Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Tricky Universe
Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2020 01:39 AM · On: I Doo, Doo

I spent yesterday and today reading up on all of the Tricky stories...   Wow, he sure does keep things interesting.  It is never a dull moment with him around, that's for sure!!   LOL     



Author's Response:

Hi, Sarah! Yes, Tricky is quite the rebel rouser- ha! And now he has an accomplice. LOL. 

Thank you for reading his stories, and for taking the time to leave me your thoughts. I really appreciate that.  🙂 ~ Kim

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2020 07:23 AM · On: Framed For Christmas

That was so sweet and beautiful. I laughed at the T-shirt lol that was the best. The gift to Justin was so moving and powerful. Lol Ticky really got an eyeful from his favourite big human 😂😂. This was an amazing story x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2020 07:07 AM · On: Framed For Christmas

This really touched my heart. I can begin to how that kind of pain of seeing someone who love like that. I could feel Brian's I watched my dad run into a burning building to help save kids while we were on holidays it was so scary. I hope they will be ok. 

Reviewer: Nanna Nat (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2020 05:41 AM · On: I Doo, Doo

A really fun read! I

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2020 07:38 PM · On: Framed For Christmas

Omg omg 😱 that's horrible. They must be so frightened. I pray everything is going to be ok 😢😢😢



Author's Response:

Thank you for all the comments, Vicki!  Don't worry;  you know I'll make everything right in the end. XOXO ~Kim

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2020 04:10 PM · On: Framed For Christmas

Still so sad with a touch of happy with Gus and Tricky. I hope things get better soon x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2020 03:41 PM · On: Framed For Christmas

This made me so sad 😞 I hate fighting and tension like that.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2020 12:23 PM · On: Framed For Christmas

😢😢 I hate when there is fights like this as it really hurts the heart d84;a039; 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2020 10:48 AM · On: Framed For Christmas

Lol Maarten is funny I like him and I can't wait to see Jacobs reaction as well. Justin seems so happy painting this and a happy Justin is always welcome. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2020 09:52 AM · On: Framed For Christmas

Maarten is such a lovely kind man and I know how partner is gonna love the painting Justin is doing. This made me smile when I needed it. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2020 07:11 AM · On: Framed For Christmas

They are so cute together even over webcam. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2020 07:14 AM · On: Framed For Christmas

That sure is going to be an interesting painting to do for Justin. I can't wait for him to move back home x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2020 02:40 PM · On: Fit To Be Dyed: A Britin Easter Story

Awe that's so sweet. Brian is such an amazing dad and Tricky got into his heart in a big way. Even if Brian is I think afraid to show it openly. I love Tricky more stories from him please. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2020 01:28 PM · On: Fit To Be Dyed: A Britin Easter Story

Lol oh Debbie is so funny she really knows what she is doing doesn't she. Oh no poor Brian lol tricky taking that and playing with really got to him. It was funny though lol 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2020 08:23 AM · On: Fit To Be Dyed: A Britin Easter Story

Lol poor Brian he is going to have so many bruises from the dog. He would be much better if he gave the dog hugs and head scratches lol 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2020 07:16 AM · On: The Dog Days of Summer

My heart just melted that was wonderful and those rings wow. Lol Tricky left behind a little bit of him, will the take one. I hope they do 💕

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2020 08:02 AM · On: The Dog Days of Summer

Omg I was so scared my heart hurt so bad for Gus when he was crying. Brian and  Justin handled the situation so well. I was so proud of Brian staying with Tricky at the Vets all night. My heart melted. Incredible work x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2020 07:23 PM · On: The Dog Days of Summer

Wow what Brian did for Justin was so beautiful and incredible. I would be in tears if that was done for me. Gus made me laugh with what he said to his dads lol.

 Ooooh no a snake . Gus and Tricky 😢😢😢😢😢 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2020 11:43 AM · On: The Dog Days of Summer

Lol 😂 I about fell on the floor laughing when Brian moaned about Tricky chewing the food toilet paper 🧻 lol.  Then Gus with the sun cream. You really cheered me up thank you x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2020 08:25 AM · On: The Dog Days of Summer

Oh gosh poor Brian that fall had to have really hurt. Tricky did his best to help his favourite person. Brian is gonna shock Justin I'm sure with whatever he is planning. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2020 08:04 AM · On: The Dog Days of Summer

Lol Tricky is just the best and the cow just about had me falling off the chair laughing. Brilliant work x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2020 11:51 AM · On: The Dog Days of Summer

Lol Doggy and Son guilt for Brian. I hope he grows to love the dog as he won't get frustrated around him all the time. The dog clearly loves him lol. Brilliant work x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2020 10:02 AM · On: Deck the Paws

Omg I was so scared for Gus and Tricky. If Mel finds out about this she will go ballistic. I love Ticky he needs to be in more stories 💕💕

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2020 08:26 AM · On: Bless the Beasts and the Children

This made me smile from start to finish. Tricky is one of my favorites and I hope we do see more of him. I teared up at Gus's present to his dad and Justin. I wished they lived closer. Such a beautiful chapter x

Reviewer: Nanna Nat (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2020 11:47 PM · On: Bless the Beasts and the Children

A fun light-hearted read. I really enjoyed it, thank you!

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2020 03:04 PM · On: Bless the Beasts and the Children

Another incredible chapter. The playful banter between the boys makes me giggle. Mel she is making me want to jump in a boot her out lol.

 

Fabulous work x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2020 09:38 AM · On: Bless the Beasts and the Children

Tricky really is in my heart now forever. He really loves Brian doesn't he lol. Brian and Mel sparing again, that Mel needs a pie in the face or something lol 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2020 07:06 AM · On: Bless the Beasts and the Children

Brian was so cute reading the story to his son, you put a lump in my throat. Tricky lol 😂 I just about cracked up when he did what he did to Brian 😂😂. As for Mel, grrr she is a grumpy child in an adults body.

 

Excellent work x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2020 04:43 PM · On: Bless the Beasts and the Children

I was so sure I had read and reviewed this already but I'm thrilled to read again. I loved watching the two of them together riding in the back of the taxi and holding hands melted me. Then Gus omg I love him then mix in a puppy and I'm love. I think that pup will try everything to win Brian's heart lol.

 Brilliant work x

Reviewer: Bgriggs (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2019 11:46 PM · On: I Doo, Doo

Condoms...really. Is there no continuity between stories??  I mean really!



Author's Response:

Hello, Becky.  Thank you for trying this story and commenting. Umm...not quite sure how to respond to this.  I'm assuming at some point they were wearing condoms, and now they aren't, or vice versa?  If so, I'm sorry about the confusion.  My only excuse, I suppose, is that I not only write stories, but I also admin this site and our FB group page, as well as make banners and beta for other writers while working full-time. What that does, unfortunately, is make me very slow in between updates, and sometimes I forget some details. I've never left any stories unfinished, though. If I lost track of their monogamous status and was inconsistent, I apologize. I hoped you liked some part of the story.  If you wish to be more specific, I'll try to fix the mistake. ~Kim

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2019 05:27 AM · On: I Doo, Doo

good one



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and for the comments, Angelika!  I appreciate you choosing this story to read. I hope you continue to enjoy other stories that I have written.  :)  ~Kim

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2019 03:40 AM · On: I Doo, Doo

Is Justins and Gus fault about the ring

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2019 01:38 AM · On: The Dog Days of Summer

good one, thank you



Author's Response:

Thank you for choosing to read this one, Angelika.  I enjoyed writing about Tricky and making Brian squirm - LOL!  I don't think Brian and dogs would mix. Thanks for the comments!  ~Kim

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2019 12:54 AM · On: The Dog Days of Summer

Poor Tricky.  Darn Gus, spoiled Brat, he should get more discipine

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2019 05:54 PM · On: Fit To Be Dyed: A Britin Easter Story

good one.  Gus goes on my nervers



Author's Response:

Hello, Angelika - yes, Gus is very precocious; definitely.  Thank you for reading so many of my stories, and especially for taking the time to comment. :)  ~Kim

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2019 12:55 PM · On: Framed For Christmas

good one

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2019 04:54 AM · On: Bless the Beasts and the Children

good one

Reviewer: tataniastorm (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2017 10:22 AM · On: I Doo, Doo

I have just read the whole story line today. Ty you so much for this wonderful story. I laughed and I cried. Thank you for all the timeyou put into creating such wondervul works for us readers.



Author's Response:

Hello, Tatiana!  How did I miss this review?  Ugh.  I'm so sorry for overlooking it.  I want to thank YOU for taking the time to read, but especially leave me feedback.  I am glad that you enjoyed it.  XOXO  ~Kim

Reviewer: chenlina (Anonymous) · Date: May 19, 2017 06:44 AM · On: Tricky Universe

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Reviewer: BritinForever (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2016 10:43 PM · On: I Doo, Doo

I truly loved this whole saga.  Every story in the Tricky Universe.  I hope maybe you'll give us a chapter or two in the future.  I'd love to see what happens.  Thanks for sharing.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you, Jessica!  I have enjoyed writing these stories; especially the scenes where Tricky torments Brian.  He's just a big, lovable beast, but he still adores his master's father - ha!  I may very well try to write another one in the future, since a lot of readers have found them enjoyable.

Thank you for reading, and especially for taking the time to comment.  Many readers who read the older stories don't leave any feedback, so I truly appreciate you doing that.  :)  ~Kim

Reviewer: TTFBarnett (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2015 05:07 PM · On: I Doo, Doo

I love your writing and you're one of my favourite, if not my favourite, QaF fanfic writers. I've been following your Tricky Universe fanfics since just after you wrote Framed for Christmas and I always love seeing that you've started a new story (not just in this series). I think your Brian and Justin are the most 'in character' versions I've read in the QaF fandom. 

Keep up the good work :)

Tori x



Author's Response:

Hi, Tori! I know this is almost a year late (hiding under desk now).  But somehow I overlooked this one, so I wanted to still respond to it.  Your kind words make me very happy to read.  I was thinking about you the other day, and how I wish I could see a new story from you.  I hope you will consider doing that sometime. And when and if you do, I would be glad to help you with a banner.  :)

 

So a VERY belated thank you for reading, and especially for your kind comments.  I don't know if you're still reading QAF fic or not, but I miss you on here!  Hope you are well.  ~Kim

Reviewer: Avampiregirl (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2015 06:28 PM · On: I Doo, Doo

Great story! I can't wait for the next Tricky story.

Reviewer: Avampiregirl (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2015 01:48 AM · On: I Doo, Doo

Great chapter!

Reviewer: Avampiregirl (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2015 03:54 PM · On: I Doo, Doo

Loved the chapter. Justin needs to just crate train her, if it's possible.

Reviewer: Avampiregirl (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2015 03:32 PM · On: I Doo, Doo

Thanks for the info on how to leave reviews! Every time I would try the numbers never matched.

I have just finished the other Tricky stories and can't wait to start this one. Such fun cute tales!!

Author's Response:

Hi, Amanda! I'm glad that it helped. :)  Thank you for reading the Tricky series, and for the comments. I'm happy that you've enjoyed them. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2015 10:48 AM · On: Deck the Paws

that was a scary story... set a xmas, but read by me appropriately just before Halloween.  A parents very worst nightmare!

I can't help but wonder how the Muncher's are going to react learning of all of this but not being told about it even as the police were being called?

Reviewer: rulisteningbj (Anonymous) · Date: October 23, 2015 09:25 PM · On: I Doo, Doo

Yay!  Anther blue ribbon for a wonderful Tricky story.  I truely love these wonderful stories of family, fun, mischief and love.

Dee Dee



Author's Response:

I'm happy that you enjoy the Tricky stories, Dee Dee! Not sure if I will revisit the rambunctious pooch, but who knows?  Perhaps one day.  I AM working on a new story behind the scenes that is much lighter and less angst-filled than my two current WIPs. I want to either get it done, though, or close to done before I start posting it, so I can devote more time to finishing my two WIPs. Thank you for reading, and for allways being so supportive. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: LEE (Anonymous) · Date: October 23, 2015 04:02 PM · On: I Doo, Doo

I AM SO SORRY I'M LATE IN REVIEWING. THIS STORY WAS DA BOMB. BRIAN AND DOGS AND WEDDING CATASTROPHIES WAS SO FUNNY. I HAVE BEEN SO BUSY HAVEN'T HAD MUCH FREE TIME AND WHEN I HAVD I SLEEP. BEEN WORKING DOUBLES FOR SOME EXTRA CASH SO I CAN MAKE DOUBLE PAYMENTS ON THE CONDO. WOULD LIKE TO GET IT PAID OFF SOONER RATHER THAN LATER. I HAVEN'T FORGOTTEN YOU, ALTHOUGH TO YOU IT MAY SEEM THAT WAY. STILL LOVE YOU.

Author's Response:

Hi, Sweetheart!  Don't ever apologize; I know how very busy you must be with your new home and all the work you're doing, so I am just honored that you continue to read and take the time to review. That means more to me than you will ever know.   I feel like you truly are a good friend, even though I have never had the privilege of meeting you. Who knows? Maybe one day.;) 

Please take care of yourself, and don't work too hard.  I am so proud of everything you have accomplished during the past few years, and how strong you have become.  You should be proud of your accomplishments, too.  I wish nothing but happiness for you, and I know that one day you will meet someone who will treat you like the very special person that you are.  Please keep in touch when you can, and know that I will always be thinking about you.  Sending love and hugs your way. ~Kim

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2015 01:06 PM · On: I Doo, Doo

omg.  the wedding from HELL.  You know you've hit an all time low when your classy wedding devolves into cake wrestling with 'who let the dogs out' blaring in the background.

I wouldnt blame Brian one iota if he refused to allow Tricky to set one foot onto his property forever.  At the very least I'd demand the dog pass obedience school - and be prescribed Ritalin.

Lots of love, lots of sex, lots of making fun of Brian.  Oh, and waaaaay too much dog shit.

Thanks for the update.  I do hope you write another tory where Brian is back to his macho amazing self, totally in control of his household, and the dogs within it - just so he gets to remember what its like.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your feedback Michelle.  I know I tend to write a sweeter Brian than some others, but I AM working on a new story where he is more of Justin's pursuer, and they have not met yet, so I hope that will be more what you have in mind.:)  Thanks for reading.  ~Kim

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2015 09:16 AM · On: I Doo, Doo

I guess, for the sake of this story, we are also deliberately forgetting Tricky was fixed?  I seem to remember a line about Brian being asphixiated, and Gus saying Tricky was already fixed.  LOL.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2015 08:56 AM · On: I Doo, Doo

Hi, just wanted to point out two things.

You are repeating yourself in this chapter, last chapter Justin stated,

"Brian and I are getting married soon!  And Brian doesn't know this yet...but Gus is planning on bringing Tricky with him when he and his moms come for the wedding.  Brian thinks he's leaving him with a friend while they're here. But Gus was so upset over having to be separated from him that he called here in tears the other day when Brian was out of town on business, bawling his eyes out and telling me how much he would miss Tricky if he couldn't come, too."

And one fourth into this chapter you have him saying something similar,

"Actually, he thinks Tricky is staying back home with some of Mel and Lindsay's friends. What he doesn't know yet is that Gus had such a fit about leaving him at home that the girls relented and asked me if they could bring him...and I said yes."

Then this second thing is that you have Brian putting on a condom here when the first story in the series established they were doing it raw.

Otherwise, I am so thrilled that you are still posting new stories and I look forward to every new chapter!

 

Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2015 09:18 AM · On: I Doo, Doo

We have another home run from one of my favorite authors. As Elsa Rose would say, I've been holding a ribbon for this story - once completed. Good job Kimberly!



Author's Response:

Thank you for  the honor, Bob. It is appreciated.  ~Kim

Reviewer: Ersilia (Anonymous) · Date: October 18, 2015 01:26 AM · On: I Doo, Doo

Predec2, you know I love your writing; but I'm one of those lazy readers who rarely spend their time commenting...sorry for that. Now I know you need a feedback from us. Here is mine: with your beautiful stories you bring me to a wonderland where everything is right, everything is perfect..all my dreams about Brian and Justin come true. Never say again you're thinking of stopping to write your stories, never. Your style, your imagination, your storylines are so perfect to me...please, be generous and go on on making my dreams come true.



Author's Response:

Hello, Ersilia! Wow, where do I begin to let you know how much I appreciate your comments?  To know that someone enjoys what I write is a supreme compliment to me. I cannot thank you enough for taking the time to let me know that. Thank you for reading my stories, and for your extremely kind words. Support such as yours truly helps me to stay motivated. I hope I can continue to write stories that you will enjoy. I love writing about these boys, and I have many ideas yet to write about. Thank you again for reading my stories, and for taking the time to let me know your thoughts. It means the world to me, especially during the doubtful times. *Hugs*  Kim

Reviewer: sharon (Anonymous) · Date: October 16, 2015 06:44 PM · On: I Doo, Doo

loved this so much.... so sorry it had to end can not wait to see wot u write next



Author's Response:

Hi, Sharon!  How kind of you to read and especially take the time to comment! Thank you for both. I'm so happy that you enjoyed it! I'm going to concentrate on trying to wrap up my two WIPs soon, but I DO have a possible short story for Christmas that I will be working on behind the scenes. And, as usual, I have a ton of story ideas floating around in my head that I hope to get to eventually.:)

Thank you so much for reading this story, and for the support! They are both much appreciated. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2015 09:50 AM · On: I Doo, Doo

Wonderful ending to a wonderful story! The humor, the feelings, the little dramatic moments – it has it all. I feel like your Brian and Justin from this universe are absolutely real, living somewhere out there, enjoying their lives together. Thank you for this amazing piece, Kim, and for the epilogue especially. I hope we’ll see more of Brian and Justin, Tricky and Xena and Gus in future!  



Author's Response:

Hi, Katrin! Thank you as always for reading, and for your thoughtful comments!  I may revisit them at some point if I can come up with another angle.  I'm delighted that you like our lovable, lumbering pooch! Thanks again for the support, my friend. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2015 09:45 AM · On: I Doo, Doo

The beginning of the chapter was so sweetly-tempting – Brian is a well known seducer. You always describe his technique so richly and precisely, I almost feel like I’m the one experiencing this bliss :D

The dance was perfect. Like Brian and Justin, I immediately thought of the prom dance, but this one was something special – like it symbolizes the new beginning for them. I hope they will remember this dance above that painful one.

--- Which clown threw up on our cake--- - oh my God. Oh my God, I’ll never stop laughing! That was *so* Brian, so in canon, so refreshing and realistic that I almost fell of my chair! I’ll never look at that cake the same now :)  Before Brian’s remark, though, I was astonished at how beautiful it looks. The rainbow cake! I’ve never even thought this might be possible. I still want to taste it!

The ending was amazing and hilarious. I think it’s a perfect story for anyone who’s in a bad mood – it’ll cheer them up 100%!     

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2015 03:10 PM · On: I Doo, Doo

"He's Freddy Kruger, only with fur!"

I don't know how you come up with those clever, amusing sayings but please continue. This has to be my favorite Tricky story and even though it's not my decision, I think this is blue ribbon worthy.

S:)

Author's Response:

Thank you, Sandra, for reading, and especially for taking the time to leave feedback.  I'm happy to hear that this was your favorite Tricky story.;)  Perhaps one day I will revisit their world.  TY for the ribbon comment, too; that would be up to Bob, however.;)  It does help to know that readers appreciate my efforts, so I really appreciate the support. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2015 03:05 PM · On: I Doo, Doo

"I'll do it...because it makes you happy."

Awww... That's why I like this story. And loved the playful banter. Really, really loved the cake and chocolate fiasco.

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: October 14, 2015 04:21 AM · On: I Doo, Doo

OMG What a funny screwed wedding. So funny and Brian had no regrets in the end. I have had chocolate pit on parts of my body and licked off. Quite a nice feeling. Whoops guess i have remembered a fun memory=don't mind me, anyway such a cute funny and nice ending story dogs and all. lol

Author's Response:

Thank you, Lindc. I'm glad you enjoyed it.  I promise I won't ask how you wound up with chocolate on YOUR body - ha! Thanks again. ~Kim

Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2015 06:45 PM · On: I Doo, Doo

AS always, a terrific story. Am completely in love with the Tricky stories. I get such odd looks when I read them as it's usually either on a break at work, or curled up at home, adn having people wondering why I'm laughing out loud, quite often hysterically, when I'm reading. Oh if only they knew!! LOL!!

I can completely envision everything in this series and it's always hilarious seeing the interactions of Tricky and now Xeena in my head.

always happy to have another of your stories to save to my Kindle. I go back to them often to re-read again adn again...

thanks again for this one!! I honestly hust have to see the title of it and I start smiling. :)

Cheers, 

Elaine



Author's Response:

Hi, Elaine! I loved your comments! It makes me happy to know how much you enjoy the Tricky stories, and that this one made you laugh.  Thank you for the support, and for your kind words.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Elly (Anonymous) · Date: October 13, 2015 06:24 PM · On: I Doo, Doo

Dear Kim, I enjoyed the last chapter and epilogue. Thank you so much for this wonderful and humorous story. Greetings El. xx



Author's Response:

Hi, Elly! Thank YOU for all the support. That means a lot to me. And thanks for taking the time to comment. *Hugs*~Kim

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2015 04:49 PM · On: I Doo, Doo

BRAVO....BRAVO! ENCORE! ;)

Author's Response:

Thank you, Tamara! I'm very happy that you enjoyed it. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2015 05:47 AM · On: I Doo, Doo

Very entertaining story, I will miss the updates but I guess you can't ask for much more than our boys happily married at long last:-D



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, and for the comments!  I'm happy that you enjoyed it. You never know; Tricky may make a reappearance at some point to check up on his daughter.;)  At least now I can devote more time to my two WIPs (and perhaps work behind the scenes on a holiday story as well). Thanks again for the support! *Hugs* ~Kim

P.S.  And thank you, also, for being selected as one of your favorite authors. I am very honored by that.

Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Anonymous) · Date: October 13, 2015 02:11 AM · On: I Doo, Doo

And they lived happily ever after... barring anymore Tricky visits, LOL!

Sweet story!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, and for the comments, Trish!  I'm glad you enjoyed it.  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2015 02:11 AM · On: I Doo, Doo

Wow, you really did end it with just one more chapter.  This was a really great story.  I love your Tricky Universe, hope we have more stories there in the future.  Bill



Author's Response:

Thank you, Bill! I appreciate the support.;)  Always mixed feelings when a story concludes, but now I can finally move back over to my two WIPs.;)  Hopefully, I'll get an inspiration regarding our rambunctious mutt down the road, and he can make a reappearance. Thanks again for reading, and for the feedback! *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: serendu (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2015 11:03 PM · On: I Doo, Doo

Fab story sorry to see it end 



Author's Response:

Hello, Andrea!  I consider it a big compliment if you are sorry to see it end.;)  I do love that lovable, but mischevious mutt!  Thank you for reading, and for taking the time to leave feedback; I really appreciate that. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: B/J lover (Anonymous) · Date: October 12, 2015 08:30 PM · On: I Doo, Doo

Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful and humorous story.
And I loved Brians confession at the end.
The things we do for love. :-)



Author's Response:

Thank YOU for reading, and for the support.  So happy you enjoyed it. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2015 08:26 PM · On: I Doo, Doo

Love it :) As Justin said, it was one hell of a week, but it was definitely worth the ride ;P

Thank you for another great story!



Author's Response:

Hi, dear friend!  Yes, another Tricky tale has come to an end.  Not sure if he will make another visit, but you never know.:)  I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for reading, and for the support; it is deeply appreciated. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2015 07:25 PM · On: I Doo, Doo

Brian has changed for the better.  He never did regrets anyways.  You had me worried, I could just see Brian falling through the glass shower and having to be rushed to the hospital.  I know it would have taken from the fun of this story, but perhaps they should have invested in some doggy tranquilizers?  Oh well, alls well that ends well.  How do you top this?



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend! Well, that would have definitely put a damper on things! I do think some tranquilizers could be necessary - ha!  Not sure if I will revisit the Tricky universe, but I have enjoyed writing about that lovable mutt.;)  Thank you for reading, and for the comments!  I truly appreciate  that. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2015 05:33 PM · On: I Doo, Doo

Thanks Kim, for this lovely, with lot of humor, story. Sorry for not commenting everytime. But your story let me forget school (or rather the kids agggrr ) for a while. You got me smiling and laughing out loud a lot.

 * hugs *



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend! I'm happy that you enjoyed it, and it made you laugh.  I think when I write my new story and post it, it will be a lighter one as well. Need to move away from the angst for a while! Thanks for reading, and for your feedback; I really appreciate that. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: anym (Anonymous) · Date: October 12, 2015 05:08 PM · On: I Doo, Doo

this is beautifull, love it



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, and for your comment! I am happy that you enjoyed it.  ~Kim

Reviewer: chandrika (Anonymous) · Date: October 12, 2015 03:20 PM · On: I Doo, Doo

thank you for sharing this wonderful story

 



Author's Response:

Thank YOU for reading, and for taking the time to comment, Chandrika! I really appreciate that, and I'm glad that you enjoyed it.  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: starfire64 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2015 03:19 AM · On: I Doo, Doo

Hi Kim. OMG, this whole chapter gave me a bad case of the giggles, so funny ;  ) I think my favorite parts were the announcements Emmett and Deb made over the sound system and the dogs in the tent. Ha-  “Who let the dogs out”  I can just imagine the DJ putting that one on and everyone bursting into laughter. Looking forward to the epilogue  :  ) *Hugs* Janet

 



Author's Response:

Hi, Janet! So good to hear from you; I've been thinking about you and your mom. Will send you an email as soon as I can take a breath!  I'm happy that you enjoyed this chapter; I guess there's more than one way to create a chocolate lab - ha!  thank you for reading, and for your feedback, my friend. *Hugs* ~Kim

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Reviewer: Rixa (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2015 12:54 AM · On: I Doo, Doo

It turns out that my review on chapter four where I predicted a Brady Bunch moment where the dogs would create havoc during the reception including knocking over the cake was right after all!
I must admit I hope that Brian's comment to Gus about always being the first son doesn't mean that he's thinking about him and Justin having children. I'm just not one of the those people who think Brian would ever want to be a full time father and I think adopting a dog would be as far as he would go in the parenting direction.

Author's Response:

Hi, Rixa! Yes, you were extremely accurate about that.;)  We all knew they wouldn't behave the entire time.;)  As for another child, not to worry. The story will end with the next chapter, and won't include that issue.

I'm glad you've been enjoying this 'verse. Thank you for reading, and especially for taking the time to comment. ~Kim

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2015 08:18 PM · On: I Doo, Doo

LOL The whole scene with the dogs was priceless! I also adore the boys's banter during all the chapter, and the cake...Wow! As colorful as Debbie, you got that right!

The boys's hapiness is a delight to read. Thank you for such a funny and lovely story, Kim. Eager to read the epilogue :)



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend - thank you for reading, and for taking the time to leave feedback; both are greatly appreciated.  Glad you enjoyed it, and I thought the cake was in line with what Emmett might have come up with. I would have loved to have seen how he staged their wedding on the show (if only we had had one!). Thanks again for the support.  ~Kim

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2015 06:20 PM · On: I Doo, Doo

Well we knew those dogs were going to escape eventually.  The chaos was great and I loved the chocolate lab remark from Gus.  Great chapter of this wonderful story!!!  Bill



Author's Response:

Thank you reading and for the comments, Bill. One more chapter to go, and then it's back to "Stallion."  Thanks for the support. ~Kim

Reviewer: mamaduck (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2015 03:09 PM · On: I Doo, Doo

Being owned by a black lab in my youth, I am rolling on the floor here.

I can see Brian's face as the cake is coming at him.  LOL!



Author's Response:

Hi, Sandra!  Yes, you have to love labs. Big, sweet, lovable lugs of a dog!  I adore them.:) Thank you for reading, and especially taking the time to comment! One more chapter to go.~Kim

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: October 10, 2015 02:50 PM · On: I Doo, Doo

What a great, funny chapter, laughed our butts off and would have loved to see that on the screen. Cake picture, fabulous. lol

Author's Response:

Thank you, Lindc. I'm glad you all enjoyed it. Thank you for reading, and for the feedback.  ~Kim

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2015 02:26 PM · On: I Doo, Doo

Great chapter! Tricky and crew sure made it memorable lol.

Btw....I think we got a double posting of the chapter my friend ;)

Author's Response:

Thanks, Tamara - I fixed it. Sometimes it's hard to tell when you post into that little text box that it's actually posted, so I must not have realized that. Thanks for pointing it out. Sigh...not sure how I felt about this chapter, TBH, and it appears from the lack of comments that perhaps others felt the same. I'm going to post the remaining epilogue in the next day or so, and then get back into my regular WIP posting again with Stallion. I'm itching to start a new story, but will hold off until I have it completely done, I think. I may post a one-shot here and there, though, for the holidays. Thank you for reading, Tamara, and for being so supportive. ~Kim

Reviewer: Prisca512 (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2015 06:08 AM · On: I Doo, Doo

My sides hurt from laughing!!!!!  But seriously, ever the romantic Brian insisting on their first dance before cutting the cake and choosing the perfect son for his Husband. I love to see Brian's softer side when it comes to Justin. 

Well done, my friend, I'll be chuckling over the image of Brian trying to save their cake for quite some time.  thanks for sharing!! :-)



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, and for the comments, Melinda. I appreciate that more than you know.  I'll have the epilogue up in the next day or so, and I CAN say that Tricky isn't quite done yet!  Thanks again. ~Kim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2015 05:52 AM · On: I Doo, Doo

I feel so bad for Emmett.  The cake was a masterpiece and all destroyed.  Tricky sure knows how to make a mess.  It took Ted and Carl to take him down and clean him up.  Let's hope the married couple manage to shower without the four legged contingent interrupting again.



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend - As always, I'm grateful for your reading, and for the feedback. Funny you should say that about Tricky, because he's not done quite yet! I will have the epilogue up shortly, and then it's back to Stallion. Thank you again for all the support you give me and so many other authors. Wish we could clone you! ~Kim

Reviewer: Elly (Anonymous) · Date: October 04, 2015 07:26 PM · On: I Doo, Doo

I loved this chapter, so romantic!

I read it with a big smile, loved every word.

But I held my breath for the dogs, haha ... they stayed away! Greetings Elly xx



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, Elly! I'm happy that you enjoyed the vows.;)  The mahem is about to commence!  I will have the next part up very shortly; just trying to do some last-minute tweaking and formatting changes.  Thank you for reading, and especially for the comments, my friend. They are both very much appreciated. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2015 07:10 AM · On: I Doo, Doo

"You make my life...interesting..."

That was so romantic. I loved it.

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2015 07:01 AM · On: I Doo, Doo

"You're just going to leave with that...that jewelry-eating homewrecker?"

Ha! That was my favorite line.

It was a shame that a small boy had to make Justin see the light. I loved the fight, though.

Author's Response:

Hi, Sandra!  So sorry for the delay in responding. RL and beta duties are kind of kicking my butt right now. :/  But I wanted you to know how much I appreciate your support and the comments. I will be posting the last part of this very soon. Just have to finish up some formatting and slight tweaking. Thank you for reading and for the feedback! *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2015 05:17 PM · On: I Doo, Doo

Hi, Kim! I finally caught up with another one of your wonderful stories and I’m so glad I did :) It’s a sheer pleasure to watch Brian and Justin’s life. I had such a pleasant time reading about them – for several hours I was immersed in their world, forgetting about ours. You made them incredibly vivid – they are talking, breathing, fighting, making up… they are so real that I truly feel like I’m a part of their life as well.

Xena is fantastic :) I knew from the start that Brian will allow Justin to have this dog, because even if he’s grumping and protesting, he still can’t deny him anything if Justin wants it strongly enough.

Gus is so sweet and caring… I wonder how he will go through teenage phase. Will he change for the worse? Right now it’s impossible to imagine it, he’s a little Sunshine. Every time he calls Justin ‘Papa’ my heart just freezes. It’s so touching, I wish in the show there was such a moment, too. Justin loves Gus so much.

Tricky still makes me laugh out loud with his antics :) Christ, I feel sorry for Brian, that man is a saint. He can be very patient when he knows something is important for his loves ones, but Xena and Tricky together?? Wow. I’m not sure I would be able to take it :)

‘Altar Boy’ – that’s hilarious!:) I’ve never heard it before. I always admired your ability to pick funny nicknames for every version of Brian and Justin you write. I remember them all.

The wedding was so very beautiful, as well as the vows – I even re-read this part and I smiled every time.

Thank you, Kim, for another wonderful story! Brian and Justin are so familiar and warm here, I can’t get enough of them. I look forward to the last chapter!  



Author's Response:

Hi, Katrin! I always love your thoughtful reviews. I'm sorry for the delay in responding. Things have been terribly busy for me the past few days. Thank you for your lovely words, my friend. I'm very happy that you are enjoying it so far.  And yes, father and daughter together - along with the neighbor's dog - is going to cause some mayhem, that's for sure.;)

I should have the next part up very soon - I'm doing some minor retweaking of it. Thanks again for your support and courtesy in leaving feedback, Katrin.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

 

Reviewer: Sunsuso65 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2015 09:52 PM · On: I Doo, Doo

Amazing chapter. 

The wedding was wonderful

i love this story.

kisses



Author's Response:

TYSM, Susana! I'm happy that you are enjoying this story. Kisses back to you! Can't wait to see you again next June! *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2015 02:56 PM · On: I Doo, Doo

Married at last......and even with the right ring and the dogs were reasonable well controlled - even if loud....LOL - poor Brian....

Sneaking off to the bathroom during their reception - it's soooooo Brian and Justin....LOL

Author's Response:

Hi, Monica! Thank you for continuing to read and review; I do appreciate that.;)  Yes, I thought I would at least let the boys get married without the dogs causing any further disaster...but that doesn't include the reception (hint, hint...!). I'll have the concluding part up very soon; just doing some minor revisions to it.  Thanks again for your support, Monica! *Hugs*~Kim

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: September 24, 2015 01:35 PM · On: I Doo, Doo

Sorry for all the spelling boo boos I really can spell-just tired and in a hurry. These doubles kill me. Ha!! lol

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: September 24, 2015 01:32 PM · On: I Doo, Doo

Sorry am sooo late reviewing. Too much going on here. Lee finally ensconced in his new place, going away party for BB, won't be back except for visits, (SAD!!!!) and last but not leasr had to read this wonderful chapter to listeners. Needless to say, not a dry eye in the room. It was the best chapter in the whole story so far. I have reas a long list of their wedding in many stories---but this was by far the very very veey best. The vows were sooooooo good say all the listeners. I had to read that part twice. See what you do to them. All in all quite a busy, happy and sad time for all of us. lol

Author's Response:

Hi, dear friend! I apologize for taking a while to answer your review. RL has been very difficult lately, and my free time is drastically reduced. But do not fear; I will never intentionally not respond to people who read and take the extra step to comment, especially with you.;)  I am so happy that you and the other listeners enjoyed this so much. I always get nervous writing wedding vows for the boys, so I'm glad that you and the others thought they were appropriate for them.

I will have the next/last part of this up soon. Doing some minor revisions to it. Oh, and I think I might have the udpate to "MHD" posted either today or tomorrow.  Tell Lee and everyone else I said my love and gratitude to them. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2015 11:30 AM · On: I Doo, Doo

Wonderfull romantic chapter Kim I loved it

Author's Response:

Thank you, Chris. I'm glad that you liked it so much. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2015 01:05 AM · On: I Doo, Doo

OK...I may have swooned myself a little bit on this one. that was wonderful! Everything about it was wonderful. Was a little concerned with the dogs there for a bitm bit whew...they behaved.

gus was adorable and I totally pictured JR dragging him along.

thanks for this one. I'm gushing a bit but I really loved it. I'm smiling right now and still swooning a little bit. :)

E



Author's Response:

Hi, Elaine! I'm so happy that you thought I did a good job on the chapter.  Anytime someone enjoyed what I wrote, that really makes me feel good, so thank you for that.  I will have the last part up very soon. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2015 12:49 PM · On: I Doo, Doo

Wonderfull romantic chapter Kim I loved it

Author's Response:

Thank you, Chris! I am so appreciative of all the times you have stopped to read and leave me feedback. We go back a long way!  Thank you for all the support you have given me. I will get the next part up very soon. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2015 11:11 AM · On: I Doo, Doo

I'm sick in bed and thinking about reading something to relax, so what better way to do that than to read your last wonderful chapters. Not sure how I missed the last one but that way I had a long read this morning :) And it was so beautiful! I'm happy the dogs didn't interrupt the ceremony; it would have been a shame not to have the privilege to be the witness to such wonderful vows between the men... But I suspect one last appearance of the dogs... I will have to wait for your next chapter to see if I'm right or not :) 



Author's Response:

Hello, my friend. I'm sorry to hear that you have not been feeling well. I hope by the time you read my response you will be feeling better.  But I'm glad that this chapter served as a good diversion for you.  And yes, I will admit that the trio of canines is not quite done yet wreaking havoc, but I have an inkling that everyone already suspects that.;)  Thank you for reading, and especially for the feedback!  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Diana (Anonymous) · Date: September 23, 2015 09:12 AM · On: I Doo, Doo

oh wow, i actually cried reading this chapter.

it was wonderful!

keep going ;)

Diana



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked it, Diana! I always get nervous whenever I have to write their vows; it's hard to make them realistic, so I'm relieved that you liked it. I will have the last part up very soon, and then it's back to my badly-neglected two WIPs. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Anonymous) · Date: September 23, 2015 05:28 AM · On: I Doo, Doo

Great update! You had me choked up a few times...  



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're still reading and enjoyed this chapter, Trish. Thank you for letting me know. I'll have the last part up very soon. Thanks for bearing with me. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2015 05:17 AM · On: I Doo, Doo

Thank you Kim....I am crying very happy tears. Their vows were beautiful and the ceremony was perfect.

Author's Response:

Thank you, Tamara. I'm glad you thought the vows were okay. I always get nervous wheneve I have to write vows for Brian, especially.  I will have the last part up soon (doing some slight retweaking of it and have to have time to reformat it to post here). Thank you for reading and for the comments. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2015 03:51 AM · On: I Doo, Doo

Beautiful chapter. When I got to the part about the rings, I cried my eyes out. That was so sweet and so Brian. Love this story.

Author's Response:

Thank you, Lorie! Wow, what lovely things to say. I'm delighted that you are enjoying this story so much, and I am glad that you liked the vows. I think that is one of the things I was disappointed with regarding the show. I would have loved to have seen what sort of vows B & J would have come up with. 

I'll have the last part up soon. My RL job, among other things, is slowing me down more than I would like but it will be finished, along with my two WIPs. Thanks again, Lorie. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: September 23, 2015 03:13 AM · On: I Doo, Doo

Loving this and wishing it never had to end



Author's Response:

So happy that you are enjoying this story, and want it to continue!  That is a big compliment to me.;)  Thank you for reading, and for all the support. There will be one more to conclude the story, and the fun is just beginning (well, at least for SOME of them).;)  Thank you again for the comments. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Larka (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2015 02:49 AM · On: I Doo, Doo

So wonderful and romantic!



Author's Response:

Thank you, Larka! I'm very happy that you are still reading and enjoying this story!  I will have the final part up soon. Of course, we all know the dogs can't be angels forever (hint, hint). So while the wedding may have gone smoothly, something tells me the wind's about to change.;)  Thanks for reading, and especially for taking the time to leave me feedback. It is greatly appreciated. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2015 02:35 AM · On: I Doo, Doo

Loved the wedding.  I knew Brian would get his ring cleaned and wear it.  Really, really enjoying this story.  Bill



Author's Response:

You're very kind, Bill. Thank you. I'm sorry I've kind of been MIA lately. This new job is kicking my butt, among other things. But I'm glad you're still reading and enjoying the story. I guess we all knew Brian was a big softy at heart when it comes to Justin. Thanks for reading, and for the comments. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2015 01:14 AM · On: I Doo, Doo

Glad to have been of assistance.  You did a great job and the vows were beautiful.  Glad Brian got over his fear of saying I do with doo doo on his ring.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad you thought the vows were appropriate. And don't worry; the dogs aren't done yet! That wouldn't be much fun.;)  Will have the last part up very soon. Thank you for reading, for the support, and for your suggestion. They are all greatly appreciated.  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2015 08:24 AM · On: I Doo, Doo

"Tell me you are NOT suggesting we...she...you mean...? Shit."

LOL!!!

I've heard of dogs swallowing a lot of strange things. I would think it's par for the course, but I couldn't believe Justin couldn't sympathize with Brian. But I also wouldn't throw away a 5000 ring.

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, and for the comments, Sandra! Always so good to hear from you, and I'm happy that you are enjoying the latest Tricky story.;p)  I just posted the next part; I hope you continue to enjoy it. Thank you as always for reading, and for all the support. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2015 06:47 AM · On: I Doo, Doo

"I don't think that will be a problem...but it'll be a fucking turn on watching that ass trying to get away from me."

That was my favorite sentence. The sexual innuendos and banter were even more exceptional in this chapter. It was such a fun read.

:)

Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2015 06:08 PM · On: I Doo, Doo

Finally able to read the last 2 chapters. the whole treasure hunt scenario was a riot! Was giggling through it all! Looking forward to seeinf what Brian has up his sleeve regarding the ring. Using Mikey's ring in subterfuge is my guess.

Almost at the actual wedding!1 Can't wait!! Curious if the dogs will behave. If they make it through the wedding without incident,  what about teh reception. Hey...it's Tricky and Xena we're talking about there. You knw it can't be entirely smooth sailing! LOL.

Wonderful story and looking forward to the next chapter and the actual wedding!

thanks Kim!

E



Author's Response:

Hi, Elaine! Please forgive me for the long pause before answering your review. Between everything going on in RL and the trip to Chicago, I am just now able to sit down and answer. I am happy that you are enjoying this story. While the dogs may seem to be behaving in this chapter, do not fear. You know that can't be permanent - ha!

I just posted the next-to-last part. I hope you continue to enjoy it! Thanks again for all the support. *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2015 07:51 AM · On: I Doo, Doo

We're one step closer - must admit that I'm a little worried about what trouble your devious mind could have in store for the boys.....LOL Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Hi, Monica!  Who, me? Devious?:D  Let's just say it won't be your typical wedding or reception; there would be no fun in that.;)  And I don't think that Sadie's going to be a good influence on Tricky or their daughter.;)  I'll have the next part up shortly as soon as I can review it and get it reformatted. Been working insane hours lately, which is really affecting my free time - ugh. But it won't be long. Thank you again for the support. It is greatly appreciated. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: bctush (Anonymous) · Date: September 14, 2015 11:27 PM · On: I Doo, Doo

loving this story, nothing funnier than Tricky and Xena throw in the little imp Gus and you have a great story and and constant trouble. Gus was so cute on the show and in this story you can invision how mini Brian gets himself in more trouble yet seems so innocent to his daddy, papa knows that father like son. I hope Brian abd Justin marry but you know something strange is around the corner. Hope we have many more chapters after the wedding there is so much trouble the trio can get into.



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend! Thank you for reading this story, and for your lovely comments; I appreciate that so much.;)  Yes, I could see Gus being a 'mini-me' of his father in a lot of ways, and I think the older he gets, the more like him he might become.;)  I CAN say the boys will get married, but will it be a conventional wedding? Even without the added possibility of some canine chaos ensuing, I don't think especially with Brian it would be the case.;) 

I will have the next part up soon. Was going to end it there, but we'll see how it goes.;)  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Rixa (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2015 09:55 PM · On: I Doo, Doo

I really enjoy pet!fics and humorous stories which is why the Tricky stories are my favorites of all your works. Even though I knew Brian would give in and let Justin adopt Xena his concerns were certainly valid since adopting a dog or cat can be a fifteen or twenty year commitment.
I hope whoever will be looking over Tricky and Xena during the wedding will be doing so at a completely different location otherwise I can see them getting loose and creating havoc like in the pilot of the Brady Bunch series where the dog knocked over people and tables including the one with the wedding cake.

Author's Response:

Hi, Rixa! I'm delighted that you have enjoyed the Tricky adventures, and that you are enjoying this story. Thanks for letting me know that, and for the support.  I have a feeling you're right about the dogsitter, but even before the wedding I see unexpected trouble looming.;)  I'll probably have the next part up sometime tomorrow.

Thanks again for reading, and especially for the feedback! I really appreciate that. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2015 09:32 PM · On: I Doo, Doo

Fun chapter.  Can't wait to see all the trouble Tricky and Xena can get up to together.  Love this story.  Bill



Author's Response:

Hi, Bill! Still good to see you reading along (in between writing your own story, which I need to catch up on myself).  And I'm happy that you're enjoying the latest Tricky adventure; this time with his very own accomplice.;)  I should have the next part up soon; working longer hours, which is drastically cutting into my spare time - ugh.

 

Thanks for all the support! And congrats on reaching your goal! With 85 chapters and no apparent end in sight, I'm sure there will be many more to come. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: gotb30 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2015 06:24 AM · On: I Doo, Doo

This chapter was hilarious, especially when Brian was hiding behind the shield to guard against Tricky, not that it worked! LOL!!! Oh boy, it's going to be mayhem!! :D



Author's Response:

Hi, Lavender! So happy that you enjoyed the beginning of the mayhem!  With Tricky, that comes naturally, and now he's about to correct his daughter, too.;) Poor Brian, trying to defend himself to no avail - ha!  I'm so glad you're enjoying this story. Thank you for reading, and for the comments! *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 20, 2015 05:46 AM · On: I Doo, Doo

I don't see how they're going to keep Tricky out of the wedding. I can't wait to see how this plays out.

S:)



Author's Response:

Let's just say the wedding will not go off without some hitches in it, to be sure.;)  Stay tuned; you will soon find out. Thanks for the comments! *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 20, 2015 05:40 AM · On: I Doo, Doo

"Brian, I have to tell you something..."

I think Justin was rigtht in that Brian would also have given in to Gus and I do like that Justin used Emmett's tactic to tell Brian.

Good chapter!

S:)



Author's Response:

LOL!  I do, too.  Not sure if Emmett was right in suggesting it, but with Brian you can always distract him that way, especially with a certain, beautiful blond (Justin, not Tricky - ha!).  I'm happy that you are enjoying this story, and I am grateful that you took the time to comment. Thank you for choosing to read this one! I should hopefully have the next part up later this evening. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Larka (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2015 02:54 AM · On: I Doo, Doo

This is such a feel good story.  I love the antics with Tricky, Gus, Xena and the gang.  Brian's reaction to the dogs crack me up!



Author's Response:

Hi, Larka! I'm so glad that you're enjoying this story! Brian doesn't quite know what to do with either dog, but I think he realizes that his two boys and the dogs come as a package deal, so he's kind of stuck with them.;)  There's more chaos coming, some in ways that neither man will ever envision. But boy, will I have some fun with them - ha!  Thanks for reading this story, and for the encouragement; it really does motivate me. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Logan (Anonymous) · Date: August 20, 2015 01:03 AM · On: I Doo, Doo

Hello. My name is Logan and I am a listener. Lindc said it would be ok to review this story. I have never done this so bear with me. This is a smart, clever and funny story. I can feel for Brian as I have gotten a Black Lab puppy and he is a handful. He has so much energy he wears me out. I named him Taylor. Lindc asked me if it has to do with QAF, but no I just like the name. We will be on deck for the next chapters as we all enjoy this story. At last count there were twelve of us. by 4 now Logan

Author's Response:

Hi, Logan!  How sweet you are to want to leave me feedback about this story! I'm delighted to read your comments, and I'm thrilled that you've been enjoying it.  You're very kind to let me know, and I hope you continue to enjoy it.  BTW, if you haven't read the other Tricky stories, I hope you will check them out. He gets into a LOT of trouble - ha! 

I do love labs - I have had two lab mixes before, and they are such lovable dogs.  I think it's hilarious that you named your puppy Taylor. What a coincidence!  I had to give an assessment test tonight to one of our students in welding named...Justin Taylor! Hard to keep a straight face when I see him, but he looks nothing like this one.;p

Thanks so much for taking the time to comment, Logan! Hope to hear from you again. And thanks for being part of the peep listeners! ~Kim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2015 12:49 AM · On: I Doo, Doo

The day of reckoning is near and Brian wouldn't have it any other way.  I'm just worried about whose stomach those steaks are going to end up in.



Author's Response:

Ha!  Surely you don't think that Tricky would take those steaks off the grill, do you?;)  Actually, wish I had thought of that, but I think the steaks at least will be safe.p) More mayhem coming, though! Thank you for reading this latest chapter, and for all the feedback; it is much appreciated. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2015 07:50 PM · On: I Doo, Doo

Lol...I see Tricky hasn't mellowed one bit. It will only be a matter of time before father and daughter cause some real mayhem ;)

Author's Response:

Hi Tamara!  No, you're right; when it comes to Tricky, at least, and seeing Brian, he still can't control himself. And I'm not sure how much of a good influence Tricky will be on his daughter, although something tells me that Xena can hold his own.;) So glad to see you reading this one, and enjoying it. Thanks for the support, and for letting me know. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: August 19, 2015 07:19 PM · On: I Doo, Doo

What a hoot--laughed my a-- off. Listeners will love this one. The wedding is going to be a riot, I just know it. lol

Author's Response:

Hi, lindc!  So happy that you're enjoying this. I think I needed a little lighter fare to offset some of the angst, although I AM working on the update to "Heart's Desire," so tell Lee that I haven't forgotten him.  And yes, there will definitely be some twists and turns for the wedding; of course!:) Thanks so much for always being so supportive; I will have the next part up very soon. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: August 19, 2015 07:05 PM · On: I Doo, Doo

Loving this but here is a piece of info to get you to change your dog food brand is made by purina and that is owned by nestle and nestle is owned by the koch brothers i buy nothing they make for obvious reasons 



Author's Response:

I'm normally well-read, but I admit I am not familiar with the Koch Brothers. The dog chow was meant more generically, rather than an actual brand.  But I am glad that you are enjoying this story despite that. Thanks for continuing to leave feedback; I should have the next part up hopefully tomorrow. Thanks again for the support. ~Kim

Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2015 06:27 PM · On: I Doo, Doo

So my day at the office so far has been absolute shit! My boss is driving me nuts and has been all week. This was a welcome repreive even if it was only 30 min into my work day.

I was literally laughing out loud at Tricky's greeting of brian! The whole  armour and shield part was hysterical! How the hell did you think that up? All I need to do now for the rest of the day is think of that scene and I'll be grinning like a fool. thank you for that!!

The start of the birds and the bees chat was fun too. Always an interesting time for parents. 

The next few days with everyone around could prove to be very..........interesting to say the least. Looking forward t omore giggles ahead.

Thank you for brightening my morning. It was desparately needed!!



Author's Response:

Hi, Elaine - I'm sorry your day was so horrible, but I'm glad that this chapter helped at least somewhat to cheer you up.;)  It means a lot to me to know how much you are enjoying the story; thanks for letting me know that.;)  I will have the next part of this madcap adventure up probably tomorrow. I hope your day is better for you then.  Take care. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: samcdee (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2015 05:18 PM · On: I Doo, Doo

He's baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaack!  What is it about Brian that Tricky loves so much? LOL This is such a fun fic!



Author's Response:

Hi, Shari! Yes...he's back, and he's bad to the bone.;)  Poor Brian!  (hee, hee...).  I'm so happy that you're enjoying this story! Thank you for continuing to read, Shari, and especially for the feedback. I will have the next part either tomorrow or Friday. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Anonymous) · Date: August 19, 2015 04:10 PM · On: I Doo, Doo

I think my cousin used to have Tricky's brother... a giant yellow lab, who was the most loveable "bad dog" that I ever met! ;p

Justin may not get his version of a "perfect" wedding, but I'm sure it will be fun-filled. I somehow suspect that Tricky & Xena will not stand for being excluded, LOL!



Author's Response:

Hi, Trish!  I do love labs; you're correct. They are big, they are lumbering, but they are the sweetest, most lovable dogs in the world.;)  And they do like to give affection, especially if you're Tricky, and you're around your idol.;) 

As for the wedding, let's just say there will definitely be some ups and downs.  Poor guys!  But I'm going to have a lot of fun with it (hee,hee..).

Thanks so much for continuing to read this one, and for the feedback, Trish!  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Mariana (Anonymous) · Date: August 19, 2015 06:14 AM · On: I Doo, Doo

Kim I hope you are not serious about stop writing. Every story of your is a real treat.

I love them all. Your ability to portray Brian and Justin love is amazing.

Every time I read one of your stories I want more.

This new story is hilarious. I can't stop laughing. I'm so happy Tricky is coming to the wedding. Xena is adorable and will be a real challenge for both of the boys.

Anyway please continue writing and I'll read every word always.

Hugs

Mariana



Author's Response:

Hi, Mariana! I hung onto all of your kind comments. Thank you for continuing to read my stories, and especially for the feedback, letting me know how much you enjoy them. I think in the end that is all that ANY writer is looking for when they write. I know that some do it simply for the love of writing. And while I DO enjoy writing about B and J still - and have a lot more ideas in my head - it helps me more than people probably know, simply just to be told that others enjoy my efforts, so you taking the time to let me know that means the world to me.   I'm going to do my best - I am working 12-hr days sometimes, and have a lot of other things going on in RL, so it takes me a while to update, but I WILL finish my two other stories as soon as I can.  I won't, however, rush them simply to get them done; I think that does a disservice to those readers who have been following them so faithfully.  The only thing I can promise is that I will never leave one unfinished, and I will update just as fast as I humanly can.  I'm working on the next part of "MHD" now, so hopefully that will be up soon.;)  What I do after that, I wil have to think about.  Maybe by then, things won't be so crazy, and with at least one of the two WIPs done, I will have more time to write.

 

As for this story, yes, the arrival of Tricky will definitely add to the mix of chaos here. He has, shall we say, been missing his 'idol' in the extreme, so whether he's mellowed or not, seeing him will no doubt set off the excitement again, and maybe not in a good way for Brian.  But that's the fun, isn't it? And now he has a cohort in crime, thanks to Justin's decision to add Xena to their household.  She just may outdo her dad in the stunts department, too; only time will tell that.;)

 

I hope to get Ch. 4 up before I go to work today. I do hope you continue to enjoy it! Thanks again for the support, Mariana; it is deeply appreciated.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2015 10:14 PM · On: I Doo, Doo

Justin is so lucky Brian didn't call off the wedding.  Now that would have been a plot twist!  Waiting so long to tell him when they promised no more secrets is a nono.  However, Brian wouldn't have been able to refuse Gus and he realizes that.  Do they have doggy day care in Pittsburgh?  With two dogs in the house, something is going to have to give.  Maybe a bad guy will show up trying to mess up the wedding and it's Tricky and Zena to the rescue?



Author's Response:

Hi, there! I'm so happy to see you reviewing; you are always so great about reading and reviewing.) I'm so happy that you are enjoying this story!  As for Tricky and Xena becoming super heroes...hmmm...they may be too busy creating havoc, but only time will tell.;)

Thank you as always for reading and reviewing; I am most appreciative. Hoping to get the next part up tonight; Hurricane Tricky's about to arrive!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2015 09:38 PM · On: I Doo, Doo

Love the name of the new pup.  But I can see that Justin has his work cut out for him.  I've notice the more you ignore them the better behaved the dog is.  Maybe that would work?  How will Brian react when he finds out who all is coming to the wedding?

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2015 07:35 PM · On: I Doo, Doo

Sorry it took me so long.  My daughter and her husband came in from Japan and stayed in the room with my computer, leaving me without a way to read and comment, not to mention no free time.  I can already see that I'm gonna love this story.  Justin comparing the dog to Brian - hilarious.  But then we all knew that it was a foregone conclusion.  Justin gets what Justin wants.

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