer: Jenna (Anonymous) · Date: September 19, 2010 07:20 AM · On: Chapter 15
Fantastic story - a real page turner. Can't wait for the next chapter. x
Author's Response: Thank you!
Mickie
Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: September 19, 2010 03:09 AM · On: Chapter 15
I was so happy to see your update. I missed this story and I also love your original story "Cutting Cords". I had to read it twice. Really good job. :-)) rose
Author's Response: Thank you, Rose. I appreciate your support and I'm thrilled that you enjoyed Cutting Cords.
Mickie
Reviewer: Britin-JantoLover (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2010 02:08 AM · On: Chapter 15
oooooooo I wanna know what happens! lol
great Part
Thanks!
xxx
Author's Response: Thanks. I'll update tomorrow.
Mickie
Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2010 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 15
Great story. I love the way Brian is openning up so much and accepting how much he wants to give to Justin.
Just a nit picky note and I may be the only one who noticed, but Orangutan's don't live in Africa-they only live in the South Pacific on a few islands. It could be that Justin just doesn't know that but Justin is such a PSA that I think it is something he would know.
Either way great story I always look forward to up dates!
Author's Response: I looked into the Orangs after reading your comment and I stand corrected. You are absolutely right. I'll make the necessary changes. I appreciate your support of this story and you helpful comments.
Mickie
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2010 10:05 AM · On: Chapter 15
Great chapter. Great story.
Author's Response: Thanks. I appreciate your support.
Mickie
Reviewer: Jayce (Anonymous) · Date: September 18, 2010 09:48 AM · On: Chapter 15
Ah!! Black mamba = very, very, very bad snake! Hurry, hurry to hospital! By "hospital" I, of course, mean next chapter. :-)
Author's Response: Yup, bad snake indeed. Thanks for commenting!
Mickie
Reviewer: Vision (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2010 05:44 AM · On: Chapter 14
What can I say but wow, excellent
Author's Response: Thank you. I'll post again in a few days.
Mickie
Reviewer: Britin-JantoLover (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2010 12:42 AM · On: Chapter 14
WoW great chapter, love the ending so romantic and very hot, Can't wait for more!
xxx
Author's Response: Thank you...more in a few days.
Mickie
Reviewer: Vision (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2010 08:00 AM · On: Chapter 13
Damn these two love one another and willing to do anything for each other. Its one the epic loves of all time and also an excellent chapter as always
Author's Response: Yes, we should all be so lucky, lol! Thanks so much for commenting.
Mickie
Reviewer: shabee (Anonymous) · Date: September 14, 2010 12:19 AM · On: Chapter 13
God, I love your stories, Mickie. By far, this one is my favorite. It's so well written, makes me feel bad to leave and take some rest! Thank you!
Author's Response: Thank you, shabee. It's nice to hear that. This was a lot of fun to write and also one of my favorites.
Mickie
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2010 05:23 AM · On: Chapter 1
This story is great.
Sex, love the way you write it.
Brian being a sissy, hysterical.
Brian being romantic, love it.
Justin's feelings, perfect.
Love the raptors and gila monsters.
Thrilled that you are finishing this story.
Author's Response: Thanks, Lorie. I'm so happy you are enjoying this.
Mickie
Reviewer: Britin-JantoLover (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2010 02:17 AM · On: Chapter 13
So Beautiful, i read the first half before i went to work and i could't wait to read more!
Now i really can't wait for more... I Love Brian being romantic!
Thank You
xxx
Author's Response: You're so welcome. I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter.
Mickie
Reviewer: jizabel (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2010 12:24 AM · On: Chapter 13
I am so excited to see that you have decided to finish your story. I am great fan of your writing. I have read your books and they are AMAZING. Actually first I have read your original fiction, that I ' ve discovered QAF and your fanfiction and I knew that if you are the author it had to be great. And really I am in love with all your stories and have re-read them so many times. You are the BEST!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm truly honored that you like my writing and have already invested in my original work. I will be updating this fic every other day until it's complete.
Mickie
Reviewer: char (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2010 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 12
omg i read the beginning of this story so long ago. am so glad you are finishing it. i read the synopsis of your novels. have to have them they sound and read like good sexy fun. keep the chapters to this story coming. it's really good. hopefully not such a long wait. lty
Author's Response: Thanks so much for checking out my originals. I'm pretty sure you'll enjoy any one of them if you like my writing. I will continue updating this story all week.
Mickie
Reviewer: Vision (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2010 05:40 AM · On: Chapter 12
I completely forgot aout this fic but now I'm happy its back. You were one of those writers I looked forward to read fics from. Well well Brian seems extremely attentive and sweet, Liberty Ave. would be all a twitter if they ever saw this.
Great chapter and welcome back
Author's Response: Thanks. I'll post again tomorrow.
Mickie
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2010 05:22 AM · On: Chapter 12
Woww this is a great surprise. I didn't expect you back with this wonderful story * blushes * .. sorry.
I love the little dikdiks. We saw them in Kenya.
Hope to see an update ASAP, because you can't stop writing at the bathroom-scene.
* hugs *
Author's Response: Hi there! Glad to be back for a little bit. I'll post again tomorrow.
Mickie
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2010 04:05 AM · On: Chapter 12
This is what I call camping in style. I can't wait to see what you have planned for Justin's bath!!
>
Author's Response: I know, it's an awesome way to travel. More tomorrow,
Mickie
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2010 04:00 PM · On: Chapter 11
“Talk to it, Brian. It might have an Australian accent.”
too funny, then justin rolls over and starts to snore!
partial fisting?
tantric sex?
cumming without thrusting or grabbing justin's cock?
teary eyed stares deep into each others' eyes?
a happy horny geico lizzard watching it all?
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE
Author's Response: Hi there-send me a private message on livejournal. I will respond and we'll figure out why you can't access my account. Thanks for your interest!!
Mickie
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2010 03:31 PM · On: Chapter 10
poor justin. i think his feelings were really hurt. his whole confidence as a teenage stalker was based on how brian was so hot for his body. i bet for a moment he felt truely diminished. :o(
poor brian. i think he made sarcastic, hurtful remarks off the cuff without thinking. he didnt intend to cause justin pain, but probably does mean it about not wanting justin to just let himself go. but justin reminded him of how hot he is, how hot he can get brian. poor brian, his ass is going to feel that fuck for a week! lol
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2010 03:02 PM · On: Chapter 9
rowr, lol. careful, brian may drool, and justin may just grab liam's pants to look for himself how the tattoos lool.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2010 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 8
Im trying to find a way to read this fic on your live journal, but for some reason it is blocked even if you are friended. :o( bjfic was another site that had it but it is now gone. I hope you finished it and will allow us to read it at some point soon. Im almost done rereading what is here. :o(
I would love to read how justin's eden collection turns out, as well as all the other paintings inspired by africa and his honeymoon. :o)
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2010 12:51 PM · On: Chapter 7
I love your Bossy Justin. He and Brian have the same work ethic. He wants it done his way and he wants it done right and wants it done now!
Family members of mine bungee jump and friends, too. I just cant bring myself to do it. I dont think I'll get hurt or die or anything, I just dread that awful feeling you get in your stomach and entire body when your fear is pushed to the limit. I forced myself enough at amuzement parks and on roller coasters when I was a kid. Now its not my idea of fun. Unless I was paid to do it - I'd probably decide it was worth it then. ;o)
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2010 10:03 AM · On: Chapter 6
Badass Brian is oh so ridiculously romantic
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2010 09:32 AM · On: Chapter 5
Nelly Brian! Oh sunshine is going to be dropped off the bridge without the benefit of a bunjy cord!
poor Brian feeling so out of his element.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2010 09:05 AM · On: Chapter 4
Tisk tisk. soppy sappy brian is sooo in love it is adorable!
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2010 08:43 AM · On: Chapter 3
Love that Justin and Brian are still so childlike.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2010 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 2
oh my. Only the best for brian and sunshine.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2010 04:28 PM · On: Chapter 1
I was so horribly disappointed when you stopped writing this story. I've forgotten most of it by now, so Im rereading it. Im also re=commenting, hoping you get notification of comments to alert and remind you of this work in progress that has been left undone.
If the alerts and comments dont get you thinking about writing this again, Im hoping the pure annoyance of all the spam I'll generate will get your attention, ;p
Michelle
Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: June 22, 2009 01:14 PM · On: Chapter 11
I am so glad that you have continued with this story. You are doing a wonderful job. Looking forward to future chapters. Thanks for still writing it and not leaving it a WIP.
Author's Response: Thanks, Nicole. I appreciate hearing back from you. Mickie
Reviewer: Elli (Anonymous) · Date: June 22, 2009 01:06 PM · On: Chapter 11
I love this story. It's good to see that they still like to look at other men. And it's hot, too.
Author's Response: Thank you! Mickie
Reviewer: Vision (Anonymous) · Date: June 22, 2009 08:50 AM · On: Chapter 11
Brian around nature is a trip. I have this weird feeling Justin is enjoying all of this ridiculousness Brian is carrying on with. This chapter was funny Brian and nature really don't mix
Author's Response: It's interesting to watch him out of his element. Mickie
Reviewer: Vision (Anonymous) · Date: June 22, 2009 08:04 AM · On: Chapter 10
Wow Justin can be a real shit when he wants to be not that Brian isn't just as bad for making that comment. In the end though I think it was a win-win situation Great chapter
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it! Mickie
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 05:18 PM · On: Chapter 11
Many thanks for the updates, I love it ... Hot and Funny
Author's Response: You're welcome, Marny. Thank you for letting me know. Mickie
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2009 03:52 AM · On: Chapter 9
I couldn't wait till tomorrow, I had to read the last chapters. I love the story very much, because it's so different from other stories I read. I love that they are on a safari and ... hihi have a lot of sex. Are there more chapters coming? please
Author's Response: LOL, you are so cute. There are eleven more chapters. Thank you for asking! Mickie
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 03:04 PM · On: Chapter 5
haha this chapter is hilarious ... Brian naked on the toilet scard of a little snake every chapter you make me laugh, tomorrow a read the rest of the chapters, please keep posting
Author's Response: I'm glad you got a good laugh, Marny. Thanks for commenting. Mickie
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 4
haha good chapter, hihi love them fighting and making love afterwards
Author's Response: Make-up sex is the best, lol! Thanks for reading. Mickie
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: June 14, 2009 12:22 AM · On: Chapter 9
Great chapter... Brian is too funny... he's afraid of net eating mosquitoes !!! also when he said that marriage is not synonymous with being blind... LOL.. Please update soon...
Author's Response: Thanks! I update every Friday. Mickie
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 09:38 PM · On: Chapter 1
Haha lovely start, pff Brian Africa (Kenya) is beautiful. Wow Justin is really mad. * Bye ... runs to the next chapter *
Author's Response: Thanks, Marny. I hope you enjoy the rest of it. Mickie
Reviewer: Sam (Anonymous) · Date: June 13, 2009 10:55 AM · On: Chapter 8
I kept reading but with the three-way looking to happen I am stopping now. I really liked the story but them tricking when they are married, on their honeymoon and doing it raw is really not for me. I dont believe Brian or Justin for that matter would ever take the risk of being with others when they are doing it raw so for them to be seriously consider it is too OOC for me. I did enjoy the story apart from that.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading so far...things are never as they seem. If you read on you'll realize that. Mickie
Reviewer: M_elle (Anonymous) · Date: June 13, 2009 09:57 AM · On: Chapter 1
Oh goodie, two new chapters as promised! I love Brian's support of Justin's art and willingness to do anything requested of him. When Justin's poor alergies flared up it could have been a disaster - yet Brian was so caring and sweet! Brian's touching moment with the elephant - too much! Good thing Justin took so many pictures; no one in the Pitts would belive it without seeing with their own eyes! Loving the exoctic locale - I can't believe you've never been bungee jumping. You described it so well! Have you been to Africa? See you next week! Michelle
Author's Response: I'm so happy that you're enjoying this, Michelle. I've never been bungee jumping, nor have I been to Africa. Research and imagination is a wonderful thing:) Thank you for commenting, xx, M
Reviewer: Vision (Anonymous) · Date: June 07, 2009 12:01 AM · On: Chapter 7
Thi must have been the craziest idea ever by Brian bungee jumping shit Just was scared shitless which was funny. Now Justin making Brian pose with Anum is just pure torture his is such a little brat. Great chapter
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it. Brian can be completely insane at times, but always entertaining. Mickie
Reviewer: Heygirl1 (Anonymous) · Date: June 06, 2009 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 7
Well, what are the boys getting themselves into now. I hope they don't mess up their commitment to each other.
Author's Response: Have faith and keep on reading... Mickie
Reviewer: Heygirl1 (Anonymous) · Date: June 06, 2009 11:56 AM · On: Chapter 6
Great chapter, it had both hot sex and a beautiful wedding. Brian can surprise us at times. Love this story.
Author's Response: Thank you! Appreciate the comment, Mickie
Reviewer: Sam (Anonymous) · Date: June 06, 2009 08:39 AM · On: Chapter 7
great writing. I love that they are married but Anum is in this story a bit too much for my liking. I dont think this story is for me. I am not a fan of them still tricking when they are married.
Author's Response: Thank you. I hope you read on as you might be pleasantly surprised. Mickie
Reviewer: kinneydu (Anonymous) · Date: June 06, 2009 06:13 AM · On: Chapter 7
Hey I am really enjoying this story. It seems to be going in interesting places. I'm sorry that this looks like being your last story in the fandom. You have a gift.
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it. There will be many chapters before this ends. Thanks for commenting. Mickie
Reviewer: Eliriel (Anonymous) · Date: June 06, 2009 05:46 AM · On: Chapter 6
I am speechless.Beautiful !!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Mickie
Reviewer: Eliriel (Anonymous) · Date: June 06, 2009 05:45 AM · On: Chapter 7
OMG, you're evil...Can't believe you stopped here.I want more,much more,please ?
Author's Response: Lol, there will be more. Thank you so much for commenting. Mickie
Reviewer: myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: June 06, 2009 03:27 AM · On: Chapter 7
It's great... I love this story. Thank you for sharing this wonderful trip. Brian is so Brian and not Brian both... Hot, romantic, different... Good job !
Author's Response: Yes, he's on his honeymoon and in transition. It will be interesting. I appreciate your comment. Thanks! Mickie
Reviewer: Elli (Anonymous) · Date: June 06, 2009 03:06 AM · On: Chapter 1
I love this story. It's so sexy and exciting and unique. Can't wait to read more. Elli
Author's Response: Thank you, Elli. I'm glad you are enjoying this. Mickie
Reviewer: M_elle (Anonymous) · Date: June 05, 2009 10:15 PM · On: Chapter 1
I once won free Bungy Zone tickets in my home town on Vancouver Island. Yeah, I never even made it onto the bridge! I remember too clearly the frightening, thrilling fear of such an adventure: I trembled, I cried, I squealed, I screamed and I almost threw up, and that was just on the kiddie Farris Wheel I accompanied my then 10 year old daughter on, lol. I think that was the only time I ever lost my appetite, hmmmm............ I'm happy to read that I can cautiously expect two new chapters every Friday, I'll be here! Wonderful story!
Author's Response: I'm just as terrified of heights as you. I can't imagine anyone paying money to do this, however, I can imagine Brian and an unwilling Justin wanting to try this. Thank you for the comment. It's appreciated. Mickie
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: June 05, 2009 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 6
Great chapter... Leave it to Brian to go from being a sadist to being the most romantic person in the world in 2 seconds flat !!! LOL...
Author's Response: Yes, that's our guy, lol! You gotta love him... Thank you for commenting! Mickie
Reviewer: Marie (Anonymous) · Date: June 05, 2009 10:35 AM · On: Chapter 5
Loving the story so far. Please please please finish posting the rest of the story here. Your writing is fantastic. I look forward to reading the rest of the story. The interaction between Brian and Justin is just so much fun. I can just picture every scene in my head.
Author's Response: Thanks, Marie. I'm glad you're enjoying this. I will continue to post so long as people comment. I just like to hear back from my readers. I'm putting two chapters up right now. Mickie
Reviewer: M_elle (Anonymous) · Date: June 03, 2009 02:05 PM · On: Chapter 5
This is the first fiction of yours that I have read...and already saddened to hear that this may be your last in the bj fic genre. Please dont stop now, Im already hooked and love travel stories...Im not adventurous enough to travel someplace like Africa, so travelling with my two favorite men in my imagination is awesome --- And I dont have to pull a Brian and stand on toilet seats screaming for help when something creepy crawls into my room!!!! LOL, very cute.
Author's Response: I appreciate hearing back, thanks so much for telling me how much you're enjoying this. I have several other stories posted on this site, primarily the Karma series. It's a trilogy that you might enjoy. The first book is Karma, than Gene Pool and finally Progeny. It should give you more to read while you are waiting for me to post more on this story. I will post every Friday and most probably two chapters at a time. All my best, Mickie
Reviewer: HEYGIRL1 (Anonymous) · Date: June 02, 2009 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 5
This chapter is delightful. Statements such as, "Do you have to be so goddamn perky?" is priceless. Also, Brian in the bathroom on the toilet afraid of the snake was too funny for words. Loved it. Best laugh I have had all day.
Author's Response: Lol, I'm delighted that you are enjoying this. More on Friday. Mickie
Reviewer: Ebony (Anonymous) · Date: June 02, 2009 08:11 AM · On: Chapter 1
I just stumbled on to your story and so far I like it. I always love stories about Brian/Justin getting married. Thankfully I have more chapters to read. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you enjoy the rest of it. Mickie
Reviewer: Olga (Anonymous) · Date: June 01, 2009 10:06 PM · On: Chapter 5
Such a great story! I absolutely adore the idea of our favourite couple in Afrika.Thank you for writing this.
Author's Response: You are so welcome! Thanks for commenting on this chapter. Mickie
Reviewer: Heygirl1 (Anonymous) · Date: June 01, 2009 02:44 PM · On: Chapter 4
That was some chapter. I am pleased to read a story where Brian can openly state his love for Justin.
Author's Response: Yes, he's very open in this fic, that's why it's AU, lol! I appreciate all your feedback tonight. Mickie
Reviewer: Heygirl1 (Anonymous) · Date: June 01, 2009 02:28 PM · On: Chapter 3
Loved this chapter. e-mail to Ted was very funny. I enjoy all of the humor in this story.
Author's Response: Thanks for telling me that! I love hearing back from readers. Mickie
Reviewer: Heygirl1 (Anonymous) · Date: June 01, 2009 02:12 PM · On: Chapter 2
Great chapter. Brian and Justin have certainly made a great commitment to each other at last. Loved it.
Author's Response: They have. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Mickie
Reviewer: Nicole (Anonymous) · Date: June 01, 2009 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 5
Just wanted to say that I hope you will continue this story. I have found your 'Brian' abslutely hilarious. Your chapters always make me smile. Hope to see more chapters.
Author's Response: I will continue now that my readers have responded. I didn't think there was much interest, and I'm glad to see that it's out there. Thanks for commenting. It's an important feature of fanfic that I happen to enjoy. Mickie
Reviewer: Heygirl1 (Anonymous) · Date: June 01, 2009 01:56 PM · On: Chapter 1
I really enjoyed the first chapter of this story. I like your Brian and Justin. Actually, Ted and Cynthia were great also. Thank you for sharing your story.
Author's Response: You're welcome! Thank you for letting me know that you like this. Mickie
Reviewer: Eliriel (Anonymous) · Date: June 01, 2009 05:51 AM · On: Chapter 5
This fic is delicious and this chapter is hilarious.I have a great time,as always.Thanks for sharing.
Author's Response: Thank you, Eliriel. I'm glad to hear from you! More next week. Mickie
Reviewer: myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: June 01, 2009 01:36 AM · On: Chapter 5
This story is different from what I read usually but I love it. Really, I have peed in my pants so much I laughed at Brian with the snake. And yet, I ought not to have 'cause this reminds me of my encounter with a certain gecko in my room in Tahiti. It was on the wall above the bed and me, standing on the couch. It took 1 h until my lover comes and pushes it out. I didn't get a wink of sleep. Horrible. Continue this story and above all, continue on this site. Thanks a lot
Author's Response: Thank you for commenting! This is the fun part of fanfic, hearing back from my readers. At least it's what kept me going all these years. I'm glad you're enjoying this so far. I will keep on posting as long as I see the interest. Mickie
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: June 01, 2009 01:25 AM · On: Chapter 5
Great chapter.... I could just picture Brian jumping on the toliet ... acting more like a Drama Queen then Emmett !!!!
Author's Response: Lol! I'm glad you enjoyed this scene. More fun in the next chapters... Thanks for commenting! Mickie
Reviewer: inkedkelt (Anonymous) · Date: May 31, 2009 11:10 PM · On: Chapter 5
I am loving this story! Their fights are hilarious! The thought of Brian standing stark naked on a toilet because of a little snake! I was wondering if there is a story before this? In chapter 1 some previous drama was mentioned and I would love to read the prequel.
Author's Response: I'm really happy that you are enjoying this AU adventure in Africa. There was a previous story, but I'm not posting it. It really stood alone, as does this one. Appreciate the comment! Mickie
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: May 31, 2009 10:29 PM · On: Chapter 5
love how Brian flips out about the heat, bugs, etc.
Author's Response: Yes, he's having his own nelly moment, lol! I'm glad you're enjoying this. Thank you for commenting. Mickie
Reviewer: Vision (Anonymous) · Date: May 31, 2009 09:01 PM · On: Chapter 5
This trip is turning into one big comedy and Justin seems to be relishing it. Taking Brian outside of his comfort zone is fucking hilarious. The whole bathroom scene was just too much I could picture Brian in my head and couldn't stop laughing. Just should have taken the picture and have it for blackmailing purposes. Extremely funny chapter
Author's Response: LOL! I'm so glad you enjoyed this! It's going to be a wild trip, that much I can promise. Appreciate your feedback immensely. Mickie
Reviewer: complicated_identity (Anonymous) · Date: May 31, 2009 07:09 PM · On: Chapter 5
hi, luv the stories.a little different but still luv it. keep tje good works.
Author's Response: Yes, it's definitely AU. They are on a honeymoon and it will be different from what you've seen before. Thanks for reading and commenting! I do appreciate hearing back. Mickie
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 5
I love the humor and wit of your story. The snake was an excellent idea. I'd send you a 100 of my reviews if you would only keep writing here. I hate reading on LJ. This is my favorite site. Maybe a vampire can turn Brian in Berlin and you could put blood on Justin's neck on your banner. Works for me! Please keep up the good work. The hits are just as important as the reviews. ~JTSecrets
Author's Response: Laughs! Thanks for that JT. It's not the reviews, it hearing comments, just like yours, that keeps me interested in doing this. It makes the time spent on this well worth the effort. Hugs, Mickie
Reviewer: Buffytess (Anonymous) · Date: May 31, 2009 05:00 PM · On: Chapter 5
Hi i am so sorry i haven`t left any comments on this fic, i just want to say that i really like it so please keep posting more chapters. Many Hugs Buffytess
Author's Response: Thanks for commenting, Buffytess. I just like to hear back from people. It gives me a reason to do this. Mickie
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: May 31, 2009 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 5
Great story. Don't sweat the reviews. If you get the hits they love you.
Author's Response: Hi there, It's not the reviews I'm interested in. I know people are reading, but I love talking to my readers. It's why I've always written fanfic. To share thoughts with likeminded people. Mickie
Reviewer: priscilla (Anonymous) · Date: May 11, 2009 12:18 AM · On: Chapter 1
I really enjoy your story! You keep them in character despite them doing slightly ooc things. That´s very good! You might want to change the berlin-picture in the banner though, as it is not the Brandenburg Gate. Greetings from Denmark, Priscilla
Author's Response: Thank you. I didn't make the banner, so I can't change it. I think the idea is there though. I will probably only post one more chapter of this story as there seems to be no interest. I've had over 1100 hits but only 6 comments so far, which is very discouraging. Fanfic is all about interaction with readers. Thank you for you interest and for taking the time to comment. Mickie
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 05:15 AM · On: Chapter 2
This is a really sweet story. You have talent. I hope more people discover your entertaining style.
Author's Response: Thank you! I appreciate the compliment!.
Reviewer: MattMel (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 01:58 AM · On: Chapter 1
Oh that was so great!!! It is nice to see that Brian can be a Queen too!!! I just love Cyn and Ted!!!! I really could see the last scene, Brian being a good husband, with flowers and chocolates and Justin trying to stay mad at him for a while longer! You did a wonderful job!!! PS I love that Brian want's to go to Berlin, cuz I live there and yes the men are hot! :) Sadly not as much blondes as one would think.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed these first two chapters. It's going to be an interesting and diverse honeymoon, so come back on the weekend for more. I'll post two chapters a week. Thanks for reading and commenting!
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 05:00 AM · On: Chapter 2
Fiesty!Jealous!Justin in one story...love it! I'm glad they are both getting what they wanted out of this trip...for now. That plane sounds amazing! Looking forward to more =)
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing this and letting me know how much you enjoyed it. I'm glad you're liking this so far. More next weekend.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 04:42 AM · On: Chapter 1
I LOVE Fiesty!Justin!! And the thought of Brian in the jungle is just too much! He was having a major queening out session there!
Author's Response: LOl, yes he was, *grins* I'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter!
Reviewer: audrey (Anonymous) · Date: May 03, 2009 02:38 AM · On: Chapter 1
Congratulations for your book ! and thanks for this new story (can't wait for the encounter between Brian and the bugs)
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad to be posting again. Hope you like this...M
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: May 03, 2009 12:32 AM · On: Chapter 2
beautiful, cute how Justin was jelous of A. Love how eventually Brian wised up and gave in with advise from Ted and Cynthia. & toppy J ;-)
Author's Response: Hee, toppy Justin is always hot! Thanks for reading and reviewing. Appreciate it!
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