Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Define Normal
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2019 05:19 AM · On: Define Normal

vic32

Thank you so much for the fantastic work comment.  Beating Joan at her own game was fun to write.  I don't know what I did wrong so I hope you still see my response on this.  Sorry a85;

Cheers

Flossee

 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2019 08:28 PM · On: Define His Will

Poor Justin and Molly I wish they could hug as I think they both need it so badly. My heart aches for the loss of the child life can be so cruel at times can't it, 

 

I hope happiness comes for them soon x

 

wond work x



Author's Response:

Thank you for not only reading this fic, but your comments convey that you could feel the emotions of the characters.  It has been a joy to answer your reviews and I must admit to you it took me a little while to reply as I had to go back and read this fic, as I wrote it in 2014.  For me it was interesting to see where my writing was at that time.  I can't thank you enough for sharing your experience of this story with me.

Cheers

Flossee

 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2019 05:18 PM · On: Define His Will

My heart is in bits. They should have adopted both children never separate them. I can't imagine the pain they are in. 



Author's Response:

Justin's emotional turmoil must be overwhelming vast.   He thought he couldn't raise his son, only to find out he could, and now that has been taken away from him.  Brian of course is in the same situation, the emotions for both men must be devastating.

Flossee

 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2019 04:05 PM · On: Define His Will

So loving between them they truly will hope create a baby with love.



Author's Response:

Head shaking; was it yes or no? lol 

Cheers

Flossee

 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2019 04:01 PM · On: Define His Will

Wow I was not expecting that but wow that was brilliant.



Author's Response:

I'm so pleased you were surprised.  That is the best compliment you could give me about one of my fics; that you did not expect where the story was heading.  Thank you.:)

Cheers

Flossee

 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2019 07:49 PM · On: Define Art

I love that they are trying to help Justin with his art and to help him get past him not being able to draw the nude form. 



Author's Response:

Justin will continue to have conflict with his now world and his beliefs, however I did enjoy writing a considerate Brian.  With Brian's familiarity of Bible quotes, thanks to Joan, he is finding it a little easier to understand his husband.  Who knew Joan would be such a help to these men? lol

Thank you once again for joining me with the fic.

Cheers

Flossee

 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2019 05:41 PM · On: Define MY Brian

Such a passionate and powerful chapter, fantastic work x



Author's Response:

I am delighted you enjoyed this part of the story.  Your reviews are very heartening.  Thank you so much for taking the time to give me feedback and encouragement on each chapter.

Cheers

Flossee

 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2019 05:36 PM · On: Define MY Brian

I can see how embarrassed Brian was about the conversation in the dressing room and how uncomfortable Justin was at the dinner. The tension was strong. I do hope they fix what's wrong because they are meant to be. 



Author's Response:

I am relishing the fact that you can clearly see the emotions in this fic.  Thank you again for your insightful words.

Cheers

Flossee

 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2019 12:33 PM · On: Define MY Brian

So tender and loving. I love how open Brian is and it shows us his raw inner self which is fantastic. 



Author's Response:

Brian doesn't feel the need to hide from Justin.  It must be very liberating for a man like Brian to allow himself to let go of the persona he has built up over the years.  Raw inner self is so true.

Cheers

Flossee

 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2019 11:30 AM · On: Define Normal

So proud of Justin how he handled Joan was perfect and I'm excited to see where else it goes from here. Fantastic work x



Author's Response:

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2019 10:11 AM · On: Define Normal

So many emotions in this chapter and I loved it all. I hope Justin meets Gus soon I bet they get on really well. 



Author's Response:

I really appreciate your comment, "many emotions in this chapter".  I'm so happy you feel this way.

Cheers

Flossee

 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2019 09:47 AM · On: Define Normal

Justin I'm sure will get to know his new world it must be hard after growing up sheltered like he has. Brian will treat him amazingly and guide him. I hope Justin opens up to how he feels about his parents. 



Author's Response:

Justin will have many struggles with adjusting to his new life, however Brian will be the man we all know he can be when it comes to Justin.

Cheers

Flossee

 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2019 08:26 AM · On: Define Normal

This is so hard for them all and the not knowing why their parents are running even harder I'm sure. 



Author's Response:

It must be very hard not having the one question you want answered go unanswered, and your life changed so rapidly.

Cheers

Flossee

 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2019 08:29 PM · On: Define Normal

Oh no, my heart is breaking for them both. 



Author's Response:

Coming from different worlds is does seem like their destinies aren't meant to be with each other.

Cheers

Flossee

 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2019 08:16 PM · On: Define Normal

Justin is so nervous bless him, I do hope he relaxes around Brian soon. 



Author's Response:

He is terribly nervous, and surprised, surprise Brian is being considerate.lol

Cheers

Flossee

 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2019 08:00 PM · On: Define Normal

Their attraction is strong and that immediate spark jumped off the page. It's going to be hard but I hope they get together. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for letting me know you read my fic.  I really like the way you say "that immediate spark jumped off the page".  That is very nice of you to say.

Cheers

Flossee

 

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2018 05:23 PM · On: Define Normal

Justin Amish?  LOL



Author's Response:

I totally agree with your LOL:))  I try to place Brian and Justin in situations that would certainly be different for them.  I'm so pleased it amused you.  Thank you so much for taking the time to leave this review; additional it also lets me know my fics are still entertaining.

Cheers :))

 

 

Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2016 10:59 PM · On: Define His Will

This is really very well done, and your writing skills are a noticeable improvement. A most deserving featured story.



Author's Response:

I really, really appreciate those words.  I felt my writing had improved since posting my first fic, so I am ecstatic someone else has acknowledged they think it has also.  Thank you for recognizing it with a blue ribbon. 

Cheers :))))

Reviewer: Kimberly E Howard (Anonymous) · Date: April 19, 2016 10:15 AM · On: Define His Will

Spam stuff. Left it up for the review count as it was a review just a spam review.

~bob



Author's Response:

Bob I was confused about this.  We deleted it the first time it came through, yet this time it has a name on it.  I'm not fussed if spam reviews are deleted as I really only want to converse with like-minded people about B/J stories.   I am voicing my thoughts here in the hopes that anyone else that might think about spamming my fics knows I'm not interested in such rubbish and they will end up in the delete bin.  

Reviewer: cuivresdesaxe (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2016 04:31 PM · On: Define His Will

I knew there was an amish Justin story somewhere in the qaf fanfiction world but just found it by chance, and I am glad I did! It's just beautiful. I know close to nothing of the Amish but there certainly is nothing disrespetful in you Define series, quite the contrary. The "do not judge" principle is just so powerful. Love the interaction between Justin and Joan and the tenderness between the two men. Now I'll cross my fingers for a new Define story...



Author's Response:

Hello bea :)))

Welcome to MW.  I am just so thrilled that you stumbled upon my 'Define' series.  It is reassuring to hear you say there is nothing disrespectful throughout the series.  Feedback like that is invaluable.  I love your phrasing "quite the contrary. The "do not judge" principle is just so powerful ", and "crossing your fingers for another Define story".  Thank you so very much as I really do appreciate such a thoughtful and kind review.

Cheers :)))

Reviewer: Astor (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2016 03:29 PM · On: Define MY Brian

Brian may have won me over even more in this chapter, and I didn't think that was possible. Is there any way to clone him? I'll take two if there is. 

Enjoying this series so much!



Author's Response:

Clone Brian.  What a lovely thought.  Well, if that was possible you will have to stand in line behind me as I'll take half a dozen. LOL 

Thank you for letting me know you enjoyed this series. :)))

Cheers :)))

Reviewer: AstorI (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2016 03:27 PM · On: Define MY Brian

I am enjoying reading how Brian is talking about topping and bottoming. I like that he is willing to do either, but his preference is topping. The things that man is willing to do for love. *sighs into my ice cream*



Author's Response:

Ice cream.  Not fair.  Now I want ice cream.   Oh wait, you have me thinking, ice cream comes from cows (well milk/cream) so now I am picturing Justin in a cow print onesie.   Thanks for putting that picture in my head. LOL

Reviewer: Astor (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2016 03:16 PM · On: Define MY Brian

'and because of that, I think I should top from now on.' I think I love this too much already. Justin on top give me life! Poor Brian probably choked hearing him say that. Lol



Author's Response:

Haha I like that; and I guess you are right as Brian certainly wouldn't have slept easy. LOL

Reviewer: Astor (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2016 03:10 PM · On: Define His Will

Although hard to read because of the emotions at times, I found this story very real and very well executed by you. Not every story has to be Brian and Justin skipping through the prairie. It was an enjoyable read. Thank you.



Author's Response:

I love that analogy, "Not every story has to be Brian and Justin skipping through the prairie", that is so well said.  I'm glad you enjoyed reading this fic.  I certainly enjoyed writing it.  However, it is I that should be thanking you for such kind comments.  Thank you so very, very much.

Cheers :)))

Reviewer: Astor (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2016 03:07 PM · On: Define His Will

Well this chapter was an emotional one. Very well done though. Let me go get my Kleenex though. I hope the next one is happier.

You and getting me in my feels. lol 



Author's Response:

I'm glad this made you feel for the men.  It was very sad writing.  I hope you enjoyed the ending. 

Cheers :))))

Reviewer: Astor (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2016 03:03 PM · On: Define His Will

I found the idea Brian had of putting Mel in a room with Justin just so he could see that he didn't want to actually make a baby 'naturally' brilliant. The granny panties made me laugh.

I do hope Justin really becomes a father. He would be a great one.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the 'brilliant' comment.  I really appreciated reading that you enjoyed the granny panties.:)))  I had to hold back with so much on this fic as I was fearful humour would take over since that is my default setting, nevertheless, one or two bits of silliness did manage to stay on the page.

I agree; I think Justin would be a great father.    

Cheers :))))

Reviewer: Astor (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2016 02:59 PM · On: Define His Will

Justin should never feel bad about flaunting his goods in jeans. I think many have been caused to 'abuse their bodies' because of Justin's assets.



Author's Response:

Haha OMG, that is so funny.  I don't know what else to say. LOL

Reviewer: Astor (Anonymous) · Date: October 29, 2015 09:50 PM · On: Define Normal

Go Justin! Love that he stood up to Joan, and I really love that Jack gave him a tutorial using porn. lol

Love this story so much! Excited to read the other parts!



Author's Response:

Tutorial using porn.  OMG, I love that line.   Justin and Joan having a religious face off, well that just had to happen.  LOL. 

Thank you for reviewing each chapter.  I hope you enjoy the remainder of the series.

 Cheers :)))

Reviewer: Astor (Anonymous) · Date: October 29, 2015 09:38 PM · On: Define Normal

Poor Justin is so confused. So glad the family accepted Justin, and Justin with Brian, so easily. I always assume Michael will hate Justin in sight, but he was actually decent. i am loving this story! 



Author's Response:

Justin may be confused; still he is in the safe hands with Brian to look out for him, and now the rest of the family.

I'm glad you commented on Michael as for some reason I went against how I feel about him.  I also went against how I feel about Craig and Jack, which made writing them so much fun and a bit more of a challenge. 

Cheers :)))

Reviewer: Astor (Anonymous) · Date: October 29, 2015 09:27 PM · On: Define Normal

My fave line was Justin saying that the square foil wouldn't fit Brian. lol

Brian being so willing to wait and not pushing Justin is just about the sweetest thing ever. It shows how much he already loves him. 



Author's Response:

Yay, you told me another favourite line.  I'm loving that aspect of your reviews.  Yep, I'm not sure how Justin thought condoms worked. 

Absolutely, the love gene in this Brian is certainly more tolerant than the Brian we are used to.

Cheers :)))

Reviewer: Astor (Anonymous) · Date: October 29, 2015 09:17 PM · On: Define Normal

I wasn't expecting Jennifer and Craig to leave Molly and Justin. I hope to see Brian and Justin work out the kiss. I'm sure Brian will continue to have a lot of guilt about it.

 

 



Author's Response:

I'm pleased Jennifer and Craig's actions were a surprise. 

I don't think Brian has too much to feel guilty about as he weighed up his options of telling Molly and believed it would be easier for her if she didn't know.  He is trying his best with the situation he has been thrust into. 

Did I say thank God for mothers, well we might need to add fathers to that, as both their actions have thrown our men together. LOL

Cheers )))

Reviewer: Astor (Anonymous) · Date: October 29, 2015 09:09 PM · On: Define Normal

Very excited to see if Brian is able to give up his lifestyle and become monogamous with Justin. They got so close on the show. I love your writing style! You never fail to get me very invested! 



Author's Response:

This is OOC and AU so I could have fun with the monogamous part.  They did get close in the show and I think most of us want to believe they obtained monogamy once the show finished.  Thank you that is a beautiful and very rewarding thing to read about you becoming invested.

Cheers :)))

Reviewer: Astor (Anonymous) · Date: October 29, 2015 08:53 PM · On: Define Normal

The first kiss..I felt like I was there. In my mind I was. Justin must be very confused, but he isn't shying away from exploring his feelings with Brian. One of my favorite things about this chapter was Brian not seeking a trick and instead staying where he was to fantasize about Justin.



Author's Response:

What a wonderful thing to say about the first kiss.  This is such a great review; such lovely words and interesting insight, topped off by telling me your favourite part which you know I like to hear, so thank you very, very much. 

Fantasizing about Justin or a trick, and Brian fantasizing about Justin won out, who would have thunk it? LOL

Cheers :)))

Reviewer: Astor (Anonymous) · Date: October 29, 2015 08:24 PM · On: Define Normal

Thank God for flat tires. This story already has me feeling anxiety, and it just started. I love that Justin doesn't seem to be freaked out by his attraction to Brian even though it's clearly not accosted to be gay in his environment.

I'm looking forward to seeing how Brian and Justin manage this attraction and what excuses Brian comes up with to make his way back.



Author's Response:

Okay Astor, you are the first person I have ever heard use the phrase, thank God for flat tires.LOL  You always surprise me by what you write and I enjoy your unique way of stating things. :)  I agree, Brian must have awakened strong emotions since Justin didn't seem to question the fact he wanted Brian, a man. 

The next contact isn't really planned by Brian or Justin so maybe we can just say thank god for mothers. LOL

Cheers :)))

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2015 07:12 AM · On: Define Normal

I would like to apologise to the people who took the time to review this fic, and especially this chapter, twice.  I lost almost all my reviews from this fic when the system kept failing under our last storage provider and four people were generous enough to replace their reviews.  Now it seems I have lost those reviews from this chapter (chapter four) again.  I did not delete them and I really want to assure you of this.  I am unsure what has happened to them and I have informed Bob who said he is unable to get them back.  So just to reiterate, thank you to Brandon, FF and no sleep, and although it is nothing I have done I apologise that the reviews have once again disappeared from the system.

I would just like to add I think my account is being targeted.  I used to take my friends laptop with me when I went away from home and I would answer reviews as quickly as possible.  I don't do that anymore as I reply once I return.  Well now when I leave my home it seems my account gets targeted, so I assume the person knows I am away.  When I return I cautiously open my account as I know although there may be lovely reviews, there is always a not so nice review.  The person uses a different anonymous pseudonym each time, but the review is always in the same vain.  This, and the fact I now seem to be unexplainably losing reviews is very discouraging and as much as I would love to return to this sites as an active member (part of the community) I need to consider if I should or not.  I would like the thank eureka1 and AD as returning to your reviews this time was wonderful encouragement.

Reviewer: asroe (Anonymous) · Date: July 11, 2015 08:32 PM · On: Define Art

I really feel for Justin in this. I've been talking with my friends lately about social norms, and I love that you explored what his would be like within the Amish community.



Author's Response:

Hey Asroe :)

Thank you so much for this review.  Social norms; definitely an interesting subject.  I know people often ridicule what they don't understand and they expect conformity so a group or a society approve.  This was enjoyable to write as although Justin slowly adapted to some socially acceptable behaviors of the life he was thrust into, he never lost himself or his beliefs.  I could really get carried away talking about this subject, but I won't .LOL   I will just once again say thank you.  I love that you could see the real issue of this series.

Cheers :)   

Reviewer: steff (Anonymous) · Date: April 12, 2015 11:21 AM · On: Define MY Brian

I love your "Define"-Series! Found it yesterday and already read parts of it twice. "Define my Brian" might be my favorite, but I can't quite decide. They are a joy to read and I thank you for sharing them!



Author's Response:

OMG, thank you, thank you, thank you.  How nice to say you only just found the series and you have already read some parts twice.  That is such a thrill to hear.  I'm not sure if I am supposed to say this, but my favourite is "Define My Brian".  I hope that doesn't sound pretentious coming from the author. LOL  I truly appreciate your very kind words.  Thank you.

Cheers :)))

Flossee

Reviewer: steff (Anonymous) · Date: April 11, 2015 06:49 PM · On: Define MY Brian

Your Justin is SO sweet and cute! The end of that chapter made me llaugh :-) :-)



Author's Response:

Hey Steff

I apologize in advance if I have this wrong, but I think this may be the first time you have reviewed for me; it's lovely to converse with readers and it is absolutely delightful to meet new people, so thank you very much for taking the time to comment.  ‘Sweet and Cute', I like that description.  Justin is my favourite character, but I'm sure you guessed that. LOL  I love it when people tell me what made them laugh and I really enjoy it when I find someone that gets my sense of humour.  This review has definitely made my day.  Thank you so much.

Cheers :)))

Flossee

Reviewer: Brandon (Anonymous) · Date: January 07, 2015 02:49 PM · On: Define MY Brian

Good for Brian for telling Justin how important it is for them to talk. Loved this sugary sweet chapter. Such a great story!! My fave Brian/Justin series.



Author's Response:

Thanks for saying this is your fav B/J series.  I'm happy you liked the sugary sweet chapter.  I do think the warning was necessary though. LOL  Thanks again for reviewing each chapter, I really appreciate it when people take their time to do that.

Cheers :)

Reviewer: Brandon (Anonymous) · Date: January 07, 2015 02:47 PM · On: Define MY Brian

Justin needs to know that Brian doesn't care if he tops all the time. He just wants to be with him any way he can. Also, the onesie is too cute!!



Author's Response:

The onesie is just my personality taking over.  I can't help it.  I tried not to put in to many humorous parts and spoil the ambiance of the fic, but sometimes they just sneak in there. LOL  You wouldn't believe how many times I took pieces out because humor wasn't my aim.  I'm glad you thought the onesie was cute, as cute doesn't denote overdone.  Thanks heaps. :)))

Reviewer: Brandon (Anonymous) · Date: January 07, 2015 02:44 PM · On: Define MY Brian

I think toppy Justin may be one of my favorite thingo. I love that Brian wanted him to top. 



Author's Response:

Justin; what a man; willing to be the top to bring Brian pleasure.  LOL 

I am enjoying how you are pointing out things like, Brian wanting Justin to top.  It is so nice to see parts referenced, and liked, that are so AU.

Cheers :)

Reviewer: Brandon (Anonymous) · Date: January 07, 2015 02:41 PM · On: Define Normal

This is so well done. I enjoy the character development, and you always do such a wonderful job of keeping them cannon even in an AU.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for saying I kept them cannon.  Even if I didn't use all the traits they have in the series I was hoping I had included enough to make them, the, Brian and Justin we all know and love.  Thank you, I truly appreciate all your comments.

Cheers :)

Reviewer: Brandon (Anonymous) · Date: January 07, 2015 02:39 PM · On: Define Normal

Debbie is amazing. Justin experienced jealousy for the first time and was thrown in front of the Liberty Avenue gang for the first time. Poor guy. Lol



Author's Response:

Debbie, being Debbie, I think would always be cheering Brian and Justin on.  In the series she always seemed to be very mindful of the differences, (e.g. age) between Justin and the others, thereby watching out for him.  Justin being jealous for the first time, I liked how you picked up on that fact, as Justin hasn't experienced a lot of emotions we all take for granted so dealing with them is all new to him.  Thanks for voicing your awareness of the situation as it gives me an insight into the audiences' understanding of the situation.  Thanks heaps. :)

Reviewer: Brandon (Anonymous) · Date: January 07, 2015 02:34 PM · On: Define Normal

The last two sentences are so perfect. Well, the whole chapter is great. I love how Justin got a glimpse of Brian's pain management. 



Author's Response:

The strangest part about writing this chapter was having Jack explain to Justin what Brian was doing.  Weird personified.

Thank you for saying "the last two sentences are so perfect" and the "great" comment.  I really appreciate your very kind words. :)

Reviewer: Brandon (Anonymous) · Date: January 07, 2015 02:17 PM · On: Define Normal

Looks like Brian and Justun are getting married. I love how willing Brian is to give up clubbing and tricking for Justin. Also, I hope Brian gets ahold of the person who spiked Justin's drink.



Author's Response:

Although Justin never wanted Brian's lifestyle, in the series, he lived it to have his man.  I wanted Brian to want Justin, so he would have to, at least, accept his lifestyle.  I hope what I just wrote makes sense to you. LOL  

Reviewer: Brandon (Anonymous) · Date: January 07, 2015 02:09 PM · On: Define Normal

 great fic. I am enjoying how patient Brian is with Justin. I love this series. Excited to read it again.



Author's Response:

I love an innocent Justin.  Writing Justin as the extreme opposite to Brian was so very rewarding and enjoyable.  

Reviewer: Brandon (Anonymous) · Date: January 07, 2015 02:00 PM · On: Define Normal

They are so drawn to each other. I love this plotline.



Author's Response:

I really enjoyed writing this plot.  Although, the dance was inspired by the movie "Witness", the story is unique, which is always my ultimate goal.  I wouldn't call myself an author if I couldn't come up with distinctive story-lines, so I am thrilled you like this one.  I'm really happy you commented on how drawn they are to each other, thanks.

Cheers :)

Reviewer: Brandon (Anonymous) · Date: January 02, 2015 04:52 AM · On: Define His Will

I love how Justin is Jenny's favorite parent. Great story. Justin's journey into his new life is believable.



Author's Response:

Oh, thank you once again; this time for mentioning Jenny's favorite parent.  Even though picking up a child etc. goes against Justin's upbringing, he puts his little girl first, allowing them both to form a close bond.  I love the parts you have picked out to comment on, I also truly appreciate the "great story" comment, and that you thought the fic was believable.  Thank you so much.

Cheers :)

Reviewer: Brandon (Anonymous) · Date: January 02, 2015 04:27 AM · On: Define His Will

This was a very hard chapter. I feel so devastated for Brian and Justin. I look forward to seeing how they are able to move forward after losing a child.



Author's Response:

Knowing where I wanted this chapter to go, it was very sad to write.  There is no greater loss than losing a child, and it will not be flippantly brushed over.  Although they will move forward, the pain will be with them forever.

Reviewer: Brandon (Anonymous) · Date: January 02, 2015 04:24 AM · On: Define His Will

i really hope Justin is able to become a father. I love that he didn't have Brian flush the goods.



Author's Response:

Justin was never going to make a baby naturally, yet now, thanks to Brian, there seems to be some hope.  :)

Reviewer: Brandon (Anonymous) · Date: January 02, 2015 04:22 AM · On: Define His Will

Very interesting beginning! I'm looking forward to seeing if Justin becomes a father or not. 



Author's Response:

"The child should be made naturally"; it does sound a little foredoomed doesn't it?  

Reviewer: Brandon (Anonymous) · Date: December 28, 2014 05:24 AM · On: Define Art

I love this verse so much. Justin is so damaged. You can't help but hate Craig and Jennifer. I hope to see more in this AU. 



Author's Response:

This verse is very emotional, which swayed me towards a humorous ending.  Justin continues to struggle, still Brian and he muddle through until they find some understanding of each other's viewpoint.  I enjoyed writing this as Brian being able to understand where Justin's thoughts originate from, and accept them, but he doesn't have to like them. 

Cheers :)

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2014 10:09 PM · On: Define Art

I wonder if Craig and Jennifer realize how much damage they did to this poor kid? They thought they were protecting him by bringing him up in an Amish community?? I think they are terrible parents and should be punished. I was enjoying this story as usual, as I neared the end I was getting that need to dash feeling so I began to read faster and thought I was finally getting my dream story, I thought it said a naked Ethan in a grave. When I returned and read slower I noticed the N and my comprehension skills kicked in graven isn't as thrilling as grave when referring to Ethan Gold. At least Brian got a little bit of something new so that earns you a few stars and a winking smile.
Lori

Author's Response:

OMG, you had me scurrying to see if I had written grave instead of graven.  LOL  I thought you were giving me a subtle hint that I had written it incorrectly. ;)

Okay, your secret is out (dream story); Ethan or anyone naked in a grave, isn't that some sort of fetish?  Are you telling the MW world something we don't know about you?  LOL 

"Brian got a little bit of something new"  Was that a rash from the dream sequence field plowing you refer to (as I hear that can be cleared up by a penicillin tart with seasonal berries), or the fellatio in front of a dead Ethan (new kink)?  LOL 

I love the fact you tried to read this quickly before you had to dash.  I hope all necessary dashing has now subsided. ;)

Cheers ;))))))

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2014 09:48 PM · On: Define His Will

I'm worried that your head might have suffered when it was hit by a wall during that recent barn raising. Did you honestly mean to write Brief moment of time when selfishness ruled their lives. How is most of a pregnancy a brief moment of time? Not to mention that both of them were acting the same evil way, willing to cast off one child and only keep one from the litter. I can't really say this story has ended on a happy note but it seems like Brian believes he is content to eat boring PB&J for the rest of his life. I still think Justin needs some high voltage shock therapy to get over this idea that he's Amish. I thought it was down right horrible of Craig to suggest that since he didn't have the guidance of an Amish Elder he could be allowed to do something so crazy as let an infant be baptized. Why is it always some old hairy man who gets to interpret the word of the Lord? I do have to hand it to you for coming up with the brilliant idea of the girls naming the remaining infant after Justin's mother as a sure fire way to find a way into Brian's wallet. I have to tell you I have really enjoyed this series. I think you did a stunning job of keeping Justin very oddly Amish and sadly Brian very willing to change and be happy with oddly Amish. Your stories are never the same, always new and exciting. You bring excitement and a splash of crazy into the story we love so much.
Lori

Author's Response:

A brief moment in time: For a head of lettuce, I am very old. For a mountain, I have not even begun.  Do you like me trying to be profound???  LOL  Now, what movie did that quote come from???  ***Google, Google, Google***  Okay, it's not word for word, but it came from "Remo".  Do I now need to write no copywrite intended, only praise for such wisdom?  LOL   Oh, and many thanks to that particular search engine. :D

I can see why you didn't think this had a happy ending as everyone seemed to be human in the end and not evil incarnate, so we had no one to blame for such unhappiness.  I know; it even surprised me a little that it didn't end with a malicious Craig, Joan or Mel.  LOL

Thanks for acknowledging my fics are never the same and for the "always new and exciting" comment. "You bring excitement and a splash of crazy" that's my aim as I think sometimes people take themselves and the world to seriously, so I like to share my eccentric type of folly.  Although some may think I share too much.  LOL 

I'm so happy you were able to return to MW and that you now have a non-Amish existence my friend. :)

Cheers :))))

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2014 07:41 PM · On: Define His Will

Awww, this really is a sad chapter, what do you think did the little fella in? Will there be an autopsy? I bet Justin will want to make the coffin. The amish are buried in plain wooden boxes. I'm not sure if they are required to do the embalming or not. But since the baby was born in a hospital I bet it will have to be handled in the real world way. I hope Brian decides to take the girl twin now. Those nasty girls don't deserve a baby. They better not depend on Brian to support that baby. Now that I'm all sad I think I better go eat lunch before I read the next chapter.
Lori

Author's Response:

Yes, this is the sad chapter and I had to end it sooner than I wanted as it was going to a real bizarre place. :(

I think an IC Brian would always support people he loves, be it with money or in other ways, but this is an OOC Brian so you won't know until you have comsumed your lunch. 

My Vegemite lunch was very tasty; thanks for asking.  LOL

Cheers :)  

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2014 07:25 PM · On: Define His Will

I thought it only fitting that since I had finally escaped my near Amish like living situation I return to your Amish series and finish reading them. After living in a world without zippy fast internet and color TV I am at a loss to understand why Justin wasn't thrilled to enter joyfully into the wonderful world of Brian. Amazing technology at your fingertips, comforts to soothe your body and soul, and lets not forget the toe tingling sex. Cows and buttons and apple pie just can't come close to the thrill you get when you hear that special ring tone, surf thru 500 channel and don't find a thing worth watching , waste hours watching cats slip on the floor and smash into patio doors on youtube. Ok, back to the story, I still think Justin need therapy. He is not ready to be responsible for bringing up a child. What sort of things is he going to teach a child. The kid is going to be so messed up. I think Brian is going to snap one day and probably become a danger to society from all the pent up sexual energy. He was used to getting the all you can eat mega buffet at every meal and now he's getting peanut butter and jelly for every meal, and it's the same peanut butter and jelly not even a chance of a different flavor, dull boring grape jelly every freaking day. No chance of black raspberry and crunchy peanut butter. Poor Brian. So now Jelly deprived Brian has tricked Justin into giving up a jar and baby juice and he's going to baste Mel into having a kid. Will he try and keep it for himself to get Justin's mind off his Amish ways and focus on something else? But I'm afraid now Justin will be too busy trying to milk cows to supply the infant with unpasteurized milk sure to infect the child with mad cow disease to find time to tend to Brian's needs. Brian will need to spend more time at Babylon and before you know it he'll be finding excuses to visit the backroom. It will start out innocent at first, check the lube supply, scrape the walls. Then he'll start chatting with the boys and before you know it his pants will be down around his knees and someone will be checking his stiffy for wood ticks or at least that's the story he'll be telling Justin. So, that's my review for this chapter. I can't wait to hear more about Joan and how she dies. She was always such a wonderful woman to hate. I have one more question, where did Mel get the big granny panties, they couldn't possibly be her's as she is always so mean and nasty. She has to get some of that from wearing way to small undies...wait, did she borrow Deb's undies?? You really are a talented author, there is nothing you won't do to make a story come to life.
Lori

Author's Response:

Hey, Brian had sex twice in this chapter and it was approximately only 2300 words in length (yes, size matters, especially length).  LOL 

WT?  PB is never boring, and very tasty.  Oh wait, we are talking about peanut butter the spread, and since I don't eat it I wouldn't know.  I'm a vegemite girl.  I'm a happy little Vegemite, I enjoy Vegemite of breakfast, lunch, and tea (dinner) and have rosy cheeks.   Okay, you aren't going to understand that as it is an Australian jingle.  Useless fact; vegemite is another Australian iconic brand that we no longer own.   Stop purchasing our iconic companies/products NZ.  LOL 

To answer your insightful question (as all your questions are insightful), they are Mel's monthly undies.  If you like she can use them alternately with Debbie, but somehow I think the size would be a problem especially if Mel is to stay in a grumpy state of mind.  LOL 

I need to go and eat something as I think my sugar levels are dropping, or it could be my silliness levels are increasing.  Vegemite will fix it. LOL 

Cheers :))))

Reviewer: arakiss (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2014 08:14 PM · On: Define His Will

I was so sad for Justin - losing his son...questioning His will... struggling to find his balance.
At least he started to paint and he has his daughter and his Brian to love.



Author's Response:

Hey Arakiss

Yes, it is very sad that Brian and Justin lost their son.  I really wanted them to relish their daughter and have her to help fill the empty void in their hearts that was left by their loss.  I also wanted Brian to be Justin's strength, his rock, when he went through his many struggles.  I needed to show Justin reunite with his family, if only for a short time, and I used Brian's thoughts as much as I could to show he was going through this too.  I think both these men could face anything together, but that's just my opinion.  Thank you for your thoughts as you know how much I appreciate them.

Cheers :)

Reviewer: arakiss (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2014 12:16 PM · On: Define Normal

Hi Flossee!
Of course I understand tolerance - when one is in love, one is willing to overlook small (and not so small ;)) flaws but somehow subconsciously the hope that with enough love that could be changed never fade. The thing is I have trouble with statements like "I love you the way you are and I don't wanna change you". Because for me love is about changes, growing up, learning how to compromise.
I'm babbling :(
The point is I wonder how Justin manages to accept Brian's lifestyle without even thinking about making any demands, without even thinking of possible changes.
I know there is people like this and I appreciate the way you wrote it ( I even thought you've gotta be having real experience with amish ;) ).
All I'm saying is that I'm not like this, maybe I envy it.
Just a little :LOL



Author's Response:

Hi Arakiss

I understand what you are saying. I believe you are commenting on "Define MY Brian".   Justin doesn't want to change Brian's soul the very essence of who he is, who he really is; still he doesn't want Brian reverting back to his learned behaviors of the past either.  However, I think they both grow in the relationship as they move forward and with growth comes change, which Brian notes in Justin's behavior in the final part of the series "Define His Will'.  No, I don't think you are babbling, but I think I might be. LOL  :)

I love that you thought I had a real life experience of the Amish community.  Thank you.  As I wrote this I kept thinking to myself how simple and rewarding their lifestyle would be.

I appreciate your thoughts and once again I must tell you how much I like insightful, well thought out comments.  I also must say I love the smiley faces, even the sad one, and the LOL's make my day brighter.  Thank you so much.

Cheers :))))

Reviewer: arakiss (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2014 02:10 PM · On: Define Normal

It's a really very interesting plot.
I'm not a religious person myself, maybe a little bit...
But I keep wondering what it's like to accept people so completely without censure even if you love them...

 



Author's Response:

Hey Arakiss

I wholeheartedly love the thoughts you have voiced here, as I sometimes think the same way.   I grew up believing what my parents did and my partner was of the same belief so I have never been faced with this situation.  However, I hope love would make a person tolerant of their partner's individuality (including religion).  This is a very profound review, which I love BTW, as I love insightful contemplation.

This review has made my day.  Thank you so much.

Cheers :)

Reviewer: nicolle_midnight2013 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2014 02:00 AM · On: Define His Will

Hello, dear Flossee! 

As I had written before, I really love this series. You did a great story and this fourth part is the prettiest of them all. I love the way love is reported. Not only love boys, but of all others. 

The interaction between Joan and Justin was amazing and the brotherly love between Molly and Justin is very beautiful. 

I love the final line. is one of the most beautiful settings of love I have ever read. 

  "My love", "My Brian" unspoken words conveying love and comfort are breathed, but never vocalized, because When these men listen With Their hearts there is the need for words. 

The story is beautiful! 

A big hug, my dear.

Fátima.



Author's Response:

 Hello Fatima :)

I can't tell you how much your comment about the fourth instalment being the prettiest means to me.  Going from forbidden love (only because Brian didn't want to ruin Justin's life) to everlasting, strong, supportive love was quite a journey, yet an enjoyable one.

A huge thank you to you for mentioning the love between the other characters as I'm so pleased their interaction was also noted as a pivotal part of this series. 

I love it so much when someone tells me their favourite line; I really appreciate that you have put so much thought into the story, which is evident in your reviews.   

Thanks again my friend for reviewing each chapter.

Cheers :)

 

 

Reviewer: nicolle_midnight2013 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2014 01:38 AM · On: Define His Will

Hello, dear Flossee! 

This is so sad! 

It is very unfortunate death of baby of Justin, but is there  still a child who needs your love as a father. 

Hugs, my dear! 

Fatima.



Author's Response:

Thanks Fatima.  I love it when someone comments like this as it means they are thinking about the characters, and yes, as sad as it might be there is another child to think about and to love.  I really appreciate this insightful comment, my friend.

Cheers  :)

Reviewer: nicolle_midnight2013 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2014 01:23 AM · On: Define His Will

Hello, dear Flossee! 

I love this chapter. I love how Brian takes care of Justin, the supports and helps fulfill a dream. 

I really like how Brian intervenes to harvest sperm from Justin, but leaves the final decision to him. 

It's a great chapter, my dear! 

Hugs! 

Fatima.



Author's Response:

Hey Fatima :)

I was happy Brian could give Justin the opportunity to choose.  I'm truly pleased you can see the love Brian has for Justin; which allows him to take care and support him. 

Thanks again my friend for the lovely comments.

Cheers :)

Reviewer: nicolle_midnight2013 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2014 01:00 AM · On: Define His Will

Hello,  Flossee dear! 

After a long time of absence (real life is ungrateful) I'm trying to get my readings and comments in order. I read these series, but was unable to comment. I intend to comment on every story soon, but for now I like it  you know how much I love this series of stories so awesome. 

Love how you work mood and anxiety as well. I have not had any history of amish boys, so it was a new experience for me, I enjoyed each of the stories. 

A big hug, my friend!

Fátima.



Author's Response:

Wow, G'day Fatima, it's been awhile. 

I know the feeling when you can't comment and as an author yourself you would know how much reviews mean.

The Amish life was a mystery to me before I saw a documentary on tv, and then I just wanted to know more.  I'm glad you enjoyed the story and the series.  Thank you so much for the' awesome' comment and for your very kind words.  "Work mood and anxiety" I like the way you put that. :)

Thanks heaps for commenting on each chapter, I really do appreciate that.

Cheers :)

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2014 08:57 PM · On: Define His Will

    To me, dedicating this final chapter belongs to the Daddies of


this world.  True, this chapter is far more complex that just


father/daughter.  Still – to further my opinion:  imagine Jenny,


Justin’s baby daughter, on Brian’s lap.  Brian’s love would be so


strong that you would probably need a tire iron to pry Jenny loose


from him. 


    I could see this as a Father’s Day Chapter.  I don’t want to


short change the funeral scene, and the Molly/Jenny meeting,


but here we have the devastation of the death of a son, and the


miracle of a daughter.  That is what evoked the most emotion


form me.  I have to wonder if it is a male type of response.  No, I


guess not.  This has more to do with my background.  Of course


each reader takes with him/her their understanding  of the story


based upon their background and experience. 


   So in short, Happy Fathers Day to all fathers.


   I hope that makes sense as an additional feedback.


DavidR 



Author's Response:

Hey David

I get what you are saying about the funeral scene etc. and I didn't think of it that way so you are right.  I must admit I had trouble with the Happy Father's Day reference until my grey matter kicked in and then I realized you come from a country that has just celebrated that day.  Here we celebrate it in September.   I'm not going to pretend I understood all this review, but thank you for the additional feedback.

Cheers :)

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2014 03:50 PM · On: Define His Will

"Unspoken words conveying love and comfort are breathed, but never vocalized, because when these men listen with their hearts there is no need for words." 

 

That is a lovely line, Flossee!  Finally got a chance to read the last chapter of this. So many emotions swirling around in this final part - love, sadness, bittersweetness (hope that's a word!), redemption, change.  I do love how these two have evolved with their relationship, and how they are willing to make changes out of their love for each other.  And I can totally see Justin as a loving father in this scenario especially.

I hope at some point you will either write a little more about whether or not Justin and Molly continue to see each other, either as an addition to this story or in a new story in the same 'verse. Would also love to read more about Justin's role as a father, and about how his life continues to evolve with Brian in the non-Amish world. Thanks for writing this. Enjoyed it very much.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

 



Author's Response:

Hey Kim

I really appreciate your comment on the last line as it's nice to know it is a fitting end.

Thank you for mentioning all the emotions that came through for you; I'm chuffed that you feel I have successfully conveyed all these emotions.  I'm truly pleased you like how both men have evolved and the way Justin took to his role as a father.

Thank you also for your very kind words and for saying you would like to read more of this AU/OOC fic. 

Cheers :)

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2014 03:37 AM · On: Define His Will

    Thank you so much for the story.  It was simply terrific. 


    The ending was very special, ending is a way that was satisfying to me.  What I hoped would happen, happened.  Sure, in your way and in the emotional depth you choose.   It was so important to me that Justin accepted his daughter fully.  I know that the loss of his son will never fully heal.  But there was a precious baby girl who need her Daddy.  Yes, she has him.


    Thanks again.


DavidR.



Author's Response:

Hey David

I should be thanking you because if it wasn't for you I would never have given this series a conclusion.  The reason I thank you for that is because it was a pleasure to write and it allowed me to go a little deeper into the emotions of these characters.  I would really like to dedicate the last chapter to you, however; I need your permission first.

Thank you for your very kind words; I'm so happy you found the ending very special and satisfying.   "The story was simply terrific" thank you; truly, thank you so much.

Cheers :)

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2014 01:21 AM · On: Define His Will

Flossee:

 

This is such a unique universe.  It was very sad that the child died and I was hoping to see Justin and Brian raise it.  I liked how you brought Molly into the last chapter, bringing closure to the series.  I have enjoyed it.  Thank you for the creative outlet.



Author's Response:

Hey Sandy

Thank you so much for letting me know you contemplated where you wanted this fic to go, as to me that means you were invested in the story.  Thank you, also for saying this is a unique universe as you know that is what I strive for.  I may not have received a copious amount of reviews for this fic, but OMG the calibre of the reviews has been outstanding, as is yours.  I truly appreciate you taking the time to review and for leaving such positive feedback.

Cheers :)

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2014 07:09 PM · On: Define His Will

“…he now constantly wonders why Justin's God would do this to a man that worships Him.”

“The painting shows all the flaws of the paper…”

“Joan could watch over their son in the afterlife.”

“…because when these men listen with their hearts there is no need for words.”

I try not to review when I’m sleepy or pressed for time, anymore. Therefore, my time is limited, so most of the time I copy and or read the fics for short periods of time (that’s a lot of times in there, LOL). Anywho, I like to savor this story because of the beautiful poetic words of love written. This time, you have even conveyed grief in a very emotional, yet, not soppy, way. And the ending with the child and Molly and the pervious visit from Craig and Jennifer, brought it full circle.

Delightful and heartwarming!:)

Author's Response:

Hey Sandra

Somehow you always manage to choose lines I felt touched me as I wrote them and that makes me think maybe I got it right; thank you so very much. 

I don't know what to say in reply to the beautiful words you have expressed here.  I will just say the parts below from your review are very rewarding for me as I'm not a confident writer.

"I like to savor this story because of the beautiful poetic words of love written. This time, you have even conveyed grief in a very emotional, yet, not soppy, way"

"Delightful and heartwarming"

I'm truly pleased you liked the fic coming full circle and thank you once again for leave such lovely words. 

Cheers :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2014 05:42 AM · On: Define His Will

It was interesting to see that Jack is responsible for bringing Jen and Craig to comfort their son.  It was also nice to see that Justin was able to communicate with his sister and that Jenny Rebecca is now a year old.  I've enjoyed this look into Justin's life and trials.  Good job!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the ‘good job' comment; I'm really glad you enjoyed the series.  It was very pleasurable making Jack and Joan's characters more human.:D  Justin seeing Molly and his parents was requested by DavidR and Starfire64 so I hold them solely responsible for this last part of the series. Haha  Seriously; I'm happy they did because I enjoyed writing these characters.   Thank you for each review you left and the positive feedback.  I truly appreciate it.

Cheers :)

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2014 01:30 AM · On: Define His Will

Beautiful...but I still can't stand the munchers. It's also refreshing to know that the tragic events didn't cause Justin to run away from Brian.

Author's Response:

Hey Tamara

Thank you so much for the ‘beautiful' comment my friend.  Mel and Lindsay didn't really redeem themselves completely; I agree.   I did have a suggestion that Justin may return to Amish life and I love that idea, but for now I will just let people take these characters wherever they see fit and fingers crossed they have enjoyed this series.  I truly appreciate your insight and the support you give me, thank you.

Cheers :)

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2014 01:22 AM · On: Define His Will

Glad that Molly got to see her brother and niece. Wish Brian and Justin could have a child to raise. It would be very interesting to see how they would merge all their beliefs into the raising of a child.

Author's Response:

I love what you have written here.  It's an absolute privilege to have someone want certain things for these characters and I can see it would be interesting to have Justin and Brian raise a child.  I wanted Justin influence in the child's life to be apparent even with the munchers raising her and I couldn't resist Jenny choosing Justin as her favorite parent.  Are you allowed to have a favorite parents, as I know you aren't allowed to have favorites with children? LOL  Thank you again for taking the time to leave such a thought-provoking review.

Cheers :)

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2014 01:19 AM · On: Define His Will

Beautifully written chapter. Very sad about the death of their son.

Author's Response:

Hey Lorie

Thank you for saying this is beautifully written.  I am trying to improve my writing so it's a delight to get positive feedback.  I'm pleased the child's death didn't stop you from reading on and giving a comment.  I truly appreciate that you have taken the time to review each chapter.

Cheers :)

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2014 05:42 AM · On: Define His Will

    This was very sad.  Though Justin sees this and many other


things as God’ s will, still I am sure Justin will suffer this loss for


the rest of his life, God’s will or not.   But but but – there is a


precious baby girl waiting to held by her Daddy Justin.  Somehow


Justin needs to celebrate the birth of his daughter, who will be


his daughter for the rest of his life.  For all the pain , Justin is so


much richer.  He has a baby.


    Just one more thought, I expect a strong Brian and a strong


Justin to NOT give up their parental rights. 


    Thanks again for the chapter.


DavidR



Author's Response:

Hey David 

What a great attitude being able to see where Justin may gain strength after this degree of adversity.  I love your positivity and I hope in RL you are able to maintain such a wonderful perspective.  

I really appreciate this review David, from the insightful feedback to the direction you hope B/J take, thank you.

Cheers  :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2014 06:24 PM · On: Define His Will

How sad the Lyndsay and Melanie are willing to give up one of their children.  I'm glad that Brian, in the end, was willing to take the chance to raise their son.  It's such a shame that the life of that one child was cut short.  All that love, yet Justin firmly believes it's God's will.  You are right this chapter is sad, but so well written.



Author's Response:

Hey :)

Thank you for saying this is well written as I'm trying really hard to improve my writing and I thought with the last paragraph nobody would notice the script so I'm ecstatic that you liked it and left such a lovely comment.

"All that love, yet Justin firmly believes it's God's will" I love what you wrote here as it just sums up the whole chapter so well.   

Thank you so much for taking the time to give me your thoughts, as you can see they have really encouraged me.

Cheers :)

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2014 11:22 PM · On: Define His Will

Hi, Flossee - was surprised to see first of all that this was being extended  past the initial three chapters, but glad to see there would be more. Secondly, you warned us, but I still didn't see that coming.  OMG. Not sure what to say or think now. How very, very sad for both men.  I could feel the love between them as they sought to sacrifice their own desires for the sake of the other, and to have this happen after Justin was so filled with joy over the prospect of raising their son is just really tragic.  I don't suppose we could hope that Mel switched a dead baby with a live one?  No, didn't think so. Sigh...I do hope you explain what happened to Justin's son in the last chapter. And I agree with Sandra - I hope they fight for both children now. These two women have no right raising either child. Way too conniving for my taste.

Will be anxiously awaiting the conclusion to this!  Thanks.  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Hey Kim :)  I know it is hard for some readers to go on such a rollercoaster of emotions and this fic certainly has been that.  While it was hard to write I actually enjoy the challenge of getting the men's feelings across without smothering the story with sex or sexual intimacy, so your review is extra special because what you wrote is saying that I have achieved that "I could feel the love between them as they sought to sacrifice their own desires for the sake of the other, and to have this happen after Justin was so filled with joy over the prospect of raising their son is just really tragic".  That really validates the fic for me; thank you very much.

The child's death will be explained and maybe the women will redeem themselves (I did say maybe, lol).

I really appreciate your support Kim, thanks heaps.

Cheers :)

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2014 03:14 PM · On: Define His Will

I read this chapter yesterday but could not review it at that time. It was so sad that I didn't even know how to respond. I was so angry with Mel and Linds that they would choose one child and discard the other and that they would dump the responsibility onto Brian and Justin. And after all that, the child dies. Justin must feel like he is being punished, God's will or not.

I think that I read about a case of surrogacy where a woman conceived twins but the couple who where paying her only wanted one of the siblings and refused the other, leaving her with a child she could not afford. I believe she sued to retain both babies. I think that is exactly what Brian should do. They are not the type I would want raising my child.

And poor Justin, I wouldn't be surprised if he took the next buggy back to Amish country.

Author's Response:

You are correct Justin would see it as being punished.  I am so pleased you made that statement as it confirms for me that these characters are presenting as I envisage them.  I know you are aware that I write some of my fics from real life events, but choosing one baby over another wasn't written with any event in mind.  I agree it is terrible to only want one child and I love the fact the surrogate ended up with both children.  I also like the idea of Justin maybe one day returning to the Amish life, but the reason would need to be sound.  I am enjoying the ideas people are proposing and while this fic will end the series I may return to it someday as the suggestions have been wonderful.  

Haha Justin waiting in line to catch a buggy back to Amish country; that I would have to see.  Is there a buggy station in Pittsburgh? :D

I am sorry if you had trouble reviewing.  Thank you so much for persevering and leaving such a thought-provoking review because as always I really appreciate your insight. :)

Cheers :) 

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2014 06:15 AM · On: Define His Will

I did not see that coming. I have no other words other than this was so unfair...the dads would have to be the ones to completely suffer the loss wouldn't they.

Author's Response:

Hey Tamara.  I know this is such an unfair situation for the men and that they are the ones to suffer the loss; the consolation, if there can ever be one, is that they have each other for support.  I like it when a person says they didn't see the direction the fic took, yet that wasn't my sole aim here as I was just a little upset about the direction of the ending so I cut it short.  Thank you for the review, my friend.

Cheers 

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2014 04:03 AM · On: Define His Will

         First let me wish you a speedy recovery.  Let us hope all


goes well.  Let us know, ok?


     


  This was a very complicated chapter.  If Justin is happy with


what Brian did, then ok with me.  As I said it is complicated.  One


person may decide that the child (assume everything goes as


planned), was born out of love.  Another person may decide that


the child was born out of trickery.  What is important here, is that


Justin is satisfied, though it sure it complicated. 


 


       Me? Coming  from a totally different background thinks only


about the goal and the reason for that goal.  I don’t see how the


sperm was gathered makes much difference, though surely Justin


would argue with me. 



       Thanks for the chapter.



DavidR



Author's Response:

Thanks David for the well wishes on a speedy recovery.  It will take me a little while to recover, still all seems to be going well.  I really do appreciate you asking.

I understand and agree with what you are saying; the way the sperm is collected is inconsequential to most people as the end result is the only goal.  Justin's circumstance however is a little different and I'm sure after Brian's talk with Justin (about Gus) the words "God's will" is just as much an incentive as to the way Brian collected the sperm while Justin declared his love.  I'm glad you say what you think as it allows me to know how I'm going and maybe I get it wrong occasionally.  Thank you so much for the honest review.

Cheers :)    

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2014 05:10 PM · On: Define His Will

“Brian is also very aware of why Justin is reluctant to even consider artificial insemination as even if his husband could overcome the missing element of love it isn't as simple as Justin jerking off in a cup, as he did, since Justin would see that as gratifying oneself.”

“When Justin first asked about Gus' conception Brian had explained how Molly and he were conceived as he felt Justin had a right to know and he reiterates that now.”

"I am insatiable for your touch, and if I can't hear your heart beat you are too far away.”

I read this twice to get the feel of it. It was a very complicated situation of Justin’s indecision to father a child. You would think that since he was in a homosexual relationship it should have been no holds barred. Even if that were so, I couldn’t see him naturally conceiving with Mel.
Justin chose to remain with his religious upbringing which poses all sorts of problems living outside of the Amish community. I love to read how he navigates outside of it and in his relationship with Brian. I also love how creative Brian is in dealing with it. Getting that sperm the way he did was genius. Also, you had me swooning with some of the beautiful things being said while obtaining that sperm.
Keep up the good work!
You had a few minor grammatical errors (but probably not as much as my review and not enough to distract from the story): “Them self” instead of themselves and “abandon” instead of abandoned. But it’s best to check that I’m right or not. ;) All in all, a beautiful chapter!

I pray I’m not too late in wishing you luck about the anesthetist. Freddy Krueger would have been better than my last one. But the surgery was a success, though. No matter what, I’m positive you will do well.

Sandra:)

(May be duplicated)

Author's Response:

Hey Sandra :)

I agree with you, I couldn't see Justin impregnating Mel naturally and his false bravo was the only thing making him think maybe he could.  I'm sure we have all been in a similar situation, however, probably not so literally.  Maybe climbing the steps to a roller coaster only to find you can't bring yourself to get on.   Haha, okay that's a lame example, but I'm sure you know what I mean.

I'm thrilled you like the way Brian helps Justin by collecting the sperm as he did, and the dialogue had you swooning; nobody has ever said that about something I have written before, Thank you so much.

I appreciate your help with the grammatical errors.  I apologise for all errors, as you know I'm not a great writer and I appreciate all the help I can get. 

Thank you for the well wishes with the surgery.  During my adult life I have had 10 surgeries, yet my worse scar comes from a small procedure I had in a doctor's office on my lower leg.  I would call the man a butcher, not a doctor, but then that would be an insult to all butchers.  In saying that though, I must admit I have had the best surgeons and this time the anaesthetist, who is a very nice person, managed to only give me one bruise. I suppose I shouldn't complain about the last time where I ended up with one arm completely bruised as at least I woke up.  LOL 

Thanks so much for the great review.

Cheers :)

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2014 09:43 PM · On: Define His Will

First, good luck with your surgery.

This chapter was one of my favorites; Justin realizing that he could not have sex with Mel, Brian explaining about
God's will and his love for Gus, and finally, making love with Justin and talking about their love for each other and why he collected Justin's sperm to see if it is God's will that Justin becomes a father.

Author's Response:

Hey Lorie.

Thank you for the well wishes with the surgery.  All seems to have gone well and I am just a little sore (oh, I hope that's not TMI, lol). 

Thank you so much for saying this is one of your favourite chapters and why; that really helps me and your kind words are very encouraging and appreciated.  I think Brian using those words, God's will, was very reassuring to Justin.

It's an absolute delight receiving your always positive reviews, thanks Lorie.

Cheers :)

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2014 01:40 PM · On: Define His Will

Happy to see the update to this, Flossee. I love the 'my love ' and ' my Brian' references (I'm a big romantic; what can I say?) :) And I like how they know each other so well, and Brian's protectiveness toward Justin. Interesting twist on Joan and Justin bonding! Looking forward to the rest of this story. Hope your visit to the doctor goes well for you. *Hugs* ~Kim

Author's Response:

Haha, yeah I know you are a big romantic Kim, thanks to you and Moonshadow Woman the Valentine's Day category is looking very health. :D   I'm so glad you like the terms of endearment the men use; thank you for letting me know that.   I thought it was feasible Joan and Justin might bond over religion and understanding why I did that will be clearer in the future.  Thank you also for the good wishes, all seems to have gone well, but I am not capable of a happy dance about it yet. LOL   I really appreciate you taking the time to review and I apologize for the time it has taken me to reply.

Cheers :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2014 07:43 AM · On: Define His Will

It's amazing how supportive Brian is in this.  Also surprising that Justin is so close to Joan.  Great chapter.  Best wishes for your operation.



Author's Response:

Hey YumYumPM,

I'm so happy to see your review.  Thank you for taking the time to let me know your thoughts.  I wanted Justin to have someone in his new life that understood and tried to follow rules of a religion, and I thought it was feasible Joan and Justin might bond over that.  Thank you for the great chapter comment and the best wishes (the nerves are starting to creep in). LOL

Cheers :) 

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2014 04:51 AM · On: Define His Will

Wow what a sneaky thing for Brian to do, but oddly I understand the motive behind it. So Mel is going to be the birth mother huh...I figured as much ;)

Good luck with your surgery my friend...just think this is the finish line!

Author's Response:

Sneaky Brian is right, I think choosing the words "God's will" was also a sneaky thing for him to do. Haha  Poor Mel, whenever I put her in a fic her underwear seems to get mentioned. LOL 

Thank you so much for the good luck as I really believe I need it with this anaesthetist.  I'm happy to see it all conclude, then I only have to take drugs (no prescription ones, lol) and cross my fingers for the next ten years.  Thanks Tamara for reviewing and good wishes.

Cheers :)

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Anonymous) · Date: June 16, 2014 04:30 AM · On: Define His Will

I like the way Brian is patient with Justin and finds a way to help be a donor and then a father.  It will make Jutin very happy.



Author's Response:

Hey Sandy.

I'm glad you like this Brian.  He tries really hard to please Justin and look out for him.  It's been an absolute pleasure to write this series as it has allowed me to focus on those qualities of Brian's and not the ones that hurt Justin.  Thank you for all your positive and encouraging reviews, I can't tell you how much they mean to me and help me.

Cheers :)

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2014 09:55 PM · On: Define His Will

    Once again, thanks for the story/chapter.  The ending surprised me.  I thought that Justin’s reluctance to have a child


with Lindsey/Melanie  was because that he would object to


giving up his Parental Right.  More than that, I do believe that if


Justin  was to father a child, he would want to raise it.  I believe


his religious beliefs also point to that.  It will be interesting to


see what happens.  I know he said he would help, but I don’t


know what that means.


    Thanks again the story.


DavidR


PS:  No demands, but I would love to see a reunification of Justin


and his family.  Even if only for a short meeting.  I do believe that


I am not the only one who would like to see that.



    



Author's Response:

Hey David :)

I'm glad the end of this chapter surprised you and I love the comments you have made.  You are certainly helping me identify if I have covered all the thought patterns you are experiencing (as I'm sure others are thinking the same), and by doing so you are keeping me on track.  Thank you so much for that.   Even after the chapter I have just published things will not be clear.  I hope you keep reading to find out where this is going.

This fic (three chapters only) is leading in to the last fic of the series which has your request covered.

Thank you David I appreciate and value your help and your thoughts.

Cheers :)

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2014 06:01 PM · On: Define His Will

Glad to see you continuing in this 'verse, Flossee. I have enjoyed every one of the stories.  I adore how Brian is willing to change his lifestyle b/c of his love for Justin. 

I am a bit surprised that Justin would (apparently) agree to help one of the women father a child, especially, the 'old-fashioned' way,' since he is still so relatively prudish about sex, even with Brian; he wouldn't even kiss him in public at first, and now he's contemplating having sex with a virtual stranger?   And he didn't appear especially happy to see them when they showed up at the loft. I'll be curious to see how that pans out, and if that IS what he agreed to.  I do hope he can become more comfortable with his sexuality by the end of this story with his husband, though; Brian has been so patient with him, and I find that very sweet.  I do see him relaxing quite a bit from what he was like initially, though, which is good.

Thank you for continuing in this realm, Flossee. Very enjoyable.  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Hey Kim.  It's good to see you back with a new fic.   

Okay, this is a little off track, but we have an ad on tv here which goes "and you may contribute a verse" and I just love the sentiment of it, so much so, that just by you using the word verse you have made my day.  Thanks :) 

I'm glad you are enjoying this Brian.  You certainly have Justin's dilemma clear, how indeed is going to carry this out?   LOL I'm not telling; yet.

Thank you so much for taking the time to review and for your very kind words.

Cheers :)

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2014 03:24 PM · On: Define His Will

I have really enjoyed this series. Sometimes it is hard to understand what Justin is feeling, but you always try to explain his view. Thank you

Author's Response:

Hey Cheryll.  I love your observation that Justin's interpretation/reason for his actions is not always clear.  I do try and give an insight to what Justin is dealing with, yet not always from his perspective as I like to think Brian needs to muddle his way through it sometimes using a little speculation, since we are dealing with men, and these OOC men aren't the "tell me what you're thinking dearest" kind of guys. LOL  Thank you so much for letting me know you are enjoying this series; I truly appreciate that.

Cheers :)

Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous) · Date: June 12, 2014 04:54 AM · On: Define His Will

A child should be made naturally if possible? This is getting interesting.



Author's Response:

Hey Carol :)

I'm so happy you have taken the time to give your thoughts on Justin's announcement.  I think it might get a little more interesting than Justin expects. LOL  Thank you for taking the time to review, I'm very grateful.

Cheers :)

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Anonymous) · Date: June 12, 2014 04:33 AM · On: Define His Will

Interesting twist-  I wonder how that will pan out.  I don't really like that Mel and Linds asked Justin to father a child-  esp if they know his many difficulties.  Still it will be interesting to read



Author's Response:

Hey Sandy :)

I'm with you on Mel and Lindsay asking Justin to father a child; it's as if he doesn't have enough to deal with.  I'm glad you don't mind the departure from canon and are still willing to read on; I really appreciate that, and the time you have taken to review. 

I look forward to reading your challenge fic set in St Louis. 

Cheers :)

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2014 02:38 AM · On: Define His Will

Loved this chapter. Justin seems very realistic considering how he was raised. Looking forward to how the 'will he or won't he become a father' question is answered.

Author's Response:

Hey Lorie :)

The way you state the question is very apt and it will be answered quickly as this fic is only three chapters long.  Thank you for letting me know you enjoyed this chapter and that you are looking forward to more.  I hope I don't disappoint you and I can keep Justin's character realistic to the AU.  I truly appreciate all your support.

Cheers :)

Reviewer: Len (Anonymous) · Date: June 11, 2014 10:47 PM · On: Define His Will

I've enjoyed your other stories in this series but to be honest I personally just don't like kid!fic (stories where Brian and Justin have children other than Gus) so I can't help hoping that somethng will prevent Justin from fathering a child the way he would like to and that will be the end of it.

Author's Response:

Hey Len :) 

I think this is a very well thought out review.  You probably know where I stand on cute kids in fics and you are trying to gauge my thoughts.  LOL I'm on to you.  I'm glad you enjoyed the other fics in the series and I'm really happy you have taken the time to review.  Thank you so much.  It's always nice to be able to chat with a new reviewer and hear their opinion.

Cheers :)

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2014 10:05 PM · On: Define His Will

"Stipulating that a child should be made naturally, if possible."

?!!! No wonder Justin was amazing gracing in the shower, LOL. he can't wear blue jeans around his husband but is contemplating doing that?!

I must say his avoiding the women was cute. I can see why he was uncomfortable. Donating sperm is a long way from how and where he was raised.

Forgive me if my review doesn't to make sense. I try not to review when I haven't had much sleep or am limited with time which leaves me with almost no time to read and review, but as bleary-eyed as I am I had to read this update. I love this Amish-Justin universe and could see myself reading this indefinitely.

Author's Response:

Yeah, Justin seems like he is making up the rules as he goes along.  Brian can't masturbate, but he can suggest having sex with a woman.  What is the author thinking? LOL  Justin trying to make both worlds balance has given me so much leeway in writing this as even if his thinking if flawed he is seeing logic behind his actions.  Singing and avoidance will it be enough?  "I love this Amish-Justin universe and could see myself reading this indefinitely" thank you, that is a wonderful thing to say and I'm so glad you deprived yourself of sleep to review as I love receiving your very kind words and all the encouraging support you give me.

Cheers :)

Reviewer: XPO787 (Anonymous) · Date: June 11, 2014 09:21 PM · On: Define His Will

I can imagine Mel's face. :D I'd love to read how this plays out. Will Mel or Linz be the mother?



Author's Response:

LOL I love that you are thinking about who the mother will be.  You won't have long to wait to find out as I hope to update before my next operation which is on Tuesday.  Yeah, I think Mel and Lindsay would both be thinking WTF. :D  Thank you so much for reviewing, I really do appreciate it.

Cheers :)

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2014 08:08 PM · On: Define His Will

WOW, this is sure putting a new spin on things. I think I might have to take a long nap before I can really let my mind take in all the ramifications. I can not imagine Brian will allow Justin to come in such close contact with Smelly Melly so I am going to have to imagine it will be Lindsay. Since Brian knows his way around Lindsay that might not seems so horrible. I'm still a little worried that Justin won't want to make a mess of his wedding vows by coupling with another, even with the blessings of his beloved Brian. I'm thinking it might have to be a 3 way. I'm sure you'll come up with a reasonable way to make it all happen. I have heard that there are passages in the Amish Bible that say arrangements like this done in a blue Jeep are ok in the Amish faith....well OK, maybe it did say blue buggy but we know Jeep and Buggy are practically interchangeable in this century. I do hope the girls know the importance of health testing before using Amish sperm, the parasite problem is still a big concern. You would not want to start a baby with tapeworms. Oh, I'm pretty sure Justin will want the act to take place on a mattress stuffed with straw and if mood lighting is needed it will have to be a kerosene lantern. I know you are always looking for tiny details to bring the story to life. I think this is going to be a great new story to this saga. Do you think the thought of a grand child might be enough to bring Jennifer and Craig back into Justin's life? I'm a little afraid Molly won't be quick to embrace such an alternative family group but I'm sure in time she will adjust and welcome a chance to be a devoted aunt. I'm giving this a galaxy of stars to show how much I appreciate your willingness to share your talents with us.
Lori

Author's Response:

OMG, your mind went where mine did before I tamed it down; although I was thinking a four way. Yuck:D  Thank you so much for the blue jeep (modern day buggy) Bible reference, but even I would have trouble believing jeeps come in blue. LOL  Does Brian's little extracurricular activities at work appease you, since you were worried he wasn't getting enough at home.  I'm surprised you let me get away with the men not having sex, while standing, for the first five months.  That means Justin thought they were going to do it on the floor of the change cubicle.  Yuckity, yuckity, yuck.  Have you ever seen a clean changing room?  Sperm parasites would definitely be a problem if that had taken place.  Maybe a mattress stuffed with straw is a good idea as he can then recycle and feed the stuffing to his cows from York or better still burn the evidence.  I thank you for the galaxy of stars and I give you the same for taking the chance at being arrested while reviewing. LOL  Thank you my friend it's been fun as always.

Cheers :)

Reviewer: sarahyellow (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2014 07:46 PM · On: Define MY Brian

Hahaha! Yeah right, like Brian would agree to that. I can just imagne his eyes going wide when Justin declared that last. The thing I love most about this story is how you have Justin integrating his life into the modern world and with Brian, and yet you don't lessen his belief system or change who he fundamentally is to suit the world of Liberty Avenue. Some how you make all of his modesty and his quirks work, maintaining Justin's character the way you created it!



Author's Response:

Hey Sarah.

I truly appreciate you reviewing this and letting me know you enjoyed Justin's little declaration.:D Thank you for your very kind words and telling me what you like about this fic.  Justin trying to balance his beliefs and life with Brian has given me so much leeway which has made this extremely enjoyable to write.  "Somehow you make all of his modesty and his quirks work, maintaining Justin's character the way you created it!" Thanks, that is nice of you to say; I really am gratefully you have taken the time to share your thoughts as they are very encouraging.

Cheers :)  

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2014 06:36 PM · On: Define His Will

Okay so the first question is who would be carrying the baby, and the second being could Justin fuck either of the girls without feeling guilty or thinking that he was cheating on Brian? Would Mel even allow it?

And speaking of Brian, why didn't he just tell Justin the truth about what he was doing in the shower and why? Justin will never truly understand certain parts of his new life if Brian keeps holding things back. I get that he feels that he is protecting Justin in a way...but is he really? Maybe a bit more exposure is in order here, if not Brian could very well lose Justin to the Amish life once again.

Damn I love this series! ;)

Author's Response:

Hey Tamara :)

Thank you so much, I was hoping someone would be thinking of who Justin was going to do horizontal tango with.  The Brian and Mel answer will come within the first two paragraphs of the next chapter.  LOL I'm learning not to give too much away. 

You are right this Brian does hold back if he thinks it will cause Justin undue pain because he believes Justin has enough to deal with being trust into a life he couldn't possible fully understand.  BTW, I love the way you are cheering for the couple.  I'm trying to picture Justin going back to the Amish way of life and I must say that is a very interesting concept.

Thank you my friend for taking the time to review and letting me know you are enjoying the series.

Cheers :)

Reviewer: sarahyellow (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2014 03:57 PM · On: Define His Will

I left an honest review in one of the first chapters of your first of these fics, stating that I felt much was taken away from the enjoyment of the story by the grammar mistakes I observed. I had stopped reading thses stories after that. But I read this one on a whim, and I don't see the mistakes I was seeing before. In fact I was really interested in the story because of the supremely unique character you have created for Justin. I think I'm going to go back to the beginning and give these stories another try!



Author's Response:

Hello Sarah. 

Firstly, thank you for taking the time to review.  Also, thank you for giving this series another chance.  I couldn't find a beta and your original review is probably why Janet offered to beta for me, and I am so happy she did, so thank you again.  She is prefect as I wanted someone who wouldn't change my writing, they would just help me with misspelt/misused words, punctuation etc.  She is also the reason you won't find to many mistakes anymore.  When I came to MW Bob made sure I knew this site was a safe haven for new writers.  They don't tolerate trolls and the other authors seem to rally if they think a reviewer is being unkind.  My personal experience on MW is that both authors and reviewers have been fantastic, helping me with errors and telling me if my writing doesn't make sense.  I don't see that as anything, but helpful.  "supremely unique character you have created for Justin" thank you, I'm not a great author, but my ideas are usually distinctive; that's what I strive for.  This reply seems to be full of thank you's and I mean every one of them.  I do get on the soap box occasionally as I like the new authors to be supported and I like them to join in the family atmosphere this site has.  At this point you are the only newish author that has reviewed for me and I can see you are well and truly joining in the fun.  I hope you get as much entertainment out of this site as I do. 

Cheers :)

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2014 10:29 PM · On: Define Art

Hi, Flossee - I'm very late reviewing this story, but I have not been on the site too much in the past three weeks.  My father passed away unexpectedly on May 7, and was in the ICU unit before that, but I wanted you to know how much I enjoyed this latest installment in this series.  It was a nice diversion from my grief, and I like how Brian is so caring, sweet, and responsive to Justin's needs, and how he is willing to change his lifestyle out of his love for him.  I'm like Sandra - loved the part about him being unable to be apart from his husband, and how he came after him and carried him to the car.  I hope you will consider continuing this, possibly with a reunion between Molly and her brother. Thank you for this story.  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Hi Kim.   Commiserations on the passing of your father.  I'm sorry I wasn't aware; I had noticed you hadn't been on the site and I was almost going to contact admin and see if you were ill.  I didn't because I thought if you wanted people to know why you were away you would tell us.  Thank you for allow me to know.  I hope you have some cherished memories to see you through the sad times as I know words can't help at this time.  Saying you spent time in the ICU unit sounds like you were able to say goodbye, please treasure that.

I'm sorry I have taken so long to reply, but I have been on a short vacation before I revisit my surgeon who will tell me when my (hopefully final) operation will be.  I only had my iPad so I couldn't reply to any reviews; I apologize. 

Thank you for saying you liked this instalment and MW could be a small diversion for you.  I appreciate you telling me the part you liked as it allows me to know where a person connected with the fic, however I always knew you were a romantic; not letting Valentine's Day go by without acknowledging the boys with a fics. :D  Thank you also for saying you would like to see a continuance.  I appreciate you leaving this review Kim and I hope to see you back writing when you feel you are ready.

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2014 07:17 PM · On: Define Art

“Ethan Gold is going to have a front row seat to the historic event.”

As usual, I forget something. ;) I thought the last paragraph was a perfect ending and hilarious to boot. Keep up the good work!


Sandra:)

Author's Response:

Thanks Sandra, for coming back and commenting on the last paragraph and letting me know we shared a laugh.  I love it when someone has the same sense of humor as me.  Thank you also for the encouragement (perfect ending), it is very much appreciated and needed.  Yes, sometimes I can be a little needy. LOL 

Cheers :)

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2014 07:16 PM · On: Define Art

"I need my husband please."

How fitting that I’m reviewing this while listening to John Legend’s All of Me. How romantic that Brian would go through repressed sexual needs and desires to make his Justin comfortable and calling Lindsay in “need” of his husband was swoon worthy. And when Brian picked up a sleeping Justin and carried him to his Jeep… Not since The Notebook have I been so moved.

I would be the first to tell you, if not my husband, that I’m not generally the romantic type. I love James Bond movies, Action, Sci-Fi… So a romantic story had better be good enough to keep my interest. QAF captured me like no other TV show and discovering the fan fiction was only icing on the cake. It is stories like yours that keep bringing me back to the reason I fell in love with QAF, initially.

Author's Response:

"John Legend's All of Me" OMG I just listened to it.  Curves and imperfections LOL I can honestly say I had heard the song before, but I didn't know the words.  Thanks for that as I really like the song now I've listened to the lyrics and I will be adding it to my playlist.  "Repressed sexual needs and desires" I love your wording.   Now I have to watch the Notebook.  I have planned to watch it on several occasions and each time something interferes.

"It is stories like yours that keep bringing me back to the reason I fell in love with QAF, initially"; thank you so much, that is such a lovely statement.  I thought I was probably only one, of a very few, that found the show romantic all the way through, the undercurrent of romance was always visible to me and is the reason I kept watching.  I think it helped that the first episode I came across was the one ending with Brian and Justin standing in front of emergency vehicles and Brian finally professes his love.  Funny part: I didn't know at the time it took him 5 years to do so. LOL 

I truly appreciate your very kind words and that you took the time to review.  I can only apologize that I have taken so long to reply but I have been away on a short vacation and I didn't have any way of replying even though I could read MW on my iPad. 

Cheers :)

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Anonymous) · Date: May 09, 2014 04:51 AM · On: Define Art

I would enjoy more in this universe.  Watching Justin adjust to Brian's world has been very enlightening.  You've done a great job in this universe and where your inspiration came from, I don't know but it has been a delight to read.

 

Keep it up



Author's Response:

Hey Sandy.  Thank you for saying you would like to see this continued.  I battle with knowing whether to continue or not.  I don't know if you can relate to this as your fics always do so well, but when you have a high read count and low reviews you wonder if people are enjoying your fic or not.  I appreciate you letting me know you are enjoying it and I really appreciate your very kind words, enlightening, and a delight to read, are two things I've never had said to me before; you have made my day.  I can't thank you enough.

Cheers :)

Reviewer: Blossomlegs (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2014 03:16 AM · On: Define Art

I would Love to read more of these AU verse!  Thanks!



Author's Response:

Hey JoAnn.  Thank you for letting me know you have read this series and that you would love to read more; I truly appreciate that. 

Cheers :)

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2014 08:08 PM · On: Define Art

Just wait a few moments for me to come out of my sweet romance induce coma. This Brian is just going to kill me. I think both boys need some therapy to get over some of their odd behaviors. I must say your writing does challenge my senses and forces my mind to expand. Now if I could just convince certain Native American tribes that the writing contained on this website are not Porn I would be able to respond to your updates in a more timely manner. I feared for my life when that warning screen flashed before my eyes. I was sure I would be hauled off to a jail and tortured for my crimes. I just find it funny coming from a place that pushes gambling, alcohol and tobacco. Of course I wish you to continue on with this saga, I am very excited to hear more about the family that Justin was willing to leave behind. I think Craig and Jennifer need to have a very clear talk with Justin and explain his true heritage and ease his conflicts over how to be a happy healthy gay man. Maybe Emmett needs to take him away for a few weeks to learn the gay boy's handbook inside and out. I know Brian claims to be satisfied with the physical contact he's getting but I think he's going to need something a little more to keep him going. How many testicles does Brian have in this story? Maybe his testosterone level is very low right now. There has to be some reason. Oh no, do you think Brian was infected with a parasite from his brief trip to Amishland? I bet he's got a 12 foot long tape worm chewing up his sex drive. Thanks for keeping me entertained.
Lori

Author's Response:

LOL Thanks for keeping me entertained, your review is hilarious.  I'm really happy to hear from you as now I know you are not sitting in some dingy jail cell and it is entirely my fault. LOL   OMG can you call what I just wrote porn as I did use words like fellatio, manhood and alleviate his own desires.  Maybe "then the lover's rest heads on each other's shoulder while breathing in the all-consuming unadulterated love they share" was a bit risqué. LOL  I'm glad I am able to expand your mind, unfortunately it seems I am taking it in an uncomfortable direction.  I fear we are at opposite ends of the spectrum when it comes to a romantic Brian.  Although I always thought of Brian as romantic since the first episode I saw of QAF was two men standing in front of emergency vehicles where one declared his love while they embraced.  AWW.  Brian testicle count is unknown at this stage, however I will keep you informed if that information should come to hand.  See how there is no porn intended in this fic as I even managed to put, come and hand, in the same sentence and not in a sexual way.  :D Thanks for the laugh my friend.

Cheers :)

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2014 04:54 AM · On: Define Art

   I was happy to see this story continue.  After all, we now


know the characters fairly well. Then again, as shown in this


chapter/sequel – not really.  It is fun watching them resolve


differences. What is most notable to me is that they can and


do resolve them, each respecting the others point.


   Yes, I did mention it In my way in the feedback to “Define


Normal” that I believed that the Molly, Craig, Jennifer and


Justin relationship, whatever that now is, be resolved.  I think


Brian and Justin’s resolving of their difference are much easier


than the differences between the four Taylors.  Then again,


how will Brian fit in. We shall see.


   Thanks again for the story.


DavidR



Author's Response:

Hey David

"Then again, as shown in this chapter/sequel - not really".  I love this comment as I would hate for the men to become predictable.   That's a lovely thing to say; that you are having fun watching them resolve their differences and how they still manage to respect each other's point; I really appreciate those words.

I remembered you asking for the Taylor family issue to be resolved and Janet would like to see that also.  What is swirling around inside my head at the moment may not be everyone's ideal conclusion.  However, if the people reading this series let me know they want a continuance then I hope you will enjoy it, or at least understand where I have taken the characters and why.

Thanks again for your support David; I really appreciate your insightful words.  Thank you also for taking the time to review.

Cheers :)

Reviewer: starfire64 (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2014 11:39 PM · On: Define Art

Hi Flossee, Very well thought out piece, Justin is really struggling with this, and you portrayed that very well. Imagine, Ethan as a model, okay I really DON’T want to imagine that, haha.

“The smile grows even wider as Brian realizes Justin is about to perform fellatio on him right here on the settee and the painting of a naked Ethan Gold is going to have a front row seat to the historic event”

LOL, why am I picturing a scene from Ghost Busters 2 here, the scowl on the face in the painting keeps getting more and more ticked off and horns start to grow out of the forehead…… and Ethan’s face and body slowly morphs into Vigo’s. Okay, do you think I’ve had enough caffeine yet? Great chapter, my friend : ) Hugs ~ Janet



Author's Response:

Hey Janet

Thank you for all the help you have given me.  You don't know how many times I wrote "perform fellatio" and changed it to "give head" as I couldn't make up my mind whether or not I should use words that are familiar to QAF or keep the ambiance of the previous fics.  LOL   Isn't that just silly. 

Wow, that's a really old movie. LOL The image of Ethan morphing into Vigo is hilarious.  That painting looked like it was constipated most of the time. :D 

Thank you for your kind words of support and for taking the time to encourage me.

Cheers :)

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2014 02:20 PM · On: Define Art

Wow...just...wow very emotional piece my friend, and I can't wait to read more.

Author's Response:

Hey Tamara 

Well I'm glad I'm not boring everyone. LOL  Thank you for letting me know you read this and you would like more.   I appreciate the lovely review; your words are always encouraging.  Thank you my friend.

Cheers :D

Reviewer: sln188 (Anonymous) · Date: May 03, 2014 04:41 AM · On: Define MY Brian

enjoyed this second installment.  The characters you've written are so different from most BJ fics.  But you seem to have kept their 'cores'.  Nicely done.  Yes, you should absolutely put up your third segment.



Author's Response:

Hey sln188.  Thank you for letting me know you have read both fics and I appreciate you taking the time to leave such a nice review.  "you seem to have kept their 'cores'" I'm glad you think I was about to do that.  I appreciate you saying you want the third part to this series, thank you.

Cheers :)

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: May 03, 2014 03:02 AM · On: Define Normal

what an interesting premise for a Brian/Justin story. Very good.



Author's Response:

Hello.  Thank you so much for letting me know you have stopped by and read my fic.  I'm truly happy you like the premise and I appreciate the "very good" comment more than you could know, as I'm not a very confident writer. :)  

Cheers

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2014 09:09 PM · On: Define MY Brian

I don't even know where to begin, I better wait for the insulin to kick in. That was maple syrup, cotton candy, taffy apple sweet. I think Brian had his red hot sexy blood replaced by pure cane syrup. I demand you continue with this story, I won't be able to sleep till I know what happens. The pain poor Justin is dealing with shouldn't be allowed to go on. I think it's perfectly clear that this new Brian will refrain from his back room behavior and treat his husband as he deserves. Maybe they will have to find an Amish community with relaxed rules and join so Justin can keep his well learned behaviors intact. Or, Justin could wise up and realize he's not really Amish, he was just hidden there to protect the family from mistakes/crimes his parents were mixed up in. I bet there would be a good therapist at the area who could help him work thru some of those issues. I doubt he'll ever get over his conflict about Michael, that's just impossible. I'm sure if Mel was kept out of sight most of the time some of those bad reminders of Brian's past would go away too. I'm afraid Brian's bad language will always be a problem. The same thing happened with a cockatoo we had, once he learned the bad words he couldn't be trusted around christian people. I'm sorry my reviews are late, I hate being tardy but my lack of computer time continues...
Lori

Author's Response:

I'm sorry you had to self-medicate. :)   I just had a thought; maybe since my taste buds have changed and I can only eat a very small amount of sugar then this is my outlet of something sugary, or maybe my brain has just turned to mush.  LOL  Well learned behaviours, we probably all have them.  Especially when it comes to religion.  We probably all grow up believing in what our parents believe in, and once we become adults we may question it, but when times are tough what do most of us revert back to?  Justin's religion and the Michael conflict; are you saying a little Bible bashing is in order?  Okay, did I go too far with that comment?  Oh, do you think Justin should meet this cockatoo in the next fic???? LOL  I do worry about your computer access sometimes, however I'm happy to know you have eight-track cartridges for the car, two tin cans with string and the iceman visits regularly with blocks of ice for your icebox (cold closet).  Seriously; I really appreciate you taking the time out of your limited internet access to review for me and thanks for the laugh.

Cheers :)

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2014 08:49 PM · On: Define MY Brian

I have a quick shot of insulin close at hand to be prepared for another chapter of the love fest. This chapter had enough Amish humor to keep it from being too sweet. I was so happy to see the pic. of the cow onesie, I'm sure Justin felt right at home in a bovine inspired outfit. I do think the Amish community would frown at such a exotic outfit, something like that would be too flashy. Even tho it does fit the color regulations, the pattern is sure to lead to the wearer feeling proud and that is not allowed. So do you think Justin is going to give up all his Amish ways and embrace the new world and it's wild ways? I mean, Brian can't keep kissing him all the time to keep him quiet and he does need to wear some fancy zipper clothes if he's going to blend in. I'm worried that Brian is going to snap from all the changes he's made, how long can he go on with being a devoted partner?
Lori

Author's Response:

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I'm disappointed, I gave the Jeep such a large role in this chapter and not one comment; you haven't mentioned the colour change or the technologically challenged Justin who couldn't open the door. :(  Maybe I should have added a RED kayak on the roof rack as that might have harvested some attention. :)  

Would I have redeemed the cow onesie if it was a Jersey or Aussie Red print?  Okay, I admit I was only going to write Jersey here as they are usually just one colour, and that‘s a light brownish colour, but how can you resist a cow that is called an Aussie Red? LOL  Thanks for letting me know the Amish humour kept you from self-medicating. LOL   I really do appreciate you taking the time to share a laugh. :D

Cheers

Acknowledgement: Photo by BigPaw.  Sorry I couldn't resist using it.  

Reviewer: bamamary (Anonymous) · Date: April 23, 2014 01:10 AM · On: Define MY Brian

Yes, please bring on the next installment.  This is a well written, good story.  I like your AUs and hope you will write many more.

Hope you are well and doing better.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for the well wishes with my health; I really appreciate that.  

I don't know what drugs sent me in the direction of writing AU's, but now they won't leave me alone. LOL   I'm happy you like them. :)   I will publish the next instalment once my beta has betaed the first two fics in this series.  Yes, I have a beta now.  Happy, happy dance.  It's really hard to dance when you are typing.  Sorry, I hope you don't mind a little silliness in your reply. :D  Thank you for letting me knows you have read my "Define Normal" series and for your very kind words.

Cheers :)

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2014 05:11 AM · On: Define MY Brian

    I was happy to see that you continued the Define Normal


universe in this story.  Dealing with Justin is not going to be


easy.  It is so hard to figure out what he is thinking.  Poor Justin,


dealing with Brian is also not going to be easy.  Two very


different people coming from very different environments trying


to have a relationship. 


    What I like most about the story are the characters.  You can’t


help but root for them, together and separately.


    Thanks again for the story.


DavidR




Author's Response:

"Two very different people coming from very different environments trying to have a relationship."  I like the way you phrased this as I'm sure that is something most of us can relate to.  I love that you are rooting for the characters.  I am ecstatic that you have read the continuance as I am using something you said as my guide when it comes to these characters, "In our minds we saw the future", and I don't want to ruin that by giving it my own conclusion.  I have one more addition to this series and I thank you for your reviews and your insight.  

Cheers

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: April 18, 2014 01:05 PM · On: Define MY Brian

Very sweet and at the same time quite profound. TAG



Author's Response:

Thanks for your kind words, I truly appreciate them.  I'm so pleased you like this fic.  Thank you also for taking time out of your creative rush to read this story and give me your thoughts.

Cheers :)   

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: April 18, 2014 12:28 PM · On: Define MY Brian

Love Justin's logical conclusion! LOL! TAG



Author's Response:

Hey I'm glad you have let me know we shared a laugh.  Poor Justin, being top-notch at topping didn't land him the top position. :D

Cheers :)

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2014 08:06 AM · On: Define MY Brian

'...as he gets comfortable he reaches up and holds Justin's hand in his."

This is where I got the bucket, but only to catch the tears. That was so touching. It's the little things that make the difference. I could just picture that scene and tears came to my eyes. Beautiful.

"You not only satisfy me, you fulfil me."

I loved the heartfelt talk that was long overdue. This is why I love AU stories as much as canon. I loved the sonnet quoted in Tagsit's story but you have written some pretty words here too.

Loving this. :)

Author's Response:

Hello. :) I am so very happy you think the little things are what make the difference as I feel the same way.  "you have written some pretty words here" thank you for this comment.  You are the first person who has admitted to using a bucket and I love your reason, thank you for sharing that with us.  I am touched by your words.

Okay I say this jokingly, but you are making my life hard.  I have been unable to catch up with all the fics on MW and I am currently reading two of Tagsit's four WIP's, but I don't think they are the ones containing the sonnet, so now do I leave the two I have started to begin another one.  So many choices. LOL  I will look forward to discovering the fic with the sonnet.

Thank you for saying you are loving this. :)

Cheers

Reviewer: starfire64 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2014 05:49 AM · On: Define MY Brian

Hi Flossee, I apologize for the late review. This chapter was very touching, Brian and Justin are so much in love and you did a really good job of bringing their pain out into the open. Here Brian is thinking Justin is really ticked off at him and Justin is thinking he’s unworthy of Brian and that he doesn’t “add up” so to speak.  

Loved the spousal operating manual reference, LOL, I think we all could use one of those from time to time. The last sentence in Justin’s little speech “Look into my eyes and you will find me. Look into my heart and you will find you. Your true self, your very essences, a kind, caring, gentle soul, that defines you, that defines MY Brian”….Just beautiful!

 I would love to read the next installment : ) Hugs ~ Janet



Author's Response:

Hello Janet.  Thank you so much for helping me out with some incorrect wording.  (I appreciate the way you did that).  Don't apologize for the late review as I am just ecstatic if people give me their thoughts.  I will tell you, as soon as I posted this to MW I couldn't access the site, even after several hours of trying, and then today we had our family gathering for Easter as we aren't able to get together on Sunday, which means I didn't get time to write replies, so I should be the one apologizing.   

Spousal operating manual; I too would be standing in line to buy one if they existed. LOL  "you did a really good job of bringing their pain out into the open" thank you for saying that and thank you for the lovely comment on the last line.

You have been a massive help to me and I can't thank you enough.  Thank you so very, very much.

Cheers :)

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2014 11:30 PM · On: Define MY Brian

Very happy and relieved that they are okay. Love this story. Please add the next installment of this story. Everyone needs a love like this.

Author's Response:

Hello Lorie.  You give such nice reviews and encouraging ones.  I love the fact you tell me how you feel for the men and where the fic has taken them.  "Everyone needs a love like this" what a lovely sentiment and I couldn't agree more.  Thank you, thank you so much for your kind words.

Cheers :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2014 10:04 PM · On: Define MY Brian

Poor Justin.  So unsure of what Brian is telling him.  They really do need to have a frank talk.  I'm surprised at Emmett for carrying tells.



Author's Response:

Hello YumYumPM.  I love Emmett, but I do think he might gossip, just a little, sometimes. :)  Well maybe just this OOC one does.  LOL  I have posted the conclusion so I hope you like the way they resolve their misconception of the situation.  Thank you for your support with this fic.  I hope you know how much I truly appreciate your reviews. :)

Cheers

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: April 17, 2014 08:09 PM · On: Define MY Brian

Gotta say I just adore your banner for this story. I haven't had a chance to read this yet (juggling four WIPs now - eeeek!) but I will soon. And in the meantime I get an extra special treat every time I see that hot sexy kiss you used. Thanks! TAG



Author's Response:

Thank you for the feedback on the banner.  I am trying to make my own and since Justin takes the lead in this fic I wanted a kiss where it looks like he is in control.  I'm glad you can enjoy the boys when you see the banner.  I know you have several fics going and I haven't been able to keep up.  I am part way through two of them and I haven't been able to start the other two yet.   Once you get an idea in your head you seem to be a prolific writer so I hope you will forgive me that I have been unable to keep up-to-date.  Normally I would be the one saying, faster, write faster, but with the health issue I'm saying wait for me.  LOL  I know I will catch up; it just might take a little while.  I hope you enjoy this fic when you get time. 

Cheers :)

Reviewer: XPO787 (Anonymous) · Date: April 17, 2014 06:12 PM · On: Define MY Brian

Sooo sweet - and I want more! :)



Author's Response:

Hello XP0787.  Thank you so much for taking the time to review and for leaving such a sweet comment.  I am thrilled to hear you want more and I appreciate you taking the time to let me know. :)

Cheers

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Anonymous) · Date: April 17, 2014 04:14 PM · On: Define MY Brian

The pure love that is felt by Justin and the way Brian is willing to change is refreshing and different to read.  I'm not much of a romantic but I'm enjoying this series as a different B/J combination.  I hope you do post the next series.



Author's Response:

Hello Sandy.  "The pure love that is felt by Justin and the way Brian is willing to change is refreshing" what a lovely way to describe how you feel about this series and I'm so happy that someone who isn't a romantic is enjoying the story.  I now consider myself a romantic, but I didn't before I started writing this; the way it just poured on to the page was insane.  Thank you so very much for leaving this review it is truly appreciated. :)

Cheers

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2014 02:54 PM · On: Define MY Brian

More...more...more, please and thank you ;) I can't wait to see where they go from here.

Author's Response:

Hello Tamara.  Thank you, thank you, thank you for wanting more, more, more. LOL  I really appreciate the support you give me, especially with your busy work schedule.  I see you have also managed to update another fic, which I will be reading very shortly; I can't wait. :D

Cheers

Reviewer: FF (Anonymous) · Date: April 16, 2014 02:59 AM · On: Define MY Brian

I forgot to add.  Please hurry with the final chapter as they need to talk and work things out and I need a conclusion.lol  I love your OOC romantic Brian and Justin. :)



Author's Response:

I'm glad you are enjoying my OOC B/J.  There are two authors that seem to be vying for their fics to be recognised at the moment so I was going to hold off on adding the final chapter; then I thought, no I won't do that as I have to consider my readers, so I hope to have it up soon.  Thank you for your very kind reviews and letting me know we have some romantics on the site. LOL 

Cheers :)

Reviewer: FF (Anonymous) · Date: April 16, 2014 02:46 AM · On: Define MY Brian

cop a feel. lol  That is typically Brian.  :D The onesie was very funny and I like how you balanced it with the romance and the last line was perfect emotion.



Author's Response:

"Cop a feel".  I love how you have picked up on subtle phrases I slipped in to the writing.  I am ecstatic about this review and the previous one as it means the little nuances I have adding have been noticed.  Happy Dance. :)  "you balanced it with the romance and the last line was perfect emotion."  I'm so happy you think I have been able to get the balance right and thank you for the "perfect emotion" comment. 

Cheers :)

Reviewer: FF (Anonymous) · Date: April 16, 2014 02:38 AM · On: Define MY Brian

Justin leans in and kisses his man while once again nudging him to roll over.

I like the way you are adding pieces of the original show.

lol that last line was unexpected :D

 



Author's Response:

I'm so pleased you picked up on the subtle parts of the show that I tried to include; I chuffed.  Thank you.  Justin wanting to be the top; I'm really glad you were surprised by that and it gave you a laugh. :D  I can see you have read on; thank you very much for taking the time to leave these reviews as I really do appreciate your support.

Cheers :)

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2014 06:18 PM · On: Define MY Brian

"Take me my Brian."

I decided not to review when I'm sleep deprived, but that ended up not reviewing much at all so forgive me if I don't make sense. I love a romantic story if it's done well, which means not overly mushy. I love this Brian and Justin. This Justin is innocent to ways of the world and Brian's patience, tenderness, and kindness toward him
is palpable.

I'm happy you explained the onesie. I kept thinking of my kid's outfuts as a baby, but I imagined nothing like that picture. Brain had to truly be in love to go out with Justin in that, LOL..

Author's Response:

Thank you, that is too kind; "Brian's patience, tenderness, and kindness toward him is palpable".  I'm so pleased you decided to review even if you are sleep deprived as I always appreciate your encouragement and the wonderful way you have with words.  You really need to write Sandra as your reviews show how comfortable you are with the genre of writing.

I'm glad we shared a laugh with the onesie.  They are like a baby onesie just bigger and this one was a cow print. LOL  I agree Brian must really love him as I don't think to many people would have partners that will be seen with them in a onesie. :D 

Oh, I just realised you said kid's, plural.  So writing probably isn't something you have time for.  I absolutely appreciate you taking the time to writing this review and I hope you like the ending.  As to what you have written "I love a romantic story if it's done well, which means not overly mushy", I hope now I have managed that in the final chapter as I know there can be a fine line between balanced and going too far.

One, two three; okay the sheep are imaginary.  I'm just trying to help you get the rest you missed out on while writing this very much appreicate review.  LOL

Cheers :)

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2014 11:31 PM · On: Define MY Brian

Loving this story, but right now my stomach is in knots and I am crying because they are both scared and upset about what happened. They need to talk and figure out how to fix this, they love each other and belong together.

Author's Response:

Hey Lorie. :)  I'm absolutely thrilled if my fic can have your stomach in knots, not because that is a good thing but because it means you are involved with how I have written these OOC B/J.  Thank you for taking the time to give me your thoughts in a review as it really is appreciated and very encouraging.  I hope you like the remaining chapter.

Cheers :)

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