Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Body Swap
Reviewer: Sid401k (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2021 06:31 PM · On: Love Swap Play

Mpreg with a twist?

 

That was a great series!



Author's Response:

Thank you Sid401k. I'm so pleased you enjoyed it and you took the time to let me know.  I really appreciate your kind words.

Cheers

Reviewer: Sid401k (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2021 04:14 PM · On: Who Lies Beneath

Oh, that was fun! Also, congratulations on being the first bodyswap fanfiction I've read where I didn't need to continually remind myself of who was actually who. Your writing always made it very clear at all times which body and which mind I was experiencing. And I greatly appreciate that. 



Author's Response:

Wow, thank you.  I don't know what else to say as this feedback is awesome.  Thanks again.  I'm really glad you found it fun to read.

 

Cheers :)))

Reviewer: LEAM (Anonymous) · Date: April 26, 2017 08:39 PM · On: Love Swap Play

You should definitely add more to this storyline.

What else does Lindsey do?

Do they destroy the couch and how?

Do Lindsey and Mel stay together?

Great story; however, the dream sequence is really confusing. Did Lindsey sell Justin's painting or was that part of the dream. If it was a dream, what did Lindsey want done in NY. Please expain.



Author's Response:

Hello LEAM :)))

Thank you for saying I should write more to this storyline.  I have had so many thoughts about adding to this under the pretext that Brian and Justin insist that they get rid of the couch for Mel and Lindsay; however they secretly take it to Britin and use it every now and then.  I also thought I would like to explore Ted and Emmett swapping bodies, enabling them to find out just how deep their feelings for each other were or maybe still are, even though they are both now with other partners.  My wicked mind did think of a Dr David and Ben swap.  Ben would have to convince Michael he wasn't David, while David would see it as an opportunity to get revenge on Michael for running back to Pittsburgh.   A certain other character, who may remain nameless at this time, may guess these men have swapped at some stage in the story, yet they might not speak up.  It could be loads of fun depending on the way it happens and if they are aware of how to reverse the effect, which if I wrote Dr Dave and Ben, they wouldn't automatically know and therefore it would be days before anyone in the know found out and maybe longer before they were willing to share the reversal technic.  As you can see I have thought about it a lot, unfortunately the cancer medication I am taking is now affecting my eyesight and I cannot use a computer for any length of time.   I am hoping my fiction writing days have not come to an end.

Thank you for commenting on the dream sequence and giving an honest opinion.  I thought the ***** would denote a period of time had passed.  Sorry if that wasn't clear.  Sometimes my brain seems to work differently to others and even expecting people to understand the connection to Joseph, who interpreted dreams, may have been going too far.  Yes, Lindsay did sell Justin's painting.

Thank you for taking the time to leave this review.  I really appreciate the feedback and the kind words.

Cheers :)))

Reviewer: Artfuleye66 (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2017 08:06 PM · On: Love Swap Play

I loved the series Great job

 



Author's Response:

Hello Artfuleye66 :))))

I am pretty chuffed with this review.  Thank you for the ‘great job' comment.  I am stoked that I didn't lose you by the end of the series.  I should explain that comment; I think the fact Justin was in Lindsay's body when the baby was conceived was forgotten by some readers by the end of the series, so it is really nice to know you got that.  I'm sure you guessed before you read it that Justin was once again in Lindsay's body to deliver the baby.  Thank you for taking the time to review.

Cheers :))))

Flossee

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2016 05:28 PM · On: My Body’s Keeper

I am relieved to read that Mel and Brian decided to respect each other's body. The meal fiasco was too funny. 😂



Author's Response:

Bonus review

****Happy Dance****

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2016 05:28 PM · On: My Body’s Keeper

I am relieved to read that Mel and Brian decided to respect each other's body. The meal fiasco was too funny. 😂



Author's Response:

I am so happy you liked the food fiasco.  This was so much fun to write as the readers were offering suggestions and I would try and accommodate those ideas, which made for some amusing interaction.  An author's dream really; to have the reader invested in the shenanigans.  Thank you so much for taking the time to leave a review and the smiley face.:)))))

Cheers :))))

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2016 04:41 PM · On: Who Lies Beneath

This was hilarious and spot on. Omigod....I can't get this picture out of my mind...Brian inserting. A tampon!! 



Author's Response:

LOL I am so happy you don't think I went too far with that particular female body function.  I love to know people laugh at the same things I do.  Thanks heaps for this review.

Cheers :))))

Reviewer: Astor (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2016 04:22 PM · On: Love Swap Play

Wow! What a way to end the story! I'm glad Justin swapped bodies with Lindsay. I wouldn't trust her cray cray self either.



Author's Response:

Cray cray Lindsay probably would have tried to hold the baby in by crossing her legs. LOL  Thanks for the 'wow' comment.  I'm really happy you enjoyed this series.

Cheers :)))

Reviewer: Astor (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2016 04:18 PM · On: Love Swap Play

I'm sad there is just one more chapter on this story. Been such a fun read!



Author's Response:

This chapter I think I may have gone off the deep end.  What was I thinking having Ethan singing in a supermarket denoting he does hate Brian and that he would champion Brian and Justin's rights to be in a relationship against any homophobic.  WHAT WAS I THINKING?????????

Reviewer: Astor (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2016 04:16 PM · On: Love Swap Play

Michael was trying to cause a fight as always. LOL at Brian's Ethan rating!



Author's Response:

"Beyond disgusting." Just the thought of those two men together is exactly that.LOL  Michael; what can I say.  Well, probably nothing you don't already know. :)))

Reviewer: Astor (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2016 04:14 PM · On: Love Swap Play

I like how they're learning even more about each other by being in one another's bodies. I also like how they get off on looking at and having sex with themselves lol



Author's Response:

I admit.  This chapter has weird role play.   I like what you wrote as I was worried about the men having sex with themselves. LOL.  

Reviewer: Astor (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2016 04:11 PM · On: Love Swap Play

I'm glad Brian and Justin handled this very maturely, and wrapping up the issue with a 69 is always a great idea. 

This is such a great series!



Author's Response:

Love that number for the boys, but again, weird since they would be pleasuring their own body.  Haha  Maybe some readers would envy that. LOL  OMG, did I just go too far then?????

I'm glad you're enjoying this part of the series too. 

Cheers :)))

Reviewer: Astor (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2016 04:08 PM · On: Love Swap Play

One of my fave things on QAF was Brian calling Ethan Ian. Always funny.

Now who is this person kissing Brian's body??



Author's Response:

I rarely call him Ethan when I write fics, I call him Ian.  Like you I find it funny. :)))

Who indeed????  

Reviewer: Astor (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2016 04:06 PM · On: Love Swap Play

Now Justin knows how much Brian desires cuddle time. Love it!



Author's Response:

I love how you pick out these pieces to comment on.:)))  Cuddle time looks like it will became part of the norm now. LOL  

Reviewer: Astor (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2016 04:05 PM · On: Love Swap Play

Justin does have a great ass! Glad he got to enjoy it himself! 



Author's Response:

Haha It seemed quite odd writing Justin in Brian's body and enjoying his own ass.  Sometimes I think I'm a little warped. LOL  

Reviewer: Astor (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2016 03:55 PM · On: My Body’s Keeper

Lindsay really is in need of some help. She is a little cray cray.

Really must say that this is one of my fave QAF series!



Author's Response:

Lindsay is batshit crazy and Mel is now in her body.   Oh, these two so deserve this.  Yes, right there, I did do the evil laugh thing. LOL  

Thank you for saying this is one of your fave QAF series.  I really appericate that. :)))

Cheers :)))

 

Reviewer: Astor (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2016 03:52 PM · On: My Body’s Keeper

Brian being the bigger person as usual. Enjoying this series. Have to admit it's been keeping me on edge wondering what's next! So good!



Author's Response:

Colossal carb intake and no sex in this chapter; and your comment is ‘so good', I love that.  It's nice to know a person can just enjoy where the story takes them.  Such great comments you are leaving.  Thank you so much. :)))

Reviewer: Astor (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2016 03:50 PM · On: My Body’s Keeper

Mel should just be mad at Lindsay. Not always the most rational one. 

Really wondering what the tattoo could be. Hmmmm.



Author's Response:

Mel always saw Brian as the problem when it came to Brian and Lindsay; still I agree with you, she should be mad at Lindsay.   I hope you don't guess the tattoo before it is revealed.:)))

Reviewer: Astor (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2016 03:47 PM · On: My Body’s Keeper

Brian wearing briefs in Mel's body is hilarious! Also, where are you going Mel? Can't wait to read the next chapter! 



Author's Response:

Okay, I feel a little better about what I have put Brian through now as I did give him CK's. LOL  Love the word hilarious, thank you so very much. :)))

Reviewer: Astor (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2016 03:45 PM · On: My Body’s Keeper

Glad Mel followed Justin's orders and played it safe. Her inner dialogue was epic! Really enjoyed this chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks for saying that about the inner dialogue, I have never had anyone say something I wrote was epic before.  Thank you so much for your kind words. :)))

Reviewer: Astor (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2016 03:43 PM · On: My Body’s Keeper

Brian doing the pitch in Mel's body is brilliant. Ted may be my fave thing in this chapter though. Well, him or Brian having to go to the women's restroom.



Author's Response:

Thank you for using the word brilliant.:)))  Once again you have made me realized just what I put Brian through in some of my fics.  Poor man needing a hygiene break. LOL  

Reviewer: Astor (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2016 03:41 PM · On: My Body’s Keeper

Mel pitching for Brian? I'm nervous for him. 



Author's Response:

Mel could go either way.  Let's hope she stays on script. :)))

Reviewer: Astor (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2016 03:40 PM · On: My Body’s Keeper

Mel isn't being very nice. Shocker. I would spend too much time staring at myself in the mirror to even think of using his body. Lol



Author's Response:

I like your honesty.:))) The truth be told I think quite a few people (male and female) wouldn't mind spending a short period, or lack of period, in Brian's body.  LOL

Cheers :)))

Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2016 03:14 AM · On: Who Lies Beneath

Amusing story and that final line was classic:-D



Author's Response:

Hi nickknack

Thank you so much for taking the time to let me know you found this amusing.  I love Brian; yet I think that line you mentioned may have resulted in the cruellest thing anyone has ever done to him. LOL  I'm really enjoying the smiley face.  Thanks.

Cheers :)))  

Reviewer: Astor (Anonymous) · Date: October 18, 2015 10:08 PM · On: Who Lies Beneath

Brian and Mel switched places? Oh, now this I got to see! I always thought they were basically the same person anyways.



Author's Response:

LOL that is such a funny thing to say, still I know what you mean.  I always thought they were like each other and that they liked each other.  Poor Brian certainly got the raw end of this deal though. 

Thank you for taking the time to review each chapter, and especially thank you for enjoying the parts most of us cringed at. LOL  It has been a pleasure answering such fun reviews.

Cheers :)))

Reviewer: Astor (Anonymous) · Date: October 18, 2015 10:07 PM · On: Who Lies Beneath

Another experiment? This will be good! Love this fic!



Author's Response:

Mel and Lindsay are going to try and walk in each other's shoes.  Well you know what they say about the best-laid plans. 

Cheers :)))

Reviewer: Astor (Anonymous) · Date: October 18, 2015 10:05 PM · On: Who Lies Beneath

Such a great story! Brian loves Justin's soul, and even he can look past the exterior. I did laugh at the exercise part lol.



Author's Response:

I don't think there is any doubt Brian and Justin are soulmates, however dealing with lady bits, I'm sure Brian would have preferred not to. LOL  I am very naughty at times and Lindsay's lack of exercise could not go unwritten. LOL  I am really enjoying your reviews and thank you so much for letting me know what made you laugh.

Cheers :))) 

Reviewer: Astor (Anonymous) · Date: October 18, 2015 10:01 PM · On: Who Lies Beneath

Didnt go like Lindsay had hoped. Good for Brian! Loved when he said that it was all of who Justin is that he's attracted to and not just his body.



Author's Response:

Yep, to only want a person because of their physical attributes would be pretty sad, but what Lindsay witnessed had already told her what the two men have.  It would have surprised her to hear Brian voice it though, as that is a little OOC for him.

Cheers :)))

Reviewer: Astor (Anonymous) · Date: October 18, 2015 09:58 PM · On: Who Lies Beneath

So wrong but so hot at the same time! What will happen when Brian finds out it was Lindsay? *runs to read next chapter*



Author's Response:

You weren't kidding; you really did want them together.  I am loving the fact someone has enjoyed Lindsay's ruse.  Really I am, as it is so refreshingly different.  Guilty pleasure: I still don't like them together, but it was fun to write. LOL

Cheers :)))

Reviewer: Astor (Anonymous) · Date: October 18, 2015 09:55 PM · On: Who Lies Beneath

I was probably one of the few that wanted to see Brian and Lindsay hook up. Lindsay for sure wanted it, and I always thought it wouldn't take much to get Brian on board. Excited to read the next chapter! 



Author's Response:

LOL This truly made me laugh.  You wanted Lindsay and Brian to hook up and most of us would be saying, yuck no. :)  I'm very pleased someone was happy to read on from here.

Cheers :))) 

Reviewer: Astor (Anonymous) · Date: October 18, 2015 09:53 PM · On: Who Lies Beneath

Can't imagine Lindsay won't try to fuck around with Brian before telling him. Excited to see how she acts when she sees him.



Author's Response:

It is so refreshing to have someone just go with this story-line.  I totally agree; just seeing Brian naked would be such a treat for her and any physical connection will be her bliss.

Cheers :)))

Reviewer: Astor (Anonymous) · Date: October 18, 2015 09:51 PM · On: Who Lies Beneath

Lindsay in Justin's body. This could get very interesting. She has always wanted Brian again. Here's her chance.



Author's Response:

Yeah, I agree Astor, she always wanted Brian again.  She must think she is one very lucky lady having Justin's physique to play in (I was going to write 'with' not 'in', however I couldn't bring myself to conjure up those thoughts. LOL)

Cheers :)))

Reviewer: Brandon (Anonymous) · Date: January 20, 2015 10:24 PM · On: Love Swap Play

So happy with how you wrapped this story up. Keep up the amazing stories!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the encouragement; I truly appreciate it and all your very kind reviews.

Cheers :)

Reviewer: Brandon (Anonymous) · Date: January 20, 2015 10:23 PM · On: Love Swap Play

Good for Brian for discovering that he can tell Justin everything without judgement. I think the value of that paining may now be priceless to. 



Author's Response:

"I think the value of that painting may now be priceless." LOL  That remark is priceless. Thank you.

Cheers :))))

Reviewer: Brandon (Anonymous) · Date: January 20, 2015 10:21 PM · On: Love Swap Play

Brian bottoming may be my favorite thing.



Author's Response:

Brian is certain getting a glimpse of life as a bottom. LOL  At least he has something to look forward to "free access to his own ass". LOL  

Reviewer: Brandon (Anonymous) · Date: January 20, 2015 10:20 PM · On: Love Swap Play

Go Justin. I always really liked George. This story is so believable in a weird way. Lol. 



Author's Response:

"Believable in a weird sort of way."  I really love that sentiment.  So much so I might even do a little happy dance. 

Cheers :)

Reviewer: Brandon (Anonymous) · Date: January 20, 2015 10:16 PM · On: Love Swap Play

theyre learning a lot about each other. Hope the couch switches them back.



Author's Response:

Zack Rogers, there had to be someone before Brian's self-imposed one-fuck policy.

Fingers crossed the couch will adhere to the childish poem. LOL  

Reviewer: Brandon (Anonymous) · Date: January 20, 2015 10:13 PM · On: Love Swap Play

cant wait to see who kissed Brian. Also, I still hate Ethan.



Author's Response:

I think Brian might agree with you, at this stage, about the Ethan statement. LOL  I'm sure Brian wished he had alcohol instead of water to rinse out his mouth, as that would disinfect any lingering Ethan germs.  LOL 

Reviewer: Brandon (Anonymous) · Date: January 20, 2015 10:11 PM · On: Love Swap Play

lol at Justin. I love that he knows now that Brian has the urge to cuddle after sex. Lol



Author's Response:

Love the lol's, thanks heaps.  Yep, of all the secretes Brian's body could give away I'm sure Brian didn't expect that to be one. LOL   

Reviewer: Brandon (Anonymous) · Date: January 20, 2015 10:09 PM · On: Love Swap Play

i am in love with Brian and Justin swapping bodies. This is my favorite part of this series.



Author's Response:

Even though I hadn't planned on taking the series this far when I originally started writing it, I suppose it was inevitable that the men swap bodies. LOL  Wow, thanks for letting me know this is your favorite part of the series. :)))

Cheers :) 

Reviewer: Brandon (Anonymous) · Date: January 20, 2015 08:13 PM · On: My Body’s Keeper

moral of this story is that Lindsay is crazy. Lol

another great series!!



Author's Response:

"moral of this story is that Lindsay is crazy" maybe she can blame her cycle; because, surely, by now hers and Mel's cycles have synchronized.  LOL 

I'm glad you are enjoying this series.

Cheers :)

Reviewer: Brandon (Anonymous) · Date: January 20, 2015 08:09 PM · On: My Body’s Keeper

i really thought Brian would go through with it.



Author's Response:

Cheese bloating, period bloating; we all know how Brian Kinney would not do the bloated look.  LOL  

Reviewer: Brandon (Anonymous) · Date: January 20, 2015 08:07 PM · On: My Body’s Keeper

cant wait to see what happens!!



Author's Response:

A surprise tattoo and a vibrator.  Where else but QAF would you find that combination? LOL  

Reviewer: Brandon (Anonymous) · Date: January 20, 2015 08:04 PM · On: My Body’s Keeper

i can't say enough how hard this story makes me laugh. lol.



Author's Response:

Bra, tit sling straps and frilly panties; honestly, I really do love Brian.  I say that just in case you think I have gone too far. LOL 

Reviewer: Brandon (Anonymous) · Date: January 20, 2015 08:03 PM · On: My Body’s Keeper

lmao at Brian's dick going limp at the thought of Lindsay.



Author's Response:

The mere thought of Lindsay killed little Brian.  Yep, I think that is a reasonable outcome. LOL  

Reviewer: Brandon (Anonymous) · Date: January 20, 2015 08:01 PM · On: My Body’s Keeper

Brian and Melanie groomimg each other is amazing. Lol



Author's Response:

Poor Ted, he probably has nightmares after overhearing them.  LOL  

Reviewer: Brandon (Anonymous) · Date: January 20, 2015 07:57 PM · On: My Body’s Keeper

i died at Brian having to be shown how to use a tampon. Lol



Author's Response:

Brian + tampons = immeasurable yuckiness.  LOL 

Reviewer: Brandon (Anonymous) · Date: January 20, 2015 07:56 PM · On: My Body’s Keeper

i laughed out loud at Brian having to experience PMS. this series is one of my faves.



Author's Response:

Thanks for saying this series is one of your faves.  Brian and PMS, I couldn't resist Brian suffering the ultimate insult to his manliness.  LOL 

Cheers :) 

Reviewer: Brandon (Anonymous) · Date: November 10, 2014 01:25 PM · On: Who Lies Beneath

my fave story!!



Author's Response:

Thanks Brandon.  I really appreciate you saying this is a fave story of yours.

Cheers :)

Reviewer: Brandon (Anonymous) · Date: November 10, 2014 01:03 PM · On: Who Lies Beneath

 Love where this is going!!



Author's Response:

Yep, thanks to Lindsay it's all going to hell in a hand basket.  LOL 

Cheers :)

Reviewer: Brandon (Anonymous) · Date: November 10, 2014 01:00 PM · On: Who Lies Beneath

I knew Lindsay wouldn't be able to resist having sex with Brian. 



Author's Response:

Could anyone resist the opportunity with this man if it arose? :D  Nope, I did not see one person raise their hand to contradict me on that previous sentence.  LOL

Cheers :)

Reviewer: Brandon (Anonymous) · Date: November 10, 2014 12:59 PM · On: Who Lies Beneath

I love how you showed how deep Brian's love for Justin is. The packaging doesn't matter.



Author's Response:

I must admit that is something I believe so I am glad that statement came through in the writing.  Thanks for acknowledging the aforementioned is what you took from this chapter.

Cheers :) 

Reviewer: Brandon (Anonymous) · Date: November 10, 2014 12:54 PM · On: Who Lies Beneath

I may be one of the few, but I really enjoy Brian's sex scenes with women. You made this one very believable.



Author's Response:

Brian having sex with women isn't a category I ever thought I would write, but it is suggested in the series that he had sex with Lindsay.  It's refreshing for a person to say what they like, or don't like, when they read your fics.  It's really helpful to the author. Thanks :)))

Cheers :)

Reviewer: Brandon (Anonymous) · Date: November 10, 2014 12:53 PM · On: Who Lies Beneath

i love how you've delved into the emotions of Brian, Justin, Lindsay, and Mel. You have given the reader an interesting way of seeing them explored.



Author's Response:

This concept gave me such leeway to write these characters.  I'm extremely happy that you enjoyed the emotion the situation allowed.  It does make me think if I was able to swap bodies with someone who would it be and what would I learn.  The fact you could do it with the opposite sex would be a real eye opener.  LOL

Cheers :)

Reviewer: Brandon (Anonymous) · Date: November 10, 2014 12:48 PM · On: Who Lies Beneath

You are such a talented writer! This is one of my favorite stories. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much Brandon for getting me to 100 reviews, your kind words and saying this is one of your favourite stories.   I have never had anyone say I am a talented writer before; I really appreciate that.

Cheers :)

Reviewer: anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2014 07:10 AM · On: Love Swap Play

aww A happy ending.  Now Justin needs to get his body back b4 Lindsay gets any crazy ideas. lol I have read this more than once so thank you for the fun.



Author's Response:

Thanks for letting me know you have also read these fics more than once and I'm glad you had fun.  I truly appreciate every review you have left me, thank you so very much.  A happy ending, yeah, it will be if Justin gets his body back. Dun-dun-dun-dah!  LOL 

Cheers :)

Reviewer: anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2014 06:57 AM · On: Love Swap Play

That painting is definitely a Taylor original. lol



Author's Response:

Haha A Taylor original, yes, that it is.  So the future analysis reads; canvas, paint and an unknown crusty substance. LOL   

Cheers :)    

Reviewer: anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2014 06:52 AM · On: Love Swap Play

Michael helped them even if he did it unwittingly. lol  How generous free access to my own ass. lol 2 funny  



Author's Response:

Yep, Michael helped give Brian and Justin more time to explore each other's bodies.  Who would have thunk it; that I would write that.  LOL

"Free access" I'm glad you like that line and it gave you a laugh. :D  

Cheers :)

Reviewer: anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2014 06:47 AM · On: Love Swap Play

Lucky for Nick Justin is in Brian's body.



Author's Response:

Yep, Nick would have been out of a job.  However, Justin knows the allure of Brian and understands that Nick's hormones are probably overriding his brain function. LOL 

Cheers :)

Reviewer: anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2014 06:44 AM · On: Love Swap Play

Zack has a mole on his ass with a hair growing out of it. eww lol  I like the way you wrote that Brian didn't always have a no repeat rule as his rules had to begin at some point in his life.  69 sucking on their own cocks that sounds crazy fun? :)



Author's Response:

I can't believe I wrote that about Zack ass.  Eww is right, what was I thinking?  LOL

Suggesting Brian's rules had a begining, as he was not born with them, does seem to be a popular topic now so I'm glad I have encouraged others to investigate that area. 

Crazy fun or weird, one or the other. LOL

I am totally enjoying all your comments.  Thanks heaps. :)))

Cheers :)

Reviewer: anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2014 06:35 AM · On: Love Swap Play

Echidna shaped dildo?  Brian rinses his mouth to get rid of all those Ethan gems lol  Brian's one consolation is little Justin hasn't raised his head lol  



Author's Response:

Hey, BigPaw is behind the echidna shaped dildo (oh wait, that sentences doesn't sound right). LOL

Brian probably wished he had mouthwash when it comes to Ethan gems, or even girl gems. LOL

Thankfully, Ethan just doesn't do it for any size (big or little) Justin anymore. Much to Brian's relief. :D

Cheers :)

Reviewer: anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2014 06:27 AM · On: Love Swap Play

I think I broke your body lol 2 funny



Author's Response:

Cuddles anyone. LOL 

Cheers :)

Oh wait, I forgot to comment on your line "Fun with Brian & Justin". :D  I love it, as I'm sure you know that is what I called one of my series, thank you. :)))

Reviewer: anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2014 06:25 AM · On: Love Swap Play

Fun with Brian & Justin :)  I like how Brian is willing to swap places with Justin for a few days.



Author's Response:

Yep, I think that surprised Justin a little that Brian was willing to swap bodies for longer than a day.  Still, Brian wouldn't have any worries about Justin taking care of his body. :D

Cheers :)

Reviewer: anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2014 06:20 AM · On: My Body’s Keeper

The resist tattoo is clever.lol  Another great ending :)  



Author's Response:

Thanks for the clever comment on the tattoo. :)))

Also, I truly appreciate all your comments, especially so, the comments on the endings as it's good to know I got them right. :)))

Cheers :)

Reviewer: anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2014 06:18 AM · On: My Body’s Keeper

I like the carb loading. lol  I also like where Brian tells Mel he went to bed alone.



Author's Response:

Aww, Brian is so sweet.  Okay, I used your words because I liked the way you voiced that.  LOL 

Carb loading must be Brian's worst nightmare, or maybe second worst, after twat. :D  Forgive the silliness as I don't know what I'm saying when I'm being happy me. LOL  Reviews make me happy. :)))

Cheers :)

Reviewer: anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2014 06:09 AM · On: My Body’s Keeper

Getting off on Brian's voice and telling Mel to have fun in his body.  What a bitch.



Author's Response:

Poor Lindsay I made her a bitch.  What can I say, I didn't intentionally set out to do that, but what the hell, it was fun. LOL 

Cheers :)

Reviewer: anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2014 06:02 AM · On: My Body’s Keeper

Bra, PMS and frilly pants or a permanent hard on.  Would you swap back? lol



Author's Response:

Haha No, I would be taking his body and leaving the country. LOL 

Cheers :)

Reviewer: anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2014 05:55 AM · On: My Body’s Keeper

Thinking of Gale Harold that was never going to make little Brian go down. lol



Author's Response:

Gale Harold; male or female would have a hard time thinking undesirably thoughts about him.   HOT, HOT, HOT.  LOL 

Cheers :)

Reviewer: anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2014 05:52 AM · On: My Body’s Keeper

Hygiene break lol



Author's Response:

Yep, it sounds so much nicer than a toilet or bathroom break; not.  LOL 

Once again thanks for letting me know what parts you enjoyed and thank you for all the wonderful comments. :)

Cheers :)

Reviewer: anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2014 05:51 AM · On: My Body’s Keeper

Brian with Mels handbag. lol  I think Mel and Brian could have been friends.



Author's Response:

Brian with a handbag, now that is something I would really like to see, but only when he is in his own body. LOL 

I like Mel and Brian together too and I think their friendship would have changed and grown over the years in to something more companionable. :D

Cheers :)

Reviewer: anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2014 05:47 AM · On: My Body’s Keeper

Brian with PMS lol

Justin asks about Twat plugs lol 2 funny



Author's Response:

Poor Brian sometimes I am so cruel to him.  LOL  However, I really do love the character. 

I'm so happy you got a laugh from the situation. :)))

Cheers :)

Reviewer: anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2014 05:43 AM · On: Who Lies Beneath

You are good at endings :) Poor Brian. lol

I reviewed each chapter because I agree with what QaFFangirl wrote on Flight Plan B.  You deserve it.  Also you are kind to new authors and you try and help them.  I hope you reach 100 reviews :))



Author's Response:

Poor Brian indeed.  LOL 

Thank you for the compliment.  I really like to have a strong ending and not the tediously overused "I love you" or they had sex.  I'm so happy you like my endings.

I do try hard to support new authors as I remember what it was like when I published my first fics and I even try to make my reviews fun, yet helpful.  Until recently, I didn't realize other people noticed such things and I appreciate you telling me you have.  Thank you for reviewing each chapter; I love that you have taken the time to do so and I truly appreciate your wonderful words of acknowledgement. :)

Cheers :)

Reviewer: anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2014 05:35 AM · On: Who Lies Beneath

Even Dr Seuss had bad days. lol  

I like the way you use the monogamous question all though the series.:)



Author's Response:

The monogamous question just seemed right to show how far these men had come in their relationship.  Thank you for commenting on that verse and for letting me know the other parts you liked throughout the fic; I really appreciate that kind of feedback. 

Cheers :)

Reviewer: anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2014 05:30 AM · On: Who Lies Beneath

Hetro missionary position. lol



Author's Response:

Oh, thank you for writing that as I think I have made a spelling error.  Haha.  I'm glad you liked that part. :D

Cheers :)

Reviewer: anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2014 05:28 AM · On: Who Lies Beneath

If he was shorter, taller ....Brian really loves Justin inside and out.  He sees the inner beauty.  



Author's Response:

Inner beauty; I repeat, I love what you are writing.   I think both these men would see beyond the physical aspect of their relationship and I enjoyed writing Brian acknowledging that. 

Thank you so much for your wonderful comments.

Cheers :)

Reviewer: anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2014 05:24 AM · On: Who Lies Beneath

Brian knows his man.  It wouldn't have even made it into their top one hundred fucks.  Poor quality Lindsay. lol



Author's Response:

Poor quality Lindsay; I love your way with words. LOL  Yep, I think Brian would have been surprised at that performance, considering he was thinking it was Justin. :D

Cheers :)

Reviewer: anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2014 05:19 AM · On: Who Lies Beneath

I like how Brian greets Lindsay thinking it is Justin.  It is so sweet.



Author's Response:

Sweet; I like that.  I love Brian and Justin alone time; yet again, this is just unfortunate it isn't Justin. :( LOL and Eww

Cheers :)

Reviewer: anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2014 05:17 AM · On: Who Lies Beneath

Now Brian is in for a surprise. lol



Author's Response:

Unfortunately, Brian isn't going to like his surprise very much. Eww LOL

Cheers :)

Reviewer: anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2014 05:15 AM · On: Who Lies Beneath

I have read this b4 and I love it.  Lindsay & Justin are in for a surprise. lol



Author's Response:

I love it when people come back and tell me they have read my fics more than once.  Thank you so much for taking the time to do so. 

Yep, this chapter ended with a surprise to come for Lindsay and Justin, plus Brian and Mel. Haha

Cheers :)

Reviewer: QaFfangirl (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2014 03:42 AM · On: Who Lies Beneath

Well this was creative and fun.  I loved Justin's reaction to being in a woman's body, very fun.  



Author's Response:

Hey Erin :)

I couldn't imagine a gay man would like women's breast, or any other physical attribute, so that's how I wrote Justin.  However, when I wrote this I knew Peter Paige liked breast, (why I know that I'm not sure :D) still, I don't think he would like to be the one sporting them. LOL

Thanks for the "creative and fun" comment.  I really appreciate people letting me know they have stopped by and hopefully enjoyed what they have read. :)

Cheers :)

Reviewer: Blossomlegs (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2014 01:57 AM · On: Love Swap Play

Interesting and a very fun read!  Thanks for sharing!



Author's Response:

Hello JoAnn.  Thank you for letting me know you have read the "Body Swap" series.  It is always a pleasure to know who is reading my fics.  "Interesting and a very fun read", thank you, that is very kind.  I know this is the first time you have reviewed for me so I would be remiss if I didn't belatedly welcome you to MW.  I hope you are enjoying the site.

Cheers

Reviewer: nicolle_midnight2013 (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2013 08:08 AM · On: Love Swap Play

Hello, Flossee!

It was so amazing to read!

There are so many things I would emphasize: Ethan kissing Brian (yuck!) thinking that is Justin, Michael doing his service "I'm your best friend" to be thinking Brian Justin, Justin's body is excited about the presence of Ben and Brian and Justin finally start a family. Why is usually that Justin has a child? I think Brian would take turns with him in this work Mpregs? I liked how you become a topic was folded into a very interesting story.

I understood what you meant about the boys recite the time shared fashion and romantic. But, in contexts were totally different.

A big hug!

Fatima.



Author's Response: Hi Fatima. Yes I agree with you about the context being different in reciting the time, however, it was still strange for me to review that after just writing it. I don’t have a problem with words or lines appearing in other fics, as I know coincedences happen (like here), and I only become disappointed if someone copies another person’s premise, sentiment or punch line. I hope you understand what I am trying to say as I not sure I’m doing a very good job of explaining. LOL. I love that you commented on why is it always Justin that has the child, as I so wanted it to be Brian, but I didn’t dare give Lindsay his body to play with. At least with Justin’s body she wouldn’t have the same temptations. I hope. LOL Thank you again for taking the time to leave me a review telling me you enjoyed this and saying it was an amazing read. Cheers

Reviewer: nicolle_midnight2013 (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2013 07:33 AM · On: My Body’s Keeper

Hello, Flossee!

As I had fun with it! Poor Brian! How experienced!

I loved the idea of the tattoo. This was very well thought out. Genial!

I like how you did Mel respect Brian's body and finish the fic with a more friendly relationship with him. I like Mel. I know many do not have great sympathy for her, but I always thought Lindsay largely responsible for the attitudes of Mel regarding Brian.

I agree with you and Bigdogz09 on the few comments. I have many stories to access and minimal comments. This is frustrating! Too bad when we commented and many authors do not respond.

Well, in short, his story is wonderful. Loved able to read it!

A big hug, sweetie! Fatima.

 



Author's Response: I like Mel too, but in all honesty, I was never fussed about Lindsay, either way. I couldn’t believe the tattoo hidden under a bandage would turn out to be so apt, as Gale went to the LA convention with his tattooed finger also bandaged. Nice one Gale. LOL Thank you so much for taking the time to review and I’m glad to see other authors feel the same about reviewing. I appreciate you letting me know that, and thanks also for the wonderful comment. Cheers

Reviewer: nicolle_midnight2013 (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2013 09:02 AM · On: Who Lies Beneath

Hello, Floosse!

His story was so interesting. I've seen this premise switch bodies and have to congratulate you for using it in a fic B / J.

Lindsay was so dtestável by taking advantage of the situation the way you did.

I found so beautiful recognize Brian Justin through his eyes. It was beautiful!

The ending was surprising. Poor Brian, wake up in the body of Mel and still be awarded the female particularities.

Very good, indeed!

A big hug!

Fatima.



Author's Response: Hi Fatima. I’m glad you like this fic, and yes the premise is a really bad movie plot. LOL I didn’t realize, at the time, just how bad Loosey Lindsay came across, as I was having way too much fun writing her, however, I wasn’t too worried as she always makes a good villain. This isn’t a trilogy where Brian and Justin go their separate ways, and then find their way back to each other; they are strongly connected in all three fics. I’m glad you like the ending; you are in for a real surprise when you get to the end of “Love, Swap, Play.” My sense of humour is so silly. Thank you for taking the time to review and for letting me know you have read this, as I agree with Bigdogz09 when she writes “The ratio of comments to people reading is so low for writers” as my read counts are great, but a lot of readers don’t take the time to review. As an author you know how nice it is for someone to acknowledge your work and that they enjoyed it, so thanks again for your wonderful comments and I hope you enjoy the next two instalments. Cheers

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2013 02:00 AM · On: Love Swap Play

“They are still fucking raw, even after Brian’s little tryst with Lindsay’s body…”

I never thought about them not using protection. It’s makes perfect sense now.

Clever girl. You did a Mpreg.

Author's Response:

I was wondering if people would see this as a Mpreg, but I know I can't technically call it one as it involved a woman's body.  When Brian was with Justin in Lindsay's body he did use a condom, but it failed unbeknown to them at the time, causing the pregnancy (addressed in chapter 8).   "They are still fucking raw, even after Brian's little tryst with Lindsay's body..." this comment was because Justin thought Brian was cheating with unknown office intruder (aka Zack).  I hope that's as clear as mud.  LOL

 Cheers

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2013 01:51 AM · On: Love Swap Play

“Brian notices Justin’s body is having a reaction to seeing Ben and he doesn’t like it.”

That was interesting. I guess Justin’s body didn’t react to Ethan, though. There was a lot of kissing of other people going on. I’m surprised Justin/Brian hadn’t kissed Mikey.

Author's Response:

Ewww B/J kissing Michael, I have my standards.  LOL  Yes there was a lot of people partaking in kissing because I didn't want it to go any further since the men's relationship has evolved.   Brian had a bit of a learning experience, Justin still finds some other men attractive, but Ethan is no threat.  However, the lesson was probably lost once Ethan kissed him and his only coherent thought was probably to wash his mouth out.  LOL   Thank you for the review; including the disturbing Michael image.  LOL

Cheers

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2013 01:41 AM · On: Love Swap Play

“Brian I think I broke your body.”

Hilarious! I like the thought of Justin having to play with Brian's body and not being able tokeep his hands off himself.

Author's Response:

Thank you for the hilarious comment.  Hands up if you had Brian's body would you be able to keep your hands off it?  Oh, so it's not just Justin and me then.  LOL  Yeah I agree with you, Justin would be in heaven with his new toy.  LOL

Cheers

 

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2013 01:37 AM · On: Love Swap Play

I can actually read this and not be confused this tme. The thought oof BJ switching bodies does sound exciting. I can see the two them doing that. I was afraid they were switched with the children for a second. They should have locked the door.

Author's Response:

LOL I'm glad you had the thought that they may have swapped bodies with the children for a few seconds, however, that would have been wrong, considering the world these men live in; although Brian going to school in Gus' body and dealing with some snooty children could have been fun.  LOL  I was going to put in a disclaimer: No children were harmed or swapped in the making of this series, however; a baby did have to navigate its way through a birth canal.  Then I thought that's going too far, even for my sense of humor.  LOL  Yes in hindsight they should have locked the door.  I'm glad you read it again and thank you for letting me know.

 

Cheers

 

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2013 10:41 PM · On: Love Swap Play

"Justin was in Lindsay's body when it became pregnant..."

OMG! You’re right. I forgot. That puts an entirely new spin on the story. That’s beautiful. And, yes, now I understand about them asking questions only they would know – clever. I had forgotten that, too. Now I have to go back and read the two stories again

Author's Response:

Thank you for the clever and beautiful comments.  I changed the wording slightly on the two years, five months thing, as I trust your opinion that it needed tweaking.  I'm so pleased you are willing to read the stories again and I really appreciate you taking the time to leave reviews, as your comments are truly valued. 

 Cheers

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2013 08:46 AM · On: Love Swap Play

I must admit, I could not keep up with who was whom or who. And what was the two years, five months thing? I couldn't figure that out.

I loved the ending though. That was clever.Wait, why did Justin say "We made a baby"? I thought Brian and Lindsay made the baby. See. I'm confused, and it doesn't take much, LOL.

Author's Response:

Hey, thanks for reviewing; I'm so pleased you have, as I know if you don't understand something you will ask, and do it in a friendly manner.    You aren't alone with not being able to keep up with who was in what body, I wrote it and I still had to double check myself.  LOL  I must say though, if anyone is going through what I am, it's a great way to keep your mind ticking over, so I'm just pleased nobody has said I mixed them up.  LOL 

 The two years, five months thing was the answer to the question they used since the couch came into their lives.  In the first fic Brian asks Justin "How long have we been monogamous?" so he could tell that Justin was back in his own body.  I couldn't fit it in the next fic, as there wasn't an appropriate place, so I put it in the first chapter of the third fic, however, I didn't actually repeating the same wording when Justin asks Brian the exact same question.  So to continue using this question, which only the two of them knew the answer to, was achieved by them answering the question without either one of them asking it.  I hope I haven't over explained here.  LOL  If it isn't clear enough just let me know as it only means I should go back and reword one sentence, which I'm happy to do.

 Justin was in Lindsay's body when it became pregnant, that's why Justin said we made a baby.  LOL  OMG I hope you didn't think Brian and Justin had more sex in Lindsay's body to make a baby.  Ewww.  LOL.  Thank you so much for the review, but not for the image of Brian and Lindsay's bodies together again.  LOL

 

 Cheers

Reviewer: Blanca (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2013 03:05 PM · On: Love Swap Play

Even I am so much busy @ work, I really find time to read this one since I was having so much fun with Justin and Brian body swap. I can only imagine Justin really experiencing having a baby with Lindsay's body, hahaha! Ohhh and I love Brian bitching Lindsay with these words: "I want the baby bonding with Justin's body, not yours." Nicely done dear! {{{Hugs}}}

Author's Response:

Poor Justin he's my favorite and look what I put him through.  Push Justin Push.  LOL  I'm happy you enjoyed Brian setting Lindsay straight with the agreement.  Did Brian know you don't get to have sex for six weeks after having a baby, plus Justin would have had to deal with worse than Brian did with Mel's body.   Ewww.  LOL   I'm glad you have a job and are working hard, therefore, I will wait patiently for your next fic.  Thank you for taking the time to review and letting me know you enjoyed this.

Cheers

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2013 12:16 PM · On: Love Swap Play

OMG, this chapter has got to be the most interesting thing I have ever seen. I think you must have the right idea about how to have children, just switch to someone else body. I think this poor kid might have some issues to deal with once the bodies are returned to the correct owners. I hope that evil couch is burned or cut up with a silver knife, and turned into kindling. So who is going to ask to be godparents of this spawn from hell? I think Mysterious Marilyn is the only choice for Godmother. Then to even things out maybe a bouncer from Meat Hook to lend a macho influence for Godfather. Now if only there wasn't a chance the kid would burst into flames when entering the church I think sexy Father Tom from Grandma Joan's church would be the ideal choice to host the holy service but I think that's too risky and you'll have to find a more free and easy man of some god to make it all happen. I will be happy to provide the blood of a sacrificial blood of a diseased animal if needed. Now on to a different subject...how soon till we find out how the echidna dildo work? Did it add the needed spice to their dull and boring sex life? Do you think it made him howl like a dingo, hop like a wallaby or scream like a hungry cockatoo? I'm sure he didn't purr like a kitten. Well I must stop for now, it's bedtime or close to it. I must make sure the rocks are watered and then call it a night.
Lori

Author's Response:

I struggled with Justin giving birth as I so wanted it to be Brian, but I couldn't give Lindsay Brian's body.  Brian would have been so funny as I bet he doesn't handle pain well.  How about Mysterious Marilyn and Ethan as godparents?  LOL  Since I made almost everyone good.  Ethan and Michael good, who would have thunk it, in one of my fics.  LOL   I so wanted to credit you with the echidna dildo, but I didn't know if you would appreciate that.  Father Tom sexy, you have a kink, huh, for men with their collars on backwards?  LOL  Now you are off to bed and the last thing you read is probably what you will dream about.  Father Tom, Father Tom, Father Tom.   Please don't have that dream interpreted or shared in anyway.  LOL  Thanks for the review my friend.  I would say I'm off to Oz, but since I can't even identify myself there I'll just go and clean up the water I spilt on my carpet.  I know it's not a wallaby or cockatoo, but it is a pet and a car apparently.  LOL

 

Cheers

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2013 12:11 PM · On: Love Swap Play

How sneaky of you to add another chapter while I was busy reading another author. How nice that we are both awake at the same time. Now I think I will carry a black light with me to every museum to check for splashes on the canvas. Lindsay is such a total C word. How dare she sell a painting that was given as a gift with deep meaning. I really think she needs to take a nap on the couch with a flea infested rat and then taken down to the docks where all the feral cats hunt. I sure hope Mel does the right thing and dumps her.
Lori

Author's Response:

OMG what are you doing to me, now we have animals on the couch.  LOL  As long as it's not an echidna I'm happy to go with it.  LOL   A black light in a museum, let me know what you find, just don't touch it.  Ewww.    Mel dump Lindsay, maybe but I made her wimpy so maybe not, well not until they change bodies back as Mel doesn't want loosey Lindsay's body.  Again Ewww.  LOL  Thank you for the laughs my friend.

 

Cheers

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2013 11:43 AM · On: Love Swap Play

Flossee my dear this has been a very interesting ride and I hate to see it end. After this experience, our boys will no doubt come out of it having a greater respect for one another.

Can't wait for the next chapter~JP

Author's Response:

Thank you for sticking with me and reviewing, I really appreciate it.  We are back to weird for the final chapter so I hope you aren't disappointed.   As soon as your schedule permits I'll be looking forward to your updates.

 

Cheers

 

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2013 10:49 AM · On: Love Swap Play

How sweet of Michael to be a little tattle tail. Actually I wonder what took him so long to place the call. I bet if he saw Justin being attacked by rabid werewolves he wouldn't think to help or alert the proper authorities. He would just turn his face and walk away. I have wondered why Ben was willing to believe it was worth the time and energy it took to share living space with that horrid hunk of flesh.

I'm sorry it took me so long to catch up on this fantastic tale of intrigue but as you know RL does have a way of messing things up. I wish I could send you a kitten but I'm afraid the shipping would be a problem. Well I must go tend the farm and work in the brick factory. My life is so busy these days.
Lori

Author's Response:

I adore how you try and disguise your love for Michael; your favourite character.  LOL   Ben and Michael OMG could you imagine them swapping, poor Ben would be so whiny and Michael would be so Zen.   Ben would have women's hips and Michael would get the body of a God.  Was that statement a little too bitchy, as I always thought Michael had women's hips?   I hope to catch up with you on the farm.  3D yes or no?

 

Cheers

 

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2013 10:38 AM · On: Love Swap Play

I think more people are going to figure out something is just not right with our two dreamy boys. Hmmm a Ted and Cynthia swap? Not to sure that would cause much of a stir, they are both pretty committed to their jobs and as far as we know Cynthia has no personal life at all. I think the creepy little intern should have been removed at once.
Lori

Author's Response:

A Ted and Cynthia swap could lead to a Cynthia and Blake tête-à-tête; Yuck, no yay, no yuck, no yay...okay I don't know, you have just blown my mind and it wasn't 100% functioning anyway.  Thanks, now how am I going to feed the chickens?  What are chickens?   Where are my chickens?  Thanks for the water and the reviews.  LOL

Cheers

 

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2013 10:31 AM · On: Love Swap Play

Oh No, I see Ted finding out and then he'll want to swap bodies with Brian, remember his fantasy before when he wore Brian's clothes and used the loft. Somehow I don't think Brian would willing allow that switch to happen. I don't think he'd have much use for Ted's boring body.
Lori

Author's Response:

Ted and Brian I can see that.  Brian giving everyone advice on their investments and they could all end up broke and all living together at the loft, which Ted would now own as he wouldn't swap back.  Such fun.  LOL 

 Cheers

 

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2013 10:25 AM · On: Love Swap Play

I think you have come up with the perfect birthday gift for Brian. Where ever did you get such an idea? You are so lucky to live in a land of odd shaped creatures. The mention of the echidna is nearly enough to make me forgive you for the unspeakable act of the chin rat touching Brian, no matter what body he might be wearing. Now if only you could arrange for Justin, in his own body to have a moment of passion with Ben, and let Micheal catch them....I do believe Michael would burst into flame. Can you imagine how wonderful that would be. Just another idea.
Lori

Author's Response:

I must admit I was bursting to put the echidna dildo in somewhere and thanks to you I did the research to find out what I was talking about.  Yes, googling echidna's genitals is research, no matter how disturbing it was.  LOL   Michael bursting into flames; does that make him a flaming queen?  LOL  I don't even know what that terms means so I should go and google it I guess.

Look I can put in paragraphs now as my new search engine is incredible.  I know it doesn't take much to make me happy.  Speaking of being happy I was so pleased to wake up this morning to your reviews as they always make me laugh and that's the best way to start the day.  Okay, I admit 11am wake up was only just technically morning.   LOL

Cheers

 

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2013 09:44 PM · On: Who Lies Beneath

Ha, ha, ha... Now that's funny... ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

 

Thanks Kathleen; I'm glad you enjoyed it and we could share a laugh.  Ha, ha, ha...and funny are my favourite review words; thank you for taking the time to write them.

 

Cheers

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2013 09:11 PM · On: Who Lies Beneath

Curious where this is going? ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

I warn you to look away now if you are a Lindsay lover.  LOL  Thanks for reviewing and letting me know you are reading this. 

 

Cheers

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2013 07:42 PM · On: Love Swap Play

That damn Mikey....he almost screwed things up.

That line of Brian having free access to his own ass is hilarious....I can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response:

I didn't want to make Michael bad; is that wrong of me.  LOL   The next chapter gets a little silly, and then the last one is beyond absurd; I can only apologize now.  LOL    Brian accessing his own ass, that's disturbing; how could I write that?  LOL

 

Cheers

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2013 07:42 PM · On: Love Swap Play

That damn Mikey....he almost screwed things up.

That line of Brian having free access to his own ass is hilarious....I can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response:

Bonus review happy dance, yay.  Thank you so much.

 Cheers

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: May 24, 2013 12:17 AM · On: My Body’s Keeper

I can't believe both Brian and Mel ended up brief so good - they could have done some serious damage. But, I'm glad they didn't. Thanks for writing. TAG



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked Mel and Brian respecting each other.  I enjoyed writing this, it was so much fun.  I really appreciate you taking the time to review, thank you.

 

Cheers

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2013 08:41 PM · On: Love Swap Play

Flossee please forgive my tardiness (earned myself extra duty for being surly lol) I can't tell how much I'm enjoying this. This really gives new meaning to the saying "walk a mile in my shoes"

Author's Response:

Please don't apologize as that makes me feel bad; I just love getting your reviews so whenever you can makes me happy.   Ouch, extra duty for being surly that's tough.  I'm glad you can laugh about it. 

 

I have loved writing these fics as I gave myself a challenge and I didn't realise how hard that would be.  The first one I just wrote as a weird fic to see if anyone had my, let's say uniqueness.  LOL  The second one I wrote aiming at humor since I wasn't sure if people would read a Brian and Mel fic  This one; you nailed it when you wrote "walk a mile in my shoes"  I am hoping to end it by going the full circle and ending on bizarre again.  LOL   I really don't think I'm meant to have this much fun writing; I hope you feel like that sometimes too.  Thank you so much for letting me know you're enjoying this, I really appreciate it.

 

 

 

Cheers

Reviewer: meclarayoda (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2013 09:22 AM · On: Love Swap Play

Best line in the story so far is "Brian, I think I broke your body!  bwahaha!  Too funny!  I've tried commenting before, but I keep forgetting my password-so I'm logged in now - sorry I haven't been around to give you any ideas - my mind has drawn a blank - patiently waiting for next installment!



Author's Response: "I keep forgetting my password" I’m so glad I’m not the only person who does that, thank you for letting me know I’m not alone. LOL I feel really honored Jane, as I can see you joined MW only this year and I am your first review, thank you so much. The one thing I have really enjoyed about writing these fics is the participation of the reader. I haven’t done that before and people can give such fun ideas, so please feel free at any time to share your thoughts and I'll try and put them in. I hope one day to see you writing. Cheers

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2013 02:55 AM · On: Love Swap Play

Hmm trying to work this all out in my head...is Justin being sweet by paying so much attention to the body of his dearly beloved partner, using his time to find out how to please Brian more, or should he be thinking about bringing Brian some pleasure in the body he's currently using. One would think Justin would know how to get the job done for his physical body and there by allow Brian some joy and comfort especially now that Brian is trapped in the bubble butt body...Maybe they both need to take a field trip to boy toy or meat locker and add a little spice to the day. I bet if they call Deb she would be happy to watch the kids tonight.
Lori

Author's Response: OMG does this make me selfish because if I was to swap bodies with someone else I would be taking the new body out for a test run before worrying about the other person. Would that be selfish, curiosity or human nature? LOL I promise no porn in the next couple of chapters as I do need some story line, besides I don’t think I could write about every encounter they are going to have in the next couple of days as that would mean using lots of words, and you know I have an aversion to that. LOL Cheers

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2013 02:48 AM · On: Love Swap Play

I'm sorry I'm late to review this. So much to do and not a lot of time. I'm afraid the whole family is going to forget who each one is, will they just have to assume the body they are wearing or will the body become unimportant? How confusing for everyone. Will Ted be filled in on what's going on? I am pretty sure Gus will soon figure out what's happening, he is so gifted. Now on to the next chapter.
Lori

Author's Response: I can see my beta now as she reads the next two chapters. WHAT! Gus and RJ changed bodies. LOL I gave him a speaking part, I thought you would be so pleased; or did I? Gus? Gus who? LOL You think the characters are confused with my fuzzy brain keeping track of who is in what body is hilarious. You should see my drafts. I don’t think I should have taken up anything this challenging right now. LOL Note to self, apologize to Angie. BTW I tried to send you some tomatoes I grew as I know you love tomatoes, but alas it didn’t happen. Now I must go and feed the animals and make some hay while the sun shines or is that for Sunshine. Cheers

Reviewer: Blanca (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2013 02:55 PM · On: Love Swap Play

HOT HOT HOT!!!

This is the body swap I had been waiting! More please :) :) :)

Nicely done once again dear. {{{Hugs}}}



Author's Response: I’m so pleased you found it Hot. I always worry I might overdo Brian and Justin fun time and I think I only have one or two chapters that look like there won’t be any in it. I hope that much body action isn’t a turn off for anyone. LOL This will be updated a little slower than the others as it is technically a WIP, but I have almost finished it. Scary for me, I have a WIP. LOL Thank you so much for taking the time to review and the hugs. Cheers

Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2013 12:16 AM · On: My Body’s Keeper

Well, regarding Mike and Debbie swap, I never really thought about the "trapped in yur mother's body" angle. I guess it could be ewww!! gross! but then again...wouldn't that make for a great story tell? Ewww!! Gross!! Im in here!!!! Help!! Etc Etc..  LOL    And...on the other hand, they already DID share an apartment for 9 months (wink) if you catch my meaning. Would one more day hurt? I'm sure Mike would survive....barely.

What went through my mind primarily was that they were unable (not enough time?) or unwilling to reveal they'd been switched so Michael would have to be Debbie-screechy and noisy and ballsy, kissing Diner queers with red lipstick smooches... and run off his feet all day at the Diner seeing what Debbie does EVERY day and Deb having to tone it down...and failing a lot...as Michael and living out her greatest dream....being a gay man! (little joke there)

As for the sexual stuff, well of course they d have to tone it down (that s a bit too incesty for my stomach) and the decision to reveal themselves to Carl and Ben would be up to you.

Anyway there are my thoughts and ideas for you to muck around in and play in and sculpt into something twisted and horrible! Have fun, hun!!

One criticism for the actual story. Flesh it out a bit and make the chapters longer. Not hidiously long or anything but maybe like 2000-3000 words or something. I read this entire thing in one sitting. That's no fun, unless yur reading a one shot.



Author's Response: Thanks for your thoughts; I like the Ewww factor and thought it was funny to run with it. That’s why my reply was so icky. LOL Michael would look funny as Debbie; however, he might look better than he normally does as he looked really good as a female for the Pride Parade. LOL I’m glad my comments gave you a little of the incest factor, as I would never go there, that’s just wrong on so many levels. I love your thoughts and I have almost finished my Brian and Justin swap so maybe I could write another fic, stating it was in one years’ time and give everyone a chapter that has been missed out. I understand your criticism but unfortunately with the treatment I am going through I am trying to keep things very simple. My thoughts get fuzzy and if I didn’t have a beta this fic would be hilariously stupid. LOL Nonsensical. That’s also the reason it’s not a one off fic as I wouldn’t be able to keep it on track. I’m not even sure that this reply is making sense, but when I read it again once the chemo wears off, I will find out. LOL I have to laugh about it as the other option is to depressing. I think yours is the longest review I have ever had. Thank you. Cheers

Reviewer: Blanca (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2013 09:09 PM · On: My Body’s Keeper

Yes, you are absolutely right, Angie was really a great help for being my Beta for the 300 Pound Beauty. Title was changed to make it more appropriate with the weight make-over of Justin as per my Beta's advice.

Thank you for letting me know that you are still waiting for my next fic, that's very sweet of you, which encourage me more to start working on it the soonest. I was tied up with so much RL work that I wasn't able to keep my plan of starting the new fic last month. Hopefully I can work on it this month.

{{{Hugs}}}



Author's Response: Real Life always comes first, but it can really get in the way of our fun can’t it. LOL Good luck with it once you get started. Cheers

Reviewer: Blanca (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2013 03:45 PM · On: My Body’s Keeper

I love how you played the ending so well! I can sense that was Mel in the body of Lindsay kissing Brian on the cheeks and thanking him.

Can't wait for the sequel {{{Hugs}}}



Author's Response: Thank you so much for saying you sensed the ending, as that is the most important part to me. If people can see it coming I know I can’t use it again. Or can I? LOL. The sequel is partly written and the plot line is jotted down, but I need a short break to recover from treatment. Thanks for saying you are looking forward to a sequel, and remember I’m still waiting to read your next fic. Pretty please. Angie is awesome isn’t she, I can see she has helped you tidy up the 300 Pound Beauty. (Was it 200 Pounds before; I can’t remember?). Thank you so much for taking the time to review. Cheers

Reviewer: alice (Anonymous) · Date: May 08, 2013 12:32 AM · On: My Body’s Keeper

great story as always. can't wait for the sequel!!!!! and i was thinking maybe a sequel with the girls it doesnt need to be long just for us to see how their body swap turned out to work or something. its just a thought from a fan of your work =) bye 



Author's Response: I like your idea of the girls having a sequel; however, I was just hoping to put enough of their storyline into the Brian and Justin swap so you can see what happened with them. It’s really hard to get people to read anything that isn’t B/J and I don’t think I could make the girls interesting enough. LOL If you have any suggestions I would love to hear them. Thank you so much for the great story comment; I really appreciate that and to say you’re a fan of my work, makes me so happy. Okay, I’m really not going to write “happy dance” here as there is no reason anyone needs to know I just did that. LOL Cheers

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2013 12:18 AM · On: My Body’s Keeper

“I know the only thing that persuaded you to help me was the promise to make a sizable increase to Gus’ and JR’s trust funds."

Mel and Lindsay deserve each other.

Author's Response: I didn’t think Mel would help Brian for no reason, however, I liked that she put the children before any petty differences they had. Especially Gus; since they both wanted his parental rights and Brian gave them up for Gus' sake, so it’s nice that Mel is also making sacrifices for him. The real reason for getting Mel to help though was that I needed to get them away from the couch LOL I hope you enjoy how Mel evolves. Cheers.

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2013 12:16 AM · On: My Body’s Keeper

Oh oh. And Lindsay was the one who slept with Brian. Mel has her anger misdirected as usual.

Author's Response: Lindsay did sleep with Brian, however, Brian slept with Lindsay’s body while Justin occupied it and then made it quite clear she was Loosey Lindsay. LOL That’s so Brian, he just doesn’t hold back. LOL Mel’s anger misdirected; I like the way you put that, let’s see what she does with it. Fingers crossed Brian’s body will come through unscaved. Cheers

Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2013 04:49 AM · On: My Body’s Keeper

How about a Ted and Emmett swap? Ohhh....or a Debbie and Michael swap!!! But ....for some reason they MUST act (or try) like each other. Ex. Michael must act like Debbie



Author's Response: Ted and Emmett would be fun, but poor Emmett would have to tone things right down while Ted had all the fun. Emmett with Blake??? Weird. LOL OMG did you think through the Debbie and Michael swap? How would you like to be in your mother’s body? Ewww. Gross. Dry retching now. LOL Maybe it’s Debbie I should feel sorry for as she would have to whine all day and go to bed with Ben. Oh wait that last part would be nice for Debbie, right. LOL Carl and Michael. Okay I’m going to stop now. Thanks for the fun images. Cheers

Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2013 04:41 AM · On: My Body’s Keeper

WELL! That was just....delicious!!! LOL



Author's Response: I had no intention of admitting this to anyone, but I have on occasion asked for extra cheese and then a side dish. LOL Thanks for your idea; it was so much better than dessert alone. Cheers

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2013 03:00 AM · On: My Body’s Keeper

Omg I didn't think Mel had it in her to be so altruistic. I'm glad she didn't go through with hooking up with the trick from the meeting.

I can't wait for the next sequel Flossee ;)

Author's Response: I am so pleased to see you review again. I thought my reply to your last one may have turned you away from the fic. LOL I really wouldn’t have written that into the story. Ewww. LOL I like to push the reader, but even I have my limits. LOL My altruistic Mel; I’m glad you like her, as I do too. Thanks for wanting a sequel. Cheers

Reviewer: vlsope2@yahoo.com (Anonymous) · Date: May 06, 2013 01:16 AM · On: My Body’s Keeper

I LOVE ALL YOUR STORIES EXCEPT THE DEATHS OF EITHER BRIAN OR JUSTIN I CAN'T HANDLE THOSE I DON'T READ YOURS OR ANY AUTHORS BUT BACK TO THIS STORY- I WOULD LOVE TO SEE BRIAN AND JUSTIN SWAP LIVES AS WELL, JUSTIN ALWAYS WANTS TO TOP AND BRIAN CAN'T HANDLE ANYONE NEAR HIS PERFECT ASS, WHAT A STORY BRIAN STANDING UP FOR DAYS ON END AND JUSTIN SORE AND EXHAUSTED WITH YOUR QUICK WIT I ENVISION A TRULY FUNNY AND INTERESTING SITUATION. LOVE YOUR WORK.



Author's Response: You are going to think I am hypocritical, but I don’t read Major Character Deaths either. I will admit, the two I have written have bases in RL issues for me. Thanks for wanting to see the story continue. I have written the first few chapters and Brian and Justin are doing as you requested. LOL Sore and exhausted, I like the sound of that. I like it a lot. Note to self; write more fun times for B/J. LOL Thank you for saying you love my work, honestly it’s fun for me and comments like yours make it even more enjoyable. Cheers

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2013 07:08 AM · On: My Body’s Keeper

Darn, I guess all my anger at Mel wasn't needed...but I still don't like Lindsay. I can't wait for the next installment of the Evil Couch...I'll see if I can think of any ideas... Brian Kinney with a bubble butt is sure to lead to some good times.
Lori

Author's Response: I can’t wait for your ideas. Brian and Justin; fun time in each other’s bodies. I have already written the first few chapters and I can tell you they are having fun. LOL Did I just give away too much, Ms Peanut Butter? LOL. Thank you for reviewing, as always I love having a laugh with you. Now let’s just see how much fun it will be trying to teach me TWOO game. Oh no, you say. LOL Cheers

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2013 07:03 AM · On: My Body’s Keeper

Brian of course is a true gentleman regardless of the plumbing...I guess Mel is going to really have to pay a price for her destructive behavior. I think Brian and Justin need to cut the girls out of their lives from now on. Gus might prove to be a problem, I don't think Brian want's to be a full time father and there is no way he can share custody as that would mean he would have to remain in contact with the horrible nasty pond dwelling scum suckers. What does that tattoo look like???
Lori

Author's Response: Even though I wrote it, I couldn’t imagine Brian with girls plumbing and dealing with a leaky fixture. Ewww. Sorry that’s a plumbing allegory and I really don’t know if it even makes sense. LOL Gus; why do you keep bringing the little darling into my fics? Okay, I get it, you want more Gus interaction. Duly noted. I will at least mention him in the next chapter and maybe he will actually get a walk on role in the sequel. LOL Cheers

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2013 06:55 AM · On: My Body’s Keeper

I think this will be the end of Lindsay. What a horrible creature she is. I hope Lindsay decides to take a nap on the magical demon couch with a mangy skunk recently bit by a rabid fox. That way we'll really be rid of Lindsay. Ok, going to click next so I can find out what the tattoo is...I have so many ideas but can't wait to see what you've come up with.
Lori

Author's Response: I so wanted to make the tattoo like the man in the Hangover, but I refrained. We couldn’t have the face of a God inked. Even though it would be NY ink and that apparently is better than any other ink. Go figure; I don’t know why. Cheers

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2013 06:49 AM · On: My Body’s Keeper

NO!!! Please don't tell me Mel is going to get a hideous tattoo on Brian's yummy body. I'll bet she goes for something obscure like oh say the letters B and P, in what ever order might be the most tantalizing. If she does I'm sure Justin will take it as a sign that Brian is now going to get him a Pit Bull puppy who is addicted to Peanut Butter or Butt Plugs. Can't wait to find out what that bitch has in mind...
Lori

Author's Response: OMG keeper of the secrets, you are not doing such a good job. LOL I agree that people who love Peanut Butter should get a tattoo showing the world their affection for the spread. Why wouldn’t they; it’s not like once you eat it that it turns into something disgusting. At least flowers only die and you throw them out. Sorry we weren’t talking about flowers were we? LOL Cheers

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2013 06:43 AM · On: My Body’s Keeper

Dead Kittens? You think that a pile of sweet little balls of fluff now dead as a door nail would make Brian's manly lead filled wooden stick sink into a droop? I think Brian would actually need to feel a connection to a tiny purr ball to make it have an effect on his willy. Mel should have thought of Justin having an allergic reaction to the pile of dead kittens. That might have triggered a reaction. I hope Mel decided to stay in her/his room for the afternoon and not venture out into the street, who knows what sort of mischief she can get into. I think Brian needs to take Mel's body out for a good time. Perhaps a trip to a hair salon for a cut and color, I think green hair would look smashing on Mel, it would go good with the warts.
Lori

Author's Response: Dead Kittens/Bunnies. Disclaimer. No kittens were harmed in the writing of this fic, however, some were thought of in a dead like state. LOL Mel having a cut and a color; are we talking about the previous hair implants you recommended. LOL Cheers

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2013 06:29 AM · On: My Body’s Keeper

I'm laughing so hard I might need a hygiene break! I hope the news doesn't upset Ted so much he reverts to his need for chemical assistance. I'm sure the idea that Brian has switched bodies with Smelly Melly is enough to have him racing to a corner to purchase something to ease his pain. I hope Brian is used extra large sand paper covered tampons. I'm sure he can put up with the pain in exchange for knowing the discomfort it will cause for Mel once she regains her body. Maybe he has time for some plastic surgery, he could get a few changes made, like ass hair implants, tummy roll expansions, double chin, warts added to unexpected spots.... just to make things interesting for life afterwards.
Lori

Author's Response: I have no words. Really, I thought I was writing things about the human body that nobody else would mention and here you are just adding to the list. LOL Sandpaper tampons, OUCH, however, what if Mel retaliated with sandpaper condoms for bottom boy Brian. Ass hair implants: WTF. ROFLMAO. I really can’t go on as typing from the floor is very difficult. LOL Cheers

Reviewer: britinified (Anonymous) · Date: May 04, 2013 11:44 PM · On: My Body’s Keeper

This was great!!!!
I would have wanted Brian to get a taste of his own medicine. But.... Since they don't fuck around anymore it's pointless.

How about Brian runs into Ethan while in Justin's body or Justin runs into Ethan in Brian's...

Ethan can try to get justin back (while bri is in justin's body)
&
Ethan can bad mouth Justin to Brian (while Justin is in Brian's body). Oh I can't wait to see what you do with this next one.
-Marina

Author's Response: I’m so pleased to see a review from you as I owe you an apology. I mistakenly used your name instead of Kellydeer when talking about a corrected mistake. Forgiveness please. Begging here. LOL No; seriously, I am begging. I like your ideas. I was thinking, maybe Ethan, Michael and Craig could all make an appearance, but then that may be too much. On a happier note Emmett and Daphne might happen along. I have only written the first three chapters thus far so I can change the plot easily. I think Ethan is an standout choice, thanks. Hopefully fun will ensue. Cheers

Reviewer: vlsope2@yahoo.com (Anonymous) · Date: May 04, 2013 10:43 PM · On: My Body’s Keeper

I loved this story. finally a story where Brian and Mel to see how the other half lives and appreciation of what Mel puts up with on a daily basis. At least Mel is honest to Brian's face, Lindsey manipulates everyone even Gus, I would love to read more stories where Brian and Mel and Justin get along and love and respect each other. Thank  you so much for 2 great stories.



Author's Response: I always thought Brian and Mel would get along if it wasn’t for Lindsay, as they have similar personalities, both being very forthright people. I like stories where they get along too, however, I was worried people would be disappointed that I didn’t have them fighting, but I wanted them working together, just for something a little different. So I’m really pleased you liked both the stories. Thank you for taking the time to leave a review as I really do appreciate it. Cheers

Reviewer: ink (Anonymous) · Date: May 04, 2013 09:17 PM · On: My Body’s Keeper

I may be the only one but that's o.k,This is why I always like Mel better than Lindsay. this was a very good story. (here's a swap for you  Lindsay and deb or a dog hahaha)



Author's Response: I always liked Mel too. Lindsay and Deb; you crack me up. I can so picture that. The touching conversations Deb had with Brian (which involved a casserole and a little substance) would go so very differently; don’t you think? LOL A dog; would that need to be a female dog, also known as a bitch. LOL I’m glad you liked the story and took the time to let me know. Thanks for the laugh. Cheers

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