Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For The Rainbow Inn
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Reviewer: rhonda (Anonymous) · Date: August 06, 2014 02:21 AM · On: Snowed Under

i realy enjoyed that. thanks!!

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: February 06, 2012 08:21 PM · On: Winter at the Inn

Thank you for your reply to my earlier feedback.  I think I didnt read this series because it was a cross over of all my favourite shows so I had no idea how it would go together, but after reading I loved them all.  I have now enjoyed all of your stories and look forward to your new ones.  Thanks again for your writing.  I have to say though I am a little guilty of not writing feedback all of the time and I know it is important.  I will make a point of it from now on.

Oh and I love the Betrayal series as well :)

Take care and happy writing. 

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: February 06, 2012 10:17 AM · On: Winter at the Inn

I loved all of your other things but didnt want to read your rainbow inn series for some strange reason.  however, I have, and I wish that I had read it earlier. Really enjoyed all 10 stories.  Thanks for writing and please keep on doing it. 



Author's Response:

Thanks. I'm glad you finally got around to reading it and liked it!

Reviewer: Anno53 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2012 06:24 AM · On: Clinging to Love

It was very clever how you did this crossover with House. All of their characterizations seemed right on.

Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2012 07:05 PM · On: Winter at the Inn

I will miss these boy's in this universe as well. It was a lovely romp through a special series. I look forward to the new stories



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'll try to keep things moving.

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2012 11:21 AM · On: Winter at the Inn

love this series - hate that we won't get to revisit with the kids, but leaving them all so happy & in love warms the heart and is a perfect way to end...if we must!

loving life,

Charle



Author's Response:

We must! Lol! Glad you liked it though. Ten stories was a bit long for me, though, so no I won't be going back.

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2012 05:31 AM · On: Winter at the Inn

This was a great ride with the guys.  Loved how you finished it with a painting of all of them including Ryan.  Great work.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I loved writing this series.

Reviewer: kinneydu (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2012 03:22 AM · On: Winter at the Inn

I shall definitely miss the universe.  You probably stopped at a good place, leaving readers asking "I wonder what happens to............", and "What about..........".  It is said that you should always leave people wanting more.  And I think you have done that really well.  I look forward to your future stories.



Author's Response:

Thanks. I loved writing this universe, but there really wasn't anything left in me at the end. It really was a long and difficult process, but one i loved doing. I'm glad others enjoyed it as well.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2012 12:49 AM · On: Winter at the Inn

:)



Author's Response:

thanks

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2012 02:14 PM · On: Rage

This was a great ending.  Thanks for the ride.  BRAVO!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2012 09:54 AM · On: Rage

I loved it and how you kept the characters in canon with how we know them, Jethro and House being like Brian and at times wincing at the events that had them giving into their softer partners. onto the Winter series yay 



Author's Response:

Thanks... I was amazed as I wrote this series how much the various characters share traits.

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2012 01:15 AM · On: Rage

love it - this is one of those chapters where you can just sit back and say...yup - that's exactly how I picutred it could be - the wedding was just right! thanks

loing life,

Charle



Author's Response:

Thank you! I like to write weddings I would like to attend. Or have for myself. This is one I'd rather attend, I think. Glad you liked the end.

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2012 02:34 PM · On: Rage

Glad everyone had a great time.  Sounds like Brian and Justin can't handle the parties like they used to.  Great chapter.



Author's Response:

Either that or it was hell of a party! Thanks!

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2012 02:24 PM · On: Rage

I'm glad they captured the guy.  Now on with the wedding!!!



Author's Response:

First, the bachelor party... You realize that BRian would have to have the mother of all parties, right?  Lol!

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Anonymous) · Date: January 12, 2012 05:48 AM · On: Rage

Sometimes I realise I have had a golden life because before I joined this fandom I had no idea of the pain some kids endured because they were gay or just different. We all I guess suffered through some level of school bullying and it is awful  but usually it is a sad memory and builds in some ppl a resilience. But OMG poor Seely 



Author's Response:

Zack and Seeley will get through this together. And you're right, if we can make it through, those experiences can make us stronger. Unfortunately, there are some who do make it through.

Wow, depressing thought this early in the morning.

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2012 05:21 AM · On: Rage

very emotional chapter - I love that not only do we get a glimpse of how hurtful bullying is - and how long the impact - but we also are reminded that hate as a response is equally detrimental - and while our experiences don't excuse behaviors that we need to take responsibility for - they do explain a lot in regards to how we became the person we are, and what lies beneath the surface...judging others - humiliation and torment - all of it is wrong, no matter which side we are on

sorry - didn't mean to go off, but this subject always sparks deep feelings - I love that they were able to talk it through and trust each other with it - thanks for this

loving life,

Charle



Author's Response:

I know what you mean... I think we've all had some experience of bullying, from one side or the other. Hopefully, as we grow into adults, we learn from those experiences and become better people. I think Zack has, and so has Seeley.

Reviewer: kinneydu (Anonymous) · Date: January 12, 2012 03:06 AM · On: Rage

I am really enjoying these series of stories - and this one is one of the best.  I like your characterisations and the glimpse into the pasts of the characters.  Keep up the good work. 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2012 10:04 PM · On: Rage

This was a great chapter.  Nice that Seeley understands Zack better now.  Maybe Mikey will think twice before he opens his mouth again.



Author's Response:

Nah... Mikey will never learn. And he will always be a martyr. He'll always think that his suffering is ten times worse than anyone else's. That's just who he is.

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2012 05:14 AM · On: Rage

That was a close call.  Mikey, I think, needs to be taken down a peg.  People do change except him.  Great chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I love bashing Mikey... he's so easy to dislike. :P

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2012 11:02 AM · On: Rage

That was a close call.  With the LEOs on the case they should be able to get their man.  Great chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2012 07:20 AM · On: Rage

With Jethro, Tony and Seeley, they should be able to get their man.  This is a great start.



Author's Response:

Let's hope so!

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2012 05:05 AM · On: Rage

 Oh this looks a lot of fun we get some intrigue as well as romance, I look forward to the next chapters  



Author's Response:

Great!

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2012 12:59 AM · On: Rage

:)



Author's Response:

:P

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2012 07:34 PM · On: Summer at the Inn

Oh dam I already miss this story. Great idea for the Inn to continue to be a part of the boys and now gradually the gangs life



Author's Response:

Thanks! Hope you'll read the next story.

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2012 02:22 PM · On: Summer at the Inn

I can actually se Calvin and Emmett running this place.  I hope Jerry takes the offer.  Great job!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I can' guarantee that Jerry will take the offer.

Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2012 09:33 AM · On: Summer at the Inn

Nice job.  I can just see the look on Emmett's face when he sees the barn!  I'm guessing mostly gay weddings.   ...?  :)



Author's Response:

I'd say that's a good guess!  Lol!

Reviewer: Moonshadow Woman (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2012 04:46 AM · On: Clinging to Love

my favorite show combined with another special one - how cool



Author's Response:

Glad you like it!

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2012 09:12 PM · On: Summer at the Inn

:)



Author's Response:

;)

Reviewer: masterglory (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2012 05:35 PM · On: Clinging to Love

This is too precious for words....brava, Qaf is the best of every time in the whole world *g* and House is one of my fav series ever:)

Though I've always pictured House with Wilson, but House/Chase is very good too, heheheh;)

You're seriously one of the best authors in the fandom, love you and I can't wait for the next chapt in the Rainbow series, Gloria♥



Author's Response:

Lol! Thanks! I actually do write some House/Wilson (see my stories on FF.net). I have other House/Chase stories there too. The next story will be up this morning.

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2012 01:48 PM · On: Clinging to Love

Glad everything worked out for everyone.  Happy that Chase took House's offer.  Great story.  WELL DONE!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2012 11:37 AM · On: Clinging to Love

I'm a fan of House and QAF and I think you've captured all of their personalities.  Love it when House refers to Wilson's sex life.  :)



Author's Response:

That was a fun moment... Glad you like them!

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2012 09:54 AM · On: Clinging to Love

still love these stories! this one was really great!

loving life,

Charle



Author's Response:

Thanks! Next one will post today!

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2012 05:41 AM · On: Clinging to Love

Oh so good and yay Justin is moving back in with Brian ;-)

 



Author's Response:

I know... I always have to get them together.

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2012 07:39 AM · On: Clinging to Love

Justin's right about Chase throwing a party to celebrate.  Sometimes a piece of paper can cause a lot of troubles.  As long as there's love, nothing else shouldn't matter.  Glad Brian's taking his medicine.  Great chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2012 09:07 PM · On: Clinging to Love

I love this series it is such fun watching the boys all interact together and yay House has fixed Brian. I wonder how long it will be before Brian starts whinging about putting on weight lol



Author's Response:

Lol... he'll just become even more obsessed with carbs and working out.

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2012 08:02 PM · On: Clinging to Love

Sounds like Justin has a few regrets about leaving Brian.  Glad to hear House found out what the problem was.  Great chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I think Justin has more than a few regrets...

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2012 10:01 AM · On: Clinging to Love

I love this series.  My heart almost stopped when Brian's did.  I thought 'NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO'!  Great start.



Author's Response:

Lol! Thanks!

Reviewer: Cynthia (Anonymous) · Date: January 03, 2012 05:12 AM · On: Clinging to Love

I love the Rainbow series, and the way Brian and Justin interacts with everyone else!! I can't wait to see what's wrong with Brian. Is the Pittsburgh crew going to make an appearance? It's great seeing House being all protective of his friends ;-)



Author's Response:

No, the gang won't be in this one, but they will definitely will be in Rage (the ninth story). I'm so glad you like the story and the series.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2012 06:20 PM · On: Fall at the Inn

Oh dear so sad but a wonderful fic and series thank you



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2012 04:16 AM · On: Fall at the Inn

Oh no! Does this mean the end of the inn? This is such a great series, never thought I would like theB/Z,H/C,J/D combos but I can really see it in the. Jethro Tony combo in particular when I watch the show.  Hope Jerry keeps the inn going.



Author's Response:

I can't give everything away! Lol! I'm glad you are enjoying it. As for the other pairings... well, I guess I look for those little hidden homoerotic moments that may or may not be intentional by the producers... Lol!

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2012 10:15 PM · On: Fall at the Inn

This was a great chapter except the ending.  I loved Jerry and Ryan.  Hope things will be okay for Brian.  Thanks.



Author's Response:

I know... I hated doing that to Ryan... and Jerry.

Reviewer: Moonshadow Woman (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2012 07:38 AM · On: Skull and Crossbones

completely enjoyed this - love Bones and NCIS - though it isn't B/J - it is worth a blue ribbon



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2011 08:20 AM · On: Skull and Crossbones

WOW! Never saw that one coming.  Great story.

Just to let you know you posted Ch 8 twice.



Author's Response:

*Groan* Sometimes this site is very trying!

Glad you enjoyed the story!

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2011 10:09 PM · On: Skull and Crossbones

They definitely are getting closer.  Glad Tony moving in with Gibbs.  Great chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2011 01:44 PM · On: Skull and Crossbones

I'm glad Zack talked to Abby.  Tony and Gibbs will be ok with the team.  I hope they find this killer soon.



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2011 07:47 AM · On: Skull and Crossbones

Glad the team was told.  Abby, I think, will be fine.  Great update.



Author's Response:

She has to be... this is Gibbs and TOny we're talking about here!

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2011 02:55 PM · On: Skull and Crossbones

I'm glad everyone is okay and that Ducky was there for Jethro.



Author's Response:

I like Ducky, but he's tough to write sometimes. I'm glad this came across.

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2011 09:12 AM · On: Skull and Crossbones

Now this was a great chapter but how could you do this to us readers: a CLIFFHANGER!!!!!  Sorry little rant.



Author's Response:

I'll never appologize for cliffhangers... but I will say this, I'll only leave you hanging for a day. Lol!

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2011 06:38 AM · On: Skull and Crossbones

Oh No!!! Its time for Gibbs to fess up I think. If McGee hasn't figured it out already.  Update....?!?!?!?!?



Author's Response:

Update coming up in five minutes! I just have to respond to a couple more reviews!  Lol!

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2011 02:01 PM · On: Skull and Crossbones

This is a great start to this.  Nice job.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2011 12:45 PM · On: Spring at the Inn

I like how Brian admits he was a stubborn ass.  Good story.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2011 10:37 AM · On: Skull and Crossbones

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2011 08:42 PM · On: Spring at the Inn

This was great to see them all together.  Hope Tony and Jethro make it through their relationship.  Can't wait to read the next one.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'll be posting Skull and Crossbones today.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2011 02:26 AM · On: Spring at the Inn

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2011 02:13 PM · On: Snowed Under

I really enjoyed this story Jules.  This was great knowing how their love started out.  Can't wait for the new ones.

Great fic.



Author's Response:

Thanks! Spring at the Inn is now up and the next story will begin tomorrow!

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2011 01:25 PM · On: Snowed Under

I'm glad Zack and Booth are together.  A very unusal couple but they make it work.  This pairing floors me.  I can just see these two together.  You sure nailed Hodgins' reaction wot knowing about the two lovers.

Great fic.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I love writing these two together.

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2011 05:36 PM · On: Snowed Under

I read the last three chapters and they were great.  I can see Seely looking after Zack and protecting him.

 

Great story.

Jane



Author's Response:

Thanks! I don't write much in the Dom/Sub genre, but Booth and Zack seem to fit that role rather well.

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2011 08:34 AM · On: Snowed Under

Very nice chapter, I love the way you wrote Zach. Gordon, Gordon was great as well. 



Author's Response:

Lol... I love Gordon, Gordon. Thanks!

Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2011 08:39 AM · On: The Rainbow Inn

The way that you explain the 'open arrangement' between Brian and Justin I could see that working for them.  Nice story.



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2011 10:25 AM · On: Falling Down

These two are definitely in tune with the other.  Great fic.  Glad Chase is doing great.



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2011 09:06 AM · On: Snowed Under

I was a little leary on reading this but it turned out better than I thought.  I loved their interaction.  Great Job.



Author's Response:

Thanks! Hope you like the rest of the story.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2011 06:51 AM · On: Snowed Under

:)



Author's Response:

Again, thanks. Lol

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2011 06:50 AM · On: Falling Down

:)



Author's Response:

Lol... Thanks

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2011 08:38 PM · On: The Rainbow Inn

Jules: Loved this story.  Never thought of Zack and Seely together.  Great fic.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I love Booth and Zack... well, mostly I just love Zack and think Booth is a good match for him. Lol!

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2011 07:57 PM · On: The Rainbow Inn

Wow I am going to enjoy this series thank you



Author's Response:

Thanks! I certainly hope you do!

Reviewer: Ghost Writer (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2011 07:42 AM · On: The Rainbow Inn

I liked this. I watch(ed) all four of these shows at some point. The only one I didn't really get was Booth and Zack. I never understood that pairing when reading other stories about Bones. But I liked it. <3



Author's Response:

Oh, I love Booth and Zack. Read Snowed Under (the next story in the series which I'll start posting tomorrow) and you'll see why I like them together so much. There just really aren't many good stories about them. But I love the way they are just so different and I like to play with that. As for the other shows, I don't watch anything on a weekly basis anymore, but I love the characters and pairing them together is great fun! Lol!

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2011 07:23 AM · On: The Rainbow Inn

loved this series - the couples all became like friends

how nice that the readers here who don't know your work get to catch up with these outstanding stories

loving life

Charle



Author's Response:

Thanks. I'm not sure how I missed this site for so long, but I'm glad to be here and to be able to share my work. Hopefully I'll be inspired for some new stories soon as well.

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2011 06:48 AM · On: The Rainbow Inn

This was very funny. I love that you have captured the personalities of each man so well. Look forward to the next installment.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'll begin posting the second story tomorrow, so stay tuned!

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