Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Intersect Series
Reviewer: victoriannasciment (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2022 11:06 PM · On: Derailed

Is is bad I'm happy he is dead? 

Reviewer: 1Word (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2022 10:48 PM · On: Derailed

Please finish!!

Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2021 01:17 AM · On: Derailed

Finally had a chance to get caught up... amazing as always.

Hopefully, Molly can be the steady, core strength that Lily and Brian need. Lily seemed like her old self for a while when "meeting" the boys!

Um, can Justin take over my heath insurance coverage, LOL!?

Reviewer: Crookedhalo1 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2021 11:47 PM · On: Derailed

I enjoyed the read it left me wanting more I read the first part of this story a while back and couldn't remember the name, glad I found it again.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2021 04:10 PM · On: Derailed

Molly is an unique individual.  Even Ezra's family see it.  I mean how many people can understand what a four year old is thinking.  

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2021 03:17 PM · On: Derailed

Nice to meet Ezra's family.  They are just as nice as he is.  Not like Madison.  Emmett was happy to meet Ezra then sad to learn that Duncan remembers what happened with his father.  

Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2021 10:37 PM · On: Derailed

Always amazing to have an update!

So much going on here... I feel like we got to know these charcters better by looking through Justin's eyes. I can only imagine what that Christmas Eve party will be like!

I'm glad that Drew & Emmett know what Duncan remembers... I know Brian needs to know about Lily too, but I am dreading it almsot as much as Justin is.

Obviously, Mason & Ezra will be getting their own dog soon, LOL! 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you feel like you know the characters better! Christmas Eve will be wild! Drew and Emmett definitely needed to be in the know. As hard as it was to tell them, it's going to be ten times harder telling Brian. :/ 

Dogs galore! I think they will wait for a bit though. Mason's pain from giving Lucky up is probably still fresh. 

New chapter is now up! Thanks for reading and reviewing!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you feel like you know the characters better! Christmas Eve will be wild! Drew and Emmett definitely needed to be in the know. As hard as it was to tell them, it's going to be ten times harder telling Brian. :/ 

Dogs galore! I think they will wait for a bit though. Mason's pain from giving Lucky up is probably still fresh. 

New chapter is now up! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2021 12:09 PM · On: Derailed

Hello, Anne - I am woefully behind in doing any reading. But I wanted you to know how much I admire your writing style. How you weave the lives of other characters so masterfully into those of who we know so well, and your ability to evoke emotions is exquisitely done.  IMO this could easily rival the quality of any published novel.  One day I hope to have the pleasure of reading this from start to finish, but for now I want to thank you for creating this 'verse and for posting it on here.  ~Kim



Author's Response:

I'm glad you are a fan of my writing style! Hopefully Yours will be turned into a novel one day. Looking forward to when you play catch up! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2021 01:45 AM · On: Derailed

Oh wow so much pain and so much love.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2021 01:45 AM · On: Derailed

Oh wow so much pain and so much love.

Author's Response:

<3 For sure. New chapter is now up! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2021 11:28 PM · On: Derailed

Very insightful!  Lots of angst.  I'm glad Justin is establishing a relationship with his brother.  



Author's Response:

I am glad too! They'll eventually get there! New chapter is now up! 

Reviewer: starbaby (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2021 04:17 PM · On: Derailed

I was so pleased to see this chapter put up. Thank you.



Author's Response:

So glad you are following! Chapter 10 is up now! :) 

Reviewer: starbaby (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2021 02:08 PM · On: Derailed

are you going to finish this?



Author's Response:

Chapter 9 is up now!

Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2020 01:45 AM · On: Derailed

Are you coming? Or are you staying? A play on Brian and Justin's first meeting??? It worked perfectly in that scene.

I'm glad it was Mel who sat with Brian at the end of the funeral. And I'm valso ery glad Jennifer came - both for Justin and for Brian. So much pain. So much (misguided) guilt.

Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2020 01:43 AM · On: Derailed

So, the incident with Louisa in the kitchen... yeah, she's hurting too. But a bitch is a bitch is a bitch. But in a weird way she got Brian to act like Brian - when she told her to Fuck off!

I'm glad Brian and Justin went off together, even if not much talking got done. Baby steps.

Yay for Gus and Hunter with the reporters! 

Oh, poor Lily... what did she see????



Author's Response:

Louisa is definitely being a bitch. Of course she's hurting and everyone understands that, but Brian just lost his husband and the father of his child and unborn child. It isn't her place to say something like that. 

Brian and Justin just needed to get away and breathe. They will probably talk more later. 

Lol, yes. Violence might not be the answer, but that reporter deserved to get punched.

And yes, poor Lily. :( She saw what we all hoped she wouldn't see.

Chapter 9 is now up!

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2020 03:16 AM · On: Derailed

Justin was so good to get Brian out of the apartment.  Molly definitely has a way with children.  I can't imagine what it would be like to see your parent shot.  Both children need someone to talk to ( professional)



Author's Response:

Yeah, Brian definitely needed to get out of the house and breathe for a few. Molly is great with kids! Lily and Duncan are very lucky to have her, as are the future kids coming into this universe. Both definitely need to talk to someone :( Chapter 9 is now up!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2020 10:00 PM · On: Derailed

Molly is a lifesaver.  It's so nice that Brian and Lily have made up.  Wish there was some way that Lily could have gone to the funeral if only for closure.  Times are going to be tough.  Eric's mom is not taking Lily, no way.



Author's Response:

Molly is wonderful! :) Brian and Lily were going to get there, Lily just needed time to process and figure out why she was so angry. She might not know why she is lashing out, but she knows it isn't her dad that she's mad at. It would have been nice if she could have gone :( And yeah, Louisa needs to figure that out fast and understand her place in Lily's life (which can be a good and positive one if she grows and owns up to her mistakes). Chapter 9 is up now!

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2020 11:43 PM · On: Derailed

At least Lily was able to lift Brian's spirits.  Hunter and Gus were great with the reporter.  Brian does have a strong support system with Justin leading the pack. 



Author's Response:

Absolutely! Brian really needed that from her specifically. That reporter got what was coming to him. Brian really does have a strong and devoted support system. Chapter 9 is now up! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2020 04:53 PM · On: Derailed

This chapter is so sad. Having to say good-bye is hard and Lily doesn't even get a chance to do that.  Gus and Emmett have the hardest part.

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2020 10:09 PM · On: Derailed

This was very emotional and heartbreaking but written so well.  I'm glad Justin was able to comfort Gus and that Brian showed Gus affection. Brian definitely needs to let his feelings out so he can begin healing.

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2020 03:29 AM · On: Derailed

I'm glad that Molly got Lily distracted.  It was a great scene between Gus and Justin.  Now that we know Lily saw things on the train, it will be easier for her to start to process it.  I hope she will be able to tell Brian that Eric wanted to come home before he called.  That will lessen the guilt that Brian feels.  Such a great story, even if it is incredibly sad at this point.  Thanks for writing and updating so quickly.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2020 06:30 AM · On: Derailed

Omg both Brian and Justin are so full of guilt because of their feelings for each other and Eric has died. Lilly is naturally acting out as she is way too young to process any of these feelings of grief. Thankfully Emmett is stepping up for Brian

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2020 06:30 AM · On: Derailed

Omg both Brian and Justin are so full of guilt because of their feelings for each other and Eric has died. Lilly is naturally acting out as she is way too young to process any of these feelings of grief. Thankfully Emmett is stepping up for Brian

Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2020 02:18 AM · On: Derailed

I got myself all caught up in one night... 

I am shattered. So heart-wrenchingly, beautfiully written. But now that I am caught up, I am also aching for the next chapter.

Justin needs to go to Brian. Maybe he will make the connection between the over-heard phone call Brian made to Eric, and Brian's inevitable and misplaced guilt about the accident.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you are enjoying it. Currently working on chapter 7! Have close to 5k words right now. 

I agree, someone needs to make that connection. It would be ideal for Brian to confide in someone so that they can understand what he's feeling but right now, Justin is the only person who may have an idea of what's going on in Brian's brain regarding the guilt, especially since he's feeling it himself. But Justin as crippled with pain as Brian is. He can think somewhat logically when it comes to the guilt.

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2020 01:43 AM · On: Derailed

Tears are flowing profusely...

 



Author's Response:

<3

Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2020 01:16 AM · On: Derailed

OMG! I forgot about Nathan too! What an awful way for him to find out.

Please don't let Brian feel too guilty for too long. I know it's his nature... but someone needs to talk to him the way he taked to Rick.



Author's Response:

It was such a hard way for him to find out! He and Eric had been getting closer :( 

Brian has a lot to work through but I can promise he will have a lot of help, support, and encouragement to tend to his grief and mental health once more of what he's feeling comes to light. He definitely needs what he provided for Rick. 

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2020 12:18 AM · On: Derailed

I fully expected Brian to be blaming himself for whatever event HAD to happen to move Brian and Justin together after Intersect. And as hard as it is to deal with, in a way, I am glad the event was a random act of violence, and not one that just happened to Eric & Lily, like a car wreck. I don't think Brian could ever recover from that...



Author's Response:

Yeah, I feel like if Lily or Eric had gotten hurt/killed in an accident and only them, it would have hit Brian in that sense. Although, a planned attack is horrifying in other ways. But at least Brian can also blame the perpetrators in this case. 

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2020 12:04 AM · On: Derailed

Ok, wow... that was so intense. I'm not really sure where my own emotions are right now. The lump in my throat is huge.

So I'm going to ask something completely trivial... what breed of dog is Stella?



Author's Response:

I'm glad/sorry this chapter struck such a chord with you! I really enjoyed exploring Duncan's grief and his empath insight. 

And I am glad you asked! Stella is a bull mastiff who is around 3 years old, while Archimedes is (as stated in the last chapter of Intersect) is likely a Boxer/German Shepard mix. As the story is planned right now, at least one more dog is entering the fold, if not more. Dogs galore!

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2020 11:31 PM · On: Derailed

I KNEW there was a reason for that knot in the pit of my stomach when I finished the last chapter of Intersect. I thought I had myself prepared for this chapter... 

I had even had myself prepared for the guilt Brian might feel for asking Eric to come home early. 

But I did not have myself prepared for this. 

 



Author's Response:

Yeah, the sequel has a lot of horrible stuff happening. There's a lot of love and healing but it's a rough road for a good while. Brian is feeling a lot of guilt and grief right now. Glad you are finally getting to read! Thank you so much for reviewing! 



Author's Response:

Yeah, the sequel has a lot of horrible stuff happening. There's a lot of love and healing but it's a rough road for a good while. Brian is feeling a lot of guilt and grief right now. Glad you are finally getting to read! Thank you so much for reviewing! 



Author's Response:

Yeah, the sequel has a lot of horrible stuff happening. There's a lot of love and healing but it's a rough road for a good while. Brian is feeling a lot of guilt and grief right now. Glad you are finally getting to read! Thank you so much for reviewing! 

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2020 03:09 AM · On: Derailed

I'm waiting to see what happens when Justin finally sees Brian.  I'm sure it's going to be uncomfortable for him and painful to see Brian grieve.   



Author's Response:

He will see him in chapter 7! It will definitely be hard to see him hurting so badly. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2020 10:00 PM · On: Derailed

Sometimes it's hard to believe that Lily is only 4.  At least she has Duncan who will do his best to help her through this.



Author's Response:

She is extremely precocious and intelligent. That being said, she struggles with processing her emotions at the intellectual level she is at. Duncan is more mature in that regard (for the most part) and he will definitely help her. <3 

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2020 01:37 AM · On: Derailed

Cute.



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: chadmom63 (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2020 01:12 AM · On: Derailed

Your writing is beautiful. My chest is tight for Lily's sorrow.  And Brian's. And Duncan is amazing.

Sad and gorgeous chapter. 



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Lily is going to need a lot of support. Luckily, she has a lot of people who love her and the best friend/boyfriend a girl can ask for. 

 

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2020 05:21 PM · On: Derailed

Gus will be a big help.  Lily will enjoy having him close by and Brian's mind will have to be devoted to the kids.



Author's Response:

Gus is definitely going to try his best and step up. Lily will appreciate her brother's presence eventually and Brian will hopefully be able to keep himself occupied, but also devote time to himself and his own needs. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2020 05:19 PM · On: Derailed

It's time that Brian returns to the land of the living.  It won't be easy, but with Emmett and Justin close by he should manage.  He'll be missing Eric.



Author's Response:

Yeah, it will be a rough road ahead for him. He may try to jump into things TOO fast. He definitely will be missing Eric for quite a while. :(

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2020 01:10 AM · On: Derailed

Interesting turn of events with Nathan and Justin.  What an outstanding job you are doing of conveying both Brian's pain and mindset in dealing with this tragedy. I love that you are posting each new chapter so quickly.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you are enjoying the story so far and the way Brian is handling things. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2020 10:06 PM · On: Derailed

This story is sit on the edge of your seat compelling and heart wrenching and wonderful and  and and and.  So glad you are writing proficly and updating so fast.  Enjoying it.  Hurting so much for everyone.  



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you are enjoying it! Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2020 01:11 AM · On: Derailed

You did a great job describing Brian's pain in his last visit with Eric, saying his goodbyes.  Talk about angst!

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2020 09:23 PM · On: Derailed

Sitting here with tears in my eyes. So sad.

I always end my review with * hugs * but now I need a hug.



Author's Response:

*Hugs*

 

Thank you for reading and reviewing <3

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2020 02:35 PM · On: Derailed

Love how Molly is such a help with Duncan.  Poor Gus, he understands but it's a lot to take in.



Author's Response:

Molly is great with Duncan. She will prove to be good with Lily too. Gus is grieving himself and he's never seen his dad like this. It's very distressing for him. :( Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2020 03:49 AM · On: Derailed

Wow!  This was definitely loaded with angst. Emmett is such a good friend.  Brian is lucky to have his support and that of his friends.  I'm wondering what will happen when Justin finds out.  He is fond of Eric and as a close friend of Brian, he deserves to be told.Great beginning!



Author's Response:

Emmett definitely is a good friend. He and Brian have become very close after Brian moved to Brooklyn and their bonding over fatherhood. Justin is taking it hard. :( Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2020 02:52 AM · On: Derailed

Oh, God.  How sad and the thing is I can see things happening this way.  Love how you chose Emmett to be the barrier of bad news.  What happens when Justin finds out?



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked the choice here! It seemed fitting. Justin (as you have now read) doesn't take it well. :( Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2020 12:20 AM · On: LAX to PIT

Lots of talk of dying.  Let's hope that Seth is the one who ends up in the hospital.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2020 01:22 AM · On: LAX to PIT

Good that Hunter showed up.  They can't seem to stay apart.



Author's Response:

Yes, that definitely was a welcome surprise. He loves his lady and you're right. They can't stay apart, not if they can help it. <3 Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2020 10:27 PM · On: LAX to PIT

Oh Molly so many options and she shoots them down. I hope the NY option pans out. Poor Molly does seem to attract every dangerous psychopath.

Author's Response:

I know. :( I think that with her dad in his current mental health state, she is very nervous to go that far. She's the main child of his who has been checking on him and knows Craig's issues more extensively than anyone else in the family. On top of that, the rest of her family is on the east coast and leaving her job and all of her friends and family behind is a daunting prospect, even though it would probably pan out really well for her (Hunter would be able to support her financially while she gets on her feet, she would have access to some great schools and could focus on medical school if she chooses that, etc). But it is a huge move and on top of that, Molly is afraid to make things more known and official with Hunter due to Seth constantly tracking her and his history with a previous ex of hers. 

Her attracting multiple psychopaths doesn't help matters either. She feels burdensome and doesn't want Hunter to get sick of the trouble she seems to attract. :( 

 

New chapter is up now! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2020 02:31 AM · On: LAX to PIT

Oh Molly and Hunter the leaving is so hard. I am glad Justin is accepting the relationship but even if he doesn’t that’s his problem.
I think Molly pack her shit and look for work in California to be with Hunter.
Every time I read these chapters I am dreading Seth!

Author's Response:

It is hard :( They are extremely attached to each other. Justin just needs some time. I think once he learns how much Hunter loves, respects, and cares for Molly, he will be a lot more okay with it. By Thanksgiving in Intersect, he accepts it and is even pro-Hunter/Molly. 

It would be good if Molly could do that! She has a lot of (what she feels like) obligations at home but she really needs to live for her and what makes her happy.

Seth makes a brief appearance in chapter 11, which is now up! Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2020 12:21 AM · On: LAX to PIT

This feels like a lasting love.  It was nice to attend Brian and Eric's wedding.  Nice to see Nathan back in the picture.  The only sad part is Hunter leaving to go back to work.



Author's Response:

I'm glad they are giving that vibe. They really are in love with each other. I'm glad you liked seeing Brian's and Eric's wedding again, as well as Nathan! And yes, they are taking it hard :(

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I really appreciate it! Chapter 11 is now up! 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2020 01:41 AM · On: LAX to PIT

Such a loving chapter.  So Ben and Mikey are going to be dads again.  Does JR know?



Author's Response:

Yep! They are having a baby :) JR doesn't know yet. They do tell her next but are waiting until the first trimester is over before telling anyone else. Thank you for reading and reviewing! Chapters 10 and 11 are up!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2020 05:03 PM · On: LAX to PIT

Poor Hunter, it's a good thing he has Molly around for protection.  CPS really needs to check on the new baby and Rita needs to lose her job, for being a cunt.  So much goodness in this chapter.



Author's Response:

Yes, seeing Rita was very traumatic for Hunter. :( Molly wants to protect him from Rita as much as Hunter wants to protect her from Seth. CPS DEFINITELY needs to check on Nova. Even if Rita has changed in any capacity, her history puts that baby at extreme risk. She should lose her job! Even though she worked across the street and was off the clock, she still harassed Hunter and Molly while she was in her uniform in public. She needs to be sacked. I'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter! The newest chapter is now up! 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2020 02:47 PM · On: LAX to PIT

Meeting Mason was interesting.  Craigs three for three.  All of his kids like dick.  Hunter and Molly are so cute together.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed meeting Mason! And yes! Haha, they all do like dick, although Mason specifically only likes one dick (that he knows of). I think Hunter and Molly are cute together too. Thank you for reading and reviewing! 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2020 02:44 PM · On: LAX to PIT

Interesting chapter.  I really liked the Harry Potter parts. Your choices of who is slytherin seems spot on.  Though I think Brian is secretly Huffenpuff.  Craig seems to be improving and it was nice seeing Ted.  Nice Job.



Author's Response:

I can see Brian going either way. He's Slytherin in the sense of his ambition, slyness, and charisma but has Hufflepuff traits when it comes to his loyalty. Craig is improving. His family being there is really helping him. I'm glad you liked seeing Ted! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2020 03:20 AM · On: LAX to PIT

March is not a good month.  Craig is sick.  The sicko is still alive and herassing, now if Molly was a witch and able to hex the guy that would be nice.  Hunter will make things better.



Author's Response:

March definitely isn't a good month. Craig has a lot going on mentally and Seth has even more so going on, but Seth is a danger to others (Molly specifically). Molly really needs to get her letter from Hogwarts already. And yes, Hunter will make things a lot better <3 Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! 

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2020 12:57 PM · On: LAX to PIT

I am really enjoying this story it’s an unusual pairing but nice. I am very concerned Molly is trying to minimise and bury Seths violence towards her. She needs to share fully with Hunter and Justin

Author's Response:

I'm glad you are enjoying this pairing! Seth is very concerning. I believe that Molly is minimizing too. It's her way of staying sane due to her past with Seth. I think she feels if she shows too much fear or validates his actions as harmful, she will become more afraid and depressed by what's happening. You are right though. She definitely needs to share fully with Hunter and Justin, the rest of her family as well. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Hope to see you around for more chapters! :) 

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2020 04:05 AM · On: One-Shots, Drabbles, and Deleted Scenes from Intersect Interactive

So happy you are coming back. I really miss telling my mom Lilly stories. I can't wait.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2020 03:57 AM · On: One-Shots, Drabbles, and Deleted Scenes from Intersect Interactive

Emmett shaving his head is not far fetched.  That he manages to be there for Eric as well as for Brian is wonderful.  Love this story.

Reviewer: Glo (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2018 07:18 PM · On: LAX to PIT

Has that been sitting in your doc for a year? Wow! I'm surprised I didn't notice. So glad to see you've posted it! It was really good, love Molly & Hunter as a couple! Was really great reading your writing from QAF. Missed it...so I guess I'll just continue to hope & pray we'll see something else from you from the Intersect universe soon. Take care hun! 



Author's Response:

I'm really glad you are enjoying Hunter and Molly as a couple! You have really helped me with this story and Intersect and I am so grateful for it. :) 

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2018 04:06 AM · On: LAX to PIT

I read that this follows Intersect, but when I checked Intersect, I find it was not completed so how can a reader start with it ????? Because so many stories are left unfinished, I am now starting to only read completed stories or ones updated constantly.  Will Intersect be completed?



Author's Response:

It’s in the same universe as Intersect. It’s not the sequel. This is sort of a side story that compliments what we see of Hunter’s and Molly’s story up until the Halloween portion of Intersect.



Author's Response:

It’s in the same universe as Intersect. It’s not the sequel. This is sort of a side story that compliments what we see of Hunter’s and Molly’s story up until the Halloween portion of Intersect.

Reviewer: eve jowi8 (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2017 10:14 PM · On: LAX to PIT

great spin off

Reviewer: mcm (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2017 01:12 AM · On: LAX to PIT

I love how you take the time and give each person their own story within the story.

It's nice to see the other side of the person that didn't major role in the show it shelf but how you and several other writers have taken the time to build them up and not just write about B&J all the time.

Thank you

 

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2017 03:22 AM · On: LAX to PIT

Excellent start. I haven't tackled Intersect yet - I started then RL got in the way and too many chapters were missed so now it's on the 'catch up' list - but I still have read enough to understand the setting for this story. Both Hunter and Molly seemed to have matured into wonderful adults and I'm looking forward to where this story goes and reading the 'family's' reactions... (This time I'll try better to keep up)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2017 02:51 PM · On: Cracked

This was hard to read and I knew it would be.  I fell in love with Nathan in your story and knew his backstory was bad.  I hate that the teacher he trusted with the truth betrayed him.  Unfortunately it happens more than one would think or like.

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2017 10:28 AM · On: Cracked

Extra review, because you so deserve one. Can I kill Nathan's dad myself? And the guidance counselor, too. But God, his dad is so creepy. So much emotions in here. 

 It's as dark as it can be but it's masterfully done.

Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2016 09:23 PM · On: One-Shots, Drabbles, and Deleted Scenes from Intersect Interactive

:)

Thank you for sharing this with us.

Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2016 09:23 PM · On: One-Shots, Drabbles, and Deleted Scenes from Intersect Interactive

:)

Checking chapters for technical issues.

Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2016 09:22 PM · On: One-Shots, Drabbles, and Deleted Scenes from Intersect Interactive

:)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2016 11:14 PM · On: One-Shots, Drabbles, and Deleted Scenes from Intersect Interactive

This AU is growing by leaps and bounds.  Duncan and Lily!  Not surprising, that they care.  Love Duncan's response to how he knows.

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2016 09:50 PM · On: One-Shots, Drabbles, and Deleted Scenes from Intersect Interactive

Hi, Anne - very glad to see you posting again.  Lily continues to be one of my favorite OCs, even though I am so behind on Intersect it will take me quite a while to catch up. But I will one day.;)  In the meantime, I would love a story in the future about perhaps a continuing Lily/Duncan relationship through the years, and maybe even a real romance between them...in your spare time - ha!  Thanks for posting this!  ~Kim

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2016 11:50 AM · On: One-Shots, Drabbles, and Deleted Scenes from Intersect Interactive

Aww, Duncan is so cute! It was so sweet to see the exchange between father and son :) 

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2016 12:38 AM · On: Intersect

I'm glad Brian could spend some time with Eric and Lily! And that he also invited Justin. Of course, Emmett might be right that Justin is dangerous territory even if neither men want to harm the other. But they do care about each other a lot, so, it's safe to say safe doesn't apply for them. Now, what is happening to Eric? I can't wait to find out :) oh, and I loved the references to ghosts and witchcrafts in this chapter! Geat job, Anne :)

Reviewer: TheWickedStepmother (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2016 07:57 PM · On: Intersect

Finally a new chapter :)

Will something happen to Eric and Lily? Can't wait to find out. Hope you'll have time to update soon.

 

 

Reviewer: The Lantern keeps shining (Anonymous) · Date: April 30, 2016 12:15 PM · On: Intersect

Met a member of my family who said she was a white witch, told me her brother was one also. She goes about the country counteracting evil spells. It was strange. Whatever rolls your boat.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2016 07:49 AM · On: Intersect

Wow.  That visit to the restruant in New Orleans is coming back to haunt them.  I think it's wonderful that Brian and Justin spend time together.  Poor Brian was missing his family so much.

Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2016 03:43 AM · On: Intersect

I hope you update this story I love it your a great writer

Author's Response:

Writing the next chapter now. :) Probably won't have it up until the middle of next week but I am still writing. Thank you so much for reading and enjoying this story!

Reviewer: rukia12 (Anonymous) · Date: April 17, 2016 10:47 PM · On: Intersect

ça c'est probablement la pire des fanfic que j'ai lu je suis très ouverte d'esprit mais j'ai l'impression que justin est le punching bag de ton histoire le pauvre n'arrête de baver et pourquoi ???

pendant ce temps brian roucoule avec son don juan c'est vraiment une perte de temps.

pas d'érotisme, pas de tension sexuelle rien de ce qu'on connait et aime de queer as folk et c'est déprimant surtout pour le couple B/J

 



Author's Response:

I LOVE that you have supposedly read 41 chapters of the worst fanfic you have ever read! It must have pulled you in to get you this passionate over it. I am truly touched. Let's exchange work! I would love to read something you have put a lot of heart and effort in. I even promise to read any warning notes you may have (assuming you write something "controversial" enough to warrant them.) I'm guessing you didn't read my many warning notes though. ;) Great constructive criticism! Hope to hear more thoughts from you soon! <3

Reviewer: Cristina (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2016 05:01 PM · On: Intersect

I'm so happy that Justin decided to get through this wonderful step, a baby! <3 He need some happiness. He is my favorite character. I can't wait to see how is going to be.

I have to say to you, Annie, It breaks my heart every time i read a new chapter, and see, him so far way from Brian. I'm always hope that something going to change...

I know you said it will happen, in the sequel. But in my imagination i can imagine anything, something like an affair, Eric with someone... Nathan maybe... is stupid i know. Sorry.  I just can't wait to see them together.  

                                                *.* Thank you for writing *.*



Author's Response:

I am happy you are happy about the baby! He is definitely close to making it happen and I do think that, despite the less than perfect factors involved, he is excited and fully capable of being a father. He will do great.

Oh, I have been told by many people it breaks their hearts. I do hope you find some solace in their friendship. I think that friendship can be a beautiful thing, especially between two people who understand each other so deeply. 

Something will happen. I can't say, but I have it all meticulously planned out. Part of me can't wait but possibly a bigger part is dreading it. 

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Diana (Anonymous) · Date: April 02, 2016 03:25 AM · On: Intersect

I'm just waiting for the outburst and a "academy award winner" fight (or fights?) between Brian and Justin. Like I know they want to stay friends and therefore don't want to ruin any possibility of that...And that they truly are in love with other people...

But the tension between them is always haunting whether alone or surronded by people( so kudos to you). No matter if it was as intense as the begining when they were getting used to seeing each other again, or it seems the unavoidable gazes that pass between when their eyes lock. I feel like there's always regret there and a secret longing, but also an understanding.

I really love how you portray the canon characters as well as your original characters.

Omg my heart breaks for Nathan. It reminds me a little of like britin 2.0 but darker and sadder. I hope Nathan can finally meet that someone else if its not Justin.

You have be so conflicted about Brian...omg Brian Studferd Kinney. Though I really love though change and how you still keep the essense of him...

Oh Eric...I love him...he's simply perfect...(ok maybe a little to emotional...even more so than Justin so it's kinda weird) *shrugs*

So my britin heart breaks...cuz god aren't they just beautiful (Brian, Eric, Lily,...newbabygirl). Family man Brian...it suits him "who woulda thunk'"

Last but not least...Justin Taylor. I really love the way you've written him, so true to his character. I couldn't get past the first chapter of most britin fics out there because they always depict him as a device to achieve something out of the great Brian Kinney...so it was always soo off putting.

So I'm so glad to have him written like this because I always loved that he went NY to be come a "big fucking success" all on his own...

Reading through Justin's POV is definately my all time favorite. I just love that Sunshine and I'm so happy that he's gonna have a baby like he always wanted (blonde, blue eyed cutie). Though I do love the way you switch it up.

Yeah so I'm REALLY HAPPY to have found your story!



Author's Response:

Oh, there will be an outburst. Maybe more than one. It's unavoidable, isn't it? With trying to become friends but never really discussing the silence that occurred between them for so long and all of the factors that led to them breaking up...It needs to be out in the open. And that will be hard to write but also satisfying. And you are right, I think they are partially avoiding this conversation because they know emotions will rise. And they are in love with other people. They don't want to fuck everything up. 

You are spot on when you say there is a secret longing and understanding. Although Brian has no regrets about Eric, he is in love with him and they have a beautiful daughter and life, he regrets how things happened with Justin. And Justin, who is in love with Nathan despite the breakup, regrets that as well. They were engaged at one point. They were each other's first loves. There will always be feelings there. It doesn't necessarily mean they are each other's most important loves but it doesn't mean that they aren't either, if that makes sense. I don't believe in ranking those who have left such a deep mark on your heart. And, in this case. Eric and Nathan have left pretty huge marks on Brian and Justin. And Brian and Justin left them on each other. Love is very interesting in that regard. 

I am happy you like the portrayals of the canon and original characters. I am trying to round out the original characters as much as possible in order for the readers to empathize. I have come to love them almost as dearly as the gang we know and love. But I am biased. ;) 

Brian was hard to write at first but I think I finally got the knack at around chapter 11. He still has his personality but his priorities have changed as well as a few of his interests.

Eric is a really wonderful person. I think he is very kind and generous but also very honest and a little sassy. That might make him seem a bit emotional. 

I love writing Justin in this. As much as I love writing Brian and his family, I love that I can write this successful but conflicted and sometimes lost man who is SO brave and trying to make a life for himself that he will love. He is such a strong character and, I agree, sometimes he is used as a plot device a little too often. This isn't necessarily bad, but there are so many great storylines that can be written for Justin. 

I try to stay pretty even in the POV switches. They are usually the same character per chapter but there are a few where I will switch it up within the chapter. Most of them are told from Brian and Justin's point of view but there have been/will be chapters told from Nathan and Eric's points of views as well as other characters. Emmett and Gus play bigger parts in the sequel so you will hear more from them. The kids will play just as large of a major player role in the third story so you will regularly get their POVs as well as they grow up. It will take place over a long period of time so POV switches are needed ;) 

I am so glad you found my story too! If you hadn't, I wouldn't have received such a wonderful review! I apologize for it taking so long to answer. I have been working two jobs. But I hope to get the next chapter up soon. I look forward to reading what you think! <3

 

Reviewer: Diana (Anonymous) · Date: April 01, 2016 09:45 PM · On: Intersect

Omg Brian no! Lily!!!

Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2016 11:56 AM · On: Intersect

That was sweet and a much needed back story. Sorry! I'm all out of tomatoes!

Reviewer: sweetc (Anonymous) · Date: March 29, 2016 11:25 PM · On: Intersect

I'm soooo angry that my longgggg comment was deleted !!!!

I loved its ...i love Justin and It's so human to want a kid who look like you ( blue eyes and blond mama).

It's very real Justin and Nathan's meeting too....they love each other so much and it was so painful to read that i would have preferred that brian was the one to bring  justin home; i can't wait to have a kiss between them ....but i know the time is not mature for them yet :Brian and Justin need more alone and adult time so something can really happen.

I sense some angst in the very next future for Brian ....i don't know how you will break up eric and brian....i don't like them together but they really love each other so much so a big big problem need to arise to break their so strong relationship....i can't imagine what you are going to do!!!I can't wait....I hope there will be a new guy for Eric, i love your original characters and i'm sure i could like Eric more without Brian...but that seems too obvious and too simple.I'm so curious!!!

BTW I'm so happy that you have an alternative finale so Nathan can be with Justin....i know i want justin with brian and with nathan....maybe we need a thresome ghghghgh so i can beeee soooooo sooo happy!!!!(i'm joking i'm into couple,more than two noo no no). 

 

 

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Ah, yeah. I am upset that all the reviews were deleted. This chapter had a pretty decent reception and to see all of those go away made me sad. But life goes on lolol.

It can be human to want a kid that looks like you. I also think Justin sees this as the shortest route (due to being so financially stable) and might not want questions about the baby's mother (or for people to assume his partner is the father, since he might not have one, at least in his mind.) He wants to be able to go out and for people to accept that this is his baby, no question about it. I think he would be very open to adoption or raising a child who wasn't biologically his own, but would want a partner to be a part of that.

As for Brian helping him home, I am sure he would have offered if he had been invited to the party. ;) But he doesn't know Cormick. They should meet sometime haha.

There may be some angst, I can't deny that. Especially if the main ending of the series will have B/J as the final pairing. Guess you will have to read to find out. 

I do plan on having the alternative ending. I am not sure when I will post it. Probably when the second story is finished or close to finished. But part of me wishes I could leave it at that since it would be so much shorter LOL.

Aw, I wouldn't mind writing a foursome, to be honest. They can all live together and be happy. Maybe an alternate alternate ending? ;) 

Thanks for reading and reviewing, sweetc! It means a lot!

Reviewer: Hotesse (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2016 12:23 AM · On: Intersect

Reposted:
So today I started out with my lazy sunday video streaming (forgetting for a bit about reading) then did some packing for an upcoming trip tomorrow followed by a quick visit to the market. Then picked up my current couch surfer a sweet girl from Germany who brought my a bunch of duty free booze...
We then attended a wonderful horse show and came home a bit tired but still had a lot to plan for tomorrow. At that time I told her that I had some important reading to do, and thank all that turns this world I did. It's near midnight but I certainly feel the day has been perfect. A nice buzz from a lovely post hypo-thermia (warm) beer in my system... oh yeah this chapter was such a win. Loved this day. Thank you.

ps.
I wrote that egocentric review on purpose... because the chapter is amazing Annie, No words should be added.... but let me do so regardless. I'm nearly more in love with Nathan than Brian. Way way way to go you wonderful writer.
!! Him help Justin home, and all... No I was right the first time. No words to add. Just love.

Author's Response:

I always love hearing about your day, Edda! It sounds like that day was a good one. I feel honored you ended it with reading a chapter of this story. 

And wow, I am even more honored you love Nathan so much. That truly means a lot that you think so much of him as a character and enjoy his storyline. :) Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! It means a lot.

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2016 03:15 PM · On: Intersect

love this chapter, thanks for reposting.

* hugs *



Author's Response:

Thank you for taking the time to comment! :) Glad you enjoyed this chapter. I hope to have the next one up this week.

Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2016 11:16 AM · On: Intersect

I don't think you should feel like you are writing filler. I have read many books that switch POV every chapter and it leads to a good story. Good structure and a lllot of the times good cliffhangers.

I am sorry Justin and Nathan seem to have a less stable relationship here. Nathan seems a bit erratic but I think that's his pilot light burning a bit bright. Plus he's an artist. Besides he seems to genuinely adore Justin. That's important.

I think Justin is experiencing a "grass is greener" moment. We all get those esp. when faced with the past.



Author's Response:

YES. I am so glad you got this and expressed it in such a way that I couldn't top. Granted, out of all of the characters, I think Nathan's is the one who develops the most. I think this is because I grew to like him more and more. His backstory wasn't complete when I wrote this chapter but, after working out the rough points, I really am proud of his characterization. And yes, he really adores Justin. And Justin feels the same. The relationship is just different from the B/J relationship. Justin is more of the protector and mentor here and that might not be something he is fully used to. Thank you for understanding my character before I did (at least when I was writing this point of the story.) And thank you for reading and reviewing. I hope you continue it and I would love to hear you thoughts. :) 

Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2016 07:45 AM · On: Intersect

I've seen this around for ages but I'm just now starting it. The beginning has a lot of promise. I like it.

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2016 12:43 AM · On: Intersect

Justin wants his own little bubba, yesssssssss. I love that idea so much. He'd make such a wonderful daddy. 

I laughed so hard at the Benedict Cumberbatch and Andrew Garfield comment. And seriously, Justin's doctor is AMAZING. I want to meet this guy lol.

As always, I LOVED this. I am still not team Jathen, but I admit I like him more and more as time goes on :)



Author's Response:

He really does. He is taking the steps to make sure that happens. :) 

Max is just blessed with beautiful and slightly awkward looks. But he has to put on a suit for people to be able to tell! 

Justin's doctor is very blunt and to the point. He has no time for meeting with people if he just has to tell them they have decent sperm. It wastes too much time on busy days.

I am glad you are liking Nathan more. :) He really is a good guy who loves Justin immensely. Thank you for reading and reviewing, Sally! It means a lot!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2016 12:08 AM · On: Intersect

So Justin's decided he wants his own little one.  At least when Nathan found out he didn't run in the other direction.  Maybe there's hope for those two yet.



Author's Response:

He did finally decide. :) And you never know! Nathan could come around. If not in this main storyline, then definitely in the alternate ending. But regardless, Nathan will always be very close to Justin and his child. :) Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2016 09:11 PM · On: Intersect

Reposting my review :)

Here are two sentences I love in this chapter

“I’ll recommend a good psychiatrist when I have the time,” Dr. Abdullah jokes. At least Justin thinks he’s joking."

I love Justin's doctor! I want to meet this guy ;)

If Benedict Cumberbatch had a baby with Andrew Garfield, you would be the child in question,” Justin decides as he studies him. He can’t believe he didn’t see it before.

I love these two actors, so Max must be gorgeous :)

Anyway, as I already said, Justin and Nathan makes so much sense in this chapter. Their whole scene and the return to Justin's apartment feels real. I love this couple so much, they are my favorite and Nathan has really grown on me. You do such an excellent job with your OC.

Looking forward to the next chapter!

 



Author's Response:

You can meet him! I will bring him with me if we ever meet! 

I love those two actors too. Max may come off as nerdy at first but the guy cleans up well. ;) 

I'm glad you love Justin and Nathan so much. They have grown on me a lot and it is actually upsetting to write them as broken up. Thank you so much for being open to my OCs and taking the time to read this, Alois. It truly means a lot. :) 

Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Anonymous) · Date: March 06, 2016 03:27 PM · On: Intersect

Lily is a hoot and a half! I can't imagine what Brian & Eric will be up against when she hits her teens!

I was so into the sotry of the new baby, I had forgotten that Cynthia was actually the egg donor. I am happy she will be more involved with the new baby, and maybe with Lily too.

Big, BIG moment for Brian to be able to admit to himself that this had always been the life he had dreamt of, and to realize how it might have been different with Justin if he had only allowed himself to admit it back then. 



Author's Response:

She really will be a handful! An amusing one but still a handful LOL. 

She is the egg donor! And I think she is glad to be involved as well. She didn't expect how much she would love Lily and I think part of her regrets not insisting on a larger role. With her role changing with the second baby, it might change a little with Lily as well. 

It might have taken Brian a long time, but he really grew up wanting a loving family. He found it with his friends but now he has one to himself. He's a very happy man. :) Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: addicted-to-romione-bedward (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2016 10:09 AM · On: Intersect

I know I'm awful, but I'm still waiting for someting terrible ot happen and burst his happy bubble. The possibilities are endless.

Maybe now with Lily gone to here Papa...Brian will reconnect better with Justin? :)



Author's Response:

Lolol, you never know! I bet they'll meet up at least once. :) Thank you for reading and reviewing! 

Reviewer: sweetc (Anonymous) · Date: March 04, 2016 02:45 PM · On: Intersect

I read about gus finding out about the new sibling but he is not been informed about the sex.I don't know anne...i'm putting myself in gus' eyes and i would have loved to know at that age the sex of the new baby and probably i would have been so jealous during my teen age about her/ him.But i'm female so maybe a boy is more laid back about this sort of things:)and he seem so focused on the other sex or the sex in general....he should  make brian pride  ghgh he is a stud!

I can't wait to know how justin will take the news and....i hope to have a justin baby in the show too!!!They probably would spend less money opening a school with so many children on the way ghghgh.

Oh you have a name!I can't wait!!! I love the name MIA :) But i don't know so many english names so.....:) ps:we need a baby boy from justin so he will marry brian 's little girl *-* ( are we going to know who is the biological father??)



Author's Response:

I'm sorry I didn't include the scene. If it makes you feel better, I am sure he probably texted with him and talked with him the next morning. Gus obviously knows but just wasn't there for it. High school boys are often busy with friends and extracurriculars (like soccer.) I will write a scene with Gus in it to put in the one-shots. :)

Yes, lots of babies on the way. I feel like I have given several hints for Justin going in that direction, so you just might get your wish. ;) 

You will eventually know who the biological father of the new baby girl is, but not until after she's born. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: sweetc (Anonymous) · Date: March 03, 2016 05:52 PM · On: Intersect

You are treating a sensitive topic  right here....the surrogancy and what that does mean.In my country we are struggling to legislate about.Here it's not legal yet. I want to give an hug to Cynthia...usually the couple don't know the egg donor, like in person...it's better the way Brian and Eric did too beacuse even if Cynthia don't raise them they know ( lily and the baby) where they come from who they come from...usually even the adopted child have this curiosity to know where they come from.So like this it 's easier. I don't think though that Cynthia will be like Brian with Gus....Brian in your story raised Gus more thn Cynthia did until now so she is more like an auntie than a mother unless they all plan to have her more involved in the life of lily and baby....

BTW where is gus?How did he find out about the baby?And justin?I think Gus deserve some sort of preview!And i'm sort of happy that the baby is  a girl:i always go for a girl ghgh but by gus' pov he will be the only male child of his father  so i think he is gonna be happier with that ( i'm trying to be in his shoes ghgh). Will you accept our suggestions for the name???

 



Author's Response:

Hi, Sweetc!

I'm glad you are still interested in the story! Although I think that all paths, whether it be anonymous donors, known donors, or adoption, can lead to success and to a happy family, I do think it will be nice for Lily and the baby to know who their mother is. Lily doesn't know as of yet but she will find out in the second story. 

Gus is in Toronto, probably making heart eyes over his girlfriend. ;) Gus will also be in mentioned in a couple of chapters, if not featured. The chapter before this one was from Justin's pov and the next one will be from his pov too. But, idk if you read it, but Brian and Eric did tell Gus when they went up to Toronto for Mel's birthday. 

Lol, on Gus being happy about being the only male. You might be right! I feel like he didn't care if it was a boy or a girl too much, since he is a few weeks shy of turning 15. I'll accept suggestions. Can't promise I will use them since I have them planned but if I am suggested one that is really good then I might consider it. Thank you for reading and reviewing, sweetc! And for listening to my bitching. ;)

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2016 04:25 AM · On: Intersect

So many emotions in this chapter. I was so excited for Eric to be home and for Brian to finally get some again, I worry about the man if he goes too long ;) Seriously, though, it was so nice to see him and Eric back together, with Lily too obviously.

THEY'RE HAVING ANOTHER GIRL! That makes me so happy, sorry Eric ;) But Lily wanted a sister and she got her wish - I mean, she knew, she can see into the future after all.

Lily and Duncan trying to get the cupcakes from the top of the refrigerator had me in stitches, especially Brian then trying to scare them into falling over, the little shit ;)

Emmett and Drew planning to adopt from Africa gave me ALL KINDS OF FEELS, and it totally made me fall in love with Drew a little bit more. He's a big friendly giant, Emmett is a lucky boy.

Brian's sword fighting comment about Eric was HILARIOUS and so Brian - totally inappropriate. And Lily is so sweet and innocent it goes right over her head aw.

I loved this update soooo much <3



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it so much, Sally! Brian really needed to get some, there's no doubt. He isn't meant to be celibate for even a day, let alone two weeks. ;) 

And yes, ANOTHER GIRL! Eric was secretly pulling for a little boy but I'm sure he's thrilled, nonetheless. And Lily...well, she knew. Psychic powers do come in handy after all. Or maybe she willed it to be a girl, since that's what she wanted. Either way, she was correct and deserves six cupcakes, even though she was only allowed to have one.

And speaking of, those tots are resourceful, aren't they? But Brian put them in their place. ;) 

I'm happy that Emmett and Drew's plan really worked for you. :) And I love that you seem to be falling a bit for Drew. He has become much more secure in the last several years, and that's mainly because of Emmett. So they are both very lucky men. :)

Brian's innuendos. He isn't one to censor himself. But he'd probably think that WAS censoring himself. Lily didn't understand, after all.

Glad you loved it, Sally! The reviews were lacking and that was discouraging but your review did put a smile on my face. :)

Reviewer: Hotesse (Signed) · Date: February 29, 2016 08:16 PM · On: Intersect

Awwww..... All good :)
Saved my day which started out awfully. I forgot my nicotine chewing gum at home when I went to work. My brain was on low power all day... and spending all it's diminished capacity on chanting: Do not be a bitch... Do NOT tell that idiot she's an idiot....

Author's Response:

Aw, glad it helped you Edda! I look forward to hearing what you think about the remaining chapters of the story (and the sequels if I don't burn out.) Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: February 29, 2016 06:46 PM · On: Intersect

I really enjoyed this chapter Anne! I especially like how comfortable Brian is with his life. And the part with Emmett talking about children in Africa was heartwarming. No matter what, I love the universe you have created and the interactions between your characters. Looking forward to more and if I can help with anything else, I will be happy to ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, Alois! You can thank Sally for Emmett's passion over what's going on in Africa. I knew about it but just the basic facts. She gave me a lot of insight on the matter. I'm glad you love this universe. It's hard to keep it going sometimes, especially when feedback is lacking like it seems to be this chapter, but I will try to keep it going for as long as possible. I will let you know if I need any help! You let me know as well. Thank you for reading and reviewing! 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 29, 2016 06:14 PM · On: Intersect

So much going on in this chapter.  It was good to have Eric home even if only for the weekend.  And what a lot you crammed into that weekend, though I'm sure that Brian would have preferred to spend it all in bed.  I somehow get the feeling that Cynthia wishes they'd asked her to surrogate for the new little one.  Emmett is so passionate about his causes.  Brian's lucky to have him for a friend.  So Lily is getting her wish for a little sister, unless there is another baby hiding somewhere's that they didn't see.  Nathan's professional life is looking up, but he could use some help with his personal life so he gets back with Justin.  Justin needs someone.  Can't wait to see what you have planned for New Orleans.  So much to do there.  Is Brian into ghost tours? They may need handcuffs to keep Lily from wandering off. 



Author's Response:

Hello! I'm sure Brian would have loved to taken Eric to the bedroom and just stayed in there. But Eric had to see his baby girl and spend time with her too. ;) As for Cynthia, you may be right. However, she is the egg donor for both Lily and the new baby. I don't know if she sees herself becoming pregnant and this way, it will be easier for her to take a step back. However, she loves Lily immensely and I do think she regrets saying she wanted to become an Aunt figure rather than a mother figure. But her role may change once Lily finds out.

Lolol, only one baby this time! Although it was tempting to shock them. ;) I figured I couldn't do that since I did the hidden triplet thing in Nose to Bill. But Lily got her wish (and can tell the future) so that's what matters, haha. Nathan is doing well professionally and is critically acclaimed, no less! And aw, it would be nice for him if his wishes and his mindset could align with Justin's. I don't know if that will happen but I can promise that they will always be close. 

Brian might be interested in ghost tours. I could see him interested in the historical aspect and the nightlife. :) And you're right, they are going to keep Lily in their sight more than ever!

Thank you for reading and reviewing! It means so much!

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: February 29, 2016 11:10 AM · On: Intersect

What a lovely chapter I really am enjoying the love and contentment Brian is feeling with Eric and Lilly. The things Lilly says made me laugh out loud several times 👏

Author's Response:

Aw, Lily is so fun to write so I'm glad you think that. :) Also, happy you are enjoying the love and contentment between this family. I know not everyone is but I say enjoy it while it lasts. ;) Thank you for reading and reviewing! 

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2016 06:32 AM · On: A Few Miles Back

Very nice start and quite realistic. Emmett was my 3rd favourite character from the show (Brian and Justin, of course, are 1 & 2) and I always felt that Drew was a good match. It's sweet how Drew approached the subject and is giving Emmett time to adjust and reassure him as well.

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2016 10:42 PM · On: A Few Miles Back

Great beginning.  Looking forward to reading how things work out.  I am thinking Emmett will warm to the idea of a child. 

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2016 05:08 PM · On: A Few Miles Back

I really enjoyed this first chapter. I never imagined Emmett as a parent before reading Intersect and I completely believe in your take on this. I think Emmett would be scared to become a parent and that he woudn't have done it alone. As you pointed out, I do think he never really considered it on his own. Drew wanting to become a dad makes a lot of sense, though. I will be looking forward to more :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2016 01:56 AM · On: A Few Miles Back

Who would have thought that Drew would be the one to bring up having children.  I can see where Emmetts coming from, but hell, if Brian Kinney can be a great father, then Emmett can too. 

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2016 11:35 PM · On: A Few Miles Back

Amazing chapter i like this couple as well probably because i am more of a fan of Emmett lol

Reviewer: femmegirl49 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2016 05:37 PM · On: A Few Miles Back

This is so very sweet.  While I don't feel the "hotness" for Emmett that I do for B & J, he has always been one of my favorite characters.  He has a huge heart, is a wonderful friend and he cracks me up.  Plus, he genuinely likes himself, which is also appealing.

The idea of him having a happy ending is so very wonderful.  TFS.

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2016 12:08 PM · On: A Few Miles Back

Emmett has ALWAYS been one of my favourite characters, but I have never really taken the time to read any stories solely about him - actually, are there even that many out there?

BUT this was BEAUTIFUL and WONDERFUL and full of millions of feels.

Drew is such a babe, Emmett is one lucky boy - they both are.

Really loved this, the Intersect universe makes me so happy.

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2016 07:04 PM · On: Intersect

LOVED this chapter Anne! it's so good that Justin finds Lily!! And aww, she is sooo a little girl, crying endlessly because she doesn't want to go to bed but is really completely exhausted. I really enjoyed the soupe scene, too. I had nausea just imagining eating it ;) I also really enjoyed Brian and Justin's interactions. It seems Brian is still struggling with some aspect of their past but I know their love for each other, even if not the 'in love' kind now, is real and so, Brian is still hurting over the fact that Justin just ending it all, somehow. Anyway, great job again. I love how you write about day to day scenes! Looking forward to more :)



Author's Response:

Aw, thank you for your kind words! I'm so glad you liked it. Justin did find Lily, something that Brian is immensely grateful for. And yes, she really is a stubborn little girl. Wait until she grows up and would kill for a nap LOL. Oh, that soup definitely had a unique flavor, that's for sure. I'm surprised Justin could get down what he did. So happy you enjoyed the B/J interactions. And you hit the nail on the head when it comes to Brian struggling. Even though Brian is the one who ultimately ended it, he did it without really thinking it through due to feeling betrayed over Justin changing his mind in terms of his priorities. I think while Brian knows better now and understands where Justin was in that point of his life, it still hurts to think about.

Thank you for leaving such a lovely review! I will try to get more up soon. Until then, you can always check out the Emmett/Drew story that is set within the Intersect Universe. ;) Later!

Reviewer: Mariana (Anonymous) · Date: February 13, 2016 12:37 PM · On: Intersect

My boys are almost 40 years old, I have 7 grandchildren including 4 year old twins (boys)

Reviewer: Hotesse (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2016 12:18 PM · On: Intersect

Pew... thank all goddesses for Justin.
Love this chapter, this sentence is brilliant: “Cleaning my kitchen, letting me take a nap, finding my kid...what do you want?”

Oh.... Brian so stubborn not wanting to show your work... but well it's yours so you get to decide.

Now Annie, you know me a bit by now so you'll understand that this is not meddling with you story (I hope) But does Brian need this: http://goo.gl/QCGBfi

Author's Response:

Justin is definitely a superhero in Lily and Brian's eyes now! ;)

Lol, glad you liked that line. With Justin doing so much for him, a man has to be at least a little bit suspicious.

Brian's shy when it comes to his hobby. But maybe one day he'll come around. :)

LOL. I think Brian bought one for her that night. It's definitely a necessary purchase. Thank you for reading and reviewing, Edda! It means a lot!

Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Anonymous) · Date: February 13, 2016 03:56 AM · On: Intersect

Justin to the rescue! I really liked the scenes between the three of them. I'm glad that Justin is moving ahead with the surrogacy plans too.

Curious to know why Brian is so uptight about the check payment... it seems like there's more there than just being too proud to take money from Justin, even now that his is an adult.



Author's Response:

Aw, I'm glad you liked their scenes together. And yes, Justin is moving forward with his plans. It's a really big step for him. :)

I think Brian was afraid of tying up loose ends at a time where Justin wasn't a part of his life. He may be proud but there are definitely other reasons behind it. 

Thank you for reading and reviewing! It means a lot!

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2016 04:47 AM · On: Intersect

Great update.  Loved that Justin found Lily and that she was so trustng of him-  the soup was priceless.  Justin and Brian's conversation-  wow-  there is so much tension of sorts there-  they are getting to be friends but I see Brian still being a little hesitant-  loving this story - thanks for updating so quickly



Author's Response:

Yes, Lily has grown quite fond of Justin. He's been around since he's befriended both Brian and Eric and she really likes him as well as Nathan. :) The soup...blech. But she had fun so that's what matters lolol. There is a lot of tension when it comes to the past. Brian isn't quite ready to face it. I'm glad you are loving the story and it was the least I could do after leaving the chapter before this one on such a cliffhanger! ;)

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2016 10:42 PM · On: Intersect

Loved that Brian, Justin and Lily spent the afternoon together.  That soup she made was so cute yet so disgusting. I'm interested by Brian's reaction to Justin's questions about payback for the loan and why his demeanor towards Justin changed so much after it was mentioned.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you loved their time together! That soup really was something. I'm not sure if I could even force myself to eat it. I think Brian isn't quite ready to confront the past and what went wrong. More of that will be revealed before the first story is over. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous) · Date: February 11, 2016 10:37 PM · On: Intersect

I enjoyed Lily's interaction with Justin in this chapter more than any other Lily moment, which I guess just reconfirms how much I want this for Justin and how right Nathan was about that :( Truth be told I loved the three of them together and couldn't help but feel a fairly strong pang for what might have been, but strangely not what I wished for them now ..  that wish is now firmly reserved for Nathan.

That said I was more than ready for some serious B/J interaction. Their relationship will always be my primary interest so I was very happy to see some development on that front.



Author's Response:

Nathan really was right, wasn't he? Justin does love the little ones. I really like your statement about it causing you a pang for what could have been but not what you want for him now. And I really love your loyalty towards Nathan. He's a character who I have grown attached to and when I look back on what I have written in terms of his storyline, I can pinpoint when he becomes the Nathan we all know because that's when I finally developed who he is as a person and is background story. He's going to make another appearance in a couple of chapters and still have a decent sized role in the sequel. 

I'm glad you liked the B/J interaction! I'm sure many have their relationship at the forefront of their minds, myself included. :) Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! It means a lot.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: February 11, 2016 10:09 PM · On: Intersect

Good for j he need baby to



Author's Response:

I think that he's ready and is also a stable single man with a lot of love to give. If it is time for him, then the more power to him. I'm glad you're supportive too. :)

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2016 05:58 PM · On: Intersect

*stamps foot* you better stick to your word with this one shot deleted scene business... I want to see Brian trying to keep up with two four-year-olds who are desperately in love - MAKE IT HAPPEN :)

Seriously, though, these last two chapters have been my favourite. You know I love me some Lily, but this was the perfect combination of Brian and Justin and Brian and Lily. I have been waiting for a BJ chapter and we sure got that.

This had me worried (wtf was Lily), laughing (sous chef), smiling HUGE (Brian and Justin -  and Justin finding the pamphlet in the drawer) sad (the whole conversation regarding the check) and then anxious when things seemed awkward after their conversation.

So much love for this :)



Author's Response:

lolol, I will try! You see how long this chapter was running though? Could you imagine how long it would be if I included the four extra scenes I planned on doing? But yes, Brian trying to keep up with two four year olds who are desperately in love, all while buying them fries and slush puppies from the concession stand would be quite amusing :) 

I'm so glad you loved these last two chapters, Sally! It means a lot and I always appreciate your input. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2016 04:34 PM · On: Intersect

Terrific chapter.  Losing a kid can be scary, it's good that Justin found her.  Will Brian show his photo's at Justin's gallery?



Author's Response:

It really can be scary. Brian was pretty frantic so it's great Justin spotted her.

I'm not sure if he'll have a show there or not. You never know! Maybe he will someday. :) Thank you for reading and reviewing! :)

Reviewer: bjfanCHILE (Anonymous) · Date: February 11, 2016 11:03 AM · On: Intersect

lily is cute and all but too much lily in the last two chapters, when will Brian and Justin have meaningful convoy instead of sharing tidbits in brian's life that Justin currently doesn't have? I like more Brian and Justin get together again, hopefully u can make it to be happening in next chapters. gracias.

Author's Response:

I would consider their conversation here a very meaningful one, even if it wasn't what you wanted to hear. If it didn't suit you, then I guess stick around for another one?

Reviewer: addicted-to-romione-bedward (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2016 10:26 AM · On: Intersect

Uh huh... The tension is SO think... I'm curious of what's going to happen.

Brian might murder Sunshine in his sleep if he gets a photo exhibition he doesn't want.



Author's Response:

There is definite tension when the past is brought up. It isn't something Brian is ready to face, tbh. 

Lolol, I'm sure Justin would have to get his permission first. He is a professional, after all. ;) Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Mariana (Anonymous) · Date: February 10, 2016 08:08 AM · On: Intersect

Oh my goodness, when my twins were 5 years old I lost one on a beach pack with thousands of people. It was a nightmare and I don't wish that on anyone. Poor Brian. This story is fantastic I love it.



Author's Response:

Oh no! That sounds like a nightmare! At least in a store, it's an enclosed space and there are security cameras. Glad you found him/her! Yes, Brian is quite frantic here. I'm glad you are enjoying the story! Next chapter is now up! :)

Reviewer: feet526@aol.com (Anonymous) · Date: February 09, 2016 01:04 AM · On: Intersect

The dialogue between "Brian" and "Lily" is absolutely so outstanding; warm, touching and "she" is so Brian! So loving this chapter and haven't even completed yet! Just had to tell you now.  



Author's Response:

Awww, thank you so much! I'm glad you like their exchanges and their relationship. She really does take after Brian in some ways. I'm glad you loved this chapter! The next one is now up! Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2016 09:47 PM · On: Intersect

4 year old are exhausting-  nice little respite with LIly-  hope Brian finds her quickly



Author's Response:

They really are. They're cute as can be but they require a lot of energy. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous) · Date: February 07, 2016 09:24 PM · On: Intersect

Is there a parent out there that doesn't know that feeling?



Author's Response:

Probably not. I'm not a parent myself but I know I scared my mother once by getting turned around and lost in a Wal-Mart. Thank you for reading and reviewing, Carol!

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2016 12:47 PM · On: Intersect

Brian and Lily are so adorable together! I have to laugh, because, she appears adorable AND exhausting at the same time lol But OMG, you can't left it here! Looking forward to the next part :)



Author's Response:

Aw, thank you Alois! I'm glad you like this little team. :) She really is both adorable and exhausting. But never fear!  New chapter is now up. :) Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Anonymous) · Date: February 05, 2016 04:03 AM · On: Intersect

Oh, no! Such a lovely day all ruined by Whole Foods! 



Author's Response:

Evil Whole Foods! They ruin all lovely days! (Kidding. But their prices sort of bum me out.) Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Hotesse (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2016 08:26 PM · On: Intersect

Heelllp....!!! I'm hanging on the cliff....

Author's Response:

*tries to hold onto your hand until next chapter*

Reviewer: harperj (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2016 04:34 AM · On: Intersect

This is one of my favorite stories.  I love it.  Thanks for writing!



Author's Response:

Aw, thank you so much! I'm glad you love it! Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2016 02:28 AM · On: Intersect

I love this x 102929828282782! Like seriously, could I adore this more? I don't think I can. Brian as a daddy is just too adorable, but the way you have kept him so in character is just perfection. And you know how I feel about Miss. Lily! She is just too damn precious.

Things I loved

 

  • Brian snoring
  • Lily warming her feet up on Brian
  • Meanie poopy head
  • Lily asking Brian out to lunch
  • That Brian knows how to look after curly hair. It's not easy.
  • Forgetting her underwear
  • Pretending to talk like grown ups. And that Brian's real day wasn't an acceptable answer lol.
  • The Sous Cheif game
  • And she does know what it means, IT'S THE NAME OF HER GAME.
I can't wait for the next part. I know this was a very Brian/Lily centric chapter, but it was just so good and I loved every bit of it :)

 



Author's Response:

Lolol, you are such a Lily fan so I knew you'd like these chapters. Brian is a good daddy and I think Lily has helped his patience grow. I'm glad you feel like they are in character and like most of the new characters as well. Especially Lily. She really is precious.

Of course Brian snores. They just didn't show us on the show. But if you have a deviated septum, then there's a good chance you will. He can't help it. ;)

Lily can be a little trying sometimes but I am sure Brian thought the feet warming was cute. However, I'm sure he was quite hurt by a stinging insult like meanie poopy head. :'(

I'm pretty sure Eric made him learn as soon as Lily's hair grew a little and showed them how curly it was really going to be. ;)

Lily just gets really excited sometimes and forgets some minor things once in a while. She has better things to think about, you know?

Of course it wasn't acceptable. Games are to escape reality and create a new one and Brian didn't abide by that.

Sous Chef is a game that she loves so SO much but Eric really should have never showed her. But at least it taught her a new word.

Thank you for reading and reviewing, Sally! It means a lot!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2016 01:02 AM · On: Intersect

Oh no!  He's lost his daughter?  I got tired just from reading all they did.  Now I need a nap, but I can't until I find out if he found her.



Author's Response:

He did lose his daughter. :( In his defense, he didn't mean to. And in her defense, she didn't wander away on purpose. They really did do a lot. I feel like Lily is the perfect cure for insomnia (provided that she leaves you alone once you are ready to crash.) Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2016 06:26 PM · On: Intersect

What a lovely chapter about father and daughter, but aagrrr I need an update NOW. You think this was the best spot to stop!? Wrong very wrong. Poor Brian, but also poor Lily. So sit behind your computer and continue typing. * sighs * I'm a little impatience ... hmmy very impatience. Please no more cliffhangers.

 

* hugs *



Author's Response:

I did a terrible thing, didn't I? But never fear! New chapter is now up :) Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: addicted-to-romione-bedward (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2016 03:12 PM · On: Intersect

Noooo! You can't end it like this. After their beautiful day.... nononononono



Author's Response:

I'm horrible, I know. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2016 11:20 AM · On: Intersect

Oh no Lillie has gone missing Brian is going to be frantic

Author's Response:

Eeek! He definitely is. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

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