Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2019 08:45 PM · On: The Detective's Son

I'm liking that Lindsay went through with marrying Gui and it's falling apart.  Serves her right.  I'm worried about J & D going to New Orleans.  Sounds like trouble.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2019 03:56 PM · On: The Detective's Son

So Brian and Justin are going to meet.  

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2019 11:03 AM · On: The Detective's Son

Boy, Justin is certainly true to character of the first episodes.  A real brat, but with good reasons for being that way.  What will happen next?

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2019 10:42 AM · On: The Detective's Son

Love your characters.  So that's how Justin ends up at St. James.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2019 10:32 AM · On: The Detective's Son

Wow, I know that there are bad people in this world, but you really gave us one with Craig.  Thank goodness Carl is ready and willing to be there for his children.

Reviewer: Suse (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2017 06:31 PM · On: Falling Out of the Sky

Great sequel. I assume a third story will surface soon. 👏



Author's Response:

Yes, as soon as I work out what exactly should happen. 

Reviewer: Suse (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2017 06:30 PM · On: The Detective's Son

 Great story. Loved the twist of Horvath as Justin’s Dad.

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2017 01:58 AM · On: The Detective's Son

Hi, Pam! Finally had an opportunity to read the rest of this story.  I loved it!  Loved the angst, drama, OC's, and the emotional roller coaster you took us on.  I can't wait to read the sequel!

Thank you for posting this on here, and some of your other stories. I am really enjoying them!  ~Kim

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2017 08:41 PM · On: Falling Out of the Sky

Oh dear even when they are in a horrendous situation homophobes abound!

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2017 05:02 PM · On: Falling Out of the Sky

Thank you for your reply. I will continue reading it again since I cannot remember the ending, but I did remember that it was such a good story.

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2017 02:10 PM · On: Falling Out of the Sky

Is this a story that was posted once before because it seems like I have read it and it is so good.



Author's Response:

It has been posted on other sites. Thank you

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2017 09:05 AM · On: Falling Out of the Sky

Wow and oh dear Brian is in for some pain

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2017 04:15 AM · On: The Detective's Son

Molly is a sweet and caring sister...i hope brian will help justin later.

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2017 12:51 PM · On: The Detective's Son

Wow! Justin and Daphne did what?!? Be still my heart. I did not see that coming...BTW, I am really loving this story.

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2017 09:33 AM · On: Falling Out of the Sky

Hi, Pam!  I just wanted to tell you that I'm not going to start reading this one yet until I'm finished with your first story. I'm absolutely hooked on that one! So I want to see how that one turns out first. But I can't wait to start reading this one! Thank you again for posting up here. ~Kim

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2017 10:27 PM · On: The Detective's Son

I am totally loving this story because it is so different. Can't wait to see where you plan to take us.

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2017 11:21 PM · On: The Detective's Son

I am really enjoying the ups and downs and angst in this story, Pam!  Just finished the first part, and noticed that you have posted more. YAY!  Thanks again for posting this!  Can't wait to read the additional chapters!  ~Kim



Author's Response:

I'm so glad. There is some dark times in the story I do have to say. But some real happy moments too. 

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2017 03:41 PM · On: The Detective's Son

So that's how they meet up again - LOL!  I could see how Brian would notice that bubble butt. ;)  Now it will be interesting to see how Justin reacts to knowing that he and Brian are in the same town.  Will look forward to reading the rest of what you have posted so far! Thanks again for writing and posting this on here. I'm really enjoying it.   ~Kim



Author's Response:

I'm glad you are still liking it. I tried to be true to Brian's character so there is a bit of rough parts. Hope not too bad. 

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2017 03:35 PM · On: The Detective's Son

How sad about what happened between Justin and CJ!  And how horrible the way that CJ instantly blamed his brother!  I was liking him until I read this.  Poor Justin. 

Kind of surprised about Daphne and Justin having sex again, but I think I could see how it might have happened in this scenario.  This is certainly a different take on the normal B and J story!  Heading off to the next chapter. :)



Author's Response:

That was hard to write because I really did like writing CJ in the start, too bad my brain and fingers typed something else. 

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2017 03:26 PM · On: The Detective's Son

Interesting plot changes on B and J's first time!  And I remember that New Orleans is about 4 hours or so from Panama City Beach.  Wanted to drive there, but didn't get the chance, so perhaps I can 'visit' it with Justin and Daphne!  Really enjoying this story so far; thank you. :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. 

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2017 03:13 PM · On: The Detective's Son

Love having Daphne as his childhood friend, and then into their adulthood.  Interesting twist having Daphne get pregnant, then miscarry.  And I love, BTW, how her mom found Justin and Molly in the park, and how all these pieces interweave with each other.

Funny they would be going to Panama City Beach!  I just came back from that area.

Looking forward to reading more!  ~Kim



Author's Response:

How funny, I just know it as well as google will tell me. Thank you so much for commenting. I thought it was a good way to bring in Daphne, using her mom. 

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2017 03:02 PM · On: The Detective's Son

Just read the first chapter of your story, Pam. What a unique plot line! Have never seen one quite like this one before. I think I'm really going to enjoy reading the rest. Thanks for posting this one on here!  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Thank you. I hope you do enjoy it. 

Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2017 02:45 PM · On: The Detective's Son

Nice update! I like the realistic way you showed that no matter how hard Carl may try, there would still be some adjustment for the kids. I also love B/J Kid!Fics, and this chapter really works.

Thanks!



Author's Response:

Thank you. I like fics with them somewhere as kids too. 

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2017 02:16 PM · On: The Detective's Son

Molly is a sweet and caring sister...i hope brian will help justin later.



Author's Response:

One of the reasons I made Molly older than she was in canon. I hope you enjoy the rest.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2017 02:11 PM · On: The Detective's Son

Omg...fucking bastards..soo sad.



Author's Response:

=(

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2017 02:03 PM · On: The Detective's Son

jealousy suits u brian...lovely chapter.



Author's Response:

Jealous Brian is like my favorite Brian. 

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2017 01:54 PM · On: The Detective's Son

Well that was quite a twist in the story.



Author's Response:

Very twisty 

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2017 12:54 PM · On: The Detective's Son

Aww...poor sunshine....soo sad.



Author's Response:

Very sad. 

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2017 12:50 PM · On: The Detective's Son

They met ...yes....that was superrrrr chapter.



Author's Response:

LOL. Thank you. 

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2017 12:37 PM · On: The Detective's Son

Mikey mikey mikey..u will never change..whiney..lols



Author's Response:

HAHA

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2017 12:33 PM · On: The Detective's Son

Excellent story.



Author's Response:

Thank you. 

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2017 12:23 PM · On: The Detective's Son

Sooo sweet little justin is adorable...loving it.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I always like stories that have little Justin or little Brian somewhere in them. 

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2017 12:18 PM · On: The Detective's Son

Omg...i love this story...have read this one in other site..lookong forward to read again...this series is my favorite....thank u for sharing this one with us again.



Author's Response:

Aww thank you. I like rereading stories too. I've been rereading this and think how much my writing has changed and stayed the same. I love angst, I can't help it. 

Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2017 04:24 AM · On: The Detective's Son

I can't open the chapter titled "A Year Later." It keeps opening to the one titled "Road Trip."

Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2017 04:16 PM · On: The Detective's Son

Great start... intriguing angle with the Carl/Jenn connection. Daphne's mom was the good Samaritan? Looking forward to the next installment.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I decided to upload ten more chapters. I don't think I could remember to put one up a day. LOL 

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